Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
For O
Teddy.15 said:
But the sublime thing about
life and love is: I will
never give up.
If I fall 100 times,
I will rise 101.
And I\'ll see you
soon, my little Iris
Kudos sir.
February 6th, 2024 14:22
Teddy.15 said:
But the sublime thing about
life and love is: I will
never give up.
If I fall 100 times,
I will rise 101.
And I\'ll see you
soon, my little Iris
Kudos sir.
February 6th, 2024 14:22
Little Birds
Introverted Sage said:
This feels like a warm hug... A deep peace.
Good write!
February 5th, 2024 15:21
Introverted Sage said:
This feels like a warm hug... A deep peace.
Good write!
February 5th, 2024 15:21
Little Birds
Bella Shepard said:
You chose the imagery carefully, and cleverly, and it works beautifully. Kudos my friend!
February 5th, 2024 15:15
Bella Shepard said:
You chose the imagery carefully, and cleverly, and it works beautifully. Kudos my friend!
February 5th, 2024 15:15
Little Birds
sorenbarrett said:
\"Beneath these
satin sheets,
my memory
flutters like
little birds on
indigo nights.\"
A magical beginning with a soft caressing feel to it. The ending was the completion with the waltz a dance so compatible in its sways and flow in a circular pattern around the dance floor. Vivid imagery here.
February 5th, 2024 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
\"Beneath these
satin sheets,
my memory
flutters like
little birds on
indigo nights.\"
A magical beginning with a soft caressing feel to it. The ending was the completion with the waltz a dance so compatible in its sways and flow in a circular pattern around the dance floor. Vivid imagery here.
February 5th, 2024 10:31
The Last?
Neville said:
I am pretty sure all serious writers have already written that last chapter, poem, or verse already and maybe several dozen times or more .. the trick is to keep coming up with new titles .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 04:00
Neville said:
I am pretty sure all serious writers have already written that last chapter, poem, or verse already and maybe several dozen times or more .. the trick is to keep coming up with new titles .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 04:00
The Last?
Tom Dylan said:
Love the concept. What would be the last thing we would write? Another great poem, Thomas.
February 5th, 2024 02:57
Tom Dylan said:
Love the concept. What would be the last thing we would write? Another great poem, Thomas.
February 5th, 2024 02:57
The Last?
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Thomas, I guess you will have to write some more poems.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Thomas, I guess you will have to write some more poems.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:44
The Last?
Accidental Poet said:
If this has to be your last write Thomas, so be it if need be. But...don\'t be surprised if your Muse wakes you up in the middle of the night clawing at your pen to put down words you can\'t ignore. A Muse is a very difficult energy to put off. Good luck to you in all you do Thomas. 😉👍
February 4th, 2024 20:06
Accidental Poet said:
If this has to be your last write Thomas, so be it if need be. But...don\'t be surprised if your Muse wakes you up in the middle of the night clawing at your pen to put down words you can\'t ignore. A Muse is a very difficult energy to put off. Good luck to you in all you do Thomas. 😉👍
February 4th, 2024 20:06
The Last?
Johny said:
I love this. Keep it up and put compassion into the next ones you write.
Johny
February 4th, 2024 19:31
Johny said:
I love this. Keep it up and put compassion into the next ones you write.
Johny
February 4th, 2024 19:31
The Last?
orchidee said:
Yep, write more T.
Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block.
Now me next poem: \'The First\'. lol.
February 4th, 2024 15:54
orchidee said:
Yep, write more T.
Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block.
Now me next poem: \'The First\'. lol.
February 4th, 2024 15:54
The Last?
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I too have thought that any poem could be the last, but this would only happen with my demise, in that once a poet always a poet. Here is wishing you many more poems to come.
February 4th, 2024 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I too have thought that any poem could be the last, but this would only happen with my demise, in that once a poet always a poet. Here is wishing you many more poems to come.
February 4th, 2024 14:03
The Last?
Teddy.15 said:
Simply marvelous and yes please do write a few more and make them with love and with passion and imagery and reflection as you seem to always do. ❤️ A few more 100\'s
February 4th, 2024 13:10
Teddy.15 said:
Simply marvelous and yes please do write a few more and make them with love and with passion and imagery and reflection as you seem to always do. ❤️ A few more 100\'s
February 4th, 2024 13:10
We All Slip
Teddy.15 said:
We all have these type days dear Tom, somedays I know for sure I should have just stayed in bed. Brilliant imagery 🤗
February 3rd, 2024 05:59
Teddy.15 said:
We all have these type days dear Tom, somedays I know for sure I should have just stayed in bed. Brilliant imagery 🤗
February 3rd, 2024 05:59
We All Slip
Parisab said:
How unfortunate! Her heart was cold like winter-glad you are better now- great piece…
February 3rd, 2024 01:21
Parisab said:
How unfortunate! Her heart was cold like winter-glad you are better now- great piece…
February 3rd, 2024 01:21
The Demon of Creative Energy
Bigguy said:
I hate Bukowski, in broadest generality, but I still love this poem!
I also approve of your taste in beers, very Dionysian!
February 2nd, 2024 01:21
Bigguy said:
I hate Bukowski, in broadest generality, but I still love this poem!
I also approve of your taste in beers, very Dionysian!
February 2nd, 2024 01:21
The Demon of Creative Energy
John said:
A good drink always assists the pen...I love everything about this poem...well done Thomas
February 1st, 2024 21:52
John said:
A good drink always assists the pen...I love everything about this poem...well done Thomas
February 1st, 2024 21:52
The Demon of Creative Energy
Bobby O said:
I was gonna say carthartic but no , I changed my mind. Fuck that demon ( I know it’s an invention that is a coping grizzly ) but if it pushes promising prose then I vote corruptly.
February 1st, 2024 01:05
Bobby O said:
I was gonna say carthartic but no , I changed my mind. Fuck that demon ( I know it’s an invention that is a coping grizzly ) but if it pushes promising prose then I vote corruptly.
February 1st, 2024 01:05
The Demon of Creative Energy
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe Bukowski really is one of your muse lol fabulous the emotions and imagery superb.
January 31st, 2024 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe Bukowski really is one of your muse lol fabulous the emotions and imagery superb.
January 31st, 2024 12:25
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