Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
It Matters
Bobby O said:
PICK ONE
a, A spontaneous criminally driven burst of violence doesn’t always make people shut up.
b. If status is awry mice and men visit the red scarlett bridge and decide the beetle is worth saving
c. When a pessimist attempts to ascribe practicality to a droning rant a well aimed and timed assault may remove obstacles in time for blooming flowers and lilac bushes to be appreciated.
January 8th, 2024 00:31
Bobby O said:
PICK ONE
a, A spontaneous criminally driven burst of violence doesn’t always make people shut up.
b. If status is awry mice and men visit the red scarlett bridge and decide the beetle is worth saving
c. When a pessimist attempts to ascribe practicality to a droning rant a well aimed and timed assault may remove obstacles in time for blooming flowers and lilac bushes to be appreciated.
January 8th, 2024 00:31
It Matters
Introverted Sage said:
Everything we do.. or don\'t do has meaning.
Good write!
January 7th, 2024 21:11
Introverted Sage said:
Everything we do.. or don\'t do has meaning.
Good write!
January 7th, 2024 21:11
Make the Static Go Away
seventeen said:
i feel honored to be able to read this!! gentle and consuming
January 7th, 2024 06:14
seventeen said:
i feel honored to be able to read this!! gentle and consuming
January 7th, 2024 06:14
Make the Static Go Away
Introverted Sage said:
The turbulence and dichotomy of life and the mind are at times relentless.
Good one
January 6th, 2024 13:34
Introverted Sage said:
The turbulence and dichotomy of life and the mind are at times relentless.
Good one
January 6th, 2024 13:34
Make the Static Go Away
sorenbarrett said:
\"radical lethargy\" a great juxtaposition of terms. Very nice enjoyed the rhyme as well.
January 6th, 2024 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
\"radical lethargy\" a great juxtaposition of terms. Very nice enjoyed the rhyme as well.
January 6th, 2024 12:16
Make the Static Go Away
hzugman said:
Love your poems and the video idea. My comment on today\'s poem:
Love IS a fantasy - a delightful life-firming fantasy. and after all, we all are children (and I don\'t want to ever \"grow up\")
January 6th, 2024 11:45
hzugman said:
Love your poems and the video idea. My comment on today\'s poem:
Love IS a fantasy - a delightful life-firming fantasy. and after all, we all are children (and I don\'t want to ever \"grow up\")
January 6th, 2024 11:45
Make the Static Go Away
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, your first stanza brings the aching misery of what must be depression, not only is it an extremely important subject but you have managed to write with great dignity. Kudos.
January 6th, 2024 04:38
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, your first stanza brings the aching misery of what must be depression, not only is it an extremely important subject but you have managed to write with great dignity. Kudos.
January 6th, 2024 04:38
Make the Static Go Away
Alan R said:
Make the static go
away,
the electric anxiety... Love that part
January 6th, 2024 03:29
Alan R said:
Make the static go
away,
the electric anxiety... Love that part
January 6th, 2024 03:29
Make the Static Go Away
orchidee said:
Ahh, I got into this poem - orchid. lol.
January 6th, 2024 03:08
orchidee said:
Ahh, I got into this poem - orchid. lol.
January 6th, 2024 03:08
Bow Wow (One for Anna)
Teddy.15 said:
LOL fabulous your imagery brings the reader right onto each line. Kudos sir.
January 5th, 2024 04:26
Teddy.15 said:
LOL fabulous your imagery brings the reader right onto each line. Kudos sir.
January 5th, 2024 04:26
The Ball Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Yes indeed I feel that there are many that do this and sometimes we don\'t even notice. Good write
January 4th, 2024 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Yes indeed I feel that there are many that do this and sometimes we don\'t even notice. Good write
January 4th, 2024 10:26
The Ball Woman
Tom Dylan said:
Good job, Thomas. The way she curls herself up and rolls away works on so many levels.
January 4th, 2024 08:19
Tom Dylan said:
Good job, Thomas. The way she curls herself up and rolls away works on so many levels.
January 4th, 2024 08:19
The Ball Woman
Introverted Sage said:
If I had a ball I could climb in and roll out of situations I didn\'t want to be in that would be great! 😂
Good one
January 4th, 2024 00:21
Introverted Sage said:
If I had a ball I could climb in and roll out of situations I didn\'t want to be in that would be great! 😂
Good one
January 4th, 2024 00:21
My Cat Is High, and So Am I
Teddy.15 said:
LOL you made me too feel high in the first stanza, fabulous. I hope you and your feline came down soft.
January 3rd, 2024 16:18
Teddy.15 said:
LOL you made me too feel high in the first stanza, fabulous. I hope you and your feline came down soft.
January 3rd, 2024 16:18
To Do...
sorenbarrett said:
Interruptions are disturbing and often lead to me loosing track of what I had been thinking of.
January 3rd, 2024 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Interruptions are disturbing and often lead to me loosing track of what I had been thinking of.
January 3rd, 2024 15:39
Life Anew
Neville said:
its good to know that you are never alone .. isn\'t it Tom ..
January 3rd, 2024 02:37
Neville said:
its good to know that you are never alone .. isn\'t it Tom ..
January 3rd, 2024 02:37
Locker Room Logic
Parisab said:
It’s not any better in women’s lockers, but this made me chuckle in its irony “for a gym with family values”…
January 2nd, 2024 00:27
Parisab said:
It’s not any better in women’s lockers, but this made me chuckle in its irony “for a gym with family values”…
January 2nd, 2024 00:27
Locker Room Logic
Neville said:
I learnt a long time ago not to walk around naked anywhere .. except for ..
nah\' a gentleman neva tells does one ... Neville
December 31st, 2023 13:20
Neville said:
I learnt a long time ago not to walk around naked anywhere .. except for ..
nah\' a gentleman neva tells does one ... Neville
December 31st, 2023 13:20
Locker Room Logic
sorenbarrett said:
When I used to work out, so many were so infatuated with their bodies that they would do this in hopes that someone would praise their development. It is always a little unnerving when someone wants to show you their nakedness.
December 31st, 2023 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
When I used to work out, so many were so infatuated with their bodies that they would do this in hopes that someone would praise their development. It is always a little unnerving when someone wants to show you their nakedness.
December 31st, 2023 13:01
Locker Room Logic
Cassie58 said:
How off putting. Yes, a towel would have saved the eyes getting sore:) I guess some just can’t put it away:)
December 31st, 2023 01:36
Cassie58 said:
How off putting. Yes, a towel would have saved the eyes getting sore:) I guess some just can’t put it away:)
December 31st, 2023 01:36
Locker Room Logic
Bobby O said:
Other than that , you look forward to the visits?
December 30th, 2023 02:56
Bobby O said:
Other than that , you look forward to the visits?
December 30th, 2023 02:56
Locker Room Logic
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just want to expose themselves for the idiots they are Thomas.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just want to expose themselves for the idiots they are Thomas.
Andy
December 29th, 2023 02:27
You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore
Neville said:
methinks this is not an unusual outcome, particularly when two became one, perhaps once too often
December 28th, 2023 13:34
Neville said:
methinks this is not an unusual outcome, particularly when two became one, perhaps once too often
December 28th, 2023 13:34
You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore
Tom Dylan said:
Great poem. Love the line about more Bonnie and Clyde than Romeo and Juliet.
December 28th, 2023 03:16
Tom Dylan said:
Great poem. Love the line about more Bonnie and Clyde than Romeo and Juliet.
December 28th, 2023 03:16
My Cat Is High, and So Am I
Introverted Sage said:
Fun read!
Thanks for sharing
December 27th, 2023 13:33
Introverted Sage said:
Fun read!
Thanks for sharing
December 27th, 2023 13:33
You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore
Bobby O said:
In this case and those that may be similar I do indeed differentiate from the famed Smokey Robinson lyric
“A taste of honey is worse than none at all”
Whatever the end result , sounds like the Trip had Hilights worthwhile.
You go Mr Case - you go !
December 27th, 2023 05:19
Bobby O said:
In this case and those that may be similar I do indeed differentiate from the famed Smokey Robinson lyric
“A taste of honey is worse than none at all”
Whatever the end result , sounds like the Trip had Hilights worthwhile.
You go Mr Case - you go !
December 27th, 2023 05:19
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