Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



4 North
aDarkerMind said:

having met several of these \'\'cacti\'\' people, it all makes perfect sense to me. not that I had an escape plan, I was only visiting ;o)

May 10th, 2024 12:01

At All Cost
aDarkerMind said:

writing at its very best Mr Case;

May 10th, 2024 10:54

At All Cost
sorenbarrett said:

Thoughts that give pause. Great lines in this piece Thomas.

May 10th, 2024 10:49

4 North
Tom Dylan said:

You really paint the picture, Thomas. Captured it perfectly.

May 10th, 2024 09:14

Too Drunk to Fuck
Mutley Ravishes said:

Would the water have been turned into wine if this encounter had been \"successful,\" Thomas?!

May 10th, 2024 07:18

4 North
Neville said:



You nailed it brother .. 😎✔️

May 10th, 2024 02:17

4 North
orchidee said:

Are you a cactus? In my delusions I\'m The Birdman but me wings always snap off. lol.

May 10th, 2024 02:01

4 North
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun words Thomas.

Andy

May 10th, 2024 01:15

4 North
Teddy.15 said:

😂 well let\'s imagine you and I together in North 4 observing the cacti, lol this is just a genius poem. The satire is top class and by the way I never liked cactus, complicated dry, ugly and prickly.🌹

May 10th, 2024 00:15

4 North
2781 said:

Very interesting.

May 9th, 2024 18:57

Too Drunk to Fuck
Reynaldo Casison said:

Superb and funny

May 9th, 2024 04:22

Too Drunk to Fuck
Goldfinch60 said:

Drink has a lot for which to answer Thomas.

Andy

May 9th, 2024 01:40

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Doggerel Dave said:

Insight.

May 8th, 2024 22:12

Too Drunk to Fuck
Neville said:


Sshh .. it happens Tom .. & I am so glad you found this place .. write on brother .. Neville

May 8th, 2024 12:15

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Cassie58 said:

That inner critic sure likes to beat us up at times especially when we are desperate. You take it to a new level though Thomas.

May 8th, 2024 12:09

Too Drunk to Fuck
Teddy.15 said:

lmao 🤣 oh this is glorious I started laughing at the title and didn\'t stop ERM yeh your pen stayed up! There was no mention of the mud though darling 😂

fabulous stuff.

May 8th, 2024 10:56

Too Drunk to Fuck
orchidee said:

You turned that light on?! lol.

May 8th, 2024 10:42

Too Drunk to Fuck
sorenbarrett said:

It\'s like a flooded engine it just won\'t start until it has sat for a while. Keep the motor idling.

May 8th, 2024 09:53

My Night of a Thousand Storms
John Prophet said:

Each parallel is fixed in its own path!
Great write!

May 8th, 2024 07:14

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, believing in one\'s self is not a given tool, we have to tell ourselves we are worth we are good at what we do, but seems to me especially in these times especially the young, truly believe they are worthless, not all but a great majority. A wonderful subject poem beautifully written. 🌹

May 8th, 2024 05:22

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Tom Dylan said:

Love this, Thomas. And the sparrow kinda reminds me of Bukowski\'s bluebird. Nicely done. I\'m a big fan of both of you. :-)

May 8th, 2024 02:36

My Night of a Thousand Storms
2781 said:

Calling a ravenous bird from the east, the man that executes my counsel from a far country: yea, I have spoken it, I will also bring it to pass; I have purposed it, I will also do it.

I will bring near my righteousness; it shall not be far off, and my salvation shall not tarry:

May 7th, 2024 22:32

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Alan R said:

Lovely, the words \'inner critic\' kept me going until the end (in the hope that someone possibly defeated it)...been working on this aspect...rooting for balance!

May 7th, 2024 15:43

My Night of a Thousand Storms
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Erm, were they mini-storms, say 30 seconds each? That\'s a lot of storms for one night. lol.

May 7th, 2024 13:25

My Night of a Thousand Storms
Neville said:



made me wanna go reach for the codeine & maybe a handful of benzo\'s .. to drown out the sound of second hand thunder hitting home ..

May 7th, 2024 12:00

My Night of a Thousand Storms
aDarkerMind said:

goose bumps while reading a poem...
imagine that Thomas;



May 7th, 2024 11:46

My Night of a Thousand Storms
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of desperation well represented in ironic fashion. Nicely done.

May 7th, 2024 11:32

Back from the Dead
Tom Dylan said:

Love this. Some great lines there, Thomas. Strong stuff, very inspiring. Those last lines almost had me applauding.

May 7th, 2024 03:36

Back from the Dead
Doggerel Dave said:

Good write.

May 6th, 2024 01:51

Back from the Dead
Neville said:



That\'s the spirit, they can\'t keep a good badman down .. well not for long anyway .. Good to see you mate, hope all is well sir .. Neville

May 6th, 2024 01:49



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