Comments received on poems by Alan R
Scarlet solo
Dan Williams said:
Touching, as lost love usually is. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2024 23:48
Dan Williams said:
Touching, as lost love usually is. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2024 23:48
Mine
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, your title is... one of my favorite denotations slapped on MY stuff, yet culling thereby such envy the air turns green [if only it could, that is]. My. I love this, rendered as if casually in sweetly striking brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 27th, 2024 17:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, your title is... one of my favorite denotations slapped on MY stuff, yet culling thereby such envy the air turns green [if only it could, that is]. My. I love this, rendered as if casually in sweetly striking brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 27th, 2024 17:28
Fall guest
Neville said:
You would have to be crazy not to love this entire page and its contents .. Bravo Alan .. Neville 🍁
October 27th, 2024 02:24
Neville said:
You would have to be crazy not to love this entire page and its contents .. Bravo Alan .. Neville 🍁
October 27th, 2024 02:24
Fall guest
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? You think? If it warms and thrills even one soul, hasn\'t it been fitly put to use? For example, I love my car, kiss her even, yet she is not alive, but how I love her still. I dunno. Just thinking. This is lovely and fascinatingly rendered with an interesting rhyme scheme and excellent imagery, not to mention a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 16:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? You think? If it warms and thrills even one soul, hasn\'t it been fitly put to use? For example, I love my car, kiss her even, yet she is not alive, but how I love her still. I dunno. Just thinking. This is lovely and fascinatingly rendered with an interesting rhyme scheme and excellent imagery, not to mention a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 16:00
White aurora
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image painted in all of its glory so nicely done
October 15th, 2024 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image painted in all of its glory so nicely done
October 15th, 2024 08:47
A little
Dan Williams said:
A little of this is all it takes. Makes me think awe, so happy.
September 20th, 2024 01:11
Dan Williams said:
A little of this is all it takes. Makes me think awe, so happy.
September 20th, 2024 01:11
Atlantic
NafisaSB said:
have crossed the Atlantic physically - now hope your wishes that were tested and realized, continue to be fulfilled
September 17th, 2024 01:24
NafisaSB said:
have crossed the Atlantic physically - now hope your wishes that were tested and realized, continue to be fulfilled
September 17th, 2024 01:24
Atlantic
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and beautifully rendered with a delightful poignancy waltzing throughout. It\'s fun looking out airplane windows at the world below, if you ever enjoy the opportunity. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 20:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and beautifully rendered with a delightful poignancy waltzing throughout. It\'s fun looking out airplane windows at the world below, if you ever enjoy the opportunity. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 20:31
Atlantic
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are what life is made of may all of yours be fulfiled.
September 15th, 2024 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are what life is made of may all of yours be fulfiled.
September 15th, 2024 12:57
Atlantic
Lorenz said:
I too have crossed this unfathomable ocean . Moving description !
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Lorenz said:
I too have crossed this unfathomable ocean . Moving description !
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Not quite yet
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully visual Alan. Nicely composed. All the best.
September 15th, 2024 10:15
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully visual Alan. Nicely composed. All the best.
September 15th, 2024 10:15
War
sorenbarrett said:
The other side of the coin. Love has its down sides.
September 13th, 2024 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
The other side of the coin. Love has its down sides.
September 13th, 2024 09:06
Late summer
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed & in particular, your summative line say\'s it all .. neville
September 12th, 2024 04:30
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed & in particular, your summative line say\'s it all .. neville
September 12th, 2024 04:30
Late summer
sorenbarrett said:
A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
September 11th, 2024 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
September 11th, 2024 07:46
Late summer
Cassie58 said:
The changing of the season is upon us. You paint some beautiful imagery with your words here in this short poem. You gifted this reader sunflowers at sunset and it was much appreciated Alan. Have a beautiful Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:49
Cassie58 said:
The changing of the season is upon us. You paint some beautiful imagery with your words here in this short poem. You gifted this reader sunflowers at sunset and it was much appreciated Alan. Have a beautiful Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:49
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