Comments received on poems by Alan R
Late summer
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed & in particular, your summative line say\'s it all .. neville
September 12th, 2024 04:30
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed & in particular, your summative line say\'s it all .. neville
September 12th, 2024 04:30
Late summer
sorenbarrett said:
A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
September 11th, 2024 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
September 11th, 2024 07:46
Late summer
Cassie58 said:
The changing of the season is upon us. You paint some beautiful imagery with your words here in this short poem. You gifted this reader sunflowers at sunset and it was much appreciated Alan. Have a beautiful Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:49
Cassie58 said:
The changing of the season is upon us. You paint some beautiful imagery with your words here in this short poem. You gifted this reader sunflowers at sunset and it was much appreciated Alan. Have a beautiful Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 03:49
Change
Cheeky Missy said:
Cull Shakespeare to the fore adroitly, will you? And yet even he himself did not concur with Juliet\'s plea to Romeo, since according his sonnets all roses do not smell as sweet as some.
Charming!
September 1st, 2024 15:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Cull Shakespeare to the fore adroitly, will you? And yet even he himself did not concur with Juliet\'s plea to Romeo, since according his sonnets all roses do not smell as sweet as some.
Charming!
September 1st, 2024 15:54
Green eyed blues
Cassie58 said:
Blue can be such a sad colour. I sense uncertainty here. Love can be so problematic. Nice write Alan.
August 23rd, 2024 14:37
Cassie58 said:
Blue can be such a sad colour. I sense uncertainty here. Love can be so problematic. Nice write Alan.
August 23rd, 2024 14:37
Green eyed blues
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is it between women with green and blue eyes or the same woman on different days? Very nicely written with a sense of haziness and mist to the poem loved it
August 23rd, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is it between women with green and blue eyes or the same woman on different days? Very nicely written with a sense of haziness and mist to the poem loved it
August 23rd, 2024 05:50
Sin
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if love
Can be made
Without lust?
Doesn’t one
Lead to life
And the other
To dust?
August 22nd, 2024 18:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if love
Can be made
Without lust?
Doesn’t one
Lead to life
And the other
To dust?
August 22nd, 2024 18:33
Sin
Cassie58 said:
Lust and love.Many relationships have both. All the best Alan.
August 22nd, 2024 15:27
Cassie58 said:
Lust and love.Many relationships have both. All the best Alan.
August 22nd, 2024 15:27
Sin
sorenbarrett said:
Where one ends the other begins in an endless circle a most interesting write.
August 22nd, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Where one ends the other begins in an endless circle a most interesting write.
August 22nd, 2024 04:33
Blues
Cassie58 said:
Oh so blue, but love can be like that at times. Nicely composed and conveyed Alan. All the best.
August 21st, 2024 08:31
Cassie58 said:
Oh so blue, but love can be like that at times. Nicely composed and conveyed Alan. All the best.
August 21st, 2024 08:31
Blues
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a noir blue feel to it and I loved it.
August 21st, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a noir blue feel to it and I loved it.
August 21st, 2024 05:07
Traveller
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of reflection. The fifth stanza, particularly poignant. Nicely composed lines Alan.
August 20th, 2024 05:21
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of reflection. The fifth stanza, particularly poignant. Nicely composed lines Alan.
August 20th, 2024 05:21
Traveller
sorenbarrett said:
Easily forgotten is not what one wants in a relationship. Feeling homeless and unimportant well expressed in this nicely written poem
August 19th, 2024 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Easily forgotten is not what one wants in a relationship. Feeling homeless and unimportant well expressed in this nicely written poem
August 19th, 2024 08:05
Won\'t call it love
rhmn_7 said:
That sounds like true love to me though, great poem!
August 18th, 2024 06:17
rhmn_7 said:
That sounds like true love to me though, great poem!
August 18th, 2024 06:17
Won\'t call it love
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
August 16th, 2024 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
August 16th, 2024 18:28
Joy
Neville said:
they seem to predominate these days don\'t they .. fear driven markets that is .. bloomin well poemed Al .. N
August 14th, 2024 12:37
Neville said:
they seem to predominate these days don\'t they .. fear driven markets that is .. bloomin well poemed Al .. N
August 14th, 2024 12:37
Joy
Cassie58 said:
You know, there are times when it’s good to be alone and happy in your own company. A nice poem of reflection Alan. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:44
Cassie58 said:
You know, there are times when it’s good to be alone and happy in your own company. A nice poem of reflection Alan. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:44
Joy
sorenbarrett said:
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52
Happy
sorenbarrett said:
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57
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