Comments received on poems by Alan R
Nihilism
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording confirms the title of this poem. Well written
May 24th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording confirms the title of this poem. Well written
May 24th, 2026 04:17
Saved
sorenbarrett said:
So true just ask any drunkard or addict. A statement well stated and articulated
May 19th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
So true just ask any drunkard or addict. A statement well stated and articulated
May 19th, 2026 10:40
Battle ground
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest battles are against oneself. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest battles are against oneself. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:19
Indifference
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic rhyme about a subject seldom addressed. Nicely done
May 8th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic rhyme about a subject seldom addressed. Nicely done
May 8th, 2026 04:14
Fight
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of daily toils and travails encapsulated in verse. Well done
May 7th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of daily toils and travails encapsulated in verse. Well done
May 7th, 2026 13:31
Meddle
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a most interesting concept the linkage between pain and the sacred with endurance as the fulcrum of measure. Well done Alan
April 29th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a most interesting concept the linkage between pain and the sacred with endurance as the fulcrum of measure. Well done Alan
April 29th, 2026 05:08
Math
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write math being considered the peak of logic and philosophy. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write math being considered the peak of logic and philosophy. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:25
Haven
sorenbarrett said:
An abode for transients is lamented whether due to lack of permanent ties or feelings of loss still seen as a curse. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
An abode for transients is lamented whether due to lack of permanent ties or feelings of loss still seen as a curse. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:44
Amber
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual vision seductive appearance all in this short poem
April 19th, 2026 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual vision seductive appearance all in this short poem
April 19th, 2026 15:09
Chosen
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of dryness to this poem as a pressed flower now a memory no longer living just a fragment of the past between pages of time never to be read again. It seems frozen and a bit sad. A fave for the parallels in this metaphor and the feeling evoked
April 18th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of dryness to this poem as a pressed flower now a memory no longer living just a fragment of the past between pages of time never to be read again. It seems frozen and a bit sad. A fave for the parallels in this metaphor and the feeling evoked
April 18th, 2026 05:16
Melancholy dream
Katie B. said:
Sad, heavy but real images in this one. I feel the pain. Well done!
April 17th, 2026 04:38
Katie B. said:
Sad, heavy but real images in this one. I feel the pain. Well done!
April 17th, 2026 04:38
Melancholy dream
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels surreal and distant beyond the realm of day. Well written
April 17th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels surreal and distant beyond the realm of day. Well written
April 17th, 2026 04:07
Lights
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is painful in its doubt and fear and one thing is clear that one needs another. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is painful in its doubt and fear and one thing is clear that one needs another. Nicely written
April 15th, 2026 04:46
Angeli di Firenze
Teddy.15 said:
Love your title and the romantic path you have chosen in which to write about Firenze it\'s quite a magical place and filled with all types of beauty and of course Angels. 🌹
April 9th, 2026 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Love your title and the romantic path you have chosen in which to write about Firenze it\'s quite a magical place and filled with all types of beauty and of course Angels. 🌹
April 9th, 2026 02:08
Angeli di Firenze
sorenbarrett said:
How good the comparison the metaphor works well and makes its point. Nicely done
April 8th, 2026 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
How good the comparison the metaphor works well and makes its point. Nicely done
April 8th, 2026 16:50
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