Comments received on poems by Alan R
Haze
sorenbarrett said:
I see this poem as highly existential as a search for identity and direction where love is not the object but merely a rock in the whitewater. Nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
I see this poem as highly existential as a search for identity and direction where love is not the object but merely a rock in the whitewater. Nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:40
Haze
Demar Desu said:
Great poem, showing the ebbs and flows of love and relationship. When the relationship gets stale, I think it’s important to freshen it up with reminders of why being in love. It’s interesting cause I’m currently going through a phase with my wife and this poem was definitely inspiring… thank you!
December 19th, 2025 03:08
Demar Desu said:
Great poem, showing the ebbs and flows of love and relationship. When the relationship gets stale, I think it’s important to freshen it up with reminders of why being in love. It’s interesting cause I’m currently going through a phase with my wife and this poem was definitely inspiring… thank you!
December 19th, 2025 03:08
Sail
sorenbarrett said:
We all withdraw with boredom either social withdrawal, mental, emotional or what ever. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
We all withdraw with boredom either social withdrawal, mental, emotional or what ever. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:57
Waterfall
rhmn_7 said:
I hope you get the light you desire dear Alan, Beautiful poem!
October 26th, 2025 16:04
rhmn_7 said:
I hope you get the light you desire dear Alan, Beautiful poem!
October 26th, 2025 16:04
Waterfall
sorenbarrett said:
Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A lovely poem
September 21st, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A lovely poem
September 21st, 2025 07:39
Half
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
August 21st, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
August 21st, 2025 04:32
Dusk
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past love now past and content with emptiness. A lovely write
August 13th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past love now past and content with emptiness. A lovely write
August 13th, 2025 17:00
Gaze
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of protecting one self, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 23:03
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of protecting one self, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 23:03
Gaze
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem the injury inflicted prevents further harm and great poem
August 10th, 2025 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem the injury inflicted prevents further harm and great poem
August 10th, 2025 18:13
Void
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:41
Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely poetic description of art and its freeing force. Most lovely
July 27th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely poetic description of art and its freeing force. Most lovely
July 27th, 2025 10:59
Dachstein
RSM0812 said:
Mountains are majestic for sure. As is your poem. Great job.
July 6th, 2025 21:25
RSM0812 said:
Mountains are majestic for sure. As is your poem. Great job.
July 6th, 2025 21:25
Dachstein
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, making our choices for our selves and enjoying the beauty that will follow, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, making our choices for our selves and enjoying the beauty that will follow, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 13:59
Dachstein
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful it speaks to being alone in making our choices and the beauty of it and all that surrounds it. A fave
July 6th, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Short but powerful it speaks to being alone in making our choices and the beauty of it and all that surrounds it. A fave
July 6th, 2025 13:03
Sacred
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains musings of what is of value and comes to the conclusion that all the effort is not worth it. Nicely written
June 26th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains musings of what is of value and comes to the conclusion that all the effort is not worth it. Nicely written
June 26th, 2025 05:28
Letters to my muse
Poetic Licence said:
Something that happens naturally is always more beautiful than anything bought or manufactured, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
Something that happens naturally is always more beautiful than anything bought or manufactured, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 11:05
Letters to my muse
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty that blooms free has a special fragrance to the eye that none bought in a shop can compare and so it is with people as well. Lovely
June 2nd, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty that blooms free has a special fragrance to the eye that none bought in a shop can compare and so it is with people as well. Lovely
June 2nd, 2025 09:32
City Center
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write, has a calm feel to it, a touch of yin and yan, enjoyed the read
June 1st, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write, has a calm feel to it, a touch of yin and yan, enjoyed the read
June 1st, 2025 06:00
City Center
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this poem for its balance and for its feel. Very nicely crafted a fave
June 1st, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this poem for its balance and for its feel. Very nicely crafted a fave
June 1st, 2025 04:57
Collapse
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are all out thoughts and we reach out for more. Well written
May 19th, 2025 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are all out thoughts and we reach out for more. Well written
May 19th, 2025 09:16
After party
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting characterization of love. Very nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting characterization of love. Very nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:09
Angel of my afterlife
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of images vivid all intermingled with nature scenes. A most interesting and at the same time soothing poem
April 18th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A collage of images vivid all intermingled with nature scenes. A most interesting and at the same time soothing poem
April 18th, 2025 04:21
Face to face
Poetic Licence said:
A natural reaction to being rejected and hurt by something we all chase, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
A natural reaction to being rejected and hurt by something we all chase, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 04:50
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