Comments received on poems by Alan R
Conquer
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a variation in this version or is it just my memory that feels a subtle change. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a variation in this version or is it just my memory that feels a subtle change. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 04:58
Conquer
sorenbarrett said:
I take this language as metaphor and where else for the clock tower to be but atop and as for conquering the city well...
February 23rd, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
I take this language as metaphor and where else for the clock tower to be but atop and as for conquering the city well...
February 23rd, 2026 17:54
Side
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing poem that is sensual and at the same time enigmatic nicely done
February 20th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing poem that is sensual and at the same time enigmatic nicely done
February 20th, 2026 06:27
Deflect
NafisaSB said:
happens to all of us sometime - well defined here...
February 17th, 2026 23:46
NafisaSB said:
happens to all of us sometime - well defined here...
February 17th, 2026 23:46
Hots
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and nicely written a poem for electric passion. Well done
February 17th, 2026 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and nicely written a poem for electric passion. Well done
February 17th, 2026 06:00
Deflect
sorenbarrett said:
This poem all about relationships and control. The battle seems set and neither want to loose. Well done
February 16th, 2026 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem all about relationships and control. The battle seems set and neither want to loose. Well done
February 16th, 2026 17:43
Stay
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the desire to take one\'s time and enjoy life \"carpe diem\" so to speak. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the desire to take one\'s time and enjoy life \"carpe diem\" so to speak. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:54
Cage
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around feelings of entrapment and emotional struggle in a relationship or environment that demands compliance and sacrifices individual identity
January 28th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around feelings of entrapment and emotional struggle in a relationship or environment that demands compliance and sacrifices individual identity
January 28th, 2026 07:59
Cage
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be interpreted to apply to various situations from political to personal to intrapsychic. Well written it is a fave
January 28th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be interpreted to apply to various situations from political to personal to intrapsychic. Well written it is a fave
January 28th, 2026 05:31
Ablaze
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that sets the tone, the rhyme carries the melody and the message sets the beat. This one is in the right key in major not minor. Well done
January 24th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that sets the tone, the rhyme carries the melody and the message sets the beat. This one is in the right key in major not minor. Well done
January 24th, 2026 05:24
Lotus
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful proclamation of love and declaration of its perceived beauty in similitude of nature\'s beauty as well. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful proclamation of love and declaration of its perceived beauty in similitude of nature\'s beauty as well. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 04:34
Grieve
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this love poem love itself gets entangled and twisted, confused as to whether it was or is. A lovely write about an emotion that has no logic. Well done
January 11th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this love poem love itself gets entangled and twisted, confused as to whether it was or is. A lovely write about an emotion that has no logic. Well done
January 11th, 2026 04:22
Crimson
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that is somewhat tentative. Nicely done
January 6th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that is somewhat tentative. Nicely done
January 6th, 2026 19:00
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a conundrum indeed. Clever and it makes sense on more than one level. Well done
January 5th, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a conundrum indeed. Clever and it makes sense on more than one level. Well done
January 5th, 2026 06:21
Haze
sorenbarrett said:
I see this poem as highly existential as a search for identity and direction where love is not the object but merely a rock in the whitewater. Nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
I see this poem as highly existential as a search for identity and direction where love is not the object but merely a rock in the whitewater. Nicely written
December 19th, 2025 04:40
Haze
Demar Desu said:
Great poem, showing the ebbs and flows of love and relationship. When the relationship gets stale, I think it’s important to freshen it up with reminders of why being in love. It’s interesting cause I’m currently going through a phase with my wife and this poem was definitely inspiring… thank you!
December 19th, 2025 03:08
Demar Desu said:
Great poem, showing the ebbs and flows of love and relationship. When the relationship gets stale, I think it’s important to freshen it up with reminders of why being in love. It’s interesting cause I’m currently going through a phase with my wife and this poem was definitely inspiring… thank you!
December 19th, 2025 03:08
Sail
sorenbarrett said:
We all withdraw with boredom either social withdrawal, mental, emotional or what ever. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
We all withdraw with boredom either social withdrawal, mental, emotional or what ever. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:57
Waterfall
rhmn_7 said:
I hope you get the light you desire dear Alan, Beautiful poem!
October 26th, 2025 16:04
rhmn_7 said:
I hope you get the light you desire dear Alan, Beautiful poem!
October 26th, 2025 16:04
Waterfall
sorenbarrett said:
Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A lovely poem
September 21st, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A lovely poem
September 21st, 2025 07:39
Half
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
August 21st, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
August 21st, 2025 04:32
Dusk
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past love now past and content with emptiness. A lovely write
August 13th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of past love now past and content with emptiness. A lovely write
August 13th, 2025 17:00
Gaze
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of protecting one self, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 23:03
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of protecting one self, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 23:03
Gaze
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem the injury inflicted prevents further harm and great poem
August 10th, 2025 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem the injury inflicted prevents further harm and great poem
August 10th, 2025 18:13
Void
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely done
August 4th, 2025 04:41
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