Comments received on poems by Alan R
Too long
sorenbarrett said:
Alan this poem captures in its brevity the two aspects necessary for moving on that of leaving behind and movement forward so nicely conceptualized in poetic form and metaphor. Well done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Alan this poem captures in its brevity the two aspects necessary for moving on that of leaving behind and movement forward so nicely conceptualized in poetic form and metaphor. Well done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:35
Choose
rhmn_7 said:
Wish you the best with your struggles dear Alan, great write!
May 31st, 2026 01:53
rhmn_7 said:
Wish you the best with your struggles dear Alan, great write!
May 31st, 2026 01:53
Indifference
sorenbarrett said:
An ungodly experience or dream that ends as an end itself. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
An ungodly experience or dream that ends as an end itself. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 18:21
Nihilism
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording confirms the title of this poem. Well written
May 24th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording confirms the title of this poem. Well written
May 24th, 2026 04:17
Saved
sorenbarrett said:
So true just ask any drunkard or addict. A statement well stated and articulated
May 19th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
So true just ask any drunkard or addict. A statement well stated and articulated
May 19th, 2026 10:40
Battle ground
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest battles are against oneself. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest battles are against oneself. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:19
Indifference
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic rhyme about a subject seldom addressed. Nicely done
May 8th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic rhyme about a subject seldom addressed. Nicely done
May 8th, 2026 04:14
Fight
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of daily toils and travails encapsulated in verse. Well done
May 7th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of daily toils and travails encapsulated in verse. Well done
May 7th, 2026 13:31
Meddle
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a most interesting concept the linkage between pain and the sacred with endurance as the fulcrum of measure. Well done Alan
April 29th, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a most interesting concept the linkage between pain and the sacred with endurance as the fulcrum of measure. Well done Alan
April 29th, 2026 05:08
Math
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write math being considered the peak of logic and philosophy. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write math being considered the peak of logic and philosophy. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:25
Haven
sorenbarrett said:
An abode for transients is lamented whether due to lack of permanent ties or feelings of loss still seen as a curse. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
An abode for transients is lamented whether due to lack of permanent ties or feelings of loss still seen as a curse. Well written
April 21st, 2026 04:44
Amber
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual vision seductive appearance all in this short poem
April 19th, 2026 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual vision seductive appearance all in this short poem
April 19th, 2026 15:09
Chosen
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of dryness to this poem as a pressed flower now a memory no longer living just a fragment of the past between pages of time never to be read again. It seems frozen and a bit sad. A fave for the parallels in this metaphor and the feeling evoked
April 18th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of dryness to this poem as a pressed flower now a memory no longer living just a fragment of the past between pages of time never to be read again. It seems frozen and a bit sad. A fave for the parallels in this metaphor and the feeling evoked
April 18th, 2026 05:16
Melancholy dream
Katie B. said:
Sad, heavy but real images in this one. I feel the pain. Well done!
April 17th, 2026 04:38
Katie B. said:
Sad, heavy but real images in this one. I feel the pain. Well done!
April 17th, 2026 04:38
Melancholy dream
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels surreal and distant beyond the realm of day. Well written
April 17th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels surreal and distant beyond the realm of day. Well written
April 17th, 2026 04:07
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