Comments received on poems by Alan R
Sin
Cassie58 said:
Lust and love.Many relationships have both. All the best Alan.
August 22nd, 2024 15:27
Cassie58 said:
Lust and love.Many relationships have both. All the best Alan.
August 22nd, 2024 15:27
Sin
sorenbarrett said:
Where one ends the other begins in an endless circle a most interesting write.
August 22nd, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Where one ends the other begins in an endless circle a most interesting write.
August 22nd, 2024 04:33
Blues
Cassie58 said:
Oh so blue, but love can be like that at times. Nicely composed and conveyed Alan. All the best.
August 21st, 2024 08:31
Cassie58 said:
Oh so blue, but love can be like that at times. Nicely composed and conveyed Alan. All the best.
August 21st, 2024 08:31
Blues
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a noir blue feel to it and I loved it.
August 21st, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a noir blue feel to it and I loved it.
August 21st, 2024 05:07
Traveller
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of reflection. The fifth stanza, particularly poignant. Nicely composed lines Alan.
August 20th, 2024 05:21
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of reflection. The fifth stanza, particularly poignant. Nicely composed lines Alan.
August 20th, 2024 05:21
Traveller
sorenbarrett said:
Easily forgotten is not what one wants in a relationship. Feeling homeless and unimportant well expressed in this nicely written poem
August 19th, 2024 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Easily forgotten is not what one wants in a relationship. Feeling homeless and unimportant well expressed in this nicely written poem
August 19th, 2024 08:05
Won\'t call it love
rhmn_7 said:
That sounds like true love to me though, great poem!
August 18th, 2024 06:17
rhmn_7 said:
That sounds like true love to me though, great poem!
August 18th, 2024 06:17
Won\'t call it love
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
August 16th, 2024 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
August 16th, 2024 18:28
Joy
Neville said:
they seem to predominate these days don\'t they .. fear driven markets that is .. bloomin well poemed Al .. N
August 14th, 2024 12:37
Neville said:
they seem to predominate these days don\'t they .. fear driven markets that is .. bloomin well poemed Al .. N
August 14th, 2024 12:37
Joy
Cassie58 said:
You know, there are times when it’s good to be alone and happy in your own company. A nice poem of reflection Alan. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:44
Cassie58 said:
You know, there are times when it’s good to be alone and happy in your own company. A nice poem of reflection Alan. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:44
Joy
sorenbarrett said:
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52
Happy
sorenbarrett said:
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57
Change
sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
August 10th, 2024 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
August 10th, 2024 17:58
Academia
Neville said:
It\'s a slow process, indeed a lifelong one, but above all else, stick at it ..
August 10th, 2024 04:17
Neville said:
It\'s a slow process, indeed a lifelong one, but above all else, stick at it ..
August 10th, 2024 04:17
Academia
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different values and priorities. I feel the disillusion and desire for something else.
August 9th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different values and priorities. I feel the disillusion and desire for something else.
August 9th, 2024 06:06
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers and I love the last line that gives meaning to this for me.
August 4th, 2024 17:33
sorenbarrett said:
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers and I love the last line that gives meaning to this for me.
August 4th, 2024 17:33
Silhouette
Cassie58 said:
A fine piece of reflective brevity Alan. I also enjoyed the posted image. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
A fine piece of reflective brevity Alan. I also enjoyed the posted image. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:40
Silhouette
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection. Very nice
August 2nd, 2024 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection. Very nice
August 2nd, 2024 16:25
The line
Neville said:
having supped upon these words and my own subsequent reflections,
I sense where you might now be coming from .. sometimes, I fear it is best to keep one\'s head held low .. at least under the parapet .. kindest regards, Neville
July 30th, 2024 12:54
Neville said:
having supped upon these words and my own subsequent reflections,
I sense where you might now be coming from .. sometimes, I fear it is best to keep one\'s head held low .. at least under the parapet .. kindest regards, Neville
July 30th, 2024 12:54
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