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sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
August 10th, 2024 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
August 10th, 2024 17:58
Academia
Neville said:
It\'s a slow process, indeed a lifelong one, but above all else, stick at it ..
August 10th, 2024 04:17
Neville said:
It\'s a slow process, indeed a lifelong one, but above all else, stick at it ..
August 10th, 2024 04:17
Academia
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different values and priorities. I feel the disillusion and desire for something else.
August 9th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different values and priorities. I feel the disillusion and desire for something else.
August 9th, 2024 06:06
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers and I love the last line that gives meaning to this for me.
August 4th, 2024 17:33
sorenbarrett said:
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers and I love the last line that gives meaning to this for me.
August 4th, 2024 17:33
Silhouette
Cassie58 said:
A fine piece of reflective brevity Alan. I also enjoyed the posted image. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
A fine piece of reflective brevity Alan. I also enjoyed the posted image. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 07:40
Silhouette
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection. Very nice
August 2nd, 2024 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection. Very nice
August 2nd, 2024 16:25
The line
Neville said:
having supped upon these words and my own subsequent reflections,
I sense where you might now be coming from .. sometimes, I fear it is best to keep one\'s head held low .. at least under the parapet .. kindest regards, Neville
July 30th, 2024 12:54
Neville said:
having supped upon these words and my own subsequent reflections,
I sense where you might now be coming from .. sometimes, I fear it is best to keep one\'s head held low .. at least under the parapet .. kindest regards, Neville
July 30th, 2024 12:54
The line
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2024 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2024 19:54
The line
2781 said:
To visit the fatherless and widows in their affliction, and to keep himself unspotted.
July 27th, 2024 08:42
2781 said:
To visit the fatherless and widows in their affliction, and to keep himself unspotted.
July 27th, 2024 08:42
Courage
Mutley Ravishes said:
The 3rd poem I\'ve read about courage in the last few days. Great work!
I found two ingredients to mix and make a potion of courage. If only I had realized earlier. Oh well, better late than never!
July 10th, 2024 18:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
The 3rd poem I\'ve read about courage in the last few days. Great work!
I found two ingredients to mix and make a potion of courage. If only I had realized earlier. Oh well, better late than never!
July 10th, 2024 18:59
Tired
Cassie58 said:
Be yourself. You will never please everybody. A nice reflective write Alan. All the best.
July 9th, 2024 11:38
Cassie58 said:
Be yourself. You will never please everybody. A nice reflective write Alan. All the best.
July 9th, 2024 11:38
Love is not
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem,
thoughts and
view on love
indeed!!
Really captures
the readers
attention and
my pleasure
to read! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:34
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem,
thoughts and
view on love
indeed!!
Really captures
the readers
attention and
my pleasure
to read! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:34
Courage
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully
captivating
poem indeed! π
Strong feelings
and message
and my pleasure
to read!
Best regards βοΈ. Thad
July 1st, 2024 17:27
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully
captivating
poem indeed! π
Strong feelings
and message
and my pleasure
to read!
Best regards βοΈ. Thad
July 1st, 2024 17:27
Love is not
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for your support π I\'m glad you liked it...
June 28th, 2024 23:59
Alan R said:
Thanks a lot for your support π I\'m glad you liked it...
June 28th, 2024 23:59
Love is not
Mase βͺ said:
Wow, so beautifully written, and reads so smoothly. Good Write Alan.
June 28th, 2024 14:37
Mase βͺ said:
Wow, so beautifully written, and reads so smoothly. Good Write Alan.
June 28th, 2024 14:37
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