Comments received on poems by Alan R



Secure
sorenbarrett said:

Emotional it shouts at the reader. Very well done.

August 11th, 2024 19:57

Change
sorenbarrett said:

Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done

August 10th, 2024 17:58

Academia
Neville said:



It\'s a slow process, indeed a lifelong one, but above all else, stick at it ..

August 10th, 2024 04:17

Academia
sorenbarrett said:

Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different values and priorities. I feel the disillusion and desire for something else.

August 9th, 2024 06:06

Fake
sorenbarrett said:

This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers and I love the last line that gives meaning to this for me.

August 4th, 2024 17:33

Silhouette
Dan Williams said:

22 words have very seldom said more. Good work.

August 3rd, 2024 23:48

Play
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written in verse a message sent. Very good

August 3rd, 2024 10:34

Silhouette
Cassie58 said:

A fine piece of reflective brevity Alan. I also enjoyed the posted image. Happy Saturday.

August 3rd, 2024 07:40

Silhouette
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 2nd, 2024 18:19

Silhouette
Thomas W Case said:

I relate to this. Great work.

August 2nd, 2024 17:27

Silhouette
sorenbarrett said:

Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection. Very nice

August 2nd, 2024 16:25

The line
Neville said:


having supped upon these words and my own subsequent reflections,
I sense where you might now be coming from .. sometimes, I fear it is best to keep one\'s head held low .. at least under the parapet .. kindest regards, Neville

July 30th, 2024 12:54

The line
sorenbarrett said:

Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.

July 27th, 2024 19:54

The line
2781 said:

To visit the fatherless and widows in their affliction, and to keep himself unspotted.

July 27th, 2024 08:42

Sky lamps
Alan R said:

Thanks alot 😊

July 22nd, 2024 05:12

Sky lamps
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

July 21st, 2024 21:28

Courage
Mutley Ravishes said:

The 3rd poem I\'ve read about courage in the last few days. Great work!
I found two ingredients to mix and make a potion of courage. If only I had realized earlier. Oh well, better late than never!

July 10th, 2024 18:59

Envy
Thomas W Case said:

Superb flow, Alan.

July 10th, 2024 14:41

Tired
Cassie58 said:

Be yourself. You will never please everybody. A nice reflective write Alan. All the best.

July 9th, 2024 11:38

Tired
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

July 9th, 2024 10:12

Love is not
Alan R said:

Thanks alot, I appreciate it ☺️

July 2nd, 2024 23:45

Bohemia
Alan R said:

Thanks a lot ☺️

July 2nd, 2024 23:44

Bohemia
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

July 2nd, 2024 18:20

Love is not
Thad Wilk said:

A great poem,
thoughts and
view on love
indeed!!
Really captures
the readers
attention and
my pleasure
to read! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad


July 2nd, 2024 17:34

Courage
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

July 1st, 2024 19:52

Courage
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderfully
captivating
poem indeed! πŸ‘
Strong feelings
and message
and my pleasure
to read!
Best regards ✌️. Thad

July 1st, 2024 17:27

Healing
Alan R said:

Thanks a lot 😊

June 29th, 2024 00:00

Love is not
Alan R said:

Thanks a lot for your support 😊 I\'m glad you liked it...

June 28th, 2024 23:59

Healing
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Great work.

June 28th, 2024 19:09

Love is not
Mase β™ͺ said:

Wow, so beautifully written, and reads so smoothly. Good Write Alan.

June 28th, 2024 14:37

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