Comments received on poems by Dolphine29
I SEE YOU
Cheeky Missy said:
You loved your grandmother....and this is a sweet adieu to her. Thinking about it, reminds me of when my maternal grandfather died....I so missed him, and was only consoled by the thought that the Bible says "...to be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord..." as well as, "....in Thy presence is fullness of joy...." and probably mistakenly (for I cannot now think I understood those Scriptures entirely correctly) was comforted in the thought that he was happier there than we ever shall be here. The image you used with it expresses your idea nicely.
December 21st, 2010 22:56
Cheeky Missy said:
You loved your grandmother....and this is a sweet adieu to her. Thinking about it, reminds me of when my maternal grandfather died....I so missed him, and was only consoled by the thought that the Bible says "...to be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord..." as well as, "....in Thy presence is fullness of joy...." and probably mistakenly (for I cannot now think I understood those Scriptures entirely correctly) was comforted in the thought that he was happier there than we ever shall be here. The image you used with it expresses your idea nicely.
December 21st, 2010 22:56
Secret Keeper
Pratikshya said:
i really liked the way you chronologically put down the verses, and that too without cutting short the rhythmic pattern of the poem.
December 21st, 2010 07:13
Pratikshya said:
i really liked the way you chronologically put down the verses, and that too without cutting short the rhythmic pattern of the poem.
December 21st, 2010 07:13
Secret Keeper
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is so perfect for it. And your comment about it made it mean so much more. It is a reflective, almost bittersweet, but sweet piece, tender and loving. I appreciated that you classified it as "forgiveness" for that lent a different angle on it than I initially had. I enjoyed this poem....and look forward to more of your work!
December 20th, 2010 17:04
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is so perfect for it. And your comment about it made it mean so much more. It is a reflective, almost bittersweet, but sweet piece, tender and loving. I appreciated that you classified it as "forgiveness" for that lent a different angle on it than I initially had. I enjoyed this poem....and look forward to more of your work!
December 20th, 2010 17:04
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