Comments received on poems by Jan bach
Buttered Frog.
Poetic Licence said:
Although sad for the frog this was a very entertaining read, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 03:21
Poetic Licence said:
Although sad for the frog this was a very entertaining read, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 03:21
Buttered Frog.
sorenbarrett said:
A great story told well. Frog butter does not appeal to me either. Nicely done.
March 22nd, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great story told well. Frog butter does not appeal to me either. Nicely done.
March 22nd, 2025 17:01
The Decision of Judas Iscariot.
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this write about the version of Judas, interesting and thought provoking, nicely written
March 22nd, 2025 03:15
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this write about the version of Judas, interesting and thought provoking, nicely written
March 22nd, 2025 03:15
The Decision of Judas Iscariot.
sorenbarrett said:
A take on the Gospel of Judas. Nicely written from the other point of view. Love the first person. Nicely done
March 21st, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A take on the Gospel of Judas. Nicely written from the other point of view. Love the first person. Nicely done
March 21st, 2025 15:02
Bath night.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of days gone by, will bring a lot of memories back for a lot people, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of days gone by, will bring a lot of memories back for a lot people, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 03:12
Bath night.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem describes a ritual no longer practiced but in the mind and nostalgia flows back from a time that was simpler, safer and more natural. A most lovely write that strikes at the hearts of older readers.
March 20th, 2025 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem describes a ritual no longer practiced but in the mind and nostalgia flows back from a time that was simpler, safer and more natural. A most lovely write that strikes at the hearts of older readers.
March 20th, 2025 16:19
ANGER !!
Poetic Licence said:
Anger building that it needs to be released, then sometimes we are not sure what we were so angry about, nicely expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:03
Poetic Licence said:
Anger building that it needs to be released, then sometimes we are not sure what we were so angry about, nicely expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:03
ANGER !!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the power of anger that needs an outlet. Nicely stated
March 19th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the power of anger that needs an outlet. Nicely stated
March 19th, 2025 14:55
Enduring Love.
sorenbarrett said:
Love ties strong bonds that keep a person captive. Abuse is not to be tolerated it weakens the soul. And herin lies the dilema. Love or self esteem which should be stronger? A most powerful poem
January 31st, 2025 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
Love ties strong bonds that keep a person captive. Abuse is not to be tolerated it weakens the soul. And herin lies the dilema. Love or self esteem which should be stronger? A most powerful poem
January 31st, 2025 19:50
Enduring Love.
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting, touching and emotional write around an issue so many people today are sitting and suffering with, i am glad she had the strength to finally get away. well written
January 31st, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting, touching and emotional write around an issue so many people today are sitting and suffering with, i am glad she had the strength to finally get away. well written
January 31st, 2025 11:33
Barry Island – A Chapel Outing. (1955)
Cheeky Missy said:
Gorgeously detailed with imagery until it\'s exquisite, rendered almost casually with a delicate yet determined poignancy, how very beautiful this is! Taken aback by its form, then gradually lost in a glorious adventure, I\'m swept away happily. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 3rd, 2025 20:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Gorgeously detailed with imagery until it\'s exquisite, rendered almost casually with a delicate yet determined poignancy, how very beautiful this is! Taken aback by its form, then gradually lost in a glorious adventure, I\'m swept away happily. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 3rd, 2025 20:26
A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Jan bach said:
Thank you Teddy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Jan
January 1st, 2025 04:12
Jan bach said:
Thank you Teddy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Jan
January 1st, 2025 04:12
A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful dedication to a man whose work has such an impact on our society way of thinking through out the years
December 30th, 2024 17:39
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful dedication to a man whose work has such an impact on our society way of thinking through out the years
December 30th, 2024 17:39
A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful work and so very apt to the world even today. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 15:01
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful work and so very apt to the world even today. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 15:01
Valleys New Years Eve 1955.
sorenbarrett said:
We are built layer upon layer with the bricks of memory may they be solid good ones. This was a wonderful story that bore hints of Dickens and was classical in nature as would be expected of a story of memory. Most lovely
December 29th, 2024 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
We are built layer upon layer with the bricks of memory may they be solid good ones. This was a wonderful story that bore hints of Dickens and was classical in nature as would be expected of a story of memory. Most lovely
December 29th, 2024 05:02
A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful journey down the long memory lane, really enjoyable read.
December 22nd, 2024 02:20
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful journey down the long memory lane, really enjoyable read.
December 22nd, 2024 02:20
A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Cassie58 said:
Packed full of wonderful memories of how it used to be. Your poem gave me a warm glow and took me back in time. Thank you Jan.
December 21st, 2024 21:49
Cassie58 said:
Packed full of wonderful memories of how it used to be. Your poem gave me a warm glow and took me back in time. Thank you Jan.
December 21st, 2024 21:49
A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Kevin Hulme said:
Ovaltine. That brings it back .
That was a Wonderful day you had .
How we think of a Past Christmas’s and Loved ones this time of year. Good Read.
December 21st, 2024 21:22
Kevin Hulme said:
Ovaltine. That brings it back .
That was a Wonderful day you had .
How we think of a Past Christmas’s and Loved ones this time of year. Good Read.
December 21st, 2024 21:22
A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Cheeky Missy said:
How this subtly yet oh so effectively whisks me off in a fair twinkling to my own childhood too long ago by now, your imagery over the top with Ovaltine making an appearance! Ah me! So deliciously rendered with amply haunting, warm poignancy and a sense of all we cherished, thank you so very much for sharing.
December 21st, 2024 18:23
Cheeky Missy said:
How this subtly yet oh so effectively whisks me off in a fair twinkling to my own childhood too long ago by now, your imagery over the top with Ovaltine making an appearance! Ah me! So deliciously rendered with amply haunting, warm poignancy and a sense of all we cherished, thank you so very much for sharing.
December 21st, 2024 18:23
The Gift of Sight.
Alan R said:
The way you ended it, emphasizes how much human mind values a first hand experience, no matter what experience, taking someone else\'s word for it, never suffices. It\'s a beautiful poem.
April 19th, 2024 23:59
Alan R said:
The way you ended it, emphasizes how much human mind values a first hand experience, no matter what experience, taking someone else\'s word for it, never suffices. It\'s a beautiful poem.
April 19th, 2024 23:59
The Chapel Harvest Festival.
orchidee said:
Good write Jan.
Bit early for harvest? August.
April 14th, 2024 01:54
orchidee said:
Good write Jan.
Bit early for harvest? August.
April 14th, 2024 01:54
