Comments received on poems by Jan bach



Barry Island – A Chapel Outing. (1955)
Cheeky Missy said:

Gorgeously detailed with imagery until it\'s exquisite, rendered almost casually with a delicate yet determined poignancy, how very beautiful this is! Taken aback by its form, then gradually lost in a glorious adventure, I\'m swept away happily. Thank you very much for sharing!

January 3rd, 2025 20:26

Barry Island – A Chapel Outing. (1955)
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 3rd, 2025 18:53

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Jan bach said:

Thank you Teddy. Glad you enjoyed it.

Jan

January 1st, 2025 04:12

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
arqios said:

Great tribute!

December 30th, 2024 23:19

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 30th, 2024 21:18

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
TobaniNataiella said:

A wonderful dedication to a man whose work has such an impact on our society way of thinking through out the years

December 30th, 2024 17:39

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful work and so very apt to the world even today. 🌹

December 30th, 2024 15:01

A Tribute to Charles Dickens.
orchidee said:

A fine write J.

December 30th, 2024 14:49

Valleys New Years Eve 1955.
sorenbarrett said:

We are built layer upon layer with the bricks of memory may they be solid good ones. This was a wonderful story that bore hints of Dickens and was classical in nature as would be expected of a story of memory. Most lovely

December 29th, 2024 05:02

A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
TobaniNataiella said:

A beautiful journey down the long memory lane, really enjoyable read.

December 22nd, 2024 02:20

A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Cassie58 said:

Packed full of wonderful memories of how it used to be. Your poem gave me a warm glow and took me back in time. Thank you Jan.

December 21st, 2024 21:49

A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Kevin Hulme said:

Ovaltine. That brings it back .
That was a Wonderful day you had .
How we think of a Past Christmas’s and Loved ones this time of year. Good Read.

December 21st, 2024 21:22

A Welsh Christmas in The Valleys 1955.
Cheeky Missy said:

How this subtly yet oh so effectively whisks me off in a fair twinkling to my own childhood too long ago by now, your imagery over the top with Ovaltine making an appearance! Ah me! So deliciously rendered with amply haunting, warm poignancy and a sense of all we cherished, thank you so very much for sharing.

December 21st, 2024 18:23

The Gift of Sight.
Alan R said:

The way you ended it, emphasizes how much human mind values a first hand experience, no matter what experience, taking someone else\'s word for it, never suffices. It\'s a beautiful poem.

April 19th, 2024 23:59

Lost Love
Accidental Poet said:

Beautifully penned Jan. 😉👍

April 16th, 2024 15:43

The Chapel Harvest Festival.
orchidee said:

Good write Jan.
Bit early for harvest? August.

April 14th, 2024 01:54