Comments received on poems by Koshish

The Eternal Gaze
Neilton said:

Very beautiful poem ! enjoyed it

June 13th, 2024 12:09

Don\'t Wake Me Up
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done.

June 13th, 2024 06:20

Don\'t Wake Me Up
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 12th, 2024 08:03

Alan R said:

The message I inferred is that, one needs to assess their potential and worth carefully before attempting to do something insurmountable...and doing so, constantly reassess the choices...instead of wallowing in the sorrow of failure...I took a bit of a stoic look at it...

June 9th, 2024 14:10

Koshish said:

Any suggestions?

June 9th, 2024 09:37

First Steps and Innocence
Meera Mere said:

This so wholesome dude.
Amazing poem 🙌

June 3rd, 2024 05:04

Echos of longing
David Wakeling said:

This is very well constructed,I love the rhyme.A sad but accurate description of Love.

April 13th, 2024 15:48

Wating for you
Lil said:

I like this a lot.

April 2nd, 2024 05:40

Echos of return
Introverted Sage said:

Hope in our hearts and faith in self is a sure way to finding the needed light. Splendid write!

March 31st, 2024 22:07

Echos of return
Lorenz said:

You\'ll snatch Eurydice from the underworld but don\'t look back !

March 31st, 2024 04:59

Sinking into Your Gaze
David Wakeling said:

This is very dramatic.Wonderful to read.Excellent

March 30th, 2024 22:05

Sinking into Your Gaze
orchidee said:

Good write K.

March 30th, 2024 03:33

Radiant resilience
orchidee said:

Good write V.

March 29th, 2024 03:18

Eternal shadow
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous use of language.

March 28th, 2024 15:11