Comments received on poems by Ladywithaquill
My yellow, Franprix umbrella
sorenbarrett said:
A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in finding another love. A love is not to be kept selfishly in a closet but to be free.
September 24th, 2024 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in finding another love. A love is not to be kept selfishly in a closet but to be free.
September 24th, 2024 20:37
My yellow, Franprix umbrella
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. This subtly takes readers on a little journey to a dreamy world where we traipse along with the yellow umbrella. Delightfully rendered thus with good imagery, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 15:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. This subtly takes readers on a little journey to a dreamy world where we traipse along with the yellow umbrella. Delightfully rendered thus with good imagery, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 15:29
How is it goodbye?
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel at those times. We missed the very essence of the one we loved. We would ask ourselves the very same questions you\'ve asked. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:41
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel at those times. We missed the very essence of the one we loved. We would ask ourselves the very same questions you\'ve asked. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:41
Monsoon!
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most anthropomorphic poem with great rhyme and vivid images. I think I love most the reference of earth putting on the perfume of the rain. A most wonderful write.
August 13th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most anthropomorphic poem with great rhyme and vivid images. I think I love most the reference of earth putting on the perfume of the rain. A most wonderful write.
August 13th, 2024 06:03
S&M
peto said:
Edgy
Enjoyed the content rhythm and rhyme
Lady with a quill and cuffs
Lethal combination
June 7th, 2024 11:50
peto said:
Edgy
Enjoyed the content rhythm and rhyme
Lady with a quill and cuffs
Lethal combination
June 7th, 2024 11:50
Hidden Melancholy
peto said:
I don\'t think you are being melodramatic
These subjects need a voice
Thank you for lending yours
You got the rhyme you got the courage
Look forward to reading more
April 26th, 2024 07:01
peto said:
I don\'t think you are being melodramatic
These subjects need a voice
Thank you for lending yours
You got the rhyme you got the courage
Look forward to reading more
April 26th, 2024 07:01
Mirror, mirror on the wall
David Wakeling said:
A unique poem with a positive message at the end.Well done
April 12th, 2024 03:50
David Wakeling said:
A unique poem with a positive message at the end.Well done
April 12th, 2024 03:50
A Murderer’s Tale
2781 said:
I laboured for an Italian brick layer, years ago.
Killed both his wife and lover with one bullet.
Did 20 years.
Nicest fellow.
April 9th, 2024 07:46
2781 said:
I laboured for an Italian brick layer, years ago.
Killed both his wife and lover with one bullet.
Did 20 years.
Nicest fellow.
April 9th, 2024 07:46
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