Comments received on poems by Ladywithaquill
Falling
Cassie58 said:
The vulnerability really comes through in your lines. That fear of letting go, in case we get hurt. Falling in love has its risks, but the rewards are far greater. A lovely poem. Thank you.
November 12th, 2024 22:23
Cassie58 said:
The vulnerability really comes through in your lines. That fear of letting go, in case we get hurt. Falling in love has its risks, but the rewards are far greater. A lovely poem. Thank you.
November 12th, 2024 22:23
The Friendship I Hold, the Love I Hide
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of passion felt for another and the desire for it to proceed beyond friendship. I can feel the power of its force. Nicely stated.
November 3rd, 2024 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of passion felt for another and the desire for it to proceed beyond friendship. I can feel the power of its force. Nicely stated.
November 3rd, 2024 19:21
The Friendship I Hold, the Love I Hide
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Beautifully rendered with a dainty poignancy whose weightiness balances itself like a precarious tightrope dancer. Oh, but I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Beautifully rendered with a dainty poignancy whose weightiness balances itself like a precarious tightrope dancer. Oh, but I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 18:12
When She Comes Again
Bobby O said:
An eerie tactile power you are aware of but try not to admit its grip. I like it
October 16th, 2024 04:14
Bobby O said:
An eerie tactile power you are aware of but try not to admit its grip. I like it
October 16th, 2024 04:14
A love letter to Palaiseau
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of attachment to a place now embedded in the heart. Use of beautiful descriptors color this poem and bring it to life. Well written and very identifiable for anyone that has lived in more than one placd. Heartfelt and warm it seems bitter sweet.
October 8th, 2024 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of attachment to a place now embedded in the heart. Use of beautiful descriptors color this poem and bring it to life. Well written and very identifiable for anyone that has lived in more than one placd. Heartfelt and warm it seems bitter sweet.
October 8th, 2024 16:01
I don\'t miss you anymore
Mase ♪ said:
Good write! It\'s sad, you still love them, you don\'t want them to go, but you just don\'t miss them...
October 7th, 2024 21:24
Mase ♪ said:
Good write! It\'s sad, you still love them, you don\'t want them to go, but you just don\'t miss them...
October 7th, 2024 21:24
It was once beautiful
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A beautiful, captivating
and touching write!! ✍️
Eye pleasing imagery
and to read a delight!! 😉
Best wishes poetess 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 4th, 2024 21:12
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A beautiful, captivating
and touching write!! ✍️
Eye pleasing imagery
and to read a delight!! 😉
Best wishes poetess 🤗 🌹 Thad
October 4th, 2024 21:12
My yellow, Franprix umbrella
sorenbarrett said:
A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in finding another love. A love is not to be kept selfishly in a closet but to be free.
September 24th, 2024 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in finding another love. A love is not to be kept selfishly in a closet but to be free.
September 24th, 2024 20:37
My yellow, Franprix umbrella
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. This subtly takes readers on a little journey to a dreamy world where we traipse along with the yellow umbrella. Delightfully rendered thus with good imagery, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 15:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. This subtly takes readers on a little journey to a dreamy world where we traipse along with the yellow umbrella. Delightfully rendered thus with good imagery, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 15:29
How is it goodbye?
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel at those times. We missed the very essence of the one we loved. We would ask ourselves the very same questions you\'ve asked. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:41
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel at those times. We missed the very essence of the one we loved. We would ask ourselves the very same questions you\'ve asked. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:41
Monsoon!
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most anthropomorphic poem with great rhyme and vivid images. I think I love most the reference of earth putting on the perfume of the rain. A most wonderful write.
August 13th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most anthropomorphic poem with great rhyme and vivid images. I think I love most the reference of earth putting on the perfume of the rain. A most wonderful write.
August 13th, 2024 06:03
S&M
peto said:
Edgy
Enjoyed the content rhythm and rhyme
Lady with a quill and cuffs
Lethal combination
June 7th, 2024 11:50
peto said:
Edgy
Enjoyed the content rhythm and rhyme
Lady with a quill and cuffs
Lethal combination
June 7th, 2024 11:50
Hidden Melancholy
peto said:
I don\'t think you are being melodramatic
These subjects need a voice
Thank you for lending yours
You got the rhyme you got the courage
Look forward to reading more
April 26th, 2024 07:01
peto said:
I don\'t think you are being melodramatic
These subjects need a voice
Thank you for lending yours
You got the rhyme you got the courage
Look forward to reading more
April 26th, 2024 07:01
Mirror, mirror on the wall
David Wakeling said:
A unique poem with a positive message at the end.Well done
April 12th, 2024 03:50
David Wakeling said:
A unique poem with a positive message at the end.Well done
April 12th, 2024 03:50
A Murderer’s Tale
2781 said:
I laboured for an Italian brick layer, years ago.
Killed both his wife and lover with one bullet.
Did 20 years.
Nicest fellow.
April 9th, 2024 07:46
2781 said:
I laboured for an Italian brick layer, years ago.
Killed both his wife and lover with one bullet.
Did 20 years.
Nicest fellow.
April 9th, 2024 07:46
