Comments received on poems by Ladywithaquill
If I Die First
sorenbarrett said:
A most passionate love poem that speaks of death and a bond up to it. Most lovely
November 29th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most passionate love poem that speaks of death and a bond up to it. Most lovely
November 29th, 2025 11:05
If I Die First
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around love, loss, and the deep emotional bond between two people. It expresses a poignant desire for one partner to outlive the other, highlighting the pain and sorrow associated with the thought of separation through death. The poet conveys a hope that their love will endure even beyond death.
November 29th, 2025 10:51
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around love, loss, and the deep emotional bond between two people. It expresses a poignant desire for one partner to outlive the other, highlighting the pain and sorrow associated with the thought of separation through death. The poet conveys a hope that their love will endure even beyond death.
November 29th, 2025 10:51
If I Die First
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write, enjoyed the read
November 29th, 2025 10:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very good write, enjoyed the read
November 29th, 2025 10:48
Kingmaker
FrasMac said:
A \"working class hero\" vibe here - which I like very much! Good going.
November 17th, 2025 14:34
FrasMac said:
A \"working class hero\" vibe here - which I like very much! Good going.
November 17th, 2025 14:34
Kingmaker
sorenbarrett said:
Whether relating to a marital relationship or a country with people it speaks to overthrowing unjust power. Well done
November 17th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
Whether relating to a marital relationship or a country with people it speaks to overthrowing unjust power. Well done
November 17th, 2025 14:10
Darkest Nights
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this poem so meaningful. Love doesn\'t die although it may change. Well written
September 29th, 2025 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this poem so meaningful. Love doesn\'t die although it may change. Well written
September 29th, 2025 17:43
Come to Me, My Love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tender caring plea for a return of a loved one, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 21:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tender caring plea for a return of a loved one, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 21:19
Come to Me, My Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for reunion so nicely worded in soft seduction. Lovely
July 30th, 2025 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for reunion so nicely worded in soft seduction. Lovely
July 30th, 2025 18:40
If I were a Man
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its advantages and disadvantages. Here the poet points out the advantages of being male. Nicely stated.
July 28th, 2025 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its advantages and disadvantages. Here the poet points out the advantages of being male. Nicely stated.
July 28th, 2025 18:58
If I were a Man
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Not how I\'d spell it out, but while I would never trade being myself and a girl, I\'ve long thought the men have it better. As I\'ve six loving younger brothers, they\'ve tried to put some sense into me when I\'ve said this, so...there you have it.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 17:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Not how I\'d spell it out, but while I would never trade being myself and a girl, I\'ve long thought the men have it better. As I\'ve six loving younger brothers, they\'ve tried to put some sense into me when I\'ve said this, so...there you have it.
Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 17:52
If I were a Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting list of behavioural constraints imposed upon some women via societal pressure.
Other women choose not to be constrained by them.
But I\'m a man, so what would I know?
Only fully aware of the societal pressures placed on me as a male.
Never the less, a satisfying piece of verse.
July 28th, 2025 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting list of behavioural constraints imposed upon some women via societal pressure.
Other women choose not to be constrained by them.
But I\'m a man, so what would I know?
Only fully aware of the societal pressures placed on me as a male.
Never the less, a satisfying piece of verse.
July 28th, 2025 17:44
I Love You Different
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of unconditional and unbreakable love for a sibling, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:12
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of unconditional and unbreakable love for a sibling, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 01:12
I Love You Different
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like a mother\'s love that is unconditional. This makes it clear that this love is strong and by the author\'s note a blood love. Nicely done.
July 21st, 2025 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds more like a mother\'s love that is unconditional. This makes it clear that this love is strong and by the author\'s note a blood love. Nicely done.
July 21st, 2025 17:02
It’s Aways Been This Way
Poetic Licence said:
Many examples given of the inequality of some woman today and the battles they are still having to fight to be allowed to be themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 08:02
Poetic Licence said:
Many examples given of the inequality of some woman today and the battles they are still having to fight to be allowed to be themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 08:02
It’s Aways Been This Way
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the resentment, the anger, the resolve at feelings of inequity in societal expectations. Rebellion is an answer but for rebellion there is a consequence that must be paid. One looking for justice will never find it. Good poem with a good deal of power the repeated examples give it that. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the resentment, the anger, the resolve at feelings of inequity in societal expectations. Rebellion is an answer but for rebellion there is a consequence that must be paid. One looking for justice will never find it. Good poem with a good deal of power the repeated examples give it that. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 04:45
If This Ever Ends
Poetic Licence said:
A hope that if someone ended their relationship they wouldn\'t be able to forget what they walked away from, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 00:12
Poetic Licence said:
A hope that if someone ended their relationship they wouldn\'t be able to forget what they walked away from, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 00:12
If This Ever Ends
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that talks to a hope that someone that walked away from the relationship will miss you. Well written
July 18th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that talks to a hope that someone that walked away from the relationship will miss you. Well written
July 18th, 2025 18:38
Fake Confidence
sorenbarrett said:
The masks we wear and how often we have to change them. It is tiering. A good read that is so identifiable. Nicely done
July 17th, 2025 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
The masks we wear and how often we have to change them. It is tiering. A good read that is so identifiable. Nicely done
July 17th, 2025 16:43
Forever, maybe?
sorenbarrett said:
The early concerns of a relationship set to rest with time. Very nice
July 16th, 2025 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
The early concerns of a relationship set to rest with time. Very nice
July 16th, 2025 15:19
Space and Grace
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that confesses the need for another and in good verse and meter. Nicely done
June 15th, 2025 20:19
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that confesses the need for another and in good verse and meter. Nicely done
June 15th, 2025 20:19
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