Comments received on poems by DeadRose
liar liar liar (haiku 10)
sorenbarrett said:
Generally true for most mothers. A good write
April 5th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Generally true for most mothers. A good write
April 5th, 2026 18:09
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Abdullah123 said:
i love this. I have never been able to write a haiku and I admire (and slightly envy😅) those who can... Great write
April 5th, 2026 10:08
Abdullah123 said:
i love this. I have never been able to write a haiku and I admire (and slightly envy😅) those who can... Great write
April 5th, 2026 10:08
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Doggerel Dave said:
Did Ego receive the telegram though...oh? They don\'t do telegrams anymore? The text message then?
April 1st, 2026 23:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Did Ego receive the telegram though...oh? They don\'t do telegrams anymore? The text message then?
April 1st, 2026 23:17
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write in discourse style
April 1st, 2026 17:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write in discourse style
April 1st, 2026 17:47
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Allie561 said:
What a wonderful write, grateful to have life.
April 1st, 2026 16:45
Allie561 said:
What a wonderful write, grateful to have life.
April 1st, 2026 16:45
big small victory, small big failures [haiku 8]
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don\'t bet on the poetry as a loss. Keep it up. I loved the cleverness of this Senryu how you stayed in the boundaries by excluding the marginal comments and the cynical last line reporting that you lost the poetry contest and adding one syllable too many to the last line it fit so well. Magnificent!! Keep it up a fave
March 25th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don\'t bet on the poetry as a loss. Keep it up. I loved the cleverness of this Senryu how you stayed in the boundaries by excluding the marginal comments and the cynical last line reporting that you lost the poetry contest and adding one syllable too many to the last line it fit so well. Magnificent!! Keep it up a fave
March 25th, 2026 07:20
THIS POEM IS NOT TRENDING
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting topic. For there to be a trend in song, poem, book or art it must be popular not good. This poem in its alliteration makes it pleasant to read its very form and length are intriguing and attractive. It may very well trend. I find that it is some of my very highest rated poems in poetic similarity and overall form are the least popular.
March 25th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting topic. For there to be a trend in song, poem, book or art it must be popular not good. This poem in its alliteration makes it pleasant to read its very form and length are intriguing and attractive. It may very well trend. I find that it is some of my very highest rated poems in poetic similarity and overall form are the least popular.
March 25th, 2026 03:14
You Have One (1) New Message [Haiku 7]
NafisaSB said:
all of us have to answer it one day when the knock comes...
March 24th, 2026 01:02
NafisaSB said:
all of us have to answer it one day when the knock comes...
March 24th, 2026 01:02
all she wanted was to dance.
Katie B. said:
Heartbreaking and genuine.
Well done, Katie
March 21st, 2026 15:47
Katie B. said:
Heartbreaking and genuine.
Well done, Katie
March 21st, 2026 15:47
all she wanted was to dance.
Doggerel Dave said:
If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your exploration to the present.
However you make a clear examination of the damage a family of origin can do with some telling lines.
March 21st, 2026 15:35
Doggerel Dave said:
If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your exploration to the present.
However you make a clear examination of the damage a family of origin can do with some telling lines.
March 21st, 2026 15:35
all she wanted was to dance.
sorenbarrett said:
This is sad in that what was needed was never attained. Well done
March 21st, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
This is sad in that what was needed was never attained. Well done
March 21st, 2026 14:45
You Have One (1) New Message [Haiku 7]
Allie561 said:
Now you’re left with the choice to open it…
March 20th, 2026 16:41
Allie561 said:
Now you’re left with the choice to open it…
March 20th, 2026 16:41
You Have One (1) New Message [Haiku 7]
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a frightening message. A shocker. Well said
March 20th, 2026 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a frightening message. A shocker. Well said
March 20th, 2026 14:00
the perfectionists academic procrastination (Haiku 6)
sorenbarrett said:
A message sent in these three lines in poetic form
March 17th, 2026 03:10
sorenbarrett said:
A message sent in these three lines in poetic form
March 17th, 2026 03:10
DANTE\'S IN-FOR-BORE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
DeadRose, I smiled when I read your note about terza rima. One thing worth remembering is that Dante was writing in Italian, and he actually invented that rhyme scheme. Translating it into English is notoriously tricky, so the rhyme scheme doesn’t come through as well.
And honestly…I’ve enjoyed writers like Dante more at this stage of my life, when I’m not being forced to read them in class. I can totally relate to that frustration. Been there for sure. I know I felt very differently about some classics once I encountered them on my own terms.
All the same, a wonderful and very relatable expression. “Dante in-for-Bore” made me laugh…hell indeed! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
DeadRose, I smiled when I read your note about terza rima. One thing worth remembering is that Dante was writing in Italian, and he actually invented that rhyme scheme. Translating it into English is notoriously tricky, so the rhyme scheme doesn’t come through as well.
And honestly…I’ve enjoyed writers like Dante more at this stage of my life, when I’m not being forced to read them in class. I can totally relate to that frustration. Been there for sure. I know I felt very differently about some classics once I encountered them on my own terms.
All the same, a wonderful and very relatable expression. “Dante in-for-Bore” made me laugh…hell indeed! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 10:01
DANTE\'S IN-FOR-BORE
sorenbarrett said:
Read Dante\'s Divine Comedy and was impressed with all the people put in heaven and hell and who was assigned where. Never the less I preferred Homer as to poetry but then I always thought that the Greeks were a little more open minded when it came to the gods. A good read
March 12th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Read Dante\'s Divine Comedy and was impressed with all the people put in heaven and hell and who was assigned where. Never the less I preferred Homer as to poetry but then I always thought that the Greeks were a little more open minded when it came to the gods. A good read
March 12th, 2026 07:24
The Pursuit of Knowledge [Terza Rima 1]
sorenbarrett said:
Words dissolve in air. In this poem I hear the narrator identifying with words and their ephemeral nature. A lovely write
March 11th, 2026 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
Words dissolve in air. In this poem I hear the narrator identifying with words and their ephemeral nature. A lovely write
March 11th, 2026 16:59
Never Clean [Haiku 4]
Doggerel Dave said:
Cleaning my hole feels like this (I\'ve decided I won\'t bother).
March 9th, 2026 04:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Cleaning my hole feels like this (I\'ve decided I won\'t bother).
March 9th, 2026 04:41
Never Clean [Haiku 4]
sorenbarrett said:
Greeks are like that. A fun read that puts a bit of a smile on the face on a Monday morning
March 9th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Greeks are like that. A fun read that puts a bit of a smile on the face on a Monday morning
March 9th, 2026 03:33
Oh the mind [haiku 4]
sorenbarrett said:
The mind can indeed be a prison. We are trapped by our limited senses, by our narrow field of perception and discriminations and our interpretations out of such. Prejudices emerge out of all these. We do indeed become prisoners of our mind
February 26th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
The mind can indeed be a prison. We are trapped by our limited senses, by our narrow field of perception and discriminations and our interpretations out of such. Prejudices emerge out of all these. We do indeed become prisoners of our mind
February 26th, 2026 04:27
Truth seeker [Haiku 3]
marissa said:
This sounds exactly like the beginning of a diary entry
February 22nd, 2026 13:40
marissa said:
This sounds exactly like the beginning of a diary entry
February 22nd, 2026 13:40
Truth seeker [Haiku 3]
sorenbarrett said:
The question is enticing because it is not known either by me or you or you would not ask it. Nicely done
February 22nd, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
The question is enticing because it is not known either by me or you or you would not ask it. Nicely done
February 22nd, 2026 13:25
Morning Twilight [Haiku attempt 2]
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so visual a fave
February 20th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so visual a fave
February 20th, 2026 07:24
Fasting for Thirty - first attempt at Haiku
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow there is a sensual nature to this senryu nicely written
February 19th, 2026 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow there is a sensual nature to this senryu nicely written
February 19th, 2026 18:47
Fasting for Thirty - first attempt at Haiku
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
ayeeeeeeeeeeeeee welcome to the H club
February 19th, 2026 18:13
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
ayeeeeeeeeeeeeee welcome to the H club
February 19th, 2026 18:13
WE THE PEOPLE OF THE ATOMIC NATION
Doggerel Dave said:
The absolute irony embodied in the line \'We the people of the free Nation\' Should not be lost on anybody having read your whole piece. Controlled anger I admire.
February 18th, 2026 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
The absolute irony embodied in the line \'We the people of the free Nation\' Should not be lost on anybody having read your whole piece. Controlled anger I admire.
February 18th, 2026 19:26
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