Comments received on poems by DeadRose
The Time Machine
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, choices and with choices there are few choices since all take you back to the same place. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:20
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, choices and with choices there are few choices since all take you back to the same place. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:20
Small things, bigger personality
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the accumulation of experiences, memories, and personal artifacts that shape a person\'s personality. The poet reflects on their life as a \"poorly constructed collage\" made up of small things that contribute to a larger self.
December 28th, 2025 08:31
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the accumulation of experiences, memories, and personal artifacts that shape a person\'s personality. The poet reflects on their life as a \"poorly constructed collage\" made up of small things that contribute to a larger self.
December 28th, 2025 08:31
Small things, bigger personality
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of wordplay and of what some call a mess and the author counts as personal items. This may be taken as a metaphor for personality itself some simple and some complex. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of wordplay and of what some call a mess and the author counts as personal items. This may be taken as a metaphor for personality itself some simple and some complex. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 13:39
Message in a Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
We are all alone in this world, even when we are with some one we are alone. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
We are all alone in this world, even when we are with some one we are alone. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2025 20:03
Fish in the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words and good advice in this short poem. Loved it. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words and good advice in this short poem. Loved it. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:30
Celestial Glue
sorenbarrett said:
Great story with a great message. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
Great story with a great message. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 19:37
a nobody
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this poem. Sad but a good write
December 17th, 2025 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this poem. Sad but a good write
December 17th, 2025 20:54
Coffee Chemist [The Coffee Machine - 2]
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and intriguing it tells its story in a most unconventional manner. A lovely piece
November 19th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and intriguing it tells its story in a most unconventional manner. A lovely piece
November 19th, 2025 18:15
Excerpts from \"The Coffee Machine\"
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and blind to all that there is to enjoy. Nicely expressed
November 19th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and blind to all that there is to enjoy. Nicely expressed
November 19th, 2025 03:32
just let me write poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of others and self. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of others and self. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 11:22
scrap crap poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Still trying to piece it together. A fun read
November 9th, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Still trying to piece it together. A fun read
November 9th, 2025 20:45
FEVERED
sorenbarrett said:
The infection of wonder I wish never to cure or I might die of boredom and lack of air. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
The infection of wonder I wish never to cure or I might die of boredom and lack of air. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 09:35
deadrose; paradox. [She likes the way that the contradictory tastes]
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of indecision in this poem. It is filled with metaphor that allows for interpretation. If a firm answer can not be given it is not known. A good write
October 28th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of indecision in this poem. It is filled with metaphor that allows for interpretation. If a firm answer can not be given it is not known. A good write
October 28th, 2025 03:52
The Sun -The Stranger
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the sun, one minute you were there, and now you\'ve gone.
Why did you leave me for such a cold front.
October 19th, 2025 15:22
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the sun, one minute you were there, and now you\'ve gone.
Why did you leave me for such a cold front.
October 19th, 2025 15:22
The Sun -The Stranger
sorenbarrett said:
Sun the spectator that does not interfere but watches shedding its warm rays on both victor and vanquished. Lovely
October 19th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sun the spectator that does not interfere but watches shedding its warm rays on both victor and vanquished. Lovely
October 19th, 2025 10:29
space - time
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting musing where caught in thought as a cliche is taken to be literal in the last line. A great read
October 19th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting musing where caught in thought as a cliche is taken to be literal in the last line. A great read
October 19th, 2025 03:44
Cricket - The \"GENTLEMAN\'s\" sport
sorenbarrett said:
They call that playing out of your league. Unless a superstar most people are better off playing with their own age group. Brave though I have to admit. If it don\'t kill ya it\'ll make ya stronger. Good poem
October 14th, 2025 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
They call that playing out of your league. Unless a superstar most people are better off playing with their own age group. Brave though I have to admit. If it don\'t kill ya it\'ll make ya stronger. Good poem
October 14th, 2025 13:26
MISSING PERSON\'S REPORT: DETECTIVE DEADROSE
Paul Bell said:
You just know in this poem, Inspector Grey is grey in person and persona.
Now, detective DeadRose has panache, but more importantly, a motorcycle helmet, and a cerificate in crime solving.
Will Inspector Grey get his badge back, could he solve the murder if the murderer was committing the murder in front of him.
Does Inspector Grey actually like Deadrose more than he\'s saying. These are the questions we must know.
October 5th, 2025 05:54
Paul Bell said:
You just know in this poem, Inspector Grey is grey in person and persona.
Now, detective DeadRose has panache, but more importantly, a motorcycle helmet, and a cerificate in crime solving.
Will Inspector Grey get his badge back, could he solve the murder if the murderer was committing the murder in front of him.
Does Inspector Grey actually like Deadrose more than he\'s saying. These are the questions we must know.
October 5th, 2025 05:54
MISSING PERSON\'S REPORT: DETECTIVE DEADROSE
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely keep honing your skills in this genre. Keep at it.
October 4th, 2025 18:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely keep honing your skills in this genre. Keep at it.
October 4th, 2025 18:32
MISSING PERSON\'S REPORT: DETECTIVE DEADROSE
sorenbarrett said:
The way that this story appears in flashes is creative. Nicely done to keep the story flowing
October 4th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
The way that this story appears in flashes is creative. Nicely done to keep the story flowing
October 4th, 2025 15:31
F.R.A.U.D.
Paul Bell said:
Always set your sights on minus, that way you can only rise.
In saying that, if people think you\'re brill, you must embellish that brilliance and even encourage the odd stipend.
September 30th, 2025 13:01
Paul Bell said:
Always set your sights on minus, that way you can only rise.
In saying that, if people think you\'re brill, you must embellish that brilliance and even encourage the odd stipend.
September 30th, 2025 13:01
Mama (quick poems in a sketchbook, 1)
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation of importance made in this tribute of a poem to a mother. Very nicely written it is authentic and real. Well done
September 30th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A proclamation of importance made in this tribute of a poem to a mother. Very nicely written it is authentic and real. Well done
September 30th, 2025 04:31
her hiccups sound like falling raindrops...
Katie B. said:
This is just a lovely piece of brevity. Well done!!
September 21st, 2025 17:29
Katie B. said:
This is just a lovely piece of brevity. Well done!!
September 21st, 2025 17:29
her hiccups sound like falling raindrops...
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is an association that has never occurred to me. A most interesting poem that indeed does give the feel of a storm. Lovely
September 21st, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is an association that has never occurred to me. A most interesting poem that indeed does give the feel of a storm. Lovely
September 21st, 2025 17:04
[SYNTAX_ERR0R]
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative and poignant in the age we live in. A wonderful and artistic write
August 19th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative and poignant in the age we live in. A wonderful and artistic write
August 19th, 2025 09:27
F.R.A.U.D.
Poetic Licence said:
An unusual write of putting oneself down because of the standards they set themselves, very well written
August 18th, 2025 15:22
Poetic Licence said:
An unusual write of putting oneself down because of the standards they set themselves, very well written
August 18th, 2025 15:22
F.R.A.U.D.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of self criticism so common among those that have high standards. A demeaning write of what one is. Well written
August 18th, 2025 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of self criticism so common among those that have high standards. A demeaning write of what one is. Well written
August 18th, 2025 15:13
Roses in Late Summer, Year 2
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing reflection on days long gone by, memories that still last and some may need pruning, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of longing reflection on days long gone by, memories that still last and some may need pruning, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:47
Roses in Late Summer, Year 2
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought back to mind days of pressed flowers. Of dried flowers from a wedding bouquet. The imagery was wonderful and the metaphor did not go unnoticed. Nicely done
August 14th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought back to mind days of pressed flowers. Of dried flowers from a wedding bouquet. The imagery was wonderful and the metaphor did not go unnoticed. Nicely done
August 14th, 2025 12:10
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