Comments received on poems by DeadRose
Truth seeker [Haiku 3]
marissa said:
This sounds exactly like the beginning of a diary entry
February 22nd, 2026 13:40
marissa said:
This sounds exactly like the beginning of a diary entry
February 22nd, 2026 13:40
Truth seeker [Haiku 3]
sorenbarrett said:
The question is enticing because it is not known either by me or you or you would not ask it. Nicely done
February 22nd, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
The question is enticing because it is not known either by me or you or you would not ask it. Nicely done
February 22nd, 2026 13:25
Morning Twilight [Haiku attempt 2]
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so visual a fave
February 20th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so visual a fave
February 20th, 2026 07:24
Fasting for Thirty - first attempt at Haiku
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow there is a sensual nature to this senryu nicely written
February 19th, 2026 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow there is a sensual nature to this senryu nicely written
February 19th, 2026 18:47
Fasting for Thirty - first attempt at Haiku
Demar Desu said:
ayeeeeeeeeeeeeee welcome to the H club
February 19th, 2026 18:13
Demar Desu said:
ayeeeeeeeeeeeeee welcome to the H club
February 19th, 2026 18:13
WE THE PEOPLE OF THE ATOMIC NATION
Doggerel Dave said:
The absolute irony embodied in the line \'We the people of the free Nation\' Should not be lost on anybody having read your whole piece. Controlled anger I admire.
February 18th, 2026 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
The absolute irony embodied in the line \'We the people of the free Nation\' Should not be lost on anybody having read your whole piece. Controlled anger I admire.
February 18th, 2026 19:26
WE THE PEOPLE OF THE ATOMIC NATION
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of an old song of the Moody Blues \"Creation\" although the words are far different the meter mimics it. It is creative and most heart felt in these times of turmoil and social upset. Lovely a fave
February 18th, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of an old song of the Moody Blues \"Creation\" although the words are far different the meter mimics it. It is creative and most heart felt in these times of turmoil and social upset. Lovely a fave
February 18th, 2026 11:57
A Teen Eighteen - Can you spare your sparse Time?
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the significance of time and meaningful connections over materialistic gifts, particularly in the context of a milestone birthday. It reflects a yearning for genuine relationships and memorable experiences rather than superficial celebrations.
February 12th, 2026 08:34
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the significance of time and meaningful connections over materialistic gifts, particularly in the context of a milestone birthday. It reflects a yearning for genuine relationships and memorable experiences rather than superficial celebrations.
February 12th, 2026 08:34
A Teen Eighteen - Can you spare your sparse Time?
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea presented in this poem that gifts are in a way a ransom paid an obligation met so others can get on with their life and forget about others. A piece with heart and a strong message
February 12th, 2026 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea presented in this poem that gifts are in a way a ransom paid an obligation met so others can get on with their life and forget about others. A piece with heart and a strong message
February 12th, 2026 08:25
Tomorrow: The Poet\'s Word Circus
sorenbarrett said:
As poets we all have our hope to be recognized and have our work read so I\'ll wish you luck and hope you do well. A good write
February 1st, 2026 20:29
sorenbarrett said:
As poets we all have our hope to be recognized and have our work read so I\'ll wish you luck and hope you do well. A good write
February 1st, 2026 20:29
yesterday\'s dreams/today\'s steps/tomorrow\'s successes
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem is a story of self-motivation, of not falling into gloom or despair, to keep on fighting, for life itself is a battle.
You are time travelling. Just as some of us here. We travel across time, across continents, across worlds…. No wonder then that we are often misunderstood… But it is sufficient that we understand ourselves….
January 18th, 2026 00:12
Soman Ragavan said:
The poem is a story of self-motivation, of not falling into gloom or despair, to keep on fighting, for life itself is a battle.
You are time travelling. Just as some of us here. We travel across time, across continents, across worlds…. No wonder then that we are often misunderstood… But it is sufficient that we understand ourselves….
January 18th, 2026 00:12
yesterday\'s dreams/today\'s steps/tomorrow\'s successes
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem making the point that tomorrow never comes. A lovely write
January 17th, 2026 17:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem making the point that tomorrow never comes. A lovely write
January 17th, 2026 17:21
The Time Machine
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, choices and with choices there are few choices since all take you back to the same place. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:20
sorenbarrett said:
Choices, choices and with choices there are few choices since all take you back to the same place. A good write
January 5th, 2026 21:20
Small things, bigger personality
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the accumulation of experiences, memories, and personal artifacts that shape a person\'s personality. The poet reflects on their life as a \"poorly constructed collage\" made up of small things that contribute to a larger self.
December 28th, 2025 08:31
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the accumulation of experiences, memories, and personal artifacts that shape a person\'s personality. The poet reflects on their life as a \"poorly constructed collage\" made up of small things that contribute to a larger self.
December 28th, 2025 08:31
Small things, bigger personality
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of wordplay and of what some call a mess and the author counts as personal items. This may be taken as a metaphor for personality itself some simple and some complex. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of wordplay and of what some call a mess and the author counts as personal items. This may be taken as a metaphor for personality itself some simple and some complex. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 13:39
Message in a Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
We are all alone in this world, even when we are with some one we are alone. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
We are all alone in this world, even when we are with some one we are alone. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2025 20:03
Fish in the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words and good advice in this short poem. Loved it. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words and good advice in this short poem. Loved it. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:30
Celestial Glue
sorenbarrett said:
Great story with a great message. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
Great story with a great message. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 19:37
a nobody
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this poem. Sad but a good write
December 17th, 2025 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this poem. Sad but a good write
December 17th, 2025 20:54
Coffee Chemist [The Coffee Machine - 2]
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and intriguing it tells its story in a most unconventional manner. A lovely piece
November 19th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and intriguing it tells its story in a most unconventional manner. A lovely piece
November 19th, 2025 18:15
Excerpts from \"The Coffee Machine\"
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and blind to all that there is to enjoy. Nicely expressed
November 19th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and blind to all that there is to enjoy. Nicely expressed
November 19th, 2025 03:32
just let me write poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of others and self. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of others and self. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 11:22
scrap crap poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Still trying to piece it together. A fun read
November 9th, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Still trying to piece it together. A fun read
November 9th, 2025 20:45
FEVERED
sorenbarrett said:
The infection of wonder I wish never to cure or I might die of boredom and lack of air. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
The infection of wonder I wish never to cure or I might die of boredom and lack of air. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 09:35
deadrose; paradox. [She likes the way that the contradictory tastes]
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of indecision in this poem. It is filled with metaphor that allows for interpretation. If a firm answer can not be given it is not known. A good write
October 28th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of indecision in this poem. It is filled with metaphor that allows for interpretation. If a firm answer can not be given it is not known. A good write
October 28th, 2025 03:52
The Sun -The Stranger
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the sun, one minute you were there, and now you\'ve gone.
Why did you leave me for such a cold front.
October 19th, 2025 15:22
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the sun, one minute you were there, and now you\'ve gone.
Why did you leave me for such a cold front.
October 19th, 2025 15:22
The Sun -The Stranger
sorenbarrett said:
Sun the spectator that does not interfere but watches shedding its warm rays on both victor and vanquished. Lovely
October 19th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sun the spectator that does not interfere but watches shedding its warm rays on both victor and vanquished. Lovely
October 19th, 2025 10:29
space - time
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting musing where caught in thought as a cliche is taken to be literal in the last line. A great read
October 19th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting musing where caught in thought as a cliche is taken to be literal in the last line. A great read
October 19th, 2025 03:44
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