Comments received on poems by DeadRose
Everydaydreamer (Fibonacci poetry - 3.5)
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of perception, reality, and the nature of dreams. It reflects on the struggle between being present in the moment and being lost in thoughts or daydreams.
May 1st, 2026 05:45
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of perception, reality, and the nature of dreams. It reflects on the struggle between being present in the moment and being lost in thoughts or daydreams.
May 1st, 2026 05:45
Everydaydreamer (Fibonacci poetry - 3.5)
sorenbarrett said:
A mathematical increase in progressive fashion of the syllables in the poem. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
A mathematical increase in progressive fashion of the syllables in the poem. Well done
May 1st, 2026 03:26
waiting room. tap. tap. tap. (Fibonacci Poetry - 3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great example of a Fibonacci sequence. Having written them myself, they are harder than they may look to the casual reader. Well done on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A great example of a Fibonacci sequence. Having written them myself, they are harder than they may look to the casual reader. Well done on this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:19
waiting room. tap. tap. tap. (Fibonacci Poetry - 3)
Friendship said:
lovely written,my friend🌹
April 29th, 2026 07:30
Friendship said:
lovely written,my friend🌹
April 29th, 2026 07:30
waiting room. tap. tap. tap. (Fibonacci Poetry - 3)
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting the worst part of anything. Well written
April 28th, 2026 20:34
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting the worst part of anything. Well written
April 28th, 2026 20:34
simple [Fibonacci poetry - 2]
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting structure that speaks paradoxically of entropy that diminishes as the poem builds
April 21st, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting structure that speaks paradoxically of entropy that diminishes as the poem builds
April 21st, 2026 20:12
take care
sorenbarrett said:
A most curious poem that has a most interesting rhyme scheme and flow to it. It sends its message well and is a fave
April 21st, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most curious poem that has a most interesting rhyme scheme and flow to it. It sends its message well and is a fave
April 21st, 2026 04:33
Types of rhyme (a study of poetry - 1)
Doggerel Dave said:
As rhymer of the more simple fortuitous kind, I found your lesson interesting informative and intimidating. I am however very grateful for your guidance...I think.
April 13th, 2026 22:40
Doggerel Dave said:
As rhymer of the more simple fortuitous kind, I found your lesson interesting informative and intimidating. I am however very grateful for your guidance...I think.
April 13th, 2026 22:40
Types of rhyme (a study of poetry - 1)
sorenbarrett said:
Definition of poetry, well said
April 13th, 2026 22:14
sorenbarrett said:
Definition of poetry, well said
April 13th, 2026 22:14
Syllable Sequence (first attempt at Fibonacci poetry)
orchidee said:
Good write Rose. A Fusioned Fibonacci poem could be fiendishly difficult!
April 13th, 2026 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write Rose. A Fusioned Fibonacci poem could be fiendishly difficult!
April 13th, 2026 03:10
Syllable Sequence (first attempt at Fibonacci poetry)
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been interested in math lately
April 12th, 2026 15:28
Demar Desu said:
I’ve been interested in math lately
April 12th, 2026 15:28
Syllable Sequence (first attempt at Fibonacci poetry)
Allie561 said:
This is wonderful! I love it when people try new techniques.
April 12th, 2026 13:32
Allie561 said:
This is wonderful! I love it when people try new techniques.
April 12th, 2026 13:32
Syllable Sequence (first attempt at Fibonacci poetry)
sorenbarrett said:
This is most interesting and introduces a new approach of a mathematical nature
April 12th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is most interesting and introduces a new approach of a mathematical nature
April 12th, 2026 12:00
nothing to do, everything to be done
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that echoes the ambitions of many but the accomplishments of few due to lack of devotion and effort. We all have grown lazy with technology and easy lives. Nicely written
April 12th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that echoes the ambitions of many but the accomplishments of few due to lack of devotion and effort. We all have grown lazy with technology and easy lives. Nicely written
April 12th, 2026 05:31
nothing to do, everything to be done
Priya Tomar said:
Good write about ambitions .
April 12th, 2026 01:14
Priya Tomar said:
Good write about ambitions .
April 12th, 2026 01:14
nothing to do, everything to be done
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling that today it, for many people, is much harder to achieve any of those ambitions than it was say fifty years ago. But don\'t let that discourage you..... onward!
April 11th, 2026 22:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling that today it, for many people, is much harder to achieve any of those ambitions than it was say fifty years ago. But don\'t let that discourage you..... onward!
April 11th, 2026 22:46
liar liar liar (haiku 10)
Doggerel Dave said:
At a point there has to be a separation of offspring from their parents. For some successful individuation remains unresolved.
April 6th, 2026 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
At a point there has to be a separation of offspring from their parents. For some successful individuation remains unresolved.
April 6th, 2026 06:35
liar liar liar (haiku 10)
sorenbarrett said:
Generally true for most mothers. A good write
April 5th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Generally true for most mothers. A good write
April 5th, 2026 18:09
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Abdullah123 said:
i love this. I have never been able to write a haiku and I admire (and slightly envy😅) those who can... Great write
April 5th, 2026 10:08
Abdullah123 said:
i love this. I have never been able to write a haiku and I admire (and slightly envy😅) those who can... Great write
April 5th, 2026 10:08
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Doggerel Dave said:
Did Ego receive the telegram though...oh? They don\'t do telegrams anymore? The text message then?
April 1st, 2026 23:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Did Ego receive the telegram though...oh? They don\'t do telegrams anymore? The text message then?
April 1st, 2026 23:17
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write in discourse style
April 1st, 2026 17:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write in discourse style
April 1st, 2026 17:47
Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]
Allie561 said:
What a wonderful write, grateful to have life.
April 1st, 2026 16:45
Allie561 said:
What a wonderful write, grateful to have life.
April 1st, 2026 16:45
big small victory, small big failures [haiku 8]
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don\'t bet on the poetry as a loss. Keep it up. I loved the cleverness of this Senryu how you stayed in the boundaries by excluding the marginal comments and the cynical last line reporting that you lost the poetry contest and adding one syllable too many to the last line it fit so well. Magnificent!! Keep it up a fave
March 25th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don\'t bet on the poetry as a loss. Keep it up. I loved the cleverness of this Senryu how you stayed in the boundaries by excluding the marginal comments and the cynical last line reporting that you lost the poetry contest and adding one syllable too many to the last line it fit so well. Magnificent!! Keep it up a fave
March 25th, 2026 07:20
THIS POEM IS NOT TRENDING
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting topic. For there to be a trend in song, poem, book or art it must be popular not good. This poem in its alliteration makes it pleasant to read its very form and length are intriguing and attractive. It may very well trend. I find that it is some of my very highest rated poems in poetic similarity and overall form are the least popular.
March 25th, 2026 03:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting topic. For there to be a trend in song, poem, book or art it must be popular not good. This poem in its alliteration makes it pleasant to read its very form and length are intriguing and attractive. It may very well trend. I find that it is some of my very highest rated poems in poetic similarity and overall form are the least popular.
March 25th, 2026 03:14
You Have One (1) New Message [Haiku 7]
NafisaSB said:
all of us have to answer it one day when the knock comes...
March 24th, 2026 01:02
NafisaSB said:
all of us have to answer it one day when the knock comes...
March 24th, 2026 01:02
all she wanted was to dance.
Katie B. said:
Heartbreaking and genuine.
Well done, Katie
March 21st, 2026 15:47
Katie B. said:
Heartbreaking and genuine.
Well done, Katie
March 21st, 2026 15:47
all she wanted was to dance.
Doggerel Dave said:
If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your exploration to the present.
However you make a clear examination of the damage a family of origin can do with some telling lines.
March 21st, 2026 15:35
Doggerel Dave said:
If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your exploration to the present.
However you make a clear examination of the damage a family of origin can do with some telling lines.
March 21st, 2026 15:35
all she wanted was to dance.
sorenbarrett said:
This is sad in that what was needed was never attained. Well done
March 21st, 2026 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
This is sad in that what was needed was never attained. Well done
March 21st, 2026 14:45
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