Comments received on poems by rengoku
Winter
Cassie58 said:
Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.
December 13th, 2024 18:32
Cassie58 said:
Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.
December 13th, 2024 18:32
Princess Of The Night
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensitive view of the heavens put in beautiful words of poetry. Lovely
December 13th, 2024 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensitive view of the heavens put in beautiful words of poetry. Lovely
December 13th, 2024 03:30
wind woman
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new analogy. I picture an old woman in the wind. So nicely done this is a work of art
December 13th, 2024 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new analogy. I picture an old woman in the wind. So nicely done this is a work of art
December 13th, 2024 03:22
Winter
TobaniNataiella said:
All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.
December 13th, 2024 03:20
TobaniNataiella said:
All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.
December 13th, 2024 03:20
Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.
December 13th, 2024 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.
December 13th, 2024 03:15
Winter
rin said:
Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I\'m guessing, but it\'s actually a day of prayer.
December 13th, 2024 01:58
rin said:
Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I\'m guessing, but it\'s actually a day of prayer.
December 13th, 2024 01:58
wind woman
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and I heard that rattling and whistling. Nicely composed poem.
December 12th, 2024 13:11
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and I heard that rattling and whistling. Nicely composed poem.
December 12th, 2024 13:11
wind woman
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written, paints those pictures in your head, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:55
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written, paints those pictures in your head, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:55
wind woman
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa. This is richly deep. Gorgeous with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s so beautifully rendered. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
December 12th, 2024 01:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa. This is richly deep. Gorgeous with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s so beautifully rendered. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
December 12th, 2024 01:56
Princess Of The Night
rin said:
turquoise clouds is beautiful and cool. I thought it might represent the princess\'s state of mind.
December 12th, 2024 01:06
rin said:
turquoise clouds is beautiful and cool. I thought it might represent the princess\'s state of mind.
December 12th, 2024 01:06
the small story
Demar Desu said:
Ha! If it’s one thing I know is that you have you! Focus on that, build yourself, grow with knowledge and understanding and eventually you’ll be surrounded by those who will help you grow as well
November 19th, 2024 01:57
Demar Desu said:
Ha! If it’s one thing I know is that you have you! Focus on that, build yourself, grow with knowledge and understanding and eventually you’ll be surrounded by those who will help you grow as well
November 19th, 2024 01:57
I’m alone now
Kezexxe said:
Whos your 1 friend? Whoever it is loves you dearly K?
October 12th, 2024 15:48
Kezexxe said:
Whos your 1 friend? Whoever it is loves you dearly K?
October 12th, 2024 15:48
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