Comments received on poems by rengoku
for my grandma
Dan Williams said:
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04
for my grandma
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely, evocative and charming. Excellent imagery and word usage. You\'re still young, however, when I was your age I was just as hopeful, dreaming so much of a grand day when I could imagine a book of my collected poetical endeavors published, that I collated a book of them with what resources I could find. They were much simpler than what you see me posting here.
Read the poetry you most admire and you\'ll begin to learn how to follow in that vein.
This beauty is delicate and sweet, loaded to taste and winsome.
Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2024 16:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely, evocative and charming. Excellent imagery and word usage. You\'re still young, however, when I was your age I was just as hopeful, dreaming so much of a grand day when I could imagine a book of my collected poetical endeavors published, that I collated a book of them with what resources I could find. They were much simpler than what you see me posting here.
Read the poetry you most admire and you\'ll begin to learn how to follow in that vein.
This beauty is delicate and sweet, loaded to taste and winsome.
Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2024 16:20
for my grandma
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
August 20th, 2024 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
August 20th, 2024 15:34
Memories
Doggerel Dave said:
They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the years....
Like it.
August 20th, 2024 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the years....
Like it.
August 20th, 2024 02:07
Memories
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely poem Z. You\'ve just summed up living.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely poem Z. You\'ve just summed up living.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
Memories
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
There are some memories I hope I\'ll never forget! Makes me smile. Beautiful write Zelda. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 22:28
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
There are some memories I hope I\'ll never forget! Makes me smile. Beautiful write Zelda. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 22:28
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
So true Zelda memories are what much of life is made of. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true Zelda memories are what much of life is made of. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 17:55
friends
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some will go to bat for you and that speaks something special about the both of you. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some will go to bat for you and that speaks something special about the both of you. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 05:34
friends
Lorenz said:
You have the foundations of a talent to develope over the years !
August 19th, 2024 00:39
Lorenz said:
You have the foundations of a talent to develope over the years !
August 19th, 2024 00:39
friends
jarcher54 said:
May you always have someone with you, but it\'s clear you could do this alone! I adore the spirit, the excitement reaching a frenzy of taking off together to battle those nasty windmills!
August 18th, 2024 21:19
jarcher54 said:
May you always have someone with you, but it\'s clear you could do this alone! I adore the spirit, the excitement reaching a frenzy of taking off together to battle those nasty windmills!
August 18th, 2024 21:19
knight
sorenbarrett said:
There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply to emotions in reality. We all need a knight in white armor a \"knight of the wind\" Thank you for sharing
August 18th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply to emotions in reality. We all need a knight in white armor a \"knight of the wind\" Thank you for sharing
August 18th, 2024 05:08
free
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Amazing write, Zelda, it\'s super catchy! Don\'t listen to this jealous hater Dave. :) I Liked the poem
August 15th, 2024 12:16
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Amazing write, Zelda, it\'s super catchy! Don\'t listen to this jealous hater Dave. :) I Liked the poem
August 15th, 2024 12:16
free
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - You once gave me a like (along with many others if I read the user activity list correctly)
What, and especially why?
So little girl, go back to playing video games and return when you can provide content.
Then, If I\'m still around (which I doubt) I will engage if I feel your write is worthwhile.
August 15th, 2024 07:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - You once gave me a like (along with many others if I read the user activity list correctly)
What, and especially why?
So little girl, go back to playing video games and return when you can provide content.
Then, If I\'m still around (which I doubt) I will engage if I feel your write is worthwhile.
August 15th, 2024 07:11
free
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the stare. Got your eye on me what are you watching for? Fun read
August 15th, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the stare. Got your eye on me what are you watching for? Fun read
August 15th, 2024 04:46
free
Maplespal said:
put your feet on the ground and i will like it.
nice little write.
August 15th, 2024 03:51
Maplespal said:
put your feet on the ground and i will like it.
nice little write.
August 15th, 2024 03:51
pain
Dan Williams said:
So complaining of chronic pain to my Doctor got me the advice of going to a pain specialist. I did not, thinking I was already one. Good work.
August 15th, 2024 00:14
Dan Williams said:
So complaining of chronic pain to my Doctor got me the advice of going to a pain specialist. I did not, thinking I was already one. Good work.
August 15th, 2024 00:14
pain
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Pains in my mind. Okay, so I\'m hallucinating when I see blood?
Lol, good write, Zelda. :)
August 13th, 2024 13:57
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Pains in my mind. Okay, so I\'m hallucinating when I see blood?
Lol, good write, Zelda. :)
August 13th, 2024 13:57
pain
Thoughtless said:
According to neuroscientists, our brains recreate what we hear, feel, say, touch, and taste. Perhaps we create our own realities which are part of the ultimate reality. Nice write.
August 13th, 2024 13:53
Thoughtless said:
According to neuroscientists, our brains recreate what we hear, feel, say, touch, and taste. Perhaps we create our own realities which are part of the ultimate reality. Nice write.
August 13th, 2024 13:53
pain
sorenbarrett said:
A true and most wonderful message. Great lines my favorite is the last
\"for death is the begging of life!\" Very nicely said
August 13th, 2024 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
A true and most wonderful message. Great lines my favorite is the last
\"for death is the begging of life!\" Very nicely said
August 13th, 2024 13:49
america
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever write. It starts out with well written lines that lead the reader in one direction while the last stanza points to another. So nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A very clever write. It starts out with well written lines that lead the reader in one direction while the last stanza points to another. So nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 05:47
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