Comments received on poems by rengoku
childs song
Cassie58 said:
That’s how we learn from others. Nicely penned and positive.
December 18th, 2024 11:44
Cassie58 said:
That’s how we learn from others. Nicely penned and positive.
December 18th, 2024 11:44
the matter of missing
TobaniNataiella said:
A heartfelt call to a close friend, nicely written
December 17th, 2024 00:35
TobaniNataiella said:
A heartfelt call to a close friend, nicely written
December 17th, 2024 00:35
childs song
TobaniNataiella said:
We can always learn from each other, enjoyable read, thank you
December 17th, 2024 00:32
TobaniNataiella said:
We can always learn from each other, enjoyable read, thank you
December 17th, 2024 00:32
son of the sun
arqios said:
Oh so many come to mind, Apollo, Ra or Helios, perhaps... LInk (Zelda), Dante (Devil May Cry), or Riku (Kingdom Heart)... love the ambiguity!
December 15th, 2024 20:34
arqios said:
Oh so many come to mind, Apollo, Ra or Helios, perhaps... LInk (Zelda), Dante (Devil May Cry), or Riku (Kingdom Heart)... love the ambiguity!
December 15th, 2024 20:34
Winter
Cassie58 said:
Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.
December 13th, 2024 18:32
Cassie58 said:
Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.
December 13th, 2024 18:32
Princess Of The Night
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensitive view of the heavens put in beautiful words of poetry. Lovely
December 13th, 2024 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensitive view of the heavens put in beautiful words of poetry. Lovely
December 13th, 2024 03:30
wind woman
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new analogy. I picture an old woman in the wind. So nicely done this is a work of art
December 13th, 2024 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new analogy. I picture an old woman in the wind. So nicely done this is a work of art
December 13th, 2024 03:22
Winter
TobaniNataiella said:
All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.
December 13th, 2024 03:20
TobaniNataiella said:
All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.
December 13th, 2024 03:20
Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.
December 13th, 2024 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.
December 13th, 2024 03:15
Winter
rin said:
Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I\'m guessing, but it\'s actually a day of prayer.
December 13th, 2024 01:58
rin said:
Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I\'m guessing, but it\'s actually a day of prayer.
December 13th, 2024 01:58
wind woman
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and I heard that rattling and whistling. Nicely composed poem.
December 12th, 2024 13:11
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and I heard that rattling and whistling. Nicely composed poem.
December 12th, 2024 13:11
wind woman
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written, paints those pictures in your head, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:55
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written, paints those pictures in your head, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:55
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