Comments received on poems by rengoku
why
Neville said:
I can see that you have a real talent for this poetry thing we all have such a liking for .. I seriously hope you keep it up and am glad I passed by this way today ..
All Good Things, Neville
August 22nd, 2024 13:07
Neville said:
I can see that you have a real talent for this poetry thing we all have such a liking for .. I seriously hope you keep it up and am glad I passed by this way today ..
All Good Things, Neville
August 22nd, 2024 13:07
what if i die ?????
falcon_mn said:
This is eternal fear of a human!
To die is what is given by God to every Gods creature.
So it is important to live.
To live in full capacity to live and take care of our life\'s and the time which is given to us.
Our task is to make something of our life\'s To live to create to help to love to believe to work to be useful.
To use the time we are given !
August 22nd, 2024 12:39
falcon_mn said:
This is eternal fear of a human!
To die is what is given by God to every Gods creature.
So it is important to live.
To live in full capacity to live and take care of our life\'s and the time which is given to us.
Our task is to make something of our life\'s To live to create to help to love to believe to work to be useful.
To use the time we are given !
August 22nd, 2024 12:39
why
falcon_mn said:
Hi Zelda
Great you write poetry!
At age of 13 it is amazing.
I started writing poetry when I was 19
Newer give up!
Keep on writing.
It is also very important to read poetry.
Reading poetry gives you new ideas.
You will learn new words new ideas how to express your thoughts.
Keep on writing!
August 22nd, 2024 12:33
falcon_mn said:
Hi Zelda
Great you write poetry!
At age of 13 it is amazing.
I started writing poetry when I was 19
Newer give up!
Keep on writing.
It is also very important to read poetry.
Reading poetry gives you new ideas.
You will learn new words new ideas how to express your thoughts.
Keep on writing!
August 22nd, 2024 12:33
what if i die ?????
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s funny - when I was quite young , I used to worry about death a lot.
Now I\'m 82, kicking 83, it doesn\'t worry me at all....whatever will be will.....
August 22nd, 2024 08:34
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s funny - when I was quite young , I used to worry about death a lot.
Now I\'m 82, kicking 83, it doesn\'t worry me at all....whatever will be will.....
August 22nd, 2024 08:34
what if i die ?????
Maplespal said:
The only way to bring them with you is to focus on them as you die.
Hopefully a memory of them arrives with you in the next life and is a source of inspiration throughout it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:21
Maplespal said:
The only way to bring them with you is to focus on them as you die.
Hopefully a memory of them arrives with you in the next life and is a source of inspiration throughout it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:21
what if i die ?????
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that anyone in a relationship has. Nicely expressed leaving it to the reader to answer. I like this approach because every one has their own answer
August 22nd, 2024 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that anyone in a relationship has. Nicely expressed leaving it to the reader to answer. I like this approach because every one has their own answer
August 22nd, 2024 04:23
what if i die ?????
Thoughtless said:
Unfortunately, even when someone is with you, from my experience, dying is a lonely experience. Mostly for those who keep watch. I know this from watching friends and family who have died. The sadness is palpable.
August 21st, 2024 22:24
Thoughtless said:
Unfortunately, even when someone is with you, from my experience, dying is a lonely experience. Mostly for those who keep watch. I know this from watching friends and family who have died. The sadness is palpable.
August 21st, 2024 22:24
for my grandma
Dan Williams said:
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04
for my grandma
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely, evocative and charming. Excellent imagery and word usage. You\'re still young, however, when I was your age I was just as hopeful, dreaming so much of a grand day when I could imagine a book of my collected poetical endeavors published, that I collated a book of them with what resources I could find. They were much simpler than what you see me posting here.
Read the poetry you most admire and you\'ll begin to learn how to follow in that vein.
This beauty is delicate and sweet, loaded to taste and winsome.
Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2024 16:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely, evocative and charming. Excellent imagery and word usage. You\'re still young, however, when I was your age I was just as hopeful, dreaming so much of a grand day when I could imagine a book of my collected poetical endeavors published, that I collated a book of them with what resources I could find. They were much simpler than what you see me posting here.
Read the poetry you most admire and you\'ll begin to learn how to follow in that vein.
This beauty is delicate and sweet, loaded to taste and winsome.
Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2024 16:20
for my grandma
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
August 20th, 2024 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
August 20th, 2024 15:34
Memories
Doggerel Dave said:
They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the years....
Like it.
August 20th, 2024 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the years....
Like it.
August 20th, 2024 02:07
Memories
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely poem Z. You\'ve just summed up living.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
Saxon Crow said:
What a lovely poem Z. You\'ve just summed up living.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
Memories
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
There are some memories I hope I\'ll never forget! Makes me smile. Beautiful write Zelda. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 22:28
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
There are some memories I hope I\'ll never forget! Makes me smile. Beautiful write Zelda. 🌹
August 19th, 2024 22:28
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
So true Zelda memories are what much of life is made of. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true Zelda memories are what much of life is made of. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 17:55
friends
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some will go to bat for you and that speaks something special about the both of you. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some will go to bat for you and that speaks something special about the both of you. Nicely said Zelda
August 19th, 2024 05:34
friends
Lorenz said:
You have the foundations of a talent to develope over the years !
August 19th, 2024 00:39
Lorenz said:
You have the foundations of a talent to develope over the years !
August 19th, 2024 00:39
friends
jarcher54 said:
May you always have someone with you, but it\'s clear you could do this alone! I adore the spirit, the excitement reaching a frenzy of taking off together to battle those nasty windmills!
August 18th, 2024 21:19
jarcher54 said:
May you always have someone with you, but it\'s clear you could do this alone! I adore the spirit, the excitement reaching a frenzy of taking off together to battle those nasty windmills!
August 18th, 2024 21:19
knight
sorenbarrett said:
There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply to emotions in reality. We all need a knight in white armor a \"knight of the wind\" Thank you for sharing
August 18th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply to emotions in reality. We all need a knight in white armor a \"knight of the wind\" Thank you for sharing
August 18th, 2024 05:08
free
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Amazing write, Zelda, it\'s super catchy! Don\'t listen to this jealous hater Dave. :) I Liked the poem
August 15th, 2024 12:16
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Amazing write, Zelda, it\'s super catchy! Don\'t listen to this jealous hater Dave. :) I Liked the poem
August 15th, 2024 12:16
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