Comments received on poems by antra.coree
Sunflower.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that makes an allegory and personifies the sunflower. To face the east where the sun raises is to look for light or knowledge and truth. One is not the truth but one looks for it. Nicely written
August 13th, 2026 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that makes an allegory and personifies the sunflower. To face the east where the sun raises is to look for light or knowledge and truth. One is not the truth but one looks for it. Nicely written
August 13th, 2026 06:44
Waiting
Fränz Müller said:
We grow old and die waiting for that perfect moment to arrive. Sacrificing the good waiting for the great. Very well said!
August 12th, 2026 20:16
Fränz Müller said:
We grow old and die waiting for that perfect moment to arrive. Sacrificing the good waiting for the great. Very well said!
August 12th, 2026 20:16
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write I guess it depends what you are waiting for and the chances that it will come. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting write I guess it depends what you are waiting for and the chances that it will come. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 20:06
Dear future me
Fränz Müller said:
I love this! A reminder to be kind to ourselves.
August 3rd, 2026 06:38
Fränz Müller said:
I love this! A reminder to be kind to ourselves.
August 3rd, 2026 06:38
Dear future me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in search of love doing preparatory work in advance. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in search of love doing preparatory work in advance. Well done
August 2nd, 2026 12:13
The Walls I Built
sorenbarrett said:
Symptoms suffered by many. A good poem with a message. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Symptoms suffered by many. A good poem with a message. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 19:14
It\'s okay...
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of it is what it is. So many times that things are not what one wants but one has no choice in the matter. Well written
June 20th, 2026 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem of it is what it is. So many times that things are not what one wants but one has no choice in the matter. Well written
June 20th, 2026 11:05
Just for once...
sorenbarrett said:
Parental responsibility to a point since the child came because of you, out of you, of you and you set the pattern they learned by and even latter controlled their friends or maybe should have. Is this child not a piece of you in miniature? I hear the pain in this poem of not feeling accepted or even wanted.
June 19th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Parental responsibility to a point since the child came because of you, out of you, of you and you set the pattern they learned by and even latter controlled their friends or maybe should have. Is this child not a piece of you in miniature? I hear the pain in this poem of not feeling accepted or even wanted.
June 19th, 2026 04:54
You made me realise!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of finding peace in finding oneself and where one belongs. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message of finding peace in finding oneself and where one belongs. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 04:54
Caged🕊️
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic metaphor of control for the wrong purpose. All children need control until they can learn to take it themselves in a responsible manner but it should be based on the well being of the individual as well as the group. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic metaphor of control for the wrong purpose. All children need control until they can learn to take it themselves in a responsible manner but it should be based on the well being of the individual as well as the group. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 04:07
The strength I never choose...
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the positive atributes of a child and one that is given the burdens of an adult when a child and called a child when they become an adult a mixed and paradoxical combination. Well written
June 15th, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the positive atributes of a child and one that is given the burdens of an adult when a child and called a child when they become an adult a mixed and paradoxical combination. Well written
June 15th, 2026 08:35
The strength I never choose...
nitya said:
this poem is so relatable. So well written and creatively crafted.
June 15th, 2026 08:13
nitya said:
this poem is so relatable. So well written and creatively crafted.
June 15th, 2026 08:13
Caged in freedom 🕊️
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the wisdom of age unable to be seen until too late. Well written
June 12th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the wisdom of age unable to be seen until too late. Well written
June 12th, 2026 09:15
Was born to bloom
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write close to heart I have written a poem very close to this before and this one reminded me of it. Nicely done and a fave
June 10th, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write close to heart I have written a poem very close to this before and this one reminded me of it. Nicely done and a fave
June 10th, 2026 05:50
FALLING STARS ✨
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reads like a proverb holding good advice in poetic form. Nicely written and imaged.
June 8th, 2026 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reads like a proverb holding good advice in poetic form. Nicely written and imaged.
June 8th, 2026 14:13
FALLING STARS ✨
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
The ending is dynamite
Looking forward to reading more from you
June 8th, 2026 12:41
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
The ending is dynamite
Looking forward to reading more from you
June 8th, 2026 12:41
Light🪔
Paul Bell said:
You just summed up life.
Never assume you\'ll be rescued without rescuing yourself.
June 7th, 2026 05:28
Paul Bell said:
You just summed up life.
Never assume you\'ll be rescued without rescuing yourself.
June 7th, 2026 05:28
Light🪔
sorenbarrett said:
Self dependence is the safest and most sure way of carrying on in this life. It is good advice and clearly written.
June 7th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Self dependence is the safest and most sure way of carrying on in this life. It is good advice and clearly written.
June 7th, 2026 04:35
The forgotten seed
arqios said:
And so, it struggled, ill-remembered
yet grows sustained by others,
it exists even in adversity
but not to the whim of shifting shadows.
June 4th, 2026 20:16
arqios said:
And so, it struggled, ill-remembered
yet grows sustained by others,
it exists even in adversity
but not to the whim of shifting shadows.
June 4th, 2026 20:16
Shapeless Ocean 🌊
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Antra, this really moved me. There is such a strong sense of self-worth running through the poem. I love that it never argues for becoming less…it argues for embracing exactly what you are. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Antra, this really moved me. There is such a strong sense of self-worth running through the poem. I love that it never argues for becoming less…it argues for embracing exactly what you are. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:21
The forgotten seed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Antra, what a powerful metaphor. The contrast between the forgotten seed and the carefully tended flower carries the emotional weight of the poem beautifully. I especially love the ending…how the very independence forged through neglect is later misread as arrogance. That final turn lands with real force. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Antra, what a powerful metaphor. The contrast between the forgotten seed and the carefully tended flower carries the emotional weight of the poem beautifully. I especially love the ending…how the very independence forged through neglect is later misread as arrogance. That final turn lands with real force. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:20
The forgotten seed
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is nothing more than the speaker feeling envy. Such a lovely poem parable with the metaphor giving a lesson. Seed personified is an example of one pulling themselves up by their bootstraps and being belittled for it envied for it and labeled. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance is nothing more than the speaker feeling envy. Such a lovely poem parable with the metaphor giving a lesson. Seed personified is an example of one pulling themselves up by their bootstraps and being belittled for it envied for it and labeled. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2026 06:54
Shapeless Ocean 🌊
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem gives various examples of why not to conform to others views and desires. All put in a metaphor of water from ocean to river to glass and drop. Nicely done and most poetic
June 4th, 2026 02:54
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem gives various examples of why not to conform to others views and desires. All put in a metaphor of water from ocean to river to glass and drop. Nicely done and most poetic
June 4th, 2026 02:54
How do I explain them?🥀
rhmn_7 said:
It is always worth a try to explain them I would say..
June 3rd, 2026 11:04
rhmn_7 said:
It is always worth a try to explain them I would say..
June 3rd, 2026 11:04
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