Comments received on poems by antra.sharma_
\"The tale of moon and star\"🌙⭐
Chitrangada said:
Unrequited love --- haven\'t we all felt this? What a wonderful expression. I love it.
July 13th, 2025 10:10
Chitrangada said:
Unrequited love --- haven\'t we all felt this? What a wonderful expression. I love it.
July 13th, 2025 10:10
\"The tale of moon and star\"🌙⭐
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor that fits so well in various aspects and well expressed poetically and for that a fave. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor that fits so well in various aspects and well expressed poetically and for that a fave. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 09:39
\"The tale of moon and star\"🌙⭐
2781 said:
I had to give this a like..for the wave length
July 13th, 2025 09:32
2781 said:
I had to give this a like..for the wave length
July 13th, 2025 09:32
\"To Love Louder Than I\'m Heard\"
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write of the feeling of loneliness and sensing difference from others, nicely expressed and written
July 8th, 2025 14:53
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write of the feeling of loneliness and sensing difference from others, nicely expressed and written
July 8th, 2025 14:53
\"To Love Louder Than I\'m Heard\"
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem speaks of a difference from others of feeling more and maybe needing more than others. A loneliness pervades this write with a haunting echo. Nicely done.
July 8th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Heart felt this poem speaks of a difference from others of feeling more and maybe needing more than others. A loneliness pervades this write with a haunting echo. Nicely done.
July 8th, 2025 13:07
For once...
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling alone and unappreciated, unloved for who one is. Very heartfelt
June 28th, 2025 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling alone and unappreciated, unloved for who one is. Very heartfelt
June 28th, 2025 11:32
They say \"Move on\" and I reply:-
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with great charm. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point with great charm. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:50
\"She said to herself\"
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of someone to herself, reminding her of what she has been through so far in life, that she is a good person and has the strength to carry on, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 06:25
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of someone to herself, reminding her of what she has been through so far in life, that she is a good person and has the strength to carry on, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 06:25
\"She said to herself\"
sorenbarrett said:
A parents message to their child a lovely thing. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A parents message to their child a lovely thing. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:06
Maybe that\'s why...
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal account opening up oneself is the key to being a poet. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal account opening up oneself is the key to being a poet. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:12
* Why not stars?*
sorenbarrett said:
I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both important to the taste. Good write
July 28th, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both important to the taste. Good write
July 28th, 2024 06:01
*The tree*
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here. Not strange that there was a tree of life and a tree of knowledge as well in Christian mythology.
July 27th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here. Not strange that there was a tree of life and a tree of knowledge as well in Christian mythology.
July 27th, 2024 05:43
The Road Not Taken!
sorenbarrett said:
Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery navigating and a few spills. Loved this take off of a famous poem.
July 26th, 2024 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery navigating and a few spills. Loved this take off of a famous poem.
July 26th, 2024 12:43
After taking that first step
2781 said:
I find thinking seventy percent of the doing.
July 7th, 2024 05:17
2781 said:
I find thinking seventy percent of the doing.
July 7th, 2024 05:17
One step, that first step.
Manslick said:
Nice circle.
I liked the - huge courage - rhyme.
A first step - um yes there is that, like every morning I fear my toe will hook on a spider web.
June 21st, 2024 21:17
Manslick said:
Nice circle.
I liked the - huge courage - rhyme.
A first step - um yes there is that, like every morning I fear my toe will hook on a spider web.
June 21st, 2024 21:17
But there is something...
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought
provoking write! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and to read
a delight!!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 18th, 2024 15:07
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought
provoking write! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and to read
a delight!!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 18th, 2024 15:07
But there is something...
aDarkerMind said:
no I dont...
maybe this \'thing\' you want will find you. who knows.
an enjoyable read none the less;
June 18th, 2024 13:41
aDarkerMind said:
no I dont...
maybe this \'thing\' you want will find you. who knows.
an enjoyable read none the less;
June 18th, 2024 13:41
I don\'t know how to tell, I don\'t know how to express!
John Prophet said:
“but the heart doesn’t understand”
Wonderful line and so very true.
Great emotive write.
June 18th, 2024 08:55
John Prophet said:
“but the heart doesn’t understand”
Wonderful line and so very true.
Great emotive write.
June 18th, 2024 08:55
SMALL GIRL GREW UP
John Prophet said:
Wise words from one so young. Well written!
June 16th, 2024 07:45
John Prophet said:
Wise words from one so young. Well written!
June 16th, 2024 07:45
