Comments received on poems by antra.sharma_



Maybe that\'s why...
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

July 29th, 2024 22:42

Maybe that\'s why...
sorenbarrett said:



July 29th, 2024 13:12

Maybe that\'s why...
sorenbarrett said:

A very personal account opening up oneself is the key to being a poet. Nicely done

July 29th, 2024 13:12

* Why not stars?*
sorenbarrett said:

I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both important to the taste. Good write

July 28th, 2024 06:01

*The tree*
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic imagery.

July 27th, 2024 23:06

*The tree*
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor here. Not strange that there was a tree of life and a tree of knowledge as well in Christian mythology.

July 27th, 2024 05:43

The Road Not Taken!
sorenbarrett said:

Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery navigating and a few spills. Loved this take off of a famous poem.

July 26th, 2024 12:43

After taking that first step
2781 said:

I find thinking seventy percent of the doing.

July 7th, 2024 05:17

One step, that first step.
Manslick said:

Nice circle.
I liked the - huge courage - rhyme.
A first step - um yes there is that, like every morning I fear my toe will hook on a spider web.

June 21st, 2024 21:17

But there is something...
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 18th, 2024 15:52

But there is something...
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating and
thought
provoking write! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and to read
a delight!!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad

June 18th, 2024 15:07

But there is something...
aDarkerMind said:

no I dont...
maybe this \'thing\' you want will find you. who knows.

an enjoyable read none the less;

June 18th, 2024 13:41

I don\'t know how to tell, I don\'t know how to express!
John Prophet said:

“but the heart doesn’t understand”
Wonderful line and so very true.
Great emotive write.

June 18th, 2024 08:55

SMALL GIRL GREW UP
John Prophet said:

Wise words from one so young. Well written!

June 16th, 2024 07:45