Comments received on poems by antra.sharma_
One step, that first step.
Manslick said:
Nice circle.
I liked the - huge courage - rhyme.
A first step - um yes there is that, like every morning I fear my toe will hook on a spider web.
June 21st, 2024 21:17
Manslick said:
Nice circle.
I liked the - huge courage - rhyme.
A first step - um yes there is that, like every morning I fear my toe will hook on a spider web.
June 21st, 2024 21:17
But there is something...
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought
provoking write! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and to read
a delight!!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 18th, 2024 15:07
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought
provoking write! 🤔
Eloquently penned
and to read
a delight!!
Best wishes 🌹 Thad
June 18th, 2024 15:07
But there is something...
aDarkerMind said:
no I dont...
maybe this \'thing\' you want will find you. who knows.
an enjoyable read none the less;
June 18th, 2024 13:41
aDarkerMind said:
no I dont...
maybe this \'thing\' you want will find you. who knows.
an enjoyable read none the less;
June 18th, 2024 13:41
I don\'t know how to tell, I don\'t know how to express!
John Prophet said:
“but the heart doesn’t understand”
Wonderful line and so very true.
Great emotive write.
June 18th, 2024 08:55
John Prophet said:
“but the heart doesn’t understand”
Wonderful line and so very true.
Great emotive write.
June 18th, 2024 08:55
SMALL GIRL GREW UP
John Prophet said:
Wise words from one so young. Well written!
June 16th, 2024 07:45
John Prophet said:
Wise words from one so young. Well written!
June 16th, 2024 07:45
