Comments received on poems by Antra Sharma



Dear future me
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Antra, I connect with this deeply. There’s something powerful about imagining a future self not as someone distant, but as someone you’re already caring for through the choices you make now. Really beautiful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 14th, 2026 09:06

Lost winner...
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, Antra...this is deeply moving. The contrast between public victory and private hurt gives the whole piece real weight. Being praised by the world means very little when the people you most want to hear it from stay silent. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 14th, 2026 09:05

Lost winner...
Fränz Müller said:

More often in this life it’s less the tangible things that bring us joy but rather the intangible. Great work.

August 14th, 2026 07:24

Lost winner...
sorenbarrett said:

There is a huge amount of pain in this write a feeling of not being enough that somehow one\'s own parents do not recognize them. In most species mothers have an unconditional love for their young if this is not present the problem is not with the young but the mother. Well written and heart rending

August 14th, 2026 04:40

Lost winner...
Paul Bell said:

Once they see you\'re talanted, you enter the machine and don\'t come out till you\'re replaced.
Sadly the person and their feelings get left behind.

August 14th, 2026 03:34

Sunflower.
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write that makes an allegory and personifies the sunflower. To face the east where the sun raises is to look for light or knowledge and truth. One is not the truth but one looks for it. Nicely written

August 13th, 2026 06:44

Sunflower.
Fränz Müller said:

Let your inner light shine! ☺️

August 13th, 2026 06:28

Waiting
Fränz Müller said:

We grow old and die waiting for that perfect moment to arrive. Sacrificing the good waiting for the great. Very well said!

August 12th, 2026 20:16

Waiting
sorenbarrett said:

This is a most interesting write I guess it depends what you are waiting for and the chances that it will come. Nicely written

August 12th, 2026 20:06

Dear future me
Fränz Müller said:

I love this! A reminder to be kind to ourselves.

August 3rd, 2026 06:38

Dear future me
sorenbarrett said:

A poem in search of love doing preparatory work in advance. Well done

August 2nd, 2026 12:13

The Walls I Built
sorenbarrett said:

Symptoms suffered by many. A good poem with a message. Nicely written

July 18th, 2026 19:14

The strength I never choose...
ELIORA said:

Amazing💕✨

July 7th, 2026 21:52

It\'s okay...
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a poem of it is what it is. So many times that things are not what one wants but one has no choice in the matter. Well written

June 20th, 2026 11:05

Just for once...
Fränz Müller said:

Quite moving!

June 19th, 2026 07:22

Just for once...
sorenbarrett said:

Parental responsibility to a point since the child came because of you, out of you, of you and you set the pattern they learned by and even latter controlled their friends or maybe should have. Is this child not a piece of you in miniature? I hear the pain in this poem of not feeling accepted or even wanted.

June 19th, 2026 04:54

You made me realise!
Friendship said:

Nicely written

June 18th, 2026 07:25

You made me realise!
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful message of finding peace in finding oneself and where one belongs. Nicely written

June 18th, 2026 04:54

Caged🕊️
sorenbarrett said:

A graphic metaphor of control for the wrong purpose. All children need control until they can learn to take it themselves in a responsible manner but it should be based on the well being of the individual as well as the group. Nicely written

June 16th, 2026 04:07

The strength I never choose...
Friendship said:

Well written

June 15th, 2026 10:06

The strength I never choose...
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of the positive atributes of a child and one that is given the burdens of an adult when a child and called a child when they become an adult a mixed and paradoxical combination. Well written

June 15th, 2026 08:35

The strength I never choose...
nitya said:

this poem is so relatable. So well written and creatively crafted.


June 15th, 2026 08:13

Caged in freedom 🕊️
sorenbarrett said:

A poem with the wisdom of age unable to be seen until too late. Well written

June 12th, 2026 09:15

Was born to bloom
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write close to heart I have written a poem very close to this before and this one reminded me of it. Nicely done and a fave

June 10th, 2026 05:50

FALLING STARS ✨
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that reads like a proverb holding good advice in poetic form. Nicely written and imaged.

June 8th, 2026 14:13

FALLING STARS ✨
peto said:

Thoroughly enjoyed the read
The ending is dynamite
Looking forward to reading more from you

June 8th, 2026 12:41

Light🪔
Fränz Müller said:

Love this!

June 7th, 2026 21:53

Light🪔
Paul Bell said:

You just summed up life.
Never assume you\'ll be rescued without rescuing yourself.

June 7th, 2026 05:28

Light🪔
sorenbarrett said:

Self dependence is the safest and most sure way of carrying on in this life. It is good advice and clearly written.

June 7th, 2026 04:35

The forgotten seed
arqios said:

And so, it struggled, ill-remembered
yet grows sustained by others,
it exists even in adversity
but not to the whim of shifting shadows.

June 4th, 2026 20:16

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