Comments received on poems by tkatie118
Casual Sunburn
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain and learning and moving on. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain and learning and moving on. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2025 08:40
A Shred of Evidence
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds me of another poem or song that I can not retrieve that keeps rattling in my head. The feeling was eerie and a bit haunting. Good write
March 10th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds me of another poem or song that I can not retrieve that keeps rattling in my head. The feeling was eerie and a bit haunting. Good write
March 10th, 2025 04:58
Four Fires
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of leaving a relationship then regretting that decision, we taking in the write through the deteriorating of their feelings and emotions, touching and sad, well in expressed
March 6th, 2025 11:32
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of leaving a relationship then regretting that decision, we taking in the write through the deteriorating of their feelings and emotions, touching and sad, well in expressed
March 6th, 2025 11:32
Four Fires
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting choices made in word selection. Metaphorical and cryptic. Nice
March 6th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting choices made in word selection. Metaphorical and cryptic. Nice
March 6th, 2025 09:15
Conscience
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 09:19
Hold Your Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A shout out at their commitment to love to someone, hope they are listening, written really nicely
March 3rd, 2025 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
A shout out at their commitment to love to someone, hope they are listening, written really nicely
March 3rd, 2025 09:59
Hold Your Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nice pledge of love set in a dare where the author is willing to risk it all in an outward call. A most lovely poem that is daring and tender at the same time.
March 3rd, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nice pledge of love set in a dare where the author is willing to risk it all in an outward call. A most lovely poem that is daring and tender at the same time.
March 3rd, 2025 09:43
Worth
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional in its wording it like a southpaw delivers a knockout punch. Beautiful! I loved it.
February 27th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional in its wording it like a southpaw delivers a knockout punch. Beautiful! I loved it.
February 27th, 2025 08:47
A Letter of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute and most all tributes are good. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute and most all tributes are good. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:29
Abby Wallace
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved and listening. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved and listening. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:06
Gina Calfman
sorenbarrett said:
This write seems a critique and is well composed in that light. Very nice
February 24th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
This write seems a critique and is well composed in that light. Very nice
February 24th, 2025 11:57
Gina Calfman
Poetic Licence said:
A deserving subject to be discussed but a very complex and difficult one to do in words.well written piece
February 24th, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
A deserving subject to be discussed but a very complex and difficult one to do in words.well written piece
February 24th, 2025 11:39
Cindy Beale
Poetic Licence said:
We never know whats really going in someone\'s head and their true thought processes ,we should judge no one even if we have been down the same path, a interesting and thoughtful write
February 24th, 2025 03:36
Poetic Licence said:
We never know whats really going in someone\'s head and their true thought processes ,we should judge no one even if we have been down the same path, a interesting and thoughtful write
February 24th, 2025 03:36
Cindy Beale
sorenbarrett said:
I hear don\'t judge until you have walked in the other person\'s shoes. But even then, you can never know all that is in the other person\'s background, genetics, and thought processes. Better not to judge at all.
February 24th, 2025 02:34
sorenbarrett said:
I hear don\'t judge until you have walked in the other person\'s shoes. But even then, you can never know all that is in the other person\'s background, genetics, and thought processes. Better not to judge at all.
February 24th, 2025 02:34
Cindy Beale
NafisaSB said:
i have not seen the show, but agree with your in depth analysis which tries to make sense of how and why people change
February 24th, 2025 00:02
NafisaSB said:
i have not seen the show, but agree with your in depth analysis which tries to make sense of how and why people change
February 24th, 2025 00:02
Madness
sorenbarrett said:
The pacing and beat to this poem as well as other things remind me of Ren and his writing. A story with a moral for an ending nicely written
February 17th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
The pacing and beat to this poem as well as other things remind me of Ren and his writing. A story with a moral for an ending nicely written
February 17th, 2025 04:57
Close
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the need for affiliation affection in this poem. It cries out for someone to be there. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the need for affiliation affection in this poem. It cries out for someone to be there. Very nice
February 13th, 2025 05:05
Imperfect You and Pathetic..Little…Me
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a haunting, touching and emotional write, i think the feelings have been expressed very well by the author
February 7th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a haunting, touching and emotional write, i think the feelings have been expressed very well by the author
February 7th, 2025 12:10
Pathetic! Little…Me
sorenbarrett said:
Irony in this poem stands out from the narrator calling for love and reassurance for another when it is them that needs it. A great twist and well written
January 31st, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
Irony in this poem stands out from the narrator calling for love and reassurance for another when it is them that needs it. A great twist and well written
January 31st, 2025 19:43
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