Comments received on poems by tkatie118
Foolish
sorenbarrett said:
What happens when one mistakes infatuation for love. Here is a play laid out in a single poem. The passion of emotions and the consequences. Nicely written.
April 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
What happens when one mistakes infatuation for love. Here is a play laid out in a single poem. The passion of emotions and the consequences. Nicely written.
April 14th, 2025 13:39
Toxic
sorenbarrett said:
Sex will entice any promise and exact any price. Promises of regret. A sad poem. Nicely done
April 8th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Sex will entice any promise and exact any price. Promises of regret. A sad poem. Nicely done
April 8th, 2025 12:57
Toxic
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
In many ways hence the title I am seeing a lot of double meanings reflected within your words. What I liked is that there was a story being created of a woman who is seemingly free spirited but seems bound by a love that seems chained to her. It reminded me of some of the tarot cards. Love is not lust and lust is not love so even in her liberty there are still sacrifices to be made. There are many people who are in love with lust or with love though they do not love from or with their heart. A well written piece
April 8th, 2025 12:21
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
In many ways hence the title I am seeing a lot of double meanings reflected within your words. What I liked is that there was a story being created of a woman who is seemingly free spirited but seems bound by a love that seems chained to her. It reminded me of some of the tarot cards. Love is not lust and lust is not love so even in her liberty there are still sacrifices to be made. There are many people who are in love with lust or with love though they do not love from or with their heart. A well written piece
April 8th, 2025 12:21
Me and Mrs Beale
sorenbarrett said:
Complexities in the relationships of people. A fun read with an ending twist.
April 2nd, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
Complexities in the relationships of people. A fun read with an ending twist.
April 2nd, 2025 10:34
Do You Want To Be Loved?
Poetic Licence said:
Someone offer love and struggling to have it excepted, nicely expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:18
Poetic Licence said:
Someone offer love and struggling to have it excepted, nicely expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:18
Do You Want To Be Loved?
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for love. Wonderfully said.
March 31st, 2025 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for love. Wonderfully said.
March 31st, 2025 17:49
Our Maureen
sorenbarrett said:
A tough romance that is marred and tarnished but still strong. A raw write. Lovely
March 27th, 2025 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
A tough romance that is marred and tarnished but still strong. A raw write. Lovely
March 27th, 2025 16:52
Lady of the Wave
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write at growing and becoming at peace with ones self , enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write at growing and becoming at peace with ones self , enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 03:14
Lady of the Wave
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of transformation and growth a poem of being one with one\'s nature. A most lovely write
March 22nd, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of transformation and growth a poem of being one with one\'s nature. A most lovely write
March 22nd, 2025 13:47
Lost at Tesco
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve had that feeling when I\'ve been shopping in large malls and worse lost my young children in them for more than an hour while i and security looked for them. Can be disorienting and frightening. Loved the poem
March 21st, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve had that feeling when I\'ve been shopping in large malls and worse lost my young children in them for more than an hour while i and security looked for them. Can be disorienting and frightening. Loved the poem
March 21st, 2025 14:46
Me
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of people taking control and hoping everyone remains silent, in the write we have someone speaking up for the silent, nicely expressed and written
March 21st, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of people taking control and hoping everyone remains silent, in the write we have someone speaking up for the silent, nicely expressed and written
March 21st, 2025 03:16
Me
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking for those that can\'t speak for themselves this poem talks of control. Nicely worded
March 20th, 2025 17:09
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking for those that can\'t speak for themselves this poem talks of control. Nicely worded
March 20th, 2025 17:09
Casual Sunburn
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain and learning and moving on. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain and learning and moving on. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2025 08:40
A Shred of Evidence
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds me of another poem or song that I can not retrieve that keeps rattling in my head. The feeling was eerie and a bit haunting. Good write
March 10th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds me of another poem or song that I can not retrieve that keeps rattling in my head. The feeling was eerie and a bit haunting. Good write
March 10th, 2025 04:58
Four Fires
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of leaving a relationship then regretting that decision, we taking in the write through the deteriorating of their feelings and emotions, touching and sad, well in expressed
March 6th, 2025 11:32
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of leaving a relationship then regretting that decision, we taking in the write through the deteriorating of their feelings and emotions, touching and sad, well in expressed
March 6th, 2025 11:32
Four Fires
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting choices made in word selection. Metaphorical and cryptic. Nice
March 6th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting choices made in word selection. Metaphorical and cryptic. Nice
March 6th, 2025 09:15
Conscience
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 09:19
Hold Your Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A shout out at their commitment to love to someone, hope they are listening, written really nicely
March 3rd, 2025 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
A shout out at their commitment to love to someone, hope they are listening, written really nicely
March 3rd, 2025 09:59
Hold Your Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nice pledge of love set in a dare where the author is willing to risk it all in an outward call. A most lovely poem that is daring and tender at the same time.
March 3rd, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nice pledge of love set in a dare where the author is willing to risk it all in an outward call. A most lovely poem that is daring and tender at the same time.
March 3rd, 2025 09:43
Worth
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional in its wording it like a southpaw delivers a knockout punch. Beautiful! I loved it.
February 27th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Unconventional in its wording it like a southpaw delivers a knockout punch. Beautiful! I loved it.
February 27th, 2025 08:47
A Letter of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute and most all tributes are good. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute and most all tributes are good. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:29
Abby Wallace
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved and listening. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved and listening. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 04:06
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