Comments received on poems by coracaodacripta
Zen Zendigi Azadi
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write Heart from the crypt it speaks to the travesties of tragedies that are occurring to Palestinians. A sad situation in a violent and turbulent world where the word justice is not known
January 18th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write Heart from the crypt it speaks to the travesties of tragedies that are occurring to Palestinians. A sad situation in a violent and turbulent world where the word justice is not known
January 18th, 2026 04:06
True Even
sorenbarrett said:
One must observe the beauty of where one is at and that is sufficient. A lovely poem
January 14th, 2026 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
One must observe the beauty of where one is at and that is sufficient. A lovely poem
January 14th, 2026 19:43
All I can think of
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the complexities of a father-child relationship, reflecting themes of nostalgia, regret, loss, and the struggle for connection. The poet seems to grapple with memories of their father, highlighting moments of warmth and affection juxtaposed with feelings of guilt and emotional distance. The subject matter delves into the impact of familial relationships on personal identity and mental health, showcasing how love can be intertwined with pain and misunderstanding.
December 31st, 2025 09:35
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the complexities of a father-child relationship, reflecting themes of nostalgia, regret, loss, and the struggle for connection. The poet seems to grapple with memories of their father, highlighting moments of warmth and affection juxtaposed with feelings of guilt and emotional distance. The subject matter delves into the impact of familial relationships on personal identity and mental health, showcasing how love can be intertwined with pain and misunderstanding.
December 31st, 2025 09:35
Tenderly
sorenbarrett said:
A bleak view of affiliation and the loneliness of solitude. A strong feeling of isolation. Well written
December 30th, 2025 20:02
sorenbarrett said:
A bleak view of affiliation and the loneliness of solitude. A strong feeling of isolation. Well written
December 30th, 2025 20:02
Tenderly
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of isolation, longing, and the fleeting nature of life. It reflects a sense of melancholy and introspection, as the port seems to grapple with its emotional landscape and the disconnect between its inner world and the outside reality.
December 30th, 2025 19:23
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of isolation, longing, and the fleeting nature of life. It reflects a sense of melancholy and introspection, as the port seems to grapple with its emotional landscape and the disconnect between its inner world and the outside reality.
December 30th, 2025 19:23
Diamond Studded Watches
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem serves to explore the internal conflicts faced during adolescence, highlighting the desire for freedom while grappling with the realities of self-identity and societal pressures. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of growth, self-acceptance, and the complexities of navigating freedom and responsibility.
December 27th, 2025 06:50
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem serves to explore the internal conflicts faced during adolescence, highlighting the desire for freedom while grappling with the realities of self-identity and societal pressures. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of growth, self-acceptance, and the complexities of navigating freedom and responsibility.
December 27th, 2025 06:50
Diamond Studded Watches
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read. Well done, well written.
December 27th, 2025 04:03
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read. Well done, well written.
December 27th, 2025 04:03
Diamond Studded Watches
sorenbarrett said:
It is strange the things that impress us and to which our attention focuses. In this poem of reflection it crosses several things spanning years posing a question. Well done
December 27th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is strange the things that impress us and to which our attention focuses. In this poem of reflection it crosses several things spanning years posing a question. Well done
December 27th, 2025 04:00
Defaced
sorenbarrett said:
When all defenses break down and the lines are overrun the last defense is self destruction. The weaker side fights with suicide bombings of terror. Terror, fear and horror its only weapons. A powerful write the digs deep. Well done
December 11th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
When all defenses break down and the lines are overrun the last defense is self destruction. The weaker side fights with suicide bombings of terror. Terror, fear and horror its only weapons. A powerful write the digs deep. Well done
December 11th, 2025 04:00
Go Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hits with a cold clarity…the sickness, the winter, the distance between guidance and pride. It lands heavy in the best way. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 12:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hits with a cold clarity…the sickness, the winter, the distance between guidance and pride. It lands heavy in the best way. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 12:15
Go Home
sorenbarrett said:
Youth thinks they know more. A hard poem but so many are such
December 10th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Youth thinks they know more. A hard poem but so many are such
December 10th, 2025 10:53
Suicide Note
sorenbarrett said:
A good read with the logic that if someone does think about it long enough they usually change their mind. This piece uses an investment strategy to convince someone that the best decision is to ride it out. Well done
November 24th, 2025 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A good read with the logic that if someone does think about it long enough they usually change their mind. This piece uses an investment strategy to convince someone that the best decision is to ride it out. Well done
November 24th, 2025 20:00
Rest
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in timeless words of a place of reprieve and rest. A pause in eternity to gather strength before the end comes. Lovely
November 5th, 2025 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks in timeless words of a place of reprieve and rest. A pause in eternity to gather strength before the end comes. Lovely
November 5th, 2025 15:35
A General Narration
sorenbarrett said:
Failing ourselves the precursor to failing others and nothing worse. A good write
October 25th, 2025 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
Failing ourselves the precursor to failing others and nothing worse. A good write
October 25th, 2025 16:54
Sic Regum Standibus
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal reflection in this poem where questions remain unanswered but implied. Well done
October 21st, 2025 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal reflection in this poem where questions remain unanswered but implied. Well done
October 21st, 2025 18:20
Bournes Rush Through
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of the word bourne as it applies so poetically to tears that like a river run. This poem takes on a classical feel in its wording and flow being free form it appears a reflection and speaking to the fourth wall so to speak. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of the word bourne as it applies so poetically to tears that like a river run. This poem takes on a classical feel in its wording and flow being free form it appears a reflection and speaking to the fourth wall so to speak. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 04:19
Frosted Bangers
sorenbarrett said:
Looking back on one\'s failures is a difficult thing. Sad and at times not wanted to be seen. Vividly represented in this poem. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Looking back on one\'s failures is a difficult thing. Sad and at times not wanted to be seen. Vividly represented in this poem. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 05:23
The Plantation
sorenbarrett said:
In this collage of images, internal rhyme, alliteration builds a powerful message a montage of discrimination and its results. Very nicely crafted. A fave
June 4th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
In this collage of images, internal rhyme, alliteration builds a powerful message a montage of discrimination and its results. Very nicely crafted. A fave
June 4th, 2025 04:36
Forever In His Midst
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking of a higher power here. Well worded this poem carries power and strength in its wording. Well done.
April 26th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking of a higher power here. Well worded this poem carries power and strength in its wording. Well done.
April 26th, 2025 04:40
Sympathies
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write encapsulating the state of affairs in the modern world, nicely expressed and written
April 10th, 2025 13:32
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write encapsulating the state of affairs in the modern world, nicely expressed and written
April 10th, 2025 13:32
Sympathies
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of protest this is powerful in its message. Nicely worded it speaks for the masses. Well done
April 10th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of protest this is powerful in its message. Nicely worded it speaks for the masses. Well done
April 10th, 2025 12:13
Something to Drink
sorenbarrett said:
Not at all disturbing but rather finely poetic. This speaks in metaphor and with rather well woven rhyme. Beautiful and entrancing is what comes to mind evoking deeper thoughts of meaning. A fave
April 6th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Not at all disturbing but rather finely poetic. This speaks in metaphor and with rather well woven rhyme. Beautiful and entrancing is what comes to mind evoking deeper thoughts of meaning. A fave
April 6th, 2025 10:20
Irreverent
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful very cleverly crafted write, really enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 13:28
Poetic Licence said:
That is a wonderful very cleverly crafted write, really enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 13:28
Irreverent
sorenbarrett said:
Lack of trust does interfere with deep relationships in present day society. A wonderful write
March 20th, 2025 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Lack of trust does interfere with deep relationships in present day society. A wonderful write
March 20th, 2025 12:54
Irreverent
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that was an incredible read
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 20th, 2025 11:45
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that was an incredible read
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 20th, 2025 11:45
The Grim, It Grins
sorenbarrett said:
Skeletal in nature, let\'s get down to the bare bones. A most interesting read that seems a bit grim and darkly haunting.
March 8th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Skeletal in nature, let\'s get down to the bare bones. A most interesting read that seems a bit grim and darkly haunting.
March 8th, 2025 04:53
The Grim, It Grins
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and slightly gruesome write, which I kind of enjoyed
March 8th, 2025 03:27
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and slightly gruesome write, which I kind of enjoyed
March 8th, 2025 03:27
Notes in bottles
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and expressed, asking many questions with some possible answers, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:22
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and expressed, asking many questions with some possible answers, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:22
Notes in bottles
sorenbarrett said:
This in many ways sounds classical in form and is somewhat of a soliloquy. Well spoken with good questions and implied answers. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This in many ways sounds classical in form and is somewhat of a soliloquy. Well spoken with good questions and implied answers. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 04:49
journal entry
Poetic Licence said:
Searching for answers which cannot be found and torn between beliefs, a well expressed write
February 15th, 2025 07:55
Poetic Licence said:
Searching for answers which cannot be found and torn between beliefs, a well expressed write
February 15th, 2025 07:55
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