Comments received on poems by Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet
Babylon s Garden
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hanging on desperately to what was. Nicely done and a mythical style of fantasy which is all that the past may be. Well done
August 15th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hanging on desperately to what was. Nicely done and a mythical style of fantasy which is all that the past may be. Well done
August 15th, 2026 08:42
Us minus Life
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed my journey here .. and am delighted you have settled so well into the MPS extended family .. Kind regards my literary friend .. Neville
August 13th, 2026 02:42
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed my journey here .. and am delighted you have settled so well into the MPS extended family .. Kind regards my literary friend .. Neville
August 13th, 2026 02:42
Beneath the surface
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes occur in many levels some physical some emotional. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
Earthquakes occur in many levels some physical some emotional. Nicely written
August 12th, 2026 16:08
Beneath the surface
Bella Shepard said:
Diving deep below the surface; reflective, questioning, searching, thought-filled. Good work!
August 12th, 2026 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Diving deep below the surface; reflective, questioning, searching, thought-filled. Good work!
August 12th, 2026 15:58
Beneath the surface
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent work, thank you for sharing it!
August 12th, 2026 14:44
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent work, thank you for sharing it!
August 12th, 2026 14:44
Peace talks/lost&find
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that speaks in cryptic words and images. Well done
October 11th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that speaks in cryptic words and images. Well done
October 11th, 2025 13:30
No wet cheeks
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Standbypoet,
Of those men who know nothing of love, the needs of the feminine, their wealth of knowledge, their poetry of the heart and their beauty of the mind. More than just to be provided for but to be inspired and above all, to be respected and lionised for all that they give and have given to the beauty of life.. Your way with words is to be greatly admired , so, too, this poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 18th, 2025 03:54
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Standbypoet,
Of those men who know nothing of love, the needs of the feminine, their wealth of knowledge, their poetry of the heart and their beauty of the mind. More than just to be provided for but to be inspired and above all, to be respected and lionised for all that they give and have given to the beauty of life.. Your way with words is to be greatly admired , so, too, this poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 18th, 2025 03:54
No wet cheeks
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves me feeling that there is a very uneven power base here. Nicely written
August 17th, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves me feeling that there is a very uneven power base here. Nicely written
August 17th, 2025 19:24
Keep Right Sun
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks more profoundly that the surface story. Be careful what one believes anchor it in something known predictable and then life can be more carefree. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks more profoundly that the surface story. Be careful what one believes anchor it in something known predictable and then life can be more carefree. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:45
No Routine simply
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting a poem I read whether in reality or in my head. So familiar it speaks of tough times and and poor decisions. Looking for better times. Well written
June 1st, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting a poem I read whether in reality or in my head. So familiar it speaks of tough times and and poor decisions. Looking for better times. Well written
June 1st, 2025 12:53
When DJ Is a Jerk
sorenbarrett said:
This seems musings of a pensive person. Nicely written
May 29th, 2025 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
This seems musings of a pensive person. Nicely written
May 29th, 2025 13:32
Destination Prague £
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of internal thoughts, musings of a poet. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminds me of internal thoughts, musings of a poet. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 19:27
Hereby, A Confession
sorenbarrett said:
We are all actors on a stage as Shakespeare said. We should all question our sincerity, or whether we are just acting. A lovely poem that expresses one’s own questioning.
September 5th, 2024 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
We are all actors on a stage as Shakespeare said. We should all question our sincerity, or whether we are just acting. A lovely poem that expresses one’s own questioning.
September 5th, 2024 06:42
Us minus Life
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical and worth pondering the issue of free will vs determinism
August 27th, 2024 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical and worth pondering the issue of free will vs determinism
August 27th, 2024 13:20
Prison wall
Neville said:
the juxtaposition between being stuck, trapped or held against one\'s will here, is startling .. bravo .. Neville
August 3rd, 2024 01:00
Neville said:
the juxtaposition between being stuck, trapped or held against one\'s will here, is startling .. bravo .. Neville
August 3rd, 2024 01:00
Unique is mom
Neville said:
You are of course write .. I miss mine so badly .. Neville
August 3rd, 2024 00:56
Neville said:
You are of course write .. I miss mine so badly .. Neville
August 3rd, 2024 00:56
Writer\'s Right
Doggerel Dave said:
Right then Goali - I\'d better get on with it then.....
August 2nd, 2024 00:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Right then Goali - I\'d better get on with it then.....
August 2nd, 2024 00:46
Unique is mom
Doggerel Dave said:
I do feel uplifted by the poetry and idealism...... but I have to tell you, it depends on the mother.....
July 28th, 2024 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I do feel uplifted by the poetry and idealism...... but I have to tell you, it depends on the mother.....
July 28th, 2024 07:54
Unique is mom
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 06:05
Writer\'s Right
sorenbarrett said:
Love plays on words. For a while I thought you were going to establish a rite for writers to write with only the right hand.
July 25th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Love plays on words. For a while I thought you were going to establish a rite for writers to write with only the right hand.
July 25th, 2024 05:28
Prison wall
Teddy.15 said:
Very well crafted and makes your reader take notice, very powerful title moreover so very true. A very warm welcome to MPS from me. 🌹
July 25th, 2024 05:11
Teddy.15 said:
Very well crafted and makes your reader take notice, very powerful title moreover so very true. A very warm welcome to MPS from me. 🌹
July 25th, 2024 05:11
Prison wall
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison walls - in every country to varying degrees.
Please stay at MPS and give us more of your thoughts. It is a site which encourages commentary on other\'s work as well as your own.
July 24th, 2024 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison walls - in every country to varying degrees.
Please stay at MPS and give us more of your thoughts. It is a site which encourages commentary on other\'s work as well as your own.
July 24th, 2024 17:44
