Comments received on poems by Goli.Standbypoet



Elucid Reality Untold
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 16th, 2024 15:07

Hereby, A Confession
sorenbarrett said:

We are all actors on a stage as Shakespeare said. We should all question our sincerity, or whether we are just acting. A lovely poem that expresses one’s own questioning.

September 5th, 2024 06:42

Us minus Life
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 27th, 2024 15:13

Us minus Life
sorenbarrett said:

Philosophical and worth pondering the issue of free will vs determinism

August 27th, 2024 13:20

Prison wall
Neville said:


the juxtaposition between being stuck, trapped or held against one\'s will here, is startling .. bravo .. Neville

August 3rd, 2024 01:00

Unique is mom
Neville said:



You are of course write .. I miss mine so badly .. Neville

August 3rd, 2024 00:56

Writer\'s Right
Doggerel Dave said:

Right then Goali - I\'d better get on with it then.....

August 2nd, 2024 00:46

Unique is mom
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

August 2nd, 2024 00:41

Unique is mom
Doggerel Dave said:

I do feel uplifted by the poetry and idealism...... but I have to tell you, it depends on the mother.....

July 28th, 2024 07:54

Unique is mom
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done

July 28th, 2024 06:05

Writer\'s Right
sorenbarrett said:

Love plays on words. For a while I thought you were going to establish a rite for writers to write with only the right hand.

July 25th, 2024 05:28

Prison wall
Teddy.15 said:

Very well crafted and makes your reader take notice, very powerful title moreover so very true. A very warm welcome to MPS from me. 🌹

July 25th, 2024 05:11

Prison wall
Doggerel Dave said:

Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison walls - in every country to varying degrees.
Please stay at MPS and give us more of your thoughts. It is a site which encourages commentary on other\'s work as well as your own.

July 24th, 2024 17:44