Comments received on poems by xqw
Blankets
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
Blankets
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
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