Comments received on poems by xqw



Sorry for Christmas
Mr. Not said:

Sometimes balancing everything is hard, hope you\'re doing well.

January 6th, 2025 13:17

Keep going
Cassie58 said:

Such an upbeat poem. So much encouragement in the words offered to anyone having a doldrums day. Much enjoyed.

January 4th, 2025 22:48

Keep going
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2025 20:48

Keep going
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love the encouraging words, my friend! Needed them this evening! Well done on the poem! 🌹👏

January 4th, 2025 19:22

Keep going
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely piece of positive uplifting writing, which all should read. Hope you have an amazing day as well

January 4th, 2025 10:59

Sorry for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

Overcome by the Christmas spirit and all of its busyness. I’ve had this feeling many times and found this poem to be a fun read.

December 25th, 2024 03:21

Sorry for Christmas
Poetic Licence said:

I understand the feeling behind this writing

December 25th, 2024 01:41

I remember that night
2781 said:

It\'s that second death: we should fear.

November 22nd, 2024 22:27

time
Tony36 said:

Love it

September 21st, 2024 17:19

time
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 21st, 2024 17:18

just taking a breather
Cheeky Missy said:

Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.

September 8th, 2024 15:22

Scared again
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 28th, 2024 09:56

A moment
Qurrathul Ain said:

When the entire earth holds its breath.... that single moment opening up to the brightest dawn in our lives.
That single moment stretches too long as I believe I am in that phase of life.
Relatable and enjoyed reading it!

August 25th, 2024 09:47

fake friends
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and well stated. I took the bait.

August 23rd, 2024 14:14

fake friends
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Nice 👍

August 23rd, 2024 14:13

Scared
Tony36 said:

Compelling and a joy to read

August 22nd, 2024 09:25

Scared
sorenbarrett said:

Multiple phobias? A most fun read I have to say. Nicely done

August 22nd, 2024 08:47

Scared
2781 said:

That was a compelling read.
Could fear be a tactic to get you to bleed.

August 22nd, 2024 06:50

grey
Cassie58 said:

A short poem which describes the effects of depression well. It’s a lonely place to be. Pleased I stopped by. Your poem speaks the truth.

August 20th, 2024 12:30

grey
MR.apocalypse said:

i think you would really enjoy some of my work we seem to have the same writing style and toipcs i will check some more of yours out

August 20th, 2024 11:35

grey
sorenbarrett said:

The feeling that accompanies depression and the images that go along as well so nicely laid out in images. Very nice

August 20th, 2024 06:15

a short poem
sorenbarrett said:

Short and sweet it runs in rhythm and rhyme

August 18th, 2024 12:16

a short poem
Thoughtless said:

Time to meditate. Nice.

August 18th, 2024 08:07

A moment
Thoughtless said:

If a picture is worth a thousand words, a good poem is worth more than a thousand pictures.

August 14th, 2024 13:20

nothing worth seeing?
sorenbarrett said:

A sad commentary on the state of the world. Well written and in good style

August 14th, 2024 09:04

A moment
sorenbarrett said:

I think you have captured the essence of poetry in this. Lovely

August 12th, 2024 14:47

Sitting
sorenbarrett said:

It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray. Well done.

August 11th, 2024 20:01

A Rosewood Table
sorenbarrett said:

The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk top or as a metaphor of a past life as in the last line makes this work well. The vivid description and images enhances its power.

August 10th, 2024 15:49

A Rosewood Table
xqw said:

I just did what felt right in the formatting it might look weird tho srry


August 10th, 2024 14:26

Heavy
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Great poem,

August 9th, 2024 23:12

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