Comments received on poems by xqw
Sitting
sorenbarrett said:
It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray. Well done.
August 11th, 2024 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray. Well done.
August 11th, 2024 20:01
A Rosewood Table
sorenbarrett said:
The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk top or as a metaphor of a past life as in the last line makes this work well. The vivid description and images enhances its power.
August 10th, 2024 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk top or as a metaphor of a past life as in the last line makes this work well. The vivid description and images enhances its power.
August 10th, 2024 15:49
A Rosewood Table
xqw said:
I just did what felt right in the formatting it might look weird tho srry
August 10th, 2024 14:26
xqw said:
I just did what felt right in the formatting it might look weird tho srry
August 10th, 2024 14:26
Blankets
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
Blankets
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
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