Comments received on poems by xqw
just taking a breather
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.
September 8th, 2024 15:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.
September 8th, 2024 15:22
A moment
Qurrathul Ain said:
When the entire earth holds its breath.... that single moment opening up to the brightest dawn in our lives.
That single moment stretches too long as I believe I am in that phase of life.
Relatable and enjoyed reading it!
August 25th, 2024 09:47
Qurrathul Ain said:
When the entire earth holds its breath.... that single moment opening up to the brightest dawn in our lives.
That single moment stretches too long as I believe I am in that phase of life.
Relatable and enjoyed reading it!
August 25th, 2024 09:47
Scared
sorenbarrett said:
Multiple phobias? A most fun read I have to say. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Multiple phobias? A most fun read I have to say. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 08:47
Scared
2781 said:
That was a compelling read.
Could fear be a tactic to get you to bleed.
August 22nd, 2024 06:50
2781 said:
That was a compelling read.
Could fear be a tactic to get you to bleed.
August 22nd, 2024 06:50
grey
Cassie58 said:
A short poem which describes the effects of depression well. It’s a lonely place to be. Pleased I stopped by. Your poem speaks the truth.
August 20th, 2024 12:30
Cassie58 said:
A short poem which describes the effects of depression well. It’s a lonely place to be. Pleased I stopped by. Your poem speaks the truth.
August 20th, 2024 12:30
grey
MR.apocalypse said:
i think you would really enjoy some of my work we seem to have the same writing style and toipcs i will check some more of yours out
August 20th, 2024 11:35
MR.apocalypse said:
i think you would really enjoy some of my work we seem to have the same writing style and toipcs i will check some more of yours out
August 20th, 2024 11:35
grey
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that accompanies depression and the images that go along as well so nicely laid out in images. Very nice
August 20th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that accompanies depression and the images that go along as well so nicely laid out in images. Very nice
August 20th, 2024 06:15
A moment
Thoughtless said:
If a picture is worth a thousand words, a good poem is worth more than a thousand pictures.
August 14th, 2024 13:20
Thoughtless said:
If a picture is worth a thousand words, a good poem is worth more than a thousand pictures.
August 14th, 2024 13:20
nothing worth seeing?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad commentary on the state of the world. Well written and in good style
August 14th, 2024 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad commentary on the state of the world. Well written and in good style
August 14th, 2024 09:04
A moment
sorenbarrett said:
I think you have captured the essence of poetry in this. Lovely
August 12th, 2024 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
I think you have captured the essence of poetry in this. Lovely
August 12th, 2024 14:47
Sitting
sorenbarrett said:
It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray. Well done.
August 11th, 2024 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray. Well done.
August 11th, 2024 20:01
A Rosewood Table
sorenbarrett said:
The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk top or as a metaphor of a past life as in the last line makes this work well. The vivid description and images enhances its power.
August 10th, 2024 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk top or as a metaphor of a past life as in the last line makes this work well. The vivid description and images enhances its power.
August 10th, 2024 15:49
A Rosewood Table
xqw said:
I just did what felt right in the formatting it might look weird tho srry
August 10th, 2024 14:26
xqw said:
I just did what felt right in the formatting it might look weird tho srry
August 10th, 2024 14:26
Blankets
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket metaphor ingenious that served so well the poem. This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness that is revealed and punctuated by reserving its revelation until the last line. Brilliant!!
August 9th, 2024 06:00
Blankets
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Cassie58 said:
A blanket is supposed to offer warmth and comfort. Sad to think of a blanket covering the dead. A poignant write, nicely composed.
August 9th, 2024 04:26
Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the edge of his seat until the last line that leaves a heavy feeling in the heart. Loved the use of light in the ending breath.
August 7th, 2024 09:28
