Comments received on poems by xqw
What do I do
Poetic Licence said:
A conflict of emotions knowing it can never be the same but unable to make the final break, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
A conflict of emotions knowing it can never be the same but unable to make the final break, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:14
What do I do
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotional confusion where two are torn apart but can\'t bring themselves to leave. Heart rending in the emotion evoked.
March 11th, 2025 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotional confusion where two are torn apart but can\'t bring themselves to leave. Heart rending in the emotion evoked.
March 11th, 2025 16:57
i stay
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery as you read this well written write, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:09
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely imagery as you read this well written write, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:09
i stay
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of (I could but I don\'t) A very nicely imaged poem
March 9th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of (I could but I don\'t) A very nicely imaged poem
March 9th, 2025 15:56
snap of a second
Poetic Licence said:
Appreciate what you have now because it can disappear so quickly, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
Appreciate what you have now because it can disappear so quickly, enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 03:18
the feeling noone feels
Poetic Licence said:
A well crafted write with lovely imagery, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
A well crafted write with lovely imagery, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 03:19
the feeling noone feels
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of space, nothingness to create an atmosphere and that hush gives feeling to this poem. A lovely write expressed in such great images. Lovely!
February 26th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely use of space, nothingness to create an atmosphere and that hush gives feeling to this poem. A lovely write expressed in such great images. Lovely!
February 26th, 2025 16:14
I hate words
NafisaSB said:
i think you did the impossible - you just used them to describe what you feel- so keep writing
February 24th, 2025 00:09
NafisaSB said:
i think you did the impossible - you just used them to describe what you feel- so keep writing
February 24th, 2025 00:09
I hate words
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images presented in a most unique third person manner. Very nicely said.
February 23rd, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images presented in a most unique third person manner. Very nicely said.
February 23rd, 2025 16:46
I hate words
Poetic Licence said:
Some have become unjumbled in this write, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 15:54
Poetic Licence said:
Some have become unjumbled in this write, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 15:54
A country filled with poppies
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted piece of writing, i cannot think of any other single beautiful item that has been used to bring mass, pain, misery, addiction, murder, destroyed countries and so on in the world. Enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted piece of writing, i cannot think of any other single beautiful item that has been used to bring mass, pain, misery, addiction, murder, destroyed countries and so on in the world. Enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:21
A country filled with poppies
arqios said:
Always thought that interesting for a bloom of such representation to be the source of opiates as well, varieties of it, that is. Where morphine and codeine play a significant role in ongoing battlefields and also after where dependence and addiction prevail. Itβs not far fetched to visualise such countries. ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 17:09
arqios said:
Always thought that interesting for a bloom of such representation to be the source of opiates as well, varieties of it, that is. Where morphine and codeine play a significant role in ongoing battlefields and also after where dependence and addiction prevail. Itβs not far fetched to visualise such countries. ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 17:09
Reality hits
Poetic Licence said:
We each have our views on what is reality and what is not, depending on our situations, circumstances, feelings etc at the time, and a lot of the time we adjust our perception of reality to fit in with our current view or situation, which i guess poses the questions you ask, what is real reality. A very enjoyable read.
January 7th, 2025 11:17
Poetic Licence said:
We each have our views on what is reality and what is not, depending on our situations, circumstances, feelings etc at the time, and a lot of the time we adjust our perception of reality to fit in with our current view or situation, which i guess poses the questions you ask, what is real reality. A very enjoyable read.
January 7th, 2025 11:17
Keep going
rin said:
I don\'t think there are people who love me or need me, but there are people I want to love and need.
January 7th, 2025 09:47
rin said:
I don\'t think there are people who love me or need me, but there are people I want to love and need.
January 7th, 2025 09:47
Chasing the sunset
rin said:
Perhaps that is what lies at the end of continuing to live.
January 7th, 2025 09:44
rin said:
Perhaps that is what lies at the end of continuing to live.
January 7th, 2025 09:44
Sorry for Christmas
Mr. Not said:
Sometimes balancing everything is hard, hope you\'re doing well.
January 6th, 2025 13:17
Mr. Not said:
Sometimes balancing everything is hard, hope you\'re doing well.
January 6th, 2025 13:17
Keep going
Cassie58 said:
Such an upbeat poem. So much encouragement in the words offered to anyone having a doldrums day. Much enjoyed.
January 4th, 2025 22:48
Cassie58 said:
Such an upbeat poem. So much encouragement in the words offered to anyone having a doldrums day. Much enjoyed.
January 4th, 2025 22:48
Keep going
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the encouraging words, my friend! Needed them this evening! Well done on the poem! πΉπ
January 4th, 2025 19:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the encouraging words, my friend! Needed them this evening! Well done on the poem! πΉπ
January 4th, 2025 19:22
Keep going
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece of positive uplifting writing, which all should read. Hope you have an amazing day as well
January 4th, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece of positive uplifting writing, which all should read. Hope you have an amazing day as well
January 4th, 2025 10:59
Sorry for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
Overcome by the Christmas spirit and all of its busyness. Iβve had this feeling many times and found this poem to be a fun read.
December 25th, 2024 03:21
sorenbarrett said:
Overcome by the Christmas spirit and all of its busyness. Iβve had this feeling many times and found this poem to be a fun read.
December 25th, 2024 03:21
Sorry for Christmas
Poetic Licence said:
I understand the feeling behind this writing
December 25th, 2024 01:41
Poetic Licence said:
I understand the feeling behind this writing
December 25th, 2024 01:41
just taking a breather
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.
September 8th, 2024 15:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.
September 8th, 2024 15:22
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