Comments received on poems by xqw



What do I do
Poetic Licence said:

A conflict of emotions knowing it can never be the same but unable to make the final break, nicely expressed

March 12th, 2025 03:14

What do I do
sorenbarrett said:



March 11th, 2025 16:57

What do I do
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of emotional confusion where two are torn apart but can\'t bring themselves to leave. Heart rending in the emotion evoked.

March 11th, 2025 16:57

i stay
Poetic Licence said:

Lovely imagery as you read this well written write, enjoyed the read

March 10th, 2025 03:09

i stay
sorenbarrett said:

A great write of (I could but I don\'t) A very nicely imaged poem

March 9th, 2025 15:56

snap of a second
Poetic Licence said:

Appreciate what you have now because it can disappear so quickly, enjoyed the read

March 9th, 2025 03:18

the feeling noone feels
Poetic Licence said:

A well crafted write with lovely imagery, enjoyed the read

February 27th, 2025 03:19

the feeling noone feels
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely use of space, nothingness to create an atmosphere and that hush gives feeling to this poem. A lovely write expressed in such great images. Lovely!

February 26th, 2025 16:14

I hate words
NafisaSB said:

i think you did the impossible - you just used them to describe what you feel- so keep writing

February 24th, 2025 00:09

I hate words
sorenbarrett said:

Vivid images presented in a most unique third person manner. Very nicely said.

February 23rd, 2025 16:46

I hate words
Poetic Licence said:

Some have become unjumbled in this write, enjoyed the read

February 23rd, 2025 15:54

free
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 28th, 2025 19:55

A country filled with poppies
Poetic Licence said:

A very well crafted piece of writing, i cannot think of any other single beautiful item that has been used to bring mass, pain, misery, addiction, murder, destroyed countries and so on in the world. Enjoyed the read

January 23rd, 2025 17:21

A country filled with poppies
arqios said:

Always thought that interesting for a bloom of such representation to be the source of opiates as well, varieties of it, that is. Where morphine and codeine play a significant role in ongoing battlefields and also after where dependence and addiction prevail. It’s not far fetched to visualise such countries. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 17:09

In the past
Poetic Licence said:

I enjoyed the read

January 12th, 2025 11:53

Reality hits
Poetic Licence said:

We each have our views on what is reality and what is not, depending on our situations, circumstances, feelings etc at the time, and a lot of the time we adjust our perception of reality to fit in with our current view or situation, which i guess poses the questions you ask, what is real reality. A very enjoyable read.

January 7th, 2025 11:17

Reality hits
arqios said:

By any means we shall survive! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 7th, 2025 10:15

Keep going
rin said:

I don\'t think there are people who love me or need me, but there are people I want to love and need.

January 7th, 2025 09:47

Chasing the sunset
rin said:

Perhaps that is what lies at the end of continuing to live.

January 7th, 2025 09:44

Sorry for Christmas
Mr. Not said:

Sometimes balancing everything is hard, hope you\'re doing well.

January 6th, 2025 13:17

Keep going
Cassie58 said:

Such an upbeat poem. So much encouragement in the words offered to anyone having a doldrums day. Much enjoyed.

January 4th, 2025 22:48

Keep going
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2025 20:48

Keep going
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love the encouraging words, my friend! Needed them this evening! Well done on the poem! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 4th, 2025 19:22

Keep going
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely piece of positive uplifting writing, which all should read. Hope you have an amazing day as well

January 4th, 2025 10:59

Sorry for Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

Overcome by the Christmas spirit and all of its busyness. I’ve had this feeling many times and found this poem to be a fun read.

December 25th, 2024 03:21

Sorry for Christmas
Poetic Licence said:

I understand the feeling behind this writing

December 25th, 2024 01:41

I remember that night
2781 said:

It\'s that second death: we should fear.

November 22nd, 2024 22:27

time
Tony36 said:

Love it

September 21st, 2024 17:19

time
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 21st, 2024 17:18

just taking a breather
Cheeky Missy said:

Precisely, yet, your similes add such finesse to the seemingly commonplace injunction. Lovely and subtly poignant.

September 8th, 2024 15:22

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