Comments received on poems by xqw



I wish the world could disappear
sorenbarrett said:

We all wish this from time to time. A fun read

September 17th, 2025 18:12

I wish the world could disappear
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:

Raw and powerful captures deep isolation and the desire to disappear.
This is sad, hope everything is well

September 17th, 2025 17:33

Let the hour turn by
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed time wasted on strife and games let the hour turn in peace. Nicely done

September 1st, 2025 17:02

We love the broken
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 25th, 2025 06:36

We love the broken
Poetic Licence said:

A clever write, sometimes you have to look into the cracks to find out what\'s really going on, enjoyed the read

June 24th, 2025 22:50

We love the broken
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely penned in metaphor the images well defined and left to the mind as to how it applies to each poet.

June 24th, 2025 13:13

03 17
Poetic Licence said:

Residing in that empty space where we question what is real and what is not, nicely expressed and written

May 26th, 2025 02:19

03 17
sorenbarrett said:

Between sleep and wakefulness a hypnogogic state where things no longer feel real. A lovely write

May 25th, 2025 19:42

I live in the shadows of cities
Poetic Licence said:

A well written write highlighting we are made of many different things, nicely done

May 18th, 2025 02:26

I live in the shadows of cities
sorenbarrett said:

We are all things a beautiful poem about how we are made up of everything and are everything. Love the poem

May 17th, 2025 17:29

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
sunshine777 said:

Absolutely

April 27th, 2025 18:35

Life
sorenbarrett said:

This poem presents life as all things and is most thought provoking.

April 26th, 2025 06:22

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
NafisaSB said:

yes it definitely would
short, concise and powerful message

April 14th, 2025 23:50

half open half closed eyes
Poetic Licence said:

In-between life and death, nicely expressed

April 12th, 2025 09:32

half open half closed eyes
sorenbarrett said:

We equate life with eyes open and death with closed eyes very nicely penned

April 12th, 2025 07:10

half open half closed eyes
Mourgana of the Fey said:

This is an intriguing poem half open half closed is perhaps a way of keeping in touch with the transformation of life and death. A multi layered piece!

April 12th, 2025 05:40

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 11th, 2025 16:03

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
spilleronsheet said:

And then it was, what it was..when silence spoke…nice write dear poet

April 11th, 2025 14:33

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
sorenbarrett said:

Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be nice if we put to action that would be true poetry. A wonderful short that deserves a fave

April 11th, 2025 05:48

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
Poetic Licence said:

As they say sometimes less or more and its not the quantity its the quality that counts, a lovely write

April 11th, 2025 05:11

wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
Cheeky Missy said:

We do. We forever do.

April 11th, 2025 04:47

little me
Poetic Licence said:

A beautifully written write of the story of the little people, enjoyed the read

April 10th, 2025 02:09

little me
sorenbarrett said:

Poetically written this tells its story. Very nice a fave

April 9th, 2025 15:08

little me
NinjaGirl said:

little me didn\'t worry so much...I miss those days!

April 9th, 2025 14:14

A mellow poem
Poetic Licence said:

Just a chilling day, enjoyed the read

April 3rd, 2025 10:38

A mellow poem
sorenbarrett said:

The opening line reminds me of a song by Donovan (Mellow Yellow) A calming set of words. Nicely penned

April 3rd, 2025 07:22

isn\'t is weird
Poetic Licence said:

So true, to some appearance is everything, enjoyed the read

April 1st, 2025 02:06

isn\'t is weird
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 31st, 2025 20:30

isn\'t is weird
sorenbarrett said:

True and talks to character that our appearance to others is more important than what we think of ourselves. Well written

March 31st, 2025 15:51

i could never be a parent
RSM0812 said:

It\'s funny how some memories you can\'t let go of no matter how hard you try.

March 29th, 2025 11:12

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