Comments received on poems by xqw
wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
NafisaSB said:
yes it definitely would
short, concise and powerful message
April 14th, 2025 23:50
NafisaSB said:
yes it definitely would
short, concise and powerful message
April 14th, 2025 23:50
half open half closed eyes
Poetic Licence said:
In-between life and death, nicely expressed
April 12th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
In-between life and death, nicely expressed
April 12th, 2025 09:32
half open half closed eyes
sorenbarrett said:
We equate life with eyes open and death with closed eyes very nicely penned
April 12th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
We equate life with eyes open and death with closed eyes very nicely penned
April 12th, 2025 07:10
half open half closed eyes
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This is an intriguing poem half open half closed is perhaps a way of keeping in touch with the transformation of life and death. A multi layered piece!
April 12th, 2025 05:40
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This is an intriguing poem half open half closed is perhaps a way of keeping in touch with the transformation of life and death. A multi layered piece!
April 12th, 2025 05:40
wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
spilleronsheet said:
And then it was, what it was..when silence spoke…nice write dear poet
April 11th, 2025 14:33
spilleronsheet said:
And then it was, what it was..when silence spoke…nice write dear poet
April 11th, 2025 14:33
wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
sorenbarrett said:
Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be nice if we put to action that would be true poetry. A wonderful short that deserves a fave
April 11th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be nice if we put to action that would be true poetry. A wonderful short that deserves a fave
April 11th, 2025 05:48
wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
Poetic Licence said:
As they say sometimes less or more and its not the quantity its the quality that counts, a lovely write
April 11th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
As they say sometimes less or more and its not the quantity its the quality that counts, a lovely write
April 11th, 2025 05:11
wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku
Cheeky Missy said:
We do. We forever do.
April 11th, 2025 04:47
Cheeky Missy said:
We do. We forever do.
April 11th, 2025 04:47
little me
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write of the story of the little people, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:09
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write of the story of the little people, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:09
little me
sorenbarrett said:
Poetically written this tells its story. Very nice a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
Poetically written this tells its story. Very nice a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:08
A mellow poem
sorenbarrett said:
The opening line reminds me of a song by Donovan (Mellow Yellow) A calming set of words. Nicely penned
April 3rd, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
The opening line reminds me of a song by Donovan (Mellow Yellow) A calming set of words. Nicely penned
April 3rd, 2025 07:22
isn\'t is weird
Poetic Licence said:
So true, to some appearance is everything, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 02:06
Poetic Licence said:
So true, to some appearance is everything, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 02:06
isn\'t is weird
sorenbarrett said:
True and talks to character that our appearance to others is more important than what we think of ourselves. Well written
March 31st, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
True and talks to character that our appearance to others is more important than what we think of ourselves. Well written
March 31st, 2025 15:51
i could never be a parent
RSM0812 said:
It\'s funny how some memories you can\'t let go of no matter how hard you try.
March 29th, 2025 11:12
RSM0812 said:
It\'s funny how some memories you can\'t let go of no matter how hard you try.
March 29th, 2025 11:12
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
Defining oneself by racism is a tough go. A good read.
March 27th, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Defining oneself by racism is a tough go. A good read.
March 27th, 2025 16:53
the small things
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that speaks what one things and feels. Brave.
March 26th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that speaks what one things and feels. Brave.
March 26th, 2025 16:46
i could never be a parent
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, funny you say so, cuz Dad refused to join Mum and my two oldest brothers at the dining room table that day the three decided to inform my father and I that we were too much alike, akin to two peas in a pod. The most interesting fact after that was how he used to seemingly unconsciously choose the things I reserved for myself. I never considered how a kid of my own would look at me, finding it sufficiently fascinating in high school when grade schoolers looked up to me with the respect adults knew, me feeling forever too much like a kid. But enough.
This pretty number is delightfully expressive, rendering effectively in brevity a haunting reality, none too subtly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 00:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, funny you say so, cuz Dad refused to join Mum and my two oldest brothers at the dining room table that day the three decided to inform my father and I that we were too much alike, akin to two peas in a pod. The most interesting fact after that was how he used to seemingly unconsciously choose the things I reserved for myself. I never considered how a kid of my own would look at me, finding it sufficiently fascinating in high school when grade schoolers looked up to me with the respect adults knew, me feeling forever too much like a kid. But enough.
This pretty number is delightfully expressive, rendering effectively in brevity a haunting reality, none too subtly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 00:13
i could never be a parent
arqios said:
Valid reason, that’s quite a situation there. And when I did become a parent it all changed in a moment.
March 24th, 2025 17:46
arqios said:
Valid reason, that’s quite a situation there. And when I did become a parent it all changed in a moment.
March 24th, 2025 17:46
i could never be a parent
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings expressed here. Nicely done
March 24th, 2025 17:37
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings expressed here. Nicely done
March 24th, 2025 17:37
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Poetic Licence said:
A clever write with deeper meaning then you first think, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write with deeper meaning then you first think, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 03:11
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sorenbarrett said:
Lovely whether taken literally or as I did metaphorically it strikes deep and means more. A short but so well stated poetic thought a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely whether taken literally or as I did metaphorically it strikes deep and means more. A short but so well stated poetic thought a definite fave
March 23rd, 2025 14:48
I am
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of pain and suffering can be felt in this write,parents and family being the main source of that pain, sad read but well expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of pain and suffering can be felt in this write,parents and family being the main source of that pain, sad read but well expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:10
I am
sorenbarrett said:
Discontent and pain run through this poem seeing the past generations and parents as well as a source of hurt. Sad and dark this poem puts the cap on it by the last line. Well written in verse.
March 20th, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Discontent and pain run through this poem seeing the past generations and parents as well as a source of hurt. Sad and dark this poem puts the cap on it by the last line. Well written in verse.
March 20th, 2025 16:07
What do I do
Poetic Licence said:
A conflict of emotions knowing it can never be the same but unable to make the final break, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
A conflict of emotions knowing it can never be the same but unable to make the final break, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:14
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