Comments received on poems by Junes



The Tree That Grew Us All
Cheeky Missy said:

If you\'re his sister, I know how you feel. I blame my sister-in-laws. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

March 17th, 2025 17:52

The Tree That Grew Us All
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor of the strength of family ties and the unseen protection it gives. Most lovely

March 17th, 2025 07:03

The Tree That Grew Us All
Poetic Licence said:

Family is always family, a nice write about being drawn away from the family you came from and supported you, I think a lot of people will relate to this, nicely written

March 17th, 2025 06:20

The Flower and Me.
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

February 28th, 2025 08:31

The Flower and Me.
Poetic Licence said:

A very touching and heartfelt feeling as you read the feelings of someone who is in love on a one way street, well written and expressed

February 28th, 2025 07:38

The Flower and Me.
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful write that touches the heart and for that I give it a fave. However that is not all. The meter and wording in the poem give it a very romantic feel and the theme of unrequited love is perfect. Brilliant!

February 28th, 2025 04:21

Please Notice Me
Cassie58 said:

And if he doesn’t notice you, you will still stand tall and be free , but in the meantime there is hope that it might happen. Believe. A lovely little poem. Thank you.

February 21st, 2025 12:28

Please Notice Me
Poetic Licence said:

You get the message i am here if you want me, if not I will just get on with my life, enjoyed the read

February 21st, 2025 06:00

Please Notice Me
sorenbarrett said:

Aspiration ring out in this poem, hope lingers but despite it all a resolve to be oneself and this should be enough. Lovely

February 21st, 2025 05:44

Almost
sorenbarrett said:

The combination of rhyme, rhythm, word choice and timing in the build made this an enjoyable read deserving a fave

February 19th, 2025 04:34

Almost
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write, very well expressed

February 19th, 2025 03:03

Chemtrails Over My Mind
Poetic Licence said:

So much to do and so much to want, yet so little time to achieve, enjoyed the read

February 11th, 2025 08:39

Lost in Myself
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 6th, 2025 09:40

Lost in Myself
2781 said:

Not a med problem? I know all problems are internal, and eternal.
May you find your way.

January 6th, 2025 05:22

Lost in Myself
Poetic Licence said:

A sad and touching piece of writing about their struggles with dealing with the past and at the moment it is holding them prisoner. If you can still dream a little than there is hope that eventually the pain will start to heal, well written piece.

January 6th, 2025 04:52

Lost in Myself
Caring dove said:

That’s a sad way to feel ..

January 6th, 2025 04:06

One Day
Poetic Licence said:

sad and poignant poem on expectation of incoming heartbreak, tenderly written

December 26th, 2024 13:07

One Day
Cassie58 said:

A blue heart in waiting. Anticipating the final heartbreak. A sad poem. Love can be sad too. Thank you Junes.

December 26th, 2024 11:51

Dark Room
arial said:

Thinking about the colors on a black curtained canvas isn\'t a sign of ending rather a fresh start of innovation..so next time..in your room..try it..

December 19th, 2024 19:15

Dark Room
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 19th, 2024 10:31