Comments received on poems by FrasMac



Home Alone
arqios said:

It does appear to be a closed loop and dismal circuit, the man that is an island. Proper reading today, for which much pleasure is derived. Have an excellent weekend!🕊️🙏

June 20th, 2026 21:01

Home Alone
sorenbarrett said:

He must be the only man in the house. A good write where no one ever seems to be content.

June 20th, 2026 11:01

Home Alone
Friendship said:

Well written

June 20th, 2026 09:48

The call of lost friends
Cheeky Missy said:

I do so cherish our plovers here. They like to cry even in the dead of night. The last summer my mother and I had together I watched the plovers. Their call holds so much for me. Thank you for sharing.

June 7th, 2026 20:41

The call of lost friends
sorenbarrett said:

There are certain bird calls that bring back memories and some that I will never forget although it has been over fifty years since I have heard it. Well written

June 7th, 2026 15:18

Hamish McAngus
Doggerel Dave said:

So this bonnie lad ignores his bonnie mum’s advice and plunges into the loch to ask some of the most existential questions ever confronting mankind, returns to the shore having found enlightenment into the arms of his long lost mum now residing in ’tother place.
As a Sassenach, \'hope I’ve come close to understanding the deep meaning underlying this rollicking yarn.
Greatly enjoyed.😊


May 21st, 2026 18:23

Hamish McAngus
arqios said:

Superb piece FrasMac; most definitely a Fave 🙏🕊️

May 21st, 2026 15:33

Hamish McAngus
sorenbarrett said:

I love this tale and the language that accompanies it. Very nicely written it made me smile and caught my imagination which is all it takes to get a fave from me.

May 21st, 2026 14:17

Hamish McAngus
Friendship said:

Nicely written story

May 21st, 2026 12:54

Alive without you
Doggerel Dave said:

I found compassion for this person\'s situation. You succeeded there. Good of you to make clear that it was, however real it felt, an imagined situation. All too often here this is not made clear in what apparently may be serious circumstances

May 20th, 2026 17:55

Alive without you
sorenbarrett said:

When the meaning of life is gone it takes a different turn. Well written

May 20th, 2026 16:16

a little girl
FrasMac said:

Thanks both!

May 19th, 2026 12:14

a little girl
arqios said:

Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️

May 17th, 2026 19:14

a little girl
sorenbarrett said:

Honesty through the eyes of a child. Nicely written

May 17th, 2026 13:34

what they see
FrasMac said:

Thanks all for your very kind support!

May 17th, 2026 01:11

what they see
arqios said:

The axe wielding did it for me 🕊️🙏

May 13th, 2026 23:41

what they see
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful weaving of colors as well very nicely done

May 13th, 2026 17:24

what they see
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful. 🌹

May 13th, 2026 14:28

The Ant and the Woodlouse
FrasMac said:

Thanks everyone for the kind comments.


May 13th, 2026 11:32

The Ant and the Woodlouse
Dan Williams said:

Ants. Better organized and better society that we foolish humans; sill, we cal them the pests. Amen to this.

May 13th, 2026 02:41

The Ant and the Woodlouse
thinkerbell said:

Meaningful

May 13th, 2026 00:17

The Ant and the Woodlouse
sorenbarrett said:

A fable in a poem that has good rhyme and a message. There are different ways of dealing with adversity and with different results. Well done and a fave

May 11th, 2026 22:04

The Ant and the Woodlouse
arqios said:

We\'ve been taught and learnt about ants from time immemorial, but a louse is a louse just the sound of it is weighed with connotation. Magnificent read here, dear FrasMac 🕊️🙏🤩

May 11th, 2026 20:55

The Ant and the Woodlouse
Doggerel Dave said:

All bets are on - which strategy will win the day? I think my money is on the woodlouse who seems to adhere to the old maxim \'discretion is the better part of valour\'; the ant a boofhead who may achieve goals, however.
A deceptively simple poem provides nice philosophical issues. Thanks for that.

May 11th, 2026 17:28

The Ant and the Woodlouse
Friendship said:

nice write

May 11th, 2026 12:46

Once the wars are over
Thomas W Case said:

Feels like the aftermath talking—something ugly fed well and slipping back underground.
There’s a quiet dread in it, like you know it’s not over, just waiting for another hunger.

May 10th, 2026 07:28

Once the wars are over
Doggerel Dave said:

An asteroid the cause of the first mass extinction; mass suicide the second. (I may turn this into a short pin later - your preview!)

Neat write.

May 8th, 2026 19:15

Once the wars are over
sorenbarrett said:

Supernatural in a sense this poem seems surreal as well. Nicely said

May 8th, 2026 15:52

Once the wars are over
Paul Bell said:

Mans best friend, war.
Though we better watch out, all those machines we\'re training to kill, might just bite us on the bum when they become super robots.

May 8th, 2026 10:50

Squeaky Shoe
arqios said:

Had one of those so many years ago, patent leather I think it was made of. 🕊️🙏

May 7th, 2026 23:54

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