Comments received on poems by FrasMac
The Green Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Spring arrived when the Green Man cast his spell, and fertility was assured.
I enjoyed the simplicity of the tale.
July 29th, 2026 01:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Spring arrived when the Green Man cast his spell, and fertility was assured.
I enjoyed the simplicity of the tale.
July 29th, 2026 01:37
The Green Man
Cheeky Missy said:
How very lovely! What a charming illustration of that season known for ages as the time for love and courtship. How beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delicacy which befits the same, its poignancy like a butterfly, waltzing. Thank you very much for sharing.
July 28th, 2026 16:44
Cheeky Missy said:
How very lovely! What a charming illustration of that season known for ages as the time for love and courtship. How beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delicacy which befits the same, its poignancy like a butterfly, waltzing. Thank you very much for sharing.
July 28th, 2026 16:44
The Green Man
arqios said:
Nice. Brought me to visions of Green Peace and Marvin the Martian. But that’s just me 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2026 15:49
arqios said:
Nice. Brought me to visions of Green Peace and Marvin the Martian. But that’s just me 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2026 15:49
The Green Man
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely myth told so nicely with a most enthralling ending to each phrase an ing adjective to each. Well done and a fave
July 28th, 2026 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely myth told so nicely with a most enthralling ending to each phrase an ing adjective to each. Well done and a fave
July 28th, 2026 13:45
The train home
Cheeky Missy said:
Absolutely gorgeous. Oh how I love it! How you managed to cull the countryside in a twinkling yet so very beautifully, I dunno. But the emphasis is clear, the contrast stark and striking, the refreshment lively and too real. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Absolutely gorgeous. Oh how I love it! How you managed to cull the countryside in a twinkling yet so very beautifully, I dunno. But the emphasis is clear, the contrast stark and striking, the refreshment lively and too real. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 24th, 2026 19:01
The train home
arqios said:
An excellent prize indeed. Brought me back to the film “bus hero” that although is in a different register was big on the journey and its reward and compelling nature. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 24th, 2026 18:04
arqios said:
An excellent prize indeed. Brought me back to the film “bus hero” that although is in a different register was big on the journey and its reward and compelling nature. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 24th, 2026 18:04
The train home
Doggerel Dave said:
The rural idyll after the big smoke. Enjoyed the train ride very much; grateful for the industry and mechanisation which created it - though I doubt the folks which witnessed its introduction felt the same way.
Good journey; thanks for the write.
July 24th, 2026 15:41
Doggerel Dave said:
The rural idyll after the big smoke. Enjoyed the train ride very much; grateful for the industry and mechanisation which created it - though I doubt the folks which witnessed its introduction felt the same way.
Good journey; thanks for the write.
July 24th, 2026 15:41
The train home
sorenbarrett said:
Here seems to be the place it has it all. Nicely done the meter feels like a train moving down the tracks
July 24th, 2026 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Here seems to be the place it has it all. Nicely done the meter feels like a train moving down the tracks
July 24th, 2026 14:39
Legends
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its dialect in place and the details of custom and sites as well as history. It rolls off the tongue and is musical as the pipes. Loved it a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem with its dialect in place and the details of custom and sites as well as history. It rolls off the tongue and is musical as the pipes. Loved it a fave
July 19th, 2026 07:15
Legends
arqios said:
FrasMac, your poem carries that rare mix of humour, grit, and affection that only someone speaking from inside a place can manage; the rain, the midges, the monsters, the politics, the stubbornness — all of it becomes a kind of living folklore in your hands, and beneath the jokes there’s a genuine warmth for a country that’s rough, loud, myth‑heavy, and still fiercely welcoming, which is what gives Legends their staying power. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:19
arqios said:
FrasMac, your poem carries that rare mix of humour, grit, and affection that only someone speaking from inside a place can manage; the rain, the midges, the monsters, the politics, the stubbornness — all of it becomes a kind of living folklore in your hands, and beneath the jokes there’s a genuine warmth for a country that’s rough, loud, myth‑heavy, and still fiercely welcoming, which is what gives Legends their staying power. 🙏🕊️
July 19th, 2026 05:19
Whatever happened to Treebeard?
arqios said:
The Lorax isn\'t quite as large as Fangorn 🕊️🙏
July 14th, 2026 04:31
arqios said:
The Lorax isn\'t quite as large as Fangorn 🕊️🙏
July 14th, 2026 04:31
Whatever happened to Treebeard?
Doggerel Dave said:
That wooden doorframe was once a tree and had feelings too?
July 13th, 2026 16:37
Doggerel Dave said:
That wooden doorframe was once a tree and had feelings too?
July 13th, 2026 16:37
Whatever happened to Treebeard?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and very nicely worded and rhymed. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and very nicely worded and rhymed. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:34
Home Alone
arqios said:
It does appear to be a closed loop and dismal circuit, the man that is an island. Proper reading today, for which much pleasure is derived. Have an excellent weekend!🕊️🙏
June 20th, 2026 21:01
arqios said:
It does appear to be a closed loop and dismal circuit, the man that is an island. Proper reading today, for which much pleasure is derived. Have an excellent weekend!🕊️🙏
June 20th, 2026 21:01
Home Alone
sorenbarrett said:
He must be the only man in the house. A good write where no one ever seems to be content.
June 20th, 2026 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
He must be the only man in the house. A good write where no one ever seems to be content.
June 20th, 2026 11:01
The call of lost friends
Cheeky Missy said:
I do so cherish our plovers here. They like to cry even in the dead of night. The last summer my mother and I had together I watched the plovers. Their call holds so much for me. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2026 20:41
Cheeky Missy said:
I do so cherish our plovers here. They like to cry even in the dead of night. The last summer my mother and I had together I watched the plovers. Their call holds so much for me. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2026 20:41
The call of lost friends
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain bird calls that bring back memories and some that I will never forget although it has been over fifty years since I have heard it. Well written
June 7th, 2026 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain bird calls that bring back memories and some that I will never forget although it has been over fifty years since I have heard it. Well written
June 7th, 2026 15:18
Hamish McAngus
Doggerel Dave said:
So this bonnie lad ignores his bonnie mum’s advice and plunges into the loch to ask some of the most existential questions ever confronting mankind, returns to the shore having found enlightenment into the arms of his long lost mum now residing in ’tother place.
As a Sassenach, \'hope I’ve come close to understanding the deep meaning underlying this rollicking yarn.
Greatly enjoyed.😊
May 21st, 2026 18:23
Doggerel Dave said:
So this bonnie lad ignores his bonnie mum’s advice and plunges into the loch to ask some of the most existential questions ever confronting mankind, returns to the shore having found enlightenment into the arms of his long lost mum now residing in ’tother place.
As a Sassenach, \'hope I’ve come close to understanding the deep meaning underlying this rollicking yarn.
Greatly enjoyed.😊
May 21st, 2026 18:23
Hamish McAngus
sorenbarrett said:
I love this tale and the language that accompanies it. Very nicely written it made me smile and caught my imagination which is all it takes to get a fave from me.
May 21st, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
I love this tale and the language that accompanies it. Very nicely written it made me smile and caught my imagination which is all it takes to get a fave from me.
May 21st, 2026 14:17
Alive without you
Doggerel Dave said:
I found compassion for this person\'s situation. You succeeded there. Good of you to make clear that it was, however real it felt, an imagined situation. All too often here this is not made clear in what apparently may be serious circumstances
May 20th, 2026 17:55
Doggerel Dave said:
I found compassion for this person\'s situation. You succeeded there. Good of you to make clear that it was, however real it felt, an imagined situation. All too often here this is not made clear in what apparently may be serious circumstances
May 20th, 2026 17:55
Alive without you
sorenbarrett said:
When the meaning of life is gone it takes a different turn. Well written
May 20th, 2026 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
When the meaning of life is gone it takes a different turn. Well written
May 20th, 2026 16:16
a little girl
arqios said:
Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️
May 17th, 2026 19:14
arqios said:
Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️
May 17th, 2026 19:14
a little girl
sorenbarrett said:
Honesty through the eyes of a child. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Honesty through the eyes of a child. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 13:34
what they see
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weaving of colors as well very nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weaving of colors as well very nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:24
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