Comments received on poems by FrasMac
Hamish McAngus
Doggerel Dave said:
So this bonnie lad ignores his bonnie mum’s advice and plunges into the loch to ask some of the most existential questions ever confronting mankind, returns to the shore having found enlightenment into the arms of his long lost mum now residing in ’tother place.
As a Sassenach, \'hope I’ve come close to understanding the deep meaning underlying this rollicking yarn.
Greatly enjoyed.😊
May 21st, 2026 18:23
Doggerel Dave said:
So this bonnie lad ignores his bonnie mum’s advice and plunges into the loch to ask some of the most existential questions ever confronting mankind, returns to the shore having found enlightenment into the arms of his long lost mum now residing in ’tother place.
As a Sassenach, \'hope I’ve come close to understanding the deep meaning underlying this rollicking yarn.
Greatly enjoyed.😊
May 21st, 2026 18:23
Hamish McAngus
sorenbarrett said:
I love this tale and the language that accompanies it. Very nicely written it made me smile and caught my imagination which is all it takes to get a fave from me.
May 21st, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
I love this tale and the language that accompanies it. Very nicely written it made me smile and caught my imagination which is all it takes to get a fave from me.
May 21st, 2026 14:17
Alive without you
Doggerel Dave said:
I found compassion for this person\'s situation. You succeeded there. Good of you to make clear that it was, however real it felt, an imagined situation. All too often here this is not made clear in what apparently may be serious circumstances
May 20th, 2026 17:55
Doggerel Dave said:
I found compassion for this person\'s situation. You succeeded there. Good of you to make clear that it was, however real it felt, an imagined situation. All too often here this is not made clear in what apparently may be serious circumstances
May 20th, 2026 17:55
Alive without you
sorenbarrett said:
When the meaning of life is gone it takes a different turn. Well written
May 20th, 2026 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
When the meaning of life is gone it takes a different turn. Well written
May 20th, 2026 16:16
a little girl
arqios said:
Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️
May 17th, 2026 19:14
arqios said:
Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️
May 17th, 2026 19:14
a little girl
sorenbarrett said:
Honesty through the eyes of a child. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Honesty through the eyes of a child. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 13:34
what they see
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weaving of colors as well very nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weaving of colors as well very nicely done
May 13th, 2026 17:24
The Ant and the Woodlouse
Dan Williams said:
Ants. Better organized and better society that we foolish humans; sill, we cal them the pests. Amen to this.
May 13th, 2026 02:41
Dan Williams said:
Ants. Better organized and better society that we foolish humans; sill, we cal them the pests. Amen to this.
May 13th, 2026 02:41
The Ant and the Woodlouse
sorenbarrett said:
A fable in a poem that has good rhyme and a message. There are different ways of dealing with adversity and with different results. Well done and a fave
May 11th, 2026 22:04
sorenbarrett said:
A fable in a poem that has good rhyme and a message. There are different ways of dealing with adversity and with different results. Well done and a fave
May 11th, 2026 22:04
The Ant and the Woodlouse
arqios said:
We\'ve been taught and learnt about ants from time immemorial, but a louse is a louse just the sound of it is weighed with connotation. Magnificent read here, dear FrasMac 🕊️🙏🤩
May 11th, 2026 20:55
arqios said:
We\'ve been taught and learnt about ants from time immemorial, but a louse is a louse just the sound of it is weighed with connotation. Magnificent read here, dear FrasMac 🕊️🙏🤩
May 11th, 2026 20:55
The Ant and the Woodlouse
Doggerel Dave said:
All bets are on - which strategy will win the day? I think my money is on the woodlouse who seems to adhere to the old maxim \'discretion is the better part of valour\'; the ant a boofhead who may achieve goals, however.
A deceptively simple poem provides nice philosophical issues. Thanks for that.
May 11th, 2026 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
All bets are on - which strategy will win the day? I think my money is on the woodlouse who seems to adhere to the old maxim \'discretion is the better part of valour\'; the ant a boofhead who may achieve goals, however.
A deceptively simple poem provides nice philosophical issues. Thanks for that.
May 11th, 2026 17:28
Once the wars are over
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like the aftermath talking—something ugly fed well and slipping back underground.
There’s a quiet dread in it, like you know it’s not over, just waiting for another hunger.
May 10th, 2026 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like the aftermath talking—something ugly fed well and slipping back underground.
There’s a quiet dread in it, like you know it’s not over, just waiting for another hunger.
May 10th, 2026 07:28
Once the wars are over
Doggerel Dave said:
An asteroid the cause of the first mass extinction; mass suicide the second. (I may turn this into a short pin later - your preview!)
Neat write.
May 8th, 2026 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
An asteroid the cause of the first mass extinction; mass suicide the second. (I may turn this into a short pin later - your preview!)
Neat write.
May 8th, 2026 19:15
Once the wars are over
sorenbarrett said:
Supernatural in a sense this poem seems surreal as well. Nicely said
May 8th, 2026 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
Supernatural in a sense this poem seems surreal as well. Nicely said
May 8th, 2026 15:52
Once the wars are over
Paul Bell said:
Mans best friend, war.
Though we better watch out, all those machines we\'re training to kill, might just bite us on the bum when they become super robots.
May 8th, 2026 10:50
Paul Bell said:
Mans best friend, war.
Though we better watch out, all those machines we\'re training to kill, might just bite us on the bum when they become super robots.
May 8th, 2026 10:50
Squeaky Shoe
arqios said:
Had one of those so many years ago, patent leather I think it was made of. 🕊️🙏
May 7th, 2026 23:54
arqios said:
Had one of those so many years ago, patent leather I think it was made of. 🕊️🙏
May 7th, 2026 23:54
Squeaky Shoe
Doggerel Dave said:
Hop off and write another . Abbreviated tale which told a real story.
May 7th, 2026 18:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Hop off and write another . Abbreviated tale which told a real story.
May 7th, 2026 18:49
Squeaky Shoe
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and humorous what more can you want? Even a bit of rhyme and short too. It does haunt this shoe a fave
May 7th, 2026 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and humorous what more can you want? Even a bit of rhyme and short too. It does haunt this shoe a fave
May 7th, 2026 13:30
The Viagra Song
sorenbarrett said:
Brave and sexual but all in good fun. Hopefully for both. Well done
November 20th, 2025 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
Brave and sexual but all in good fun. Hopefully for both. Well done
November 20th, 2025 14:58
Presence
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great image the frost. The continuation of this image through that poem is perfect. The comparison of cold with emotion as well works so well. A really good poem that is a bit haunting and cold as well. A fave
November 17th, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great image the frost. The continuation of this image through that poem is perfect. The comparison of cold with emotion as well works so well. A really good poem that is a bit haunting and cold as well. A fave
November 17th, 2025 15:29
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