Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
New Generation.
Damaso said:
I\'ve heard that if young and old stay in touch with each other, they can move more quickly and comfortably among their peers. And this communication shapes culture. I really enjoyed the article. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 11:11
Damaso said:
I\'ve heard that if young and old stay in touch with each other, they can move more quickly and comfortably among their peers. And this communication shapes culture. I really enjoyed the article. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 11:11
New Generation.
Cheeky Missy said:
We try. However, most of our efforts seem proven futile, despite all. Expertly rendered in striking brevity with superb imagery and a taunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 11:05
Cheeky Missy said:
We try. However, most of our efforts seem proven futile, despite all. Expertly rendered in striking brevity with superb imagery and a taunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 11:05
New Generation.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Tobani. They have to live in the world we borrowed from them.
July 31st, 2025 06:09
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Tobani. They have to live in the world we borrowed from them.
July 31st, 2025 06:09
New Generation.
arqios said:
Situations change and generations adapt and are adopted by the new times.🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 05:43
arqios said:
Situations change and generations adapt and are adopted by the new times.🕊️🙏🏻
July 31st, 2025 05:43
New Generation.
Teddy.15 said:
Let\'s hope this new generation has a better attitude than we give credit for because I see a generation of influencers myself, let\'s hope the game will.chamge for the better. Great theme. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
Let\'s hope this new generation has a better attitude than we give credit for because I see a generation of influencers myself, let\'s hope the game will.chamge for the better. Great theme. 🌹
July 31st, 2025 03:37
New Generation.
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation speaks of how the next one is different, usually in a pejorative manner. This poem speaks of it changing the rules of the game. Nicely worded.
July 31st, 2025 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation speaks of how the next one is different, usually in a pejorative manner. This poem speaks of it changing the rules of the game. Nicely worded.
July 31st, 2025 03:24
Having a Bad Day.
Cheeky Missy said:
How on earth you manage to turn the rendition of an abominable dawn into a humorous perspective on reality is why James Thurber and etc were so popular. There\'s a subtle glimmer of laughter winking despite the dark and dire atmosphere, akin to a storm whose flashes both are ghastly in their light yet also have a twinkling note of a better morrow. Yes, that inexplicable ire which renders the passage of time in too many as cantankerous, and we\'re all privy to its influences sooner or later. How I want to put on the kettle for you and offer you a hearty cuppa Barry\'s to soothe the nameless irritant out of existence! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 12:03
Cheeky Missy said:
How on earth you manage to turn the rendition of an abominable dawn into a humorous perspective on reality is why James Thurber and etc were so popular. There\'s a subtle glimmer of laughter winking despite the dark and dire atmosphere, akin to a storm whose flashes both are ghastly in their light yet also have a twinkling note of a better morrow. Yes, that inexplicable ire which renders the passage of time in too many as cantankerous, and we\'re all privy to its influences sooner or later. How I want to put on the kettle for you and offer you a hearty cuppa Barry\'s to soothe the nameless irritant out of existence! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 12:03
Having a Bad Day.
Neville said:
Affective disorders & associated emotionality are write up my alley .. I know and understand where you are coming from .. Hold on to that insight & write on ..
I have no doubt there will be many who will or could very easily relate .. Have a wonderful week too buddy .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 11:01
Neville said:
Affective disorders & associated emotionality are write up my alley .. I know and understand where you are coming from .. Hold on to that insight & write on ..
I have no doubt there will be many who will or could very easily relate .. Have a wonderful week too buddy .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 11:01
Having a Bad Day.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this is unfiltered pain...laid bare without apology. As it should be. We should not be apologetic for feeling pain (something I need to remind myself). The repetition, the looping dread...it’s all too familiar. I love how are honest you are in the way you name what most people hide. This poem doesn’t ask for answers...just for someone to see. And I do, my friend. Hope that dark day is far behind you but if not, know I and many others are sending you our hug-filled love. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this is unfiltered pain...laid bare without apology. As it should be. We should not be apologetic for feeling pain (something I need to remind myself). The repetition, the looping dread...it’s all too familiar. I love how are honest you are in the way you name what most people hide. This poem doesn’t ask for answers...just for someone to see. And I do, my friend. Hope that dark day is far behind you but if not, know I and many others are sending you our hug-filled love. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:04
Having a Bad Day.
Friendship said:
Oh, Nataiella, hits a core.... your poem explores the theme of mental anguish, emotional turmoil, and the cyclical nature of depression. The Poet recounts a struggle with anger, irritability, and feelings of hopelessness, grappling with internal conflicts and a sense of despair. That revolves around the poet\'s daily battles with mental health, characterized by physical pain and emotional distress. The poem captures a sense of isolation and the repetitive nature of such days, suggesting an ongoing struggle without resolution. I hope your day gets better, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 06:54
Friendship said:
Oh, Nataiella, hits a core.... your poem explores the theme of mental anguish, emotional turmoil, and the cyclical nature of depression. The Poet recounts a struggle with anger, irritability, and feelings of hopelessness, grappling with internal conflicts and a sense of despair. That revolves around the poet\'s daily battles with mental health, characterized by physical pain and emotional distress. The poem captures a sense of isolation and the repetitive nature of such days, suggesting an ongoing struggle without resolution. I hope your day gets better, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 06:54
Having a Bad Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:
18 justified lines.
From a poet friend of mine
feeling less than fine
Good write, Nataiellai.
July 28th, 2025 06:09
Jerry Reynolds said:
18 justified lines.
From a poet friend of mine
feeling less than fine
Good write, Nataiellai.
July 28th, 2025 06:09
Having a Bad Day.
Lorna said:
And so... after days like this.... when the light comes back on it feels soooo good......
July 28th, 2025 05:31
Lorna said:
And so... after days like this.... when the light comes back on it feels soooo good......
July 28th, 2025 05:31
Having a Bad Day.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does show a dark side that we all have from time to time but this one contines dark throughout. It speaks to me of frustration, a feeling of lack of control over ones thoughts and feelings, deterioration and gives a feeling of hopelessness. It shows good rhyme and flow that indicate control in action. Nicely written Nataliella
July 28th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does show a dark side that we all have from time to time but this one contines dark throughout. It speaks to me of frustration, a feeling of lack of control over ones thoughts and feelings, deterioration and gives a feeling of hopelessness. It shows good rhyme and flow that indicate control in action. Nicely written Nataliella
July 28th, 2025 04:26
Having a Bad Day.
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this raw moment of struggle; it takes real courage to put those dark thoughts into words. Remember that every hour you endure is proof of your strength, and you deserve to feel the light waiting just beyond today’s storm. ⛈️🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 03:58
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this raw moment of struggle; it takes real courage to put those dark thoughts into words. Remember that every hour you endure is proof of your strength, and you deserve to feel the light waiting just beyond today’s storm. ⛈️🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 03:58
Sticking Together
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Sticking Together
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
Gaza (Help).
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
Sticking Together
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Sticking Together
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Sticking Together
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Sticking Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Sticking Together
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
Sticking Together
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
Wonderful Day!!!.
Goldfinch60 said:
If we have enough in our lives to get by Tobani we are very lucky, many do not.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If we have enough in our lives to get by Tobani we are very lucky, many do not.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:51
Wonderful Day!!!.
Dan Williams said:
Seems like a plan. You are a good example of \'be careful what you wish for\'. Works for me.
July 25th, 2025 00:18
Dan Williams said:
Seems like a plan. You are a good example of \'be careful what you wish for\'. Works for me.
July 25th, 2025 00:18
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