Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Neville said:
you write so well on a subject that many shy away from because it hurts so much to ponder upon the consequences of war in any great detail .. there are not often happy endings when it comes to war .. I am glad you went down that particular route .. Neville 😎👍
December 11th, 2024 09:46
Neville said:
you write so well on a subject that many shy away from because it hurts so much to ponder upon the consequences of war in any great detail .. there are not often happy endings when it comes to war .. I am glad you went down that particular route .. Neville 😎👍
December 11th, 2024 09:46
Mothers Tears in There Eyes
cellinic said:
A very nice and deep work, thank you!
December 11th, 2024 08:03
cellinic said:
A very nice and deep work, thank you!
December 11th, 2024 08:03
Dreams and Nighmares
NafisaSB said:
a poignant and beautiful write - hope the nightmares end soon, and lovely dreams color your sleep
December 11th, 2024 06:55
NafisaSB said:
a poignant and beautiful write - hope the nightmares end soon, and lovely dreams color your sleep
December 11th, 2024 06:55
Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Cassie58 said:
I have often put myself into the shoes of a mother seeing her son off to war. Unbearable sadness. When he comes home, joyful celebration and gratitude. And if he doesn’t come home her hope is extinguished. She will grieve for the rest of her days. A thought provoking write Tobani. Have a good day.
December 11th, 2024 05:41
Cassie58 said:
I have often put myself into the shoes of a mother seeing her son off to war. Unbearable sadness. When he comes home, joyful celebration and gratitude. And if he doesn’t come home her hope is extinguished. She will grieve for the rest of her days. A thought provoking write Tobani. Have a good day.
December 11th, 2024 05:41
Mothers Tears in There Eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, as was yesterdays. This poem really touches the heart! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, as was yesterdays. This poem really touches the heart! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:29
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Dan Williams said:
Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for a while where I learned that people who say that voices they claim to hear, which I previously dismissed, are very real. Nice work here.
December 11th, 2024 01:25
Dan Williams said:
Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for a while where I learned that people who say that voices they claim to hear, which I previously dismissed, are very real. Nice work here.
December 11th, 2024 01:25
Mothers Tears in There Eyes
rin said:
I felt that the happy ending at the end was the author\'s wish. I read something good
December 11th, 2024 01:03
rin said:
I felt that the happy ending at the end was the author\'s wish. I read something good
December 11th, 2024 01:03
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem and
emotions penned!! 🙏
Dark and deep,
and eloquently
woven my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:16
Thad Wilk said:
Great poem and
emotions penned!! 🙏
Dark and deep,
and eloquently
woven my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:16
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Thoughts are not the problem. Thinking you are the thoughts is the problem!\" Anon.
Well, lots of work to do! You are so right in identifying that most of the thoughts that arise are negative.
December 10th, 2024 18:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Thoughts are not the problem. Thinking you are the thoughts is the problem!\" Anon.
Well, lots of work to do! You are so right in identifying that most of the thoughts that arise are negative.
December 10th, 2024 18:27
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
rawaneigh.99 said:
I think I might relate to this, excellent written
December 10th, 2024 14:37
rawaneigh.99 said:
I think I might relate to this, excellent written
December 10th, 2024 14:37
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine write, Tobani. Well, you are never alone, and you always outnumber your critics by at least two to one.
December 10th, 2024 14:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine write, Tobani. Well, you are never alone, and you always outnumber your critics by at least two to one.
December 10th, 2024 14:34
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Neville said:
its not hard to imagine how frustrating and possibly frightening these voices you experience are from your description of them .. whether they are friends or not probably depends on what they are variously saying and your thoughts on the matter .. I would be more than happy to receive a pm if you would like to discuss or explore any further than time or space currently permits .. just nod if you need to .. with kindest regards and with much respect also .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 13:37
Neville said:
its not hard to imagine how frustrating and possibly frightening these voices you experience are from your description of them .. whether they are friends or not probably depends on what they are variously saying and your thoughts on the matter .. I would be more than happy to receive a pm if you would like to discuss or explore any further than time or space currently permits .. just nod if you need to .. with kindest regards and with much respect also .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 13:37
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Cassie58 said:
I have a relative who at times hears voices, I know just how distressing that can be, especially if it is all negative talk. An informative and brave write Tobani. A good composition.
December 10th, 2024 12:43
Cassie58 said:
I have a relative who at times hears voices, I know just how distressing that can be, especially if it is all negative talk. An informative and brave write Tobani. A good composition.
December 10th, 2024 12:43
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
sorenbarrett said:
The old addage that you can\'t give what you don\'t have no longer applies. Great write
December 10th, 2024 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
The old addage that you can\'t give what you don\'t have no longer applies. Great write
December 10th, 2024 11:57
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What do you do when the voices come? You write amazing poetry such as this my friend. Seriously, this is a stigma shattering write...and I truly applaud that. I cannot imagine what having all of those voices must be like, but I thank you for this important share! ❤️🩹🙏🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What do you do when the voices come? You write amazing poetry such as this my friend. Seriously, this is a stigma shattering write...and I truly applaud that. I cannot imagine what having all of those voices must be like, but I thank you for this important share! ❤️🩹🙏🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 10:15
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
arqios said:
I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby affording me peace.
December 10th, 2024 05:37
arqios said:
I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby affording me peace.
December 10th, 2024 05:37
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Doggerel Dave said:
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a hand here), but you would seem, on the evidence of your pins so far, to have come through the other side with a greater perspective, and given us some useful realistic ideas.
A rich write.
December 10th, 2024 05:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a hand here), but you would seem, on the evidence of your pins so far, to have come through the other side with a greater perspective, and given us some useful realistic ideas.
A rich write.
December 10th, 2024 05:02
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
evenwheniLie said:
…..we actually do have other people in our heads, characters we develop from fear, anxiety, compulsion, a sense of restraint and other forms of personality forming mechanisms; personalities our main ego knows not to reveal to everyone, so we get a secretary and or mediator if you will. Most smart people have several people in their heads, they’re just aware of it at all times. It is said we are reflections of god in that way
December 10th, 2024 04:49
evenwheniLie said:
…..we actually do have other people in our heads, characters we develop from fear, anxiety, compulsion, a sense of restraint and other forms of personality forming mechanisms; personalities our main ego knows not to reveal to everyone, so we get a secretary and or mediator if you will. Most smart people have several people in their heads, they’re just aware of it at all times. It is said we are reflections of god in that way
December 10th, 2024 04:49
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
message too!! 👍
That\'s something I hate
about Christmas
I totally agree with you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:55
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
message too!! 👍
That\'s something I hate
about Christmas
I totally agree with you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:55
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the religious significance of Christmas for some - not for me;
And I understand commercialisation of Christmas for many - not for me.
December 9th, 2024 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the religious significance of Christmas for some - not for me;
And I understand commercialisation of Christmas for many - not for me.
December 9th, 2024 17:28
Dreams and Nighmares
2781 said:
And it shall come to pass afterward, that I will pour out my spirit upon all flesh, and your sons and your daughters shall prophesy, your old men shall dream dreams, your young men shall see visions.
December 9th, 2024 12:38
2781 said:
And it shall come to pass afterward, that I will pour out my spirit upon all flesh, and your sons and your daughters shall prophesy, your old men shall dream dreams, your young men shall see visions.
December 9th, 2024 12:38
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
Dreams and Nighmares
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Dreams and Nighmares
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
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