Comments received on poems by AaliyahC.
Alone With Nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“ I hate looking through sober eyes” I get this Aaliyah…this and the whole darn thing. I am sorry you are feeling this way friend and, if you don’t mind, I send you a digital 🤗 Wonderful poem that expresses very relatable feelings. Faved.!
December 7th, 2024 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“ I hate looking through sober eyes” I get this Aaliyah…this and the whole darn thing. I am sorry you are feeling this way friend and, if you don’t mind, I send you a digital 🤗 Wonderful poem that expresses very relatable feelings. Faved.!
December 7th, 2024 09:35
Something New
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is an easy fave! Beautiful poem Aliayah! The cycle of death and birth...death and rebirth...a wonderful write! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 07:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is an easy fave! Beautiful poem Aliayah! The cycle of death and birth...death and rebirth...a wonderful write! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 07:06
Something New
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable read, i like the positive to feel to it, well written
December 5th, 2024 00:16
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable read, i like the positive to feel to it, well written
December 5th, 2024 00:16
Be Strong
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! A very true, sad, yet hopeful poem! Wonderful job, friend! 🌹👏 My condolences on your losses! Never easy! 🙏
December 4th, 2024 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww! A very true, sad, yet hopeful poem! Wonderful job, friend! 🌹👏 My condolences on your losses! Never easy! 🙏
December 4th, 2024 08:51
Be Strong
TobaniNataiella said:
A very heart felt and moving poem, time will eventually heal, Thank you for the read
December 4th, 2024 05:12
TobaniNataiella said:
A very heart felt and moving poem, time will eventually heal, Thank you for the read
December 4th, 2024 05:12
Be Strong
Cassie58 said:
Both your poem and your author note speaks to me. Life is about learning. Not everything goes to plan, but we grow stronger where we break. Losing people we live is hard. Grief takes time, it dies eventually soften. Thank you for scaring your words with us.
December 4th, 2024 03:14
Cassie58 said:
Both your poem and your author note speaks to me. Life is about learning. Not everything goes to plan, but we grow stronger where we break. Losing people we live is hard. Grief takes time, it dies eventually soften. Thank you for scaring your words with us.
December 4th, 2024 03:14
You’re Pushing My Mind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If they do see this, best friends will understand and give you a hug! Thank you for sharing! It\'s a wonderful piece and it is better to get that out than keep it in, imho! That\'s why I love poetry! I have felt similarly and so I very much appreciate your courage in sharing it, Aaliyah! Well done. 🌹👏 And praying for happiness for you too! ❤️
November 27th, 2024 11:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If they do see this, best friends will understand and give you a hug! Thank you for sharing! It\'s a wonderful piece and it is better to get that out than keep it in, imho! That\'s why I love poetry! I have felt similarly and so I very much appreciate your courage in sharing it, Aaliyah! Well done. 🌹👏 And praying for happiness for you too! ❤️
November 27th, 2024 11:40
Life Options
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Life options” by AaliyahC
“Nobody means anything.
The world is a lie and life is cruel…” Life is just make-believe. Perhaps we have no choice, after all. We have to create a world that we can handle, a world in which we can preserve our sanity.
“The worlds course is set….” Our life has been set out for us. Everything happens at the ordained moment. It is not coincidence.
“Play this game called life….” Life is a game of chance, much like a card game. Some have many jokers, some few of them and some none at all. The last ones have to slug it along.
“Only requirements are you can’t choose….” To be realistic, we have hardly any choices. We have to accept what happens to us. How often do we succeed in fighting off the obstacles, disasters, etc ?
“Some have been forced to be born….” ALL of us have been forced to be born. You being born is a choice for others who wield power over us : they could have terminated us. In a literal sense, when the time comes for you to exit, you are FORCED out.
“not everyone is meant to survive.” Even the length of our individual lives is something pre-ordained. Your poem is not depressing. It just lays out the facts. We have to look at the bright sides often if we want to stay sane. As if dangers were not enough, men do everything to exterminate themselves. Soman Ragavan. 25 November, 2024.
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November 25th, 2024 00:19
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Life options” by AaliyahC
“Nobody means anything.
The world is a lie and life is cruel…” Life is just make-believe. Perhaps we have no choice, after all. We have to create a world that we can handle, a world in which we can preserve our sanity.
“The worlds course is set….” Our life has been set out for us. Everything happens at the ordained moment. It is not coincidence.
“Play this game called life….” Life is a game of chance, much like a card game. Some have many jokers, some few of them and some none at all. The last ones have to slug it along.
“Only requirements are you can’t choose….” To be realistic, we have hardly any choices. We have to accept what happens to us. How often do we succeed in fighting off the obstacles, disasters, etc ?
“Some have been forced to be born….” ALL of us have been forced to be born. You being born is a choice for others who wield power over us : they could have terminated us. In a literal sense, when the time comes for you to exit, you are FORCED out.
“not everyone is meant to survive.” Even the length of our individual lives is something pre-ordained. Your poem is not depressing. It just lays out the facts. We have to look at the bright sides often if we want to stay sane. As if dangers were not enough, men do everything to exterminate themselves. Soman Ragavan. 25 November, 2024.
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November 25th, 2024 00:19
Life Options
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and rings hauntingly true! 👏🌹
November 24th, 2024 21:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and rings hauntingly true! 👏🌹
November 24th, 2024 21:20
Life Options
Demar Desu said:
Well damn… thought I was feeling sad before.. definitely feeling it now
November 24th, 2024 18:54
Demar Desu said:
Well damn… thought I was feeling sad before.. definitely feeling it now
November 24th, 2024 18:54
I’m High.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, Aliyah. I’ll say this, at least your not chasing the bottle. Still, I know the feeling of trying to numb the pain, which never seems to ultimately work without “chasing the high”. You captured this well in your poem. 🌹👏
November 23rd, 2024 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem, Aliyah. I’ll say this, at least your not chasing the bottle. Still, I know the feeling of trying to numb the pain, which never seems to ultimately work without “chasing the high”. You captured this well in your poem. 🌹👏
November 23rd, 2024 08:02
I’m High.
Demar Desu said:
If you took out all the I’s and I’ms, I feel like it would make this poem way better. Still though not tryna ruin your high LOL great poem for sure.
November 22nd, 2024 17:33
Demar Desu said:
If you took out all the I’s and I’ms, I feel like it would make this poem way better. Still though not tryna ruin your high LOL great poem for sure.
November 22nd, 2024 17:33
Sorry
Demar Desu said:
I can see my reflection in this poem. Sigh, I’m still grateful I have the ability to see a reflection that way I can improve or change the way the image appears. Great poem… don’t be to hard on yourself
November 20th, 2024 13:25
Demar Desu said:
I can see my reflection in this poem. Sigh, I’m still grateful I have the ability to see a reflection that way I can improve or change the way the image appears. Great poem… don’t be to hard on yourself
November 20th, 2024 13:25
My Anguish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep! A wonderful poem! I look forward to more. 🌹👏
November 18th, 2024 23:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep! A wonderful poem! I look forward to more. 🌹👏
November 18th, 2024 23:45
