Comments received on poems by Pineapple_pizza018
19 years of being me
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Meant to type \"neither of them fading\"
March 6th, 2025 16:46
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Meant to type \"neither of them fading\"
March 6th, 2025 16:46
19 years of being me
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the count down but I must disagree with the 0 ways of making a difference. We all make differences good or bad, know or unknown I\'m sure you are making one now. Nicely written though
March 6th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the count down but I must disagree with the 0 ways of making a difference. We all make differences good or bad, know or unknown I\'m sure you are making one now. Nicely written though
March 6th, 2025 14:29
19 years
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a lot of insecurities and doubts, finding life stressful and guarding against something, the write takes you along with it as the trap we follow in life is followed, very relatable and well written
March 3rd, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a lot of insecurities and doubts, finding life stressful and guarding against something, the write takes you along with it as the trap we follow in life is followed, very relatable and well written
March 3rd, 2025 12:08
19 years
sorenbarrett said:
Such timing and counting is almost obsessive. Obsessions and compulsions are used as a defense against anxiety to keep the mind away from what it is afraid of. A lovely ending asking \"what did I do wrong?\"
March 3rd, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Such timing and counting is almost obsessive. Obsessions and compulsions are used as a defense against anxiety to keep the mind away from what it is afraid of. A lovely ending asking \"what did I do wrong?\"
March 3rd, 2025 11:19
Arsonist???
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor. It works well and fits the message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor. It works well and fits the message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 18:34
Dark writer???
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of anger and sadness at being forced to be something there not, being medicated which is not going to resolve the real inner issues, a very touching and emotional write, that is very well expressed
March 1st, 2025 01:41
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of anger and sadness at being forced to be something there not, being medicated which is not going to resolve the real inner issues, a very touching and emotional write, that is very well expressed
March 1st, 2025 01:41
Dark writer???
sorenbarrett said:
Such a sense of loss. Feelings of being robbed of oneself. Drugged and broken loosing one\'s sense of self to become what others call normal. I have seen too much of this in others where medication zombified them. Sad was the feeling I got and anger at one forced to change who they are. A lovely write that is heart wrenching.
February 28th, 2025 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Such a sense of loss. Feelings of being robbed of oneself. Drugged and broken loosing one\'s sense of self to become what others call normal. I have seen too much of this in others where medication zombified them. Sad was the feeling I got and anger at one forced to change who they are. A lovely write that is heart wrenching.
February 28th, 2025 19:05
Dear depression
sorenbarrett said:
Raw emotion expressed in this poem that questions the validity of going on with the present pain. Dark and hard to read it screams out at the reader.
February 27th, 2025 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
Raw emotion expressed in this poem that questions the validity of going on with the present pain. Dark and hard to read it screams out at the reader.
February 27th, 2025 13:09
Dear depression
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and powerful write of the feelings of complete hopelessness and depression, you can feel the torment and pain all the way through the write, if concerning author I hope you have someone to talk to, take care
February 27th, 2025 11:17
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and powerful write of the feelings of complete hopelessness and depression, you can feel the torment and pain all the way through the write, if concerning author I hope you have someone to talk to, take care
February 27th, 2025 11:17
Mississippi
whats write for me said:
Engaging writing, the rhythm and flow are good. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 17:44
whats write for me said:
Engaging writing, the rhythm and flow are good. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 17:44
Mississippi
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and emotional write of pure helplessness, we are where we came from , it moulds and teaches us. This is very well written and although sad i am glad I read it
February 26th, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and emotional write of pure helplessness, we are where we came from , it moulds and teaches us. This is very well written and although sad i am glad I read it
February 26th, 2025 17:24
Mississippi
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a product of our past and where and how we were raised. More we are part of the dirt we came from, it is our parent. The last line cements this. A poem of resignation and helplessness. A powerful poem in its hopelessness. Very well done
February 26th, 2025 16:05
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a product of our past and where and how we were raised. More we are part of the dirt we came from, it is our parent. The last line cements this. A poem of resignation and helplessness. A powerful poem in its hopelessness. Very well done
February 26th, 2025 16:05
Why so sad?
Poetic Licence said:
That is a heartfelt and touching write reflecting the sadness of lies and being let down, nicely expressed
February 22nd, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
That is a heartfelt and touching write reflecting the sadness of lies and being let down, nicely expressed
February 22nd, 2025 13:35
Why so sad?
sorenbarrett said:
That reminds me of the joker in the dark knight, \"Why so sad?\" Lies lead to disappointment and sadness
February 22nd, 2025 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
That reminds me of the joker in the dark knight, \"Why so sad?\" Lies lead to disappointment and sadness
February 22nd, 2025 11:47
Mother knows best
Poetic Licence said:
It may take some people a long to realize, but in time they do, well written
February 20th, 2025 11:43
Poetic Licence said:
It may take some people a long to realize, but in time they do, well written
February 20th, 2025 11:43
Mother knows best
sorenbarrett said:
It takes a long time to realize that mother has more wisdom than we thought at the time. A good write
February 20th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
It takes a long time to realize that mother has more wisdom than we thought at the time. A good write
February 20th, 2025 11:25
I\'m a girl
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and very well expressed write around the manipulation of woman, the lengths men go to and all the tools they will use to maintain that control, great write
February 18th, 2025 13:02
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and very well expressed write around the manipulation of woman, the lengths men go to and all the tools they will use to maintain that control, great write
February 18th, 2025 13:02
I\'m a girl
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that talks of inequities that are so true. Women of the past smarter than men controlled by astute manipulations and ruled through craft and wile. We all use the weapons that we have been given
February 18th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that talks of inequities that are so true. Women of the past smarter than men controlled by astute manipulations and ruled through craft and wile. We all use the weapons that we have been given
February 18th, 2025 10:33
Snail in love with mushroom
Poetic Licence said:
There are no barriers in love, well there should not be, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 14:41
Poetic Licence said:
There are no barriers in love, well there should not be, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 14:41
Snail in love with mushroom
sorenbarrett said:
Strange love but who\'s to say to each their own. Such a metaphor for tolerance and lack of discrimination. Love has no bounds. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Strange love but who\'s to say to each their own. Such a metaphor for tolerance and lack of discrimination. Love has no bounds. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 09:00
The Moon, the Sun, and the Earth
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write opening the reader up to thinking of all possibilities, a really enjoyable read
February 14th, 2025 16:35
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write opening the reader up to thinking of all possibilities, a really enjoyable read
February 14th, 2025 16:35
The Moon, the Sun, and the Earth
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Changing \"It\'s such a pity\" to \"A love never seen\"
February 14th, 2025 15:47
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Changing \"It\'s such a pity\" to \"A love never seen\"
February 14th, 2025 15:47
The Moon, the Sun, and the Earth
whats write for me said:
Inspiring, thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 15:01
whats write for me said:
Inspiring, thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 15:01
The Moon, the Sun, and the Earth
sorenbarrett said:
A twisted tale of poetic fantasy that carries the reader into the realm of all possibilities stretching the mind and opening child like flexibility. Great story and a fun poem. There may be more metaphor here than meets the eye.
February 14th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
A twisted tale of poetic fantasy that carries the reader into the realm of all possibilities stretching the mind and opening child like flexibility. Great story and a fun poem. There may be more metaphor here than meets the eye.
February 14th, 2025 13:59
\"Inner child\"
Poetic Licence said:
A emotional read around the decision to go and have their own life and leaving a beloved sibling behind, who they look after there whole life. Feelings expressed very well in this write.
February 13th, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
A emotional read around the decision to go and have their own life and leaving a beloved sibling behind, who they look after there whole life. Feelings expressed very well in this write.
February 13th, 2025 12:14
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