Comments received on poems by Pineapple_pizza018
I\'m 19 years into this life
sorenbarrett said:
That existential crisis that many of us go through usually in our teens and sometimes much latter. A touching write
April 17th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
That existential crisis that many of us go through usually in our teens and sometimes much latter. A touching write
April 17th, 2025 13:04
Seeds
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and seeing how things fit in a longer perspective. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of faith and seeing how things fit in a longer perspective. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:34
The hero
sorenbarrett said:
Do people change knowing what they know today would they do the same thing over again? Forgiveness can only come when you know the person has changed. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Do people change knowing what they know today would they do the same thing over again? Forgiveness can only come when you know the person has changed. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 08:57
You problem
Poetic Licence said:
This covers a few issues in one write, but mainly Cheetah\'s never change their spots, wonderfully expressed write
April 10th, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
This covers a few issues in one write, but mainly Cheetah\'s never change their spots, wonderfully expressed write
April 10th, 2025 12:11
A mother like mine
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love goes beyond poetry. A most lovely recognition of a mother\'s love
April 7th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love goes beyond poetry. A most lovely recognition of a mother\'s love
April 7th, 2025 16:20
I\'m sorry mother
Kevin Hulme said:
Your thoughts seem to be one-sided. I\'m sure your Mother will think differently and is Proud.
I myself feel the same about my Parents; that I may have let them down: But before my Mother died I overheard her say that she had good Sons.
April 6th, 2025 15:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Your thoughts seem to be one-sided. I\'m sure your Mother will think differently and is Proud.
I myself feel the same about my Parents; that I may have let them down: But before my Mother died I overheard her say that she had good Sons.
April 6th, 2025 15:23
I\'m sorry mother
sorenbarrett said:
Nice to love a mother and even nicer that she is still here better yet a recognition and admission of past infractions. Well done
April 6th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Nice to love a mother and even nicer that she is still here better yet a recognition and admission of past infractions. Well done
April 6th, 2025 14:29
Spite
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of control and anger, with a unexpected ending, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of control and anger, with a unexpected ending, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 10:13
Spite
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of oppression and anger that ends with a twist. Nicely written
March 31st, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of oppression and anger that ends with a twist. Nicely written
March 31st, 2025 09:35
Rise
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and hopeful write that is uplifting. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
A bright and hopeful write that is uplifting. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 18:53
I\'m a star! ๐
sorenbarrett said:
Self confidence? A fun read we all wish to be a star at something.
March 28th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Self confidence? A fun read we all wish to be a star at something.
March 28th, 2025 11:51
It\'s cold outside!
sorenbarrett said:
Now wouldn\'t that be the thing to be able to replay life. We think that we would do better but maybe not. A wonderful write
March 25th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Now wouldn\'t that be the thing to be able to replay life. We think that we would do better but maybe not. A wonderful write
March 25th, 2025 10:54
I\'m 1 year out of high school
sorenbarrett said:
A time of turmoil and decisions that one is not ready to make. An existential crisis in who one is and what one wants to be. A raw poem from the heart that is felt as it is read. It runs so well and has rhyme that dies out at the end as if the mind can not make the decision as to what to do next. It fits well with the poem. Well done.
March 24th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A time of turmoil and decisions that one is not ready to make. An existential crisis in who one is and what one wants to be. A raw poem from the heart that is felt as it is read. It runs so well and has rhyme that dies out at the end as if the mind can not make the decision as to what to do next. It fits well with the poem. Well done.
March 24th, 2025 16:06
I\'m 1 year out of high school
Poetic Licence said:
You have plenty of time to still enjoy being young and then to make it happen, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 15:26
Poetic Licence said:
You have plenty of time to still enjoy being young and then to make it happen, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 15:26
The world\'s greatest actress
Poetic Licence said:
A write about the film we all have a part in, life. Some are natural and can be themselves others have to put on a mask and perform their whole life, nicely expressed
March 24th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
A write about the film we all have a part in, life. Some are natural and can be themselves others have to put on a mask and perform their whole life, nicely expressed
March 24th, 2025 03:18
The world\'s greatest actress
MR.apocalypse said:
great portrayal of the internal emptiness of someone who has everything........a realistic and enjoyable story
March 23rd, 2025 22:22
MR.apocalypse said:
great portrayal of the internal emptiness of someone who has everything........a realistic and enjoyable story
March 23rd, 2025 22:22
The world\'s greatest actress
sorenbarrett said:
A read about how we all wear masks but some more than others. A good metaphor about acting what we are not. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
A read about how we all wear masks but some more than others. A good metaphor about acting what we are not. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 16:26
VHS tapes
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem that brings on nostalgia
March 21st, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem that brings on nostalgia
March 21st, 2025 09:04
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