Comments received on poems by Pineapple_pizza018
It\'s cold outside!
sorenbarrett said:
Now wouldn\'t that be the thing to be able to replay life. We think that we would do better but maybe not. A wonderful write
March 25th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Now wouldn\'t that be the thing to be able to replay life. We think that we would do better but maybe not. A wonderful write
March 25th, 2025 10:54
I\'m 1 year out of high school
sorenbarrett said:
A time of turmoil and decisions that one is not ready to make. An existential crisis in who one is and what one wants to be. A raw poem from the heart that is felt as it is read. It runs so well and has rhyme that dies out at the end as if the mind can not make the decision as to what to do next. It fits well with the poem. Well done.
March 24th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A time of turmoil and decisions that one is not ready to make. An existential crisis in who one is and what one wants to be. A raw poem from the heart that is felt as it is read. It runs so well and has rhyme that dies out at the end as if the mind can not make the decision as to what to do next. It fits well with the poem. Well done.
March 24th, 2025 16:06
I\'m 1 year out of high school
Poetic Licence said:
You have plenty of time to still enjoy being young and then to make it happen, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 15:26
Poetic Licence said:
You have plenty of time to still enjoy being young and then to make it happen, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 15:26
The world\'s greatest actress
Poetic Licence said:
A write about the film we all have a part in, life. Some are natural and can be themselves others have to put on a mask and perform their whole life, nicely expressed
March 24th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
A write about the film we all have a part in, life. Some are natural and can be themselves others have to put on a mask and perform their whole life, nicely expressed
March 24th, 2025 03:18
The world\'s greatest actress
MR.apocalypse said:
great portrayal of the internal emptiness of someone who has everything........a realistic and enjoyable story
March 23rd, 2025 22:22
MR.apocalypse said:
great portrayal of the internal emptiness of someone who has everything........a realistic and enjoyable story
March 23rd, 2025 22:22
The world\'s greatest actress
sorenbarrett said:
A read about how we all wear masks but some more than others. A good metaphor about acting what we are not. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
A read about how we all wear masks but some more than others. A good metaphor about acting what we are not. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 16:26
VHS tapes
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem that brings on nostalgia
March 21st, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem that brings on nostalgia
March 21st, 2025 09:04
Speechless
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of refusing to be silent for anyone, and will fight to the end, nicely expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 09:47
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of refusing to be silent for anyone, and will fight to the end, nicely expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 09:47
Speechless
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking up rather than staking speechless. A great message sent.
March 20th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Speaking up rather than staking speechless. A great message sent.
March 20th, 2025 09:33
Hide and seek
Poetic Licence said:
Trust is the meaning most important thing of all, the foundation of everything, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
Trust is the meaning most important thing of all, the foundation of everything, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:08
Hide and seek
sorenbarrett said:
Could be a child\'s rhyme but I think it is meant for older people. The message of breaking the rules of the game or relationship can result in a lack of trust. Nicely said.
March 18th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
Could be a child\'s rhyme but I think it is meant for older people. The message of breaking the rules of the game or relationship can result in a lack of trust. Nicely said.
March 18th, 2025 16:00
Do I belong?
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature and archetypal it speaks of power, betrayal, the overcoming it speaks of personal growth and how we all live our own lives hopefully in such a way. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 12:49
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature and archetypal it speaks of power, betrayal, the overcoming it speaks of personal growth and how we all live our own lives hopefully in such a way. Very nice
March 16th, 2025 12:49
Do I belong?
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
This might be s little controversial but oh well!
March 16th, 2025 11:22
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
This might be s little controversial but oh well!
March 16th, 2025 11:22
They were just words
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret and sadness. There is anger and remorse in this piece and it pulls at the heart. Nicely written with flashbacks of the past.
March 11th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret and sadness. There is anger and remorse in this piece and it pulls at the heart. Nicely written with flashbacks of the past.
March 11th, 2025 04:35
They were just words
Cassie58 said:
Break ups are painful. You convey your sadness and pain here well. Such a disappointment when forevers don’t work out. I enjoyed your poem.
March 10th, 2025 21:34
Cassie58 said:
Break ups are painful. You convey your sadness and pain here well. Such a disappointment when forevers don’t work out. I enjoyed your poem.
March 10th, 2025 21:34
A girl with autism
Poetic Licence said:
A honest account of the struggles of living with the autism, the bravery, courage and determination that is needed to carry on and not collapse under the difficulties, beautifully expressed
March 9th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
A honest account of the struggles of living with the autism, the bravery, courage and determination that is needed to carry on and not collapse under the difficulties, beautifully expressed
March 9th, 2025 03:12
A girl with autism
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the mind of a person afflicted. Great rhyme and even some internal rhyme with a good flow to the body of the piece. It reflects personal knowledge of the ailment from self or someone well known. It shows the battles that such people go through and the bravery and persistence that it takes to keep going and not sink deeper. Thank you for sharing this is a fave
March 8th, 2025 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the mind of a person afflicted. Great rhyme and even some internal rhyme with a good flow to the body of the piece. It reflects personal knowledge of the ailment from self or someone well known. It shows the battles that such people go through and the bravery and persistence that it takes to keep going and not sink deeper. Thank you for sharing this is a fave
March 8th, 2025 14:31
A girl with autism
Cassie58 said:
A history here of a young life. What a struggle it has been. You convey that well and I find courage in your words. I particularly like your poetic expression in the final two lines. Pleased I stopped by.
March 8th, 2025 14:23
Cassie58 said:
A history here of a young life. What a struggle it has been. You convey that well and I find courage in your words. I particularly like your poetic expression in the final two lines. Pleased I stopped by.
March 8th, 2025 14:23
Ocean
Poetic Licence said:
A feel of overcoming all the sadness,pain and demons,and finally being able to be themselves, passionate and emotional write
March 8th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
A feel of overcoming all the sadness,pain and demons,and finally being able to be themselves, passionate and emotional write
March 8th, 2025 03:12
Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
Memories, moods and bad situations fill this poem. It is like riding the waves of a raging sea.
March 7th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Memories, moods and bad situations fill this poem. It is like riding the waves of a raging sea.
March 7th, 2025 19:23
19 years of being me
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful,sad and touching write expressing deep emotions, we will all make differences, your making one with this write, because many people will relate to this
March 7th, 2025 02:52
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful,sad and touching write expressing deep emotions, we will all make differences, your making one with this write, because many people will relate to this
March 7th, 2025 02:52
19 years of being me
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Meant to type \"neither of them fading\"
March 6th, 2025 16:46
Pineapple_pizza018 said:
Meant to type \"neither of them fading\"
March 6th, 2025 16:46
19 years of being me
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the count down but I must disagree with the 0 ways of making a difference. We all make differences good or bad, know or unknown I\'m sure you are making one now. Nicely written though
March 6th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the count down but I must disagree with the 0 ways of making a difference. We all make differences good or bad, know or unknown I\'m sure you are making one now. Nicely written though
March 6th, 2025 14:29
19 years
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a lot of insecurities and doubts, finding life stressful and guarding against something, the write takes you along with it as the trap we follow in life is followed, very relatable and well written
March 3rd, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a lot of insecurities and doubts, finding life stressful and guarding against something, the write takes you along with it as the trap we follow in life is followed, very relatable and well written
March 3rd, 2025 12:08
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