Comments received on poems by Ally
Drowning in the mist
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. There was never enough time to learn what one needed to know and would be tested on as well as maintain social relationships and do family obligations or chores. But then it could have been worse and was in my father\'s day when in the depression he worked a job as well as went to school. Good write.
March 15th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. There was never enough time to learn what one needed to know and would be tested on as well as maintain social relationships and do family obligations or chores. But then it could have been worse and was in my father\'s day when in the depression he worked a job as well as went to school. Good write.
March 15th, 2025 05:11
Drowning in the mist
Poetic Licence said:
A write of someone feeling the pressure of life getting on top of them, a very relatable write, well written
March 15th, 2025 03:01
Poetic Licence said:
A write of someone feeling the pressure of life getting on top of them, a very relatable write, well written
March 15th, 2025 03:01
The Eternal Night
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece of struggling with hope, written with emotion and honesty and there is nothing wrong with saying how you feel
March 5th, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece of struggling with hope, written with emotion and honesty and there is nothing wrong with saying how you feel
March 5th, 2025 03:10
The Eternal Night
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional expressions well spoken in metaphor as well as images. A game of chess where only the king knows the rules. A nightmare. Well written
March 4th, 2025 18:23
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional expressions well spoken in metaphor as well as images. A game of chess where only the king knows the rules. A nightmare. Well written
March 4th, 2025 18:23
Melted
sorenbarrett said:
The negative and positive of a relationship where one looses the old and gains the new. Where one is transformed into aunity and looses individuality. I love hou you have left in on a positive being melted
February 10th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
The negative and positive of a relationship where one looses the old and gains the new. Where one is transformed into aunity and looses individuality. I love hou you have left in on a positive being melted
February 10th, 2025 06:05
