Comments received on poems by Arshia



My Forlorn Mind
Poetic Licence said:

A clever piece of writing, causing some confusion when first reading, enjoyed the read

February 17th, 2025 14:17

My Forlorn Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Most interestingly worded to cause doubt and uncertainty it reads well and rolls off the tongue.

February 17th, 2025 13:34

Some Jarring Desires
Poetic Licence said:

I found this an interesting take on inner reflection and enjoyed the imagery created by the words, lovely read

February 12th, 2025 18:05

Some Jarring Desires
sorenbarrett said:

The incorporation of opposits to communicate a image is well used. Lovely

February 12th, 2025 11:56

Convulsions Of my Sanity
Poetic Licence said:

This a well written piece that has made me think.

February 11th, 2025 03:16

Convulsions Of my Sanity
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️

February 10th, 2025 19:03