Comments received on poems by Tommy B Goode



But we had to
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely crafted write that gives the reader enjoyment and a few possible meanings of a well written piece, enjoyed the read

April 15th, 2025 01:22

But we had to
sorenbarrett said:

Those urges whether internal, biological or societal expectations lead to violence that often is experienced as a win, a victory, an orgasmic joy that is culture, life and being human. That is what I take of this. Could be wrong though. Well written and metaphoric all the way.

April 14th, 2025 16:18

Everything falls in silence
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 13th, 2025 13:30

Everything falls in silence
Eugene S. said:

The translation comes trough vividly!

April 13th, 2025 10:38

Everything falls in silence
Poetic Licence said:

A few words that says so much, paints an image of a complete devastation after a personal tradegy, is as they have become numb to the noise, nicely expressed and written

April 13th, 2025 10:24

Everything falls in silence
sorenbarrett said:

A picture of devastation after the tragedy is painted here in so few words. very nicely done

April 13th, 2025 09:56

The inverted smile reigns
Poetic Licence said:

They say we must understand ourselve in order to understand others,I don\'t believe for some it is as simple as that, it can be a very long battle for some to find their real self, nicely expressed write

March 17th, 2025 12:46

The inverted smile reigns
sorenbarrett said:

How do we understand others if we don\'t understand ourselves? How can we judge others in such a circumstance? A great poem existential in nature and yes an inverted smile is where it is left.

March 17th, 2025 08:58

The inverted smile reigns
arqios said:

There is then some use to turn a frown upside down 🙏🏻🕊

March 17th, 2025 08:43

Tears icicled
arqios said:

Never forever, bitter miseries on stoned icy cheeks. Quite a finality Tom! 🙏🏻🕊

March 17th, 2025 02:34

Tears icicled
Poetic Licence said:

A poem of much pain and hurt at the loss of someone, nicely expressed

March 16th, 2025 12:25

Tears icicled
sorenbarrett said:

I hear anger and pain in this poem. It is sad.

March 16th, 2025 11:56

Coat of dust
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor upon metaphor in this short piece. The meaninglessness of life resolved only in memories of it\'s living. A lovely poem so existential and at the same time nihilistic.

March 15th, 2025 07:38

Coat of dust
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and enjoyable read

March 15th, 2025 06:52

Coat of dust
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊would love to see the Nederlands version as well!

March 15th, 2025 06:34