Comments received on poems by KTay
Illusory Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Tough truth. The irony of life and our world. Nicely penned
April 1st, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Tough truth. The irony of life and our world. Nicely penned
April 1st, 2025 09:39
Writhing Failure
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the process described here from the act to the consequences. Very descriptive in images no other words needed to tell the story. Nicely depicted.
March 31st, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the process described here from the act to the consequences. Very descriptive in images no other words needed to tell the story. Nicely depicted.
March 31st, 2025 04:47
Weathered
Eugene S. said:
An avalanche of concise, sharp, complete thoughts that paint a vivid picture and convey powerful sentiments. Really like your style!
March 29th, 2025 13:26
Eugene S. said:
An avalanche of concise, sharp, complete thoughts that paint a vivid picture and convey powerful sentiments. Really like your style!
March 29th, 2025 13:26
Treats
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted and very interesting write on the thin dividing line between sanity and insanity, certainly makes your mind question, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:56
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted and very interesting write on the thin dividing line between sanity and insanity, certainly makes your mind question, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:56
Treats
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that may be taken many ways that echo the uncertainty of the topic. I love the word play (in sanity) just a little push and it becomes insanity. Electro shock has been found to do this at times. The in between awake, asleep, aware and not sane and not where is the difference? What scale do we use to measure it? A very thought provoking poem loved it very creative a fave
March 29th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that may be taken many ways that echo the uncertainty of the topic. I love the word play (in sanity) just a little push and it becomes insanity. Electro shock has been found to do this at times. The in between awake, asleep, aware and not sane and not where is the difference? What scale do we use to measure it? A very thought provoking poem loved it very creative a fave
March 29th, 2025 08:50
Haunted
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and very raw write that some people will relate to, full of anger, fear and desperation at happenings of the past, a constant living breathing nightmare they are trapped in, a wonderful write
March 27th, 2025 04:19
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and very raw write that some people will relate to, full of anger, fear and desperation at happenings of the past, a constant living breathing nightmare they are trapped in, a wonderful write
March 27th, 2025 04:19
Haunted
Diana . said:
I can relate to your poem.
Wish you find a joy in your life ... 🩶
March 26th, 2025 17:54
Diana . said:
I can relate to your poem.
Wish you find a joy in your life ... 🩶
March 26th, 2025 17:54
Haunted
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation, anger and depression in this dark write. A strong and powerful raw write
March 26th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation, anger and depression in this dark write. A strong and powerful raw write
March 26th, 2025 12:56
Weathered
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 02:55
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 02:55
Weathered
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem
March 25th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem
March 25th, 2025 10:49
Medieval Internal
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and expressed write, getting darker and more passionate as you read through revealing the feeling of feeling dead inside, a great write
March 23rd, 2025 12:02
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and expressed write, getting darker and more passionate as you read through revealing the feeling of feeling dead inside, a great write
March 23rd, 2025 12:02
Medieval Internal
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and in a medieval setting this poem flows with good rhyme and rhythm. It turns dark and without hope there is nothing worse than being dead inside, a living death. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and in a medieval setting this poem flows with good rhyme and rhythm. It turns dark and without hope there is nothing worse than being dead inside, a living death. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 10:41
Strategic Narrative
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of anger and frustration at religion, suggesting the religious are not just myth but pieces written by the mentally ill, a strong thought provoking write
March 21st, 2025 08:50
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of anger and frustration at religion, suggesting the religious are not just myth but pieces written by the mentally ill, a strong thought provoking write
March 21st, 2025 08:50
Strategic Narrative
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem as does disgust for organized religion. It speaks of its stories as not just myth but being written by the mentally ill. Powerful words here.
March 21st, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Anger pervades this poem as does disgust for organized religion. It speaks of its stories as not just myth but being written by the mentally ill. Powerful words here.
March 21st, 2025 06:48
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