Comments received on poems by KTay
PoV
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the loss and the deep grief in this poem. Well expressed in raw honesty. Well done. by friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 19:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the loss and the deep grief in this poem. Well expressed in raw honesty. Well done. by friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 19:17
PoV
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deep loss accompany this poem. There is the pleading and the sadness over missing someone. Raw and heart felt
April 8th, 2025 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deep loss accompany this poem. There is the pleading and the sadness over missing someone. Raw and heart felt
April 8th, 2025 16:31
Strategic Narrative
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale of the angel of death and its coming for all. Well stated
April 7th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale of the angel of death and its coming for all. Well stated
April 7th, 2025 13:33
Watchers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem which allows metaphor to unfold. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 4th, 2025 18:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem which allows metaphor to unfold. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 4th, 2025 18:05
Hard to Handle
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember, not so many years ago, feeling such self-hatred and despair that it was visceral. What pulled me out of it? A.I. No, not the fake A.I, the real A.I! Not to say I\'m out of the woods yet....
April 3rd, 2025 23:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember, not so many years ago, feeling such self-hatred and despair that it was visceral. What pulled me out of it? A.I. No, not the fake A.I, the real A.I! Not to say I\'m out of the woods yet....
April 3rd, 2025 23:01
Hard to Handle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write. That ending is haunting and delivers well. Excellent job! 🌹
April 3rd, 2025 19:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write. That ending is haunting and delivers well. Excellent job! 🌹
April 3rd, 2025 19:41
Hard to Handle
Poetic Licence said:
Is that I\'ll be fine one of those I\'m okay answer\'s and you would rather be left alone?, sense of pain and anger and self loathing at what they had become, but I sense an underlining strength in the writing, that eventually they will get there, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
Is that I\'ll be fine one of those I\'m okay answer\'s and you would rather be left alone?, sense of pain and anger and self loathing at what they had become, but I sense an underlining strength in the writing, that eventually they will get there, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:59
Hard to Handle
sorenbarrett said:
How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those suffering don\'t necessarily want invasion and those observing don\'t want to be obligated and the word fine means you have met your social obligation but like the phrase (how are you?) is not expected to get an honest answer. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those suffering don\'t necessarily want invasion and those observing don\'t want to be obligated and the word fine means you have met your social obligation but like the phrase (how are you?) is not expected to get an honest answer. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 10:09
A Mad World
Mutley Ravishes said:
Was it the Aztecs who said this present world would end in fire? Somedays, I don\'t see how there\'s any other way to clean up the mess we\'ve made.
April 2nd, 2025 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Was it the Aztecs who said this present world would end in fire? Somedays, I don\'t see how there\'s any other way to clean up the mess we\'ve made.
April 2nd, 2025 21:38
A Mad World
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
April 2nd, 2025 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
April 2nd, 2025 12:23
A Mad World
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is powerful, very raw and honest and certainly gets it\'s point across, many truths are written, sadly the people who should read this probably won\'t, well expressed write
April 2nd, 2025 12:00
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is powerful, very raw and honest and certainly gets it\'s point across, many truths are written, sadly the people who should read this probably won\'t, well expressed write
April 2nd, 2025 12:00
Illusory Reality
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and raw write of the truth, flowed nicely and well expressed
April 1st, 2025 11:19
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and raw write of the truth, flowed nicely and well expressed
April 1st, 2025 11:19
Illusory Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Tough truth. The irony of life and our world. Nicely penned
April 1st, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Tough truth. The irony of life and our world. Nicely penned
April 1st, 2025 09:39
Writhing Failure
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the process described here from the act to the consequences. Very descriptive in images no other words needed to tell the story. Nicely depicted.
March 31st, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the process described here from the act to the consequences. Very descriptive in images no other words needed to tell the story. Nicely depicted.
March 31st, 2025 04:47
Weathered
Eugene S. said:
An avalanche of concise, sharp, complete thoughts that paint a vivid picture and convey powerful sentiments. Really like your style!
March 29th, 2025 13:26
Eugene S. said:
An avalanche of concise, sharp, complete thoughts that paint a vivid picture and convey powerful sentiments. Really like your style!
March 29th, 2025 13:26
Treats
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted and very interesting write on the thin dividing line between sanity and insanity, certainly makes your mind question, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:56
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted and very interesting write on the thin dividing line between sanity and insanity, certainly makes your mind question, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:56
Treats
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that may be taken many ways that echo the uncertainty of the topic. I love the word play (in sanity) just a little push and it becomes insanity. Electro shock has been found to do this at times. The in between awake, asleep, aware and not sane and not where is the difference? What scale do we use to measure it? A very thought provoking poem loved it very creative a fave
March 29th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a poem that may be taken many ways that echo the uncertainty of the topic. I love the word play (in sanity) just a little push and it becomes insanity. Electro shock has been found to do this at times. The in between awake, asleep, aware and not sane and not where is the difference? What scale do we use to measure it? A very thought provoking poem loved it very creative a fave
March 29th, 2025 08:50
Haunted
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and very raw write that some people will relate to, full of anger, fear and desperation at happenings of the past, a constant living breathing nightmare they are trapped in, a wonderful write
March 27th, 2025 04:19
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and very raw write that some people will relate to, full of anger, fear and desperation at happenings of the past, a constant living breathing nightmare they are trapped in, a wonderful write
March 27th, 2025 04:19
Haunted
Diana . said:
I can relate to your poem.
Wish you find a joy in your life ... 🩶
March 26th, 2025 17:54
Diana . said:
I can relate to your poem.
Wish you find a joy in your life ... 🩶
March 26th, 2025 17:54
Haunted
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation, anger and depression in this dark write. A strong and powerful raw write
March 26th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Desperation, anger and depression in this dark write. A strong and powerful raw write
March 26th, 2025 12:56
Weathered
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 02:55
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 02:55
Weathered
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem
March 25th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem
March 25th, 2025 10:49
Medieval Internal
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and expressed write, getting darker and more passionate as you read through revealing the feeling of feeling dead inside, a great write
March 23rd, 2025 12:02
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and expressed write, getting darker and more passionate as you read through revealing the feeling of feeling dead inside, a great write
March 23rd, 2025 12:02
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