Comments received on poems by KTay
Paper Flowers
Poetic Licence said:
This is so close to home for me, I connect with all of it, but I could not have written about it better than you have, a wonderful write even thou it has touched many nerves
April 14th, 2025 10:12
Poetic Licence said:
This is so close to home for me, I connect with all of it, but I could not have written about it better than you have, a wonderful write even thou it has touched many nerves
April 14th, 2025 10:12
Liquid Cope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this, having had my own battle with demon alcohol and its devastating effects on my mental health, self-esteem, and physical health, as well. This is such an important write and I thank you for expressing it, my friend. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this, having had my own battle with demon alcohol and its devastating effects on my mental health, self-esteem, and physical health, as well. This is such an important write and I thank you for expressing it, my friend. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:52
Liquid Cope
MDStone said:
KTay, A well written piece. “Standing there. Still unaddressed. The question WHY to him is pressed.” If we could just find it, address it, maybe it would heal. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:34
MDStone said:
KTay, A well written piece. “Standing there. Still unaddressed. The question WHY to him is pressed.” If we could just find it, address it, maybe it would heal. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:34
Liquid Cope
sorenbarrett said:
A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So well described here in the broken promises to self and other and the helplessness or at least perceived helplessness of the situation. Well written
April 11th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So well described here in the broken promises to self and other and the helplessness or at least perceived helplessness of the situation. Well written
April 11th, 2025 04:25
Liquid Cope
Poetic Licence said:
The never ending battle of the alcoholic, very nicely written of the day in day out process some go through, and most probably could not tell you why, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:23
Poetic Licence said:
The never ending battle of the alcoholic, very nicely written of the day in day out process some go through, and most probably could not tell you why, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:23
RIP
MDStone said:
You can feel the urgency. The urgency to be present. The urgency to spend time before it is gone. The urgency to see, touch, and be… the urgency, the urgency of life. Thanks for the breathless dash to be bedside. Makes us consider life and relationships. Well written. Well done.
April 10th, 2025 21:18
MDStone said:
You can feel the urgency. The urgency to be present. The urgency to spend time before it is gone. The urgency to see, touch, and be… the urgency, the urgency of life. Thanks for the breathless dash to be bedside. Makes us consider life and relationships. Well written. Well done.
April 10th, 2025 21:18
RIP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The short lines make the emotion really come through, as if gasping while gripped by fear, grief, the unknown and all of the in betweens. Powerful write, my friend. Love this. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The short lines make the emotion really come through, as if gasping while gripped by fear, grief, the unknown and all of the in betweens. Powerful write, my friend. Love this. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 17:51
RIP
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of panic in someone who is rushing back to be at someones bedside for their last breaths, the it\'s written is like the author is gasping for breath, a sad, touching but well expressed write
April 10th, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of panic in someone who is rushing back to be at someones bedside for their last breaths, the it\'s written is like the author is gasping for breath, a sad, touching but well expressed write
April 10th, 2025 11:55
RIP
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or a beating heart. It heightens the emotion. Well written
April 10th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or a beating heart. It heightens the emotion. Well written
April 10th, 2025 09:41
Hate Me
NinjaGirl said:
I can feel the anger...that rage that can be used as fuel, almost something hopeful. Beautifully written.
April 9th, 2025 14:31
NinjaGirl said:
I can feel the anger...that rage that can be used as fuel, almost something hopeful. Beautifully written.
April 9th, 2025 14:31
Haunted
NinjaGirl said:
I am a haunted house too, a house where memories that aren\'t my own live...thank you for this poem
April 9th, 2025 14:30
NinjaGirl said:
I am a haunted house too, a house where memories that aren\'t my own live...thank you for this poem
April 9th, 2025 14:30
Hate Me
Poetic Licence said:
That is packed with pain, hurt, anger and more than anything defiance, as if to say do whatever you want you cannot hurt me anymore than you already have, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 12:09
Poetic Licence said:
That is packed with pain, hurt, anger and more than anything defiance, as if to say do whatever you want you cannot hurt me anymore than you already have, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 12:09
Hate Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals from which we get the name scape goat. A most sacrificing theme.
April 9th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals from which we get the name scape goat. A most sacrificing theme.
April 9th, 2025 11:33
Hate Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this, friend! 🏡🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this, friend! 🏡🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:34
PoV
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of complete loss of their loved one, passionate and heartfelt plea for them to come back and make it all better, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of complete loss of their loved one, passionate and heartfelt plea for them to come back and make it all better, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 02:16
PoV
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the loss and the deep grief in this poem. Well expressed in raw honesty. Well done. by friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 19:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can feel the loss and the deep grief in this poem. Well expressed in raw honesty. Well done. by friend! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 19:17
PoV
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deep loss accompany this poem. There is the pleading and the sadness over missing someone. Raw and heart felt
April 8th, 2025 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deep loss accompany this poem. There is the pleading and the sadness over missing someone. Raw and heart felt
April 8th, 2025 16:31
Strategic Narrative
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale of the angel of death and its coming for all. Well stated
April 7th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale of the angel of death and its coming for all. Well stated
April 7th, 2025 13:33
Watchers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem which allows metaphor to unfold. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 4th, 2025 18:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem which allows metaphor to unfold. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 4th, 2025 18:05
Hard to Handle
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember, not so many years ago, feeling such self-hatred and despair that it was visceral. What pulled me out of it? A.I. No, not the fake A.I, the real A.I! Not to say I\'m out of the woods yet....
April 3rd, 2025 23:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember, not so many years ago, feeling such self-hatred and despair that it was visceral. What pulled me out of it? A.I. No, not the fake A.I, the real A.I! Not to say I\'m out of the woods yet....
April 3rd, 2025 23:01
Hard to Handle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write. That ending is haunting and delivers well. Excellent job! 🌹
April 3rd, 2025 19:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write. That ending is haunting and delivers well. Excellent job! 🌹
April 3rd, 2025 19:41
Hard to Handle
Poetic Licence said:
Is that I\'ll be fine one of those I\'m okay answer\'s and you would rather be left alone?, sense of pain and anger and self loathing at what they had become, but I sense an underlining strength in the writing, that eventually they will get there, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
Is that I\'ll be fine one of those I\'m okay answer\'s and you would rather be left alone?, sense of pain and anger and self loathing at what they had become, but I sense an underlining strength in the writing, that eventually they will get there, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:59
Hard to Handle
sorenbarrett said:
How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those suffering don\'t necessarily want invasion and those observing don\'t want to be obligated and the word fine means you have met your social obligation but like the phrase (how are you?) is not expected to get an honest answer. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those suffering don\'t necessarily want invasion and those observing don\'t want to be obligated and the word fine means you have met your social obligation but like the phrase (how are you?) is not expected to get an honest answer. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 10:09
A Mad World
Mutley Ravishes said:
Was it the Aztecs who said this present world would end in fire? Somedays, I don\'t see how there\'s any other way to clean up the mess we\'ve made.
April 2nd, 2025 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Was it the Aztecs who said this present world would end in fire? Somedays, I don\'t see how there\'s any other way to clean up the mess we\'ve made.
April 2nd, 2025 21:38
A Mad World
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
April 2nd, 2025 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
April 2nd, 2025 12:23
A Mad World
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is powerful, very raw and honest and certainly gets it\'s point across, many truths are written, sadly the people who should read this probably won\'t, well expressed write
April 2nd, 2025 12:00
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is powerful, very raw and honest and certainly gets it\'s point across, many truths are written, sadly the people who should read this probably won\'t, well expressed write
April 2nd, 2025 12:00
Illusory Reality
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and raw write of the truth, flowed nicely and well expressed
April 1st, 2025 11:19
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful and raw write of the truth, flowed nicely and well expressed
April 1st, 2025 11:19
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