Comments received on poems by KTay
Sleep Terrors 3
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Muse of Calliope said:
Wow, this expresses so much; the pure terror waking up from the nightmares; the agony of night after night of disturbed sleep and the insurmountable exhaustion that follows; the barrage of listed remedies showing the desperation of trying anything and everything; \"screaming out, I cannot breathe again....will I ever sleep in peace again?\" Very moving
April 17th, 2025 12:10
Sleep Terrors 3
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
Poetic Licence said:
Real imagery of being terrorized by there nightmares, and what you do to try and sleep in peace, well expressed write
April 17th, 2025 09:15
Sleep Terrors 3
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most wonderful poem. My second time reading today and it gets better each time. Wonderful job, KTay! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A most wonderful poem. My second time reading today and it gets better each time. Wonderful job, KTay! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:42
Sleep Terrors 3
sorenbarrett said:
This poem immerses the reader in the terror itself. Vivid in its imagery it evokes feelings of terror. Well written
April 17th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem immerses the reader in the terror itself. Vivid in its imagery it evokes feelings of terror. Well written
April 17th, 2025 07:11
Aphotic Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
One pretends to be something else to hide the true self sometimes out of shame sometimes just shyness. I hear in this poem a plea to be oneself. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
One pretends to be something else to hide the true self sometimes out of shame sometimes just shyness. I hear in this poem a plea to be oneself. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 04:56
Aphotic Freedom
Poetic Licence said:
Many reflections and dark thoughts hidden behind the night mask, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:39
Poetic Licence said:
Many reflections and dark thoughts hidden behind the night mask, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 04:39
Aphotic Freedom
Mourgana of the Fey said:
The short lines make for a powerful strong canvas where many a reflection can be seen in this dark pool of wonder.
April 16th, 2025 02:17
Mourgana of the Fey said:
The short lines make for a powerful strong canvas where many a reflection can be seen in this dark pool of wonder.
April 16th, 2025 02:17
The Barring Pane
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...you have described my home...my space. I get this poem, my friend. Well done on this dark, poetic expression. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...you have described my home...my space. I get this poem, my friend. Well done on this dark, poetic expression. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 16:32
The Barring Pane
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and deep write of living in the night. where all the demons come out to play with their toys, your heart and mind, as dark as this write is, for some it is very real, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
Dark and deep write of living in the night. where all the demons come out to play with their toys, your heart and mind, as dark as this write is, for some it is very real, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 13:13
The Barring Pane
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and full of shadows this work speaks to the night. Well done
April 15th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and full of shadows this work speaks to the night. Well done
April 15th, 2025 12:56
Paper Flowers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The use of colors as an expression of emotions is brilliant, my friend. I very much related to this! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The use of colors as an expression of emotions is brilliant, my friend. I very much related to this! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 15:18
Paper Flowers
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this idea. Maybe my own secret garden deserves some flowers...some growth or healing. I think I\'ll visit this poem often, maybe make a flower out of paper instead of papercuts. Thank you for writing this poem
April 14th, 2025 11:10
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this idea. Maybe my own secret garden deserves some flowers...some growth or healing. I think I\'ll visit this poem often, maybe make a flower out of paper instead of papercuts. Thank you for writing this poem
April 14th, 2025 11:10
Paper Flowers
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of colors in this poem to signify different emotions. This poem runs the gambit and speaks from the heart. Nicely done
April 14th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of colors in this poem to signify different emotions. This poem runs the gambit and speaks from the heart. Nicely done
April 14th, 2025 10:13
Paper Flowers
Poetic Licence said:
This is so close to home for me, I connect with all of it, but I could not have written about it better than you have, a wonderful write even thou it has touched many nerves
April 14th, 2025 10:12
Poetic Licence said:
This is so close to home for me, I connect with all of it, but I could not have written about it better than you have, a wonderful write even thou it has touched many nerves
April 14th, 2025 10:12
Liquid Cope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this, having had my own battle with demon alcohol and its devastating effects on my mental health, self-esteem, and physical health, as well. This is such an important write and I thank you for expressing it, my friend. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this, having had my own battle with demon alcohol and its devastating effects on my mental health, self-esteem, and physical health, as well. This is such an important write and I thank you for expressing it, my friend. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:52
Liquid Cope
MDStone said:
KTay, A well written piece. “Standing there. Still unaddressed. The question WHY to him is pressed.” If we could just find it, address it, maybe it would heal. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:34
MDStone said:
KTay, A well written piece. “Standing there. Still unaddressed. The question WHY to him is pressed.” If we could just find it, address it, maybe it would heal. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:34
Liquid Cope
sorenbarrett said:
A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So well described here in the broken promises to self and other and the helplessness or at least perceived helplessness of the situation. Well written
April 11th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So well described here in the broken promises to self and other and the helplessness or at least perceived helplessness of the situation. Well written
April 11th, 2025 04:25
Liquid Cope
Poetic Licence said:
The never ending battle of the alcoholic, very nicely written of the day in day out process some go through, and most probably could not tell you why, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:23
Poetic Licence said:
The never ending battle of the alcoholic, very nicely written of the day in day out process some go through, and most probably could not tell you why, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:23
RIP
MDStone said:
You can feel the urgency. The urgency to be present. The urgency to spend time before it is gone. The urgency to see, touch, and be… the urgency, the urgency of life. Thanks for the breathless dash to be bedside. Makes us consider life and relationships. Well written. Well done.
April 10th, 2025 21:18
MDStone said:
You can feel the urgency. The urgency to be present. The urgency to spend time before it is gone. The urgency to see, touch, and be… the urgency, the urgency of life. Thanks for the breathless dash to be bedside. Makes us consider life and relationships. Well written. Well done.
April 10th, 2025 21:18
RIP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The short lines make the emotion really come through, as if gasping while gripped by fear, grief, the unknown and all of the in betweens. Powerful write, my friend. Love this. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The short lines make the emotion really come through, as if gasping while gripped by fear, grief, the unknown and all of the in betweens. Powerful write, my friend. Love this. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 17:51
RIP
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of panic in someone who is rushing back to be at someones bedside for their last breaths, the it\'s written is like the author is gasping for breath, a sad, touching but well expressed write
April 10th, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of panic in someone who is rushing back to be at someones bedside for their last breaths, the it\'s written is like the author is gasping for breath, a sad, touching but well expressed write
April 10th, 2025 11:55
RIP
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or a beating heart. It heightens the emotion. Well written
April 10th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or a beating heart. It heightens the emotion. Well written
April 10th, 2025 09:41
Hate Me
NinjaGirl said:
I can feel the anger...that rage that can be used as fuel, almost something hopeful. Beautifully written.
April 9th, 2025 14:31
NinjaGirl said:
I can feel the anger...that rage that can be used as fuel, almost something hopeful. Beautifully written.
April 9th, 2025 14:31
Haunted
NinjaGirl said:
I am a haunted house too, a house where memories that aren\'t my own live...thank you for this poem
April 9th, 2025 14:30
NinjaGirl said:
I am a haunted house too, a house where memories that aren\'t my own live...thank you for this poem
April 9th, 2025 14:30
Hate Me
Poetic Licence said:
That is packed with pain, hurt, anger and more than anything defiance, as if to say do whatever you want you cannot hurt me anymore than you already have, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 12:09
Poetic Licence said:
That is packed with pain, hurt, anger and more than anything defiance, as if to say do whatever you want you cannot hurt me anymore than you already have, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 12:09
Hate Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals from which we get the name scape goat. A most sacrificing theme.
April 9th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals from which we get the name scape goat. A most sacrificing theme.
April 9th, 2025 11:33
Hate Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this, friend! 🏡🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this, friend! 🏡🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:34
PoV
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of complete loss of their loved one, passionate and heartfelt plea for them to come back and make it all better, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of complete loss of their loved one, passionate and heartfelt plea for them to come back and make it all better, nicely expressed and written
April 9th, 2025 02:16
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