Comments received on poems by lewisgale mental hospital
Was There Time
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write asking a question that needs to be thought over, nicely expressed write
April 11th, 2025 02:18
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write asking a question that needs to be thought over, nicely expressed write
April 11th, 2025 02:18
Was There Time
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to ponder over. Thought provoking. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem to ponder over. Thought provoking. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 19:02
A Thousand Years
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
The paradoxes within these written lines are mind opening eyes for how humanity has lived as a global species. While some people still believe that originally there was peace the histories show that often man has become war driven. Not for survival but as a status or a way of measurement so to speak. Really enjoyed this piece! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:53
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
The paradoxes within these written lines are mind opening eyes for how humanity has lived as a global species. While some people still believe that originally there was peace the histories show that often man has become war driven. Not for survival but as a status or a way of measurement so to speak. Really enjoyed this piece! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:53
A Thousand Years
Poetic Licence said:
Would be enough interesting to hear that to music, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
Would be enough interesting to hear that to music, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:46
A Thousand Years
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that could be a song with chorus and all. Nicely worded
April 8th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that could be a song with chorus and all. Nicely worded
April 8th, 2025 04:23
You Are
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Out of your mind\" indeed! Powerful write! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 15:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Out of your mind\" indeed! Powerful write! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 15:25
You Are
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we allow the majority tell the minority that they are out of their mind. A lovely poem,
April 7th, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we allow the majority tell the minority that they are out of their mind. A lovely poem,
April 7th, 2025 14:30
A Million
sorenbarrett said:
Misinformation whether out of self interest or ignorance is still destructive and must be unlearned before new information can be incorporated. Yet such is life. A thought provoking read.
March 29th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Misinformation whether out of self interest or ignorance is still destructive and must be unlearned before new information can be incorporated. Yet such is life. A thought provoking read.
March 29th, 2025 04:38
A Million
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, nicely written
March 29th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, nicely written
March 29th, 2025 04:32
Went the Wrong Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Well written! Love the repetition! Very effective!
March 28th, 2025 20:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, my friend. Well written! Love the repetition! Very effective!
March 28th, 2025 20:23
Went the Wrong Way
Poetic Licence said:
How the decisions we all make all have consequences either they be good or bad decisions, nicely expressed and written
March 28th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
How the decisions we all make all have consequences either they be good or bad decisions, nicely expressed and written
March 28th, 2025 12:23
Went the Wrong Way
sorenbarrett said:
Wrong decisions, wrong choices all lead to consequences. Nicely said
March 28th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Wrong decisions, wrong choices all lead to consequences. Nicely said
March 28th, 2025 11:46
Sadness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Concise, but says a tremendous amount in its brevity. Well done, my friend! Welcome to MPS! 🌹
March 28th, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Concise, but says a tremendous amount in its brevity. Well done, my friend! Welcome to MPS! 🌹
March 28th, 2025 07:26
Sadness
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of being trapped and held in in this poem. It speaks of lack of control and helplessness. A frustrating feeling is left.
March 28th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of being trapped and held in in this poem. It speaks of lack of control and helplessness. A frustrating feeling is left.
March 28th, 2025 04:33
Sadness
Poetic Licence said:
Pain and hurt can imprison you over time and it can feel like the walls are closing in, nicely expressed and written write
March 28th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
Pain and hurt can imprison you over time and it can feel like the walls are closing in, nicely expressed and written write
March 28th, 2025 03:14
