Comments received on poems by Salian
Velvet Command
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely sensual write around sex and power, slightly on the erotic side, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely sensual write around sex and power, slightly on the erotic side, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 05:44
Velvet Command
sorenbarrett said:
A most erotic, sensual poem where sex and power become one. Strangely these two are often confused and melded as the Marquis de Sade. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most erotic, sensual poem where sex and power become one. Strangely these two are often confused and melded as the Marquis de Sade. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 05:08
Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A place that most of us have been before. This poem speaks with pain but also resolve and in acceptance facing reality. Nicely worded
May 22nd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A place that most of us have been before. This poem speaks with pain but also resolve and in acceptance facing reality. Nicely worded
May 22nd, 2025 04:54
Pain
Poetic Licence said:
Expressing the pain and sorrow they are carrying inside, but also that it will not beat them or hold them back, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:29
Poetic Licence said:
Expressing the pain and sorrow they are carrying inside, but also that it will not beat them or hold them back, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 04:29
Missed Calls
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosted in more modern vernacular. In my old school talk unrequited love is the answer. So well expressed in a single well described scenario the message is scent. Well done
May 17th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosted in more modern vernacular. In my old school talk unrequited love is the answer. So well expressed in a single well described scenario the message is scent. Well done
May 17th, 2025 04:20
Missed Calls
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of one side in love and wanting to talk, the other not listening, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 03:58
Poetic Licence said:
A tale of one side in love and wanting to talk, the other not listening, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 03:58
Monster In My Chest
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and rhymed this poem makes good use of the metaphor of a monster. It is an appropriate symbol for the anger that most people pen up within. Very nicely done.
May 5th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and rhymed this poem makes good use of the metaphor of a monster. It is an appropriate symbol for the anger that most people pen up within. Very nicely done.
May 5th, 2025 04:11
I Thought I Was Safe
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly loved the meter and rhyme of this poem that is good enough to be set to music. The message was well communicated and you used good imagery to convey it. Very nicely done
April 24th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly loved the meter and rhyme of this poem that is good enough to be set to music. The message was well communicated and you used good imagery to convey it. Very nicely done
April 24th, 2025 04:19
From Eight to Fate
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is romantic and if the eight turned on its side becomes infinity it is good for a long time. Nicely done
April 20th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is romantic and if the eight turned on its side becomes infinity it is good for a long time. Nicely done
April 20th, 2025 11:33
Borrow
Poetic Licence said:
The magic moment when a kiss sets your body, heart and soul on fire, lovely write
April 18th, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
The magic moment when a kiss sets your body, heart and soul on fire, lovely write
April 18th, 2025 04:41
Borrow
sorenbarrett said:
Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and beams with brightness of new love. A fun read.
April 18th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and beams with brightness of new love. A fun read.
April 18th, 2025 04:11
Coin Flip
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write giving a positive message, sometimes it\'s just meant to be, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:11
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write giving a positive message, sometimes it\'s just meant to be, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 06:11
Coin Flip
sorenbarrett said:
A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work. Clever and nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work. Clever and nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:00
Around Her
sorenbarrett said:
A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem written with great images and emotion for everyone wishes for someone like this and few find them. Very nicely done
April 17th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem written with great images and emotion for everyone wishes for someone like this and few find them. Very nicely done
April 17th, 2025 04:40
Around Her
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely heart warming write, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely heart warming write, enjoyed the read
April 17th, 2025 02:20
