Comments received on poems by Salian



Monster In My Chest
Sunshinefalling said:

Very good.

May 5th, 2025 16:56

Monster In My Chest
sorenbarrett said:

Well worded and rhymed this poem makes good use of the metaphor of a monster. It is an appropriate symbol for the anger that most people pen up within. Very nicely done.

May 5th, 2025 04:11

I Thought I Was Safe
sorenbarrett said:

I particularly loved the meter and rhyme of this poem that is good enough to be set to music. The message was well communicated and you used good imagery to convey it. Very nicely done

April 24th, 2025 04:19

From Eight to Fate
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read that is romantic and if the eight turned on its side becomes infinity it is good for a long time. Nicely done

April 20th, 2025 11:33

Borrow
Poetic Licence said:

The magic moment when a kiss sets your body, heart and soul on fire, lovely write

April 18th, 2025 04:41

Borrow
sorenbarrett said:

Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and beams with brightness of new love. A fun read.

April 18th, 2025 04:11

Coin Flip
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 17th, 2025 09:59

Coin Flip
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write giving a positive message, sometimes it\'s just meant to be, enjoyed the read

April 17th, 2025 06:11

Coin Flip
sorenbarrett said:

A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work. Clever and nicely written

April 17th, 2025 05:00

Around Her
sorenbarrett said:

A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem written with great images and emotion for everyone wishes for someone like this and few find them. Very nicely done

April 17th, 2025 04:40

Around Her
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely heart warming write, enjoyed the read

April 17th, 2025 02:20

Around Her
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️

April 17th, 2025 00:27

Around Her
dimpy said:

Wowww.. What a lovely poem...

April 16th, 2025 23:59

Around Her
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem

April 16th, 2025 22:03