Comments received on poems by ๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ
Hawkmoth
sorenbarrett said:
Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 10:12
Confusion
Damaso said:
The cruel truth that hides there. Beautiful enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing it! Greetings
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
Damaso said:
The cruel truth that hides there. Beautiful enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing it! Greetings
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
Confusion
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write of fear, the confusion is where wonderful writes like this come from, nicely written
June 21st, 2025 07:29
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write of fear, the confusion is where wonderful writes like this come from, nicely written
June 21st, 2025 07:29
Confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fave hayleigh. My thought s confuse me too. Keep writingโฆand yes, I know you will! Itโs what we do, isnโt it? Excellent poem! ๐น๐
June 21st, 2025 06:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fave hayleigh. My thought s confuse me too. Keep writingโฆand yes, I know you will! Itโs what we do, isnโt it? Excellent poem! ๐น๐
June 21st, 2025 06:07
Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be taken more than one way as can any lie, need or fear. A fave
June 21st, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be taken more than one way as can any lie, need or fear. A fave
June 21st, 2025 04:24
Sincerely, You
Damaso said:
This piece split me like a stake in the middle of the yard. It makes my heart bleed to tears. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:02
Damaso said:
This piece split me like a stake in the middle of the yard. It makes my heart bleed to tears. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:02
Sincerely, You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Haleigh! The things we do to protect ourselves, right? Powerful write!
June 6th, 2025 06:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Haleigh! The things we do to protect ourselves, right? Powerful write!
June 6th, 2025 06:37
Sincerely, You
sorenbarrett said:
Duality or multiplicity that serves as a protection. We all use it to some extent but for some it is a reality. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Duality or multiplicity that serves as a protection. We all use it to some extent but for some it is a reality. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:07
Housewife Blues
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely playing of words making an enjoyable read
June 3rd, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely playing of words making an enjoyable read
June 3rd, 2025 02:27
Housewife Blues
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on cliches and fun read. Loved it even thought it was a bit dark
June 2nd, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on cliches and fun read. Loved it even thought it was a bit dark
June 2nd, 2025 16:30
Texas Queen
Damaso said:
Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.
May 29th, 2025 08:23
Damaso said:
Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.
May 29th, 2025 08:23
Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:14
Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 18:58
Showgirl
NinjaGirl said:
Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.
May 19th, 2025 12:12
NinjaGirl said:
Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.
May 19th, 2025 12:12
Showgirl
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done
May 19th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done
May 19th, 2025 10:23
Mors Vincit Omnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
๐คฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!
May 14th, 2025 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
๐คฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!
May 14th, 2025 11:02
Mors Vincit Omnia
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke
May 13th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke
May 13th, 2025 17:11
Forks/Spoons/Knives
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I agree with both Soren and Tobani (Poetic License) below. This is a phenomenal write. It is a poem of resilience and proundly important for those who may be going through similar things. A fave for all those reasons. Happy Saturday, dear friend! ๐ค๐น๐
May 10th, 2025 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I agree with both Soren and Tobani (Poetic License) below. This is a phenomenal write. It is a poem of resilience and proundly important for those who may be going through similar things. A fave for all those reasons. Happy Saturday, dear friend! ๐ค๐น๐
May 10th, 2025 15:34
Forks/Spoons/Knives
Poetic Licence said:
The write inducates someone who has found the inner strength to overcome a bad start in life, this write would be encouraging for those who struggle to find that strength, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 10:45
Poetic Licence said:
The write inducates someone who has found the inner strength to overcome a bad start in life, this write would be encouraging for those who struggle to find that strength, nicely expressed and written
May 10th, 2025 10:45
Forks/Spoons/Knives
sorenbarrett said:
Tough circumstances breeds tough people a very nice write
May 10th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Tough circumstances breeds tough people a very nice write
May 10th, 2025 09:45
Cold Embrace
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of sharing hurt and pain done to each other, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of sharing hurt and pain done to each other, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 02:14
Cold Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric dark poem of shared damage. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 17:31
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric dark poem of shared damage. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 17:31
The Lovecats
Poetic Licence said:
I loved this write, wonderfully written and crafted
May 7th, 2025 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
I loved this write, wonderfully written and crafted
May 7th, 2025 10:03
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, sad and difficult to believe. That a person feels unlovable is tragic. Well written.
May 5th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, sad and difficult to believe. That a person feels unlovable is tragic. Well written.
May 5th, 2025 20:32
Untitled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem. I could feel it. The pain, the hurt, the longing. And, as per your note, I agree. Whether or not there is a worse feeling, that is among the worst. Been there, done that. Well done on this, my friend! ๐น๐
May 5th, 2025 19:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem. I could feel it. The pain, the hurt, the longing. And, as per your note, I agree. Whether or not there is a worse feeling, that is among the worst. Been there, done that. Well done on this, my friend! ๐น๐
May 5th, 2025 19:25
Untitled
Muse of Calliope said:
I really felt the anguish in this poem. Disillusionment but still longing to be reunited with something while also being repulsed by it...complicated, torn feelings and also the fear and emotional pain leading to numbness and despondency. Thank you for sharing ๐น
May 5th, 2025 19:10
Muse of Calliope said:
I really felt the anguish in this poem. Disillusionment but still longing to be reunited with something while also being repulsed by it...complicated, torn feelings and also the fear and emotional pain leading to numbness and despondency. Thank you for sharing ๐น
May 5th, 2025 19:10
Stay
sorenbarrett said:
Dark love that calls from the scars of passion. Good write
May 2nd, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Dark love that calls from the scars of passion. Good write
May 2nd, 2025 15:23
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