Comments received on poems by ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ
Men, Money, and Fantasies
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own, we all choose our values and go for what is important to us. A thoughtful write nicely put together
August 30th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own, we all choose our values and go for what is important to us. A thoughtful write nicely put together
August 30th, 2025 04:23
in my bed, all alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and powerful and, sadly for me, all too relatable. The repetition of in my bed, all alone carries the ache right through, but also the honesty that makes poetry salvation. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ A fave. Praying for happiness and an end to your pain, my friend!
August 25th, 2025 07:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and powerful and, sadly for me, all too relatable. The repetition of in my bed, all alone carries the ache right through, but also the honesty that makes poetry salvation. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ A fave. Praying for happiness and an end to your pain, my friend!
August 25th, 2025 07:34
in my bed, all alone
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great appealer it is a wonderful healer. Love is not for the fragile nor is poetry a lovely poem
August 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great appealer it is a wonderful healer. Love is not for the fragile nor is poetry a lovely poem
August 25th, 2025 03:58
Girlhood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! That moment under the sprinkler stopped me. The casual โoh, hi!โ against the weight of goodbye...itโs dissonant, chilling, and powerful. Strong work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 24th, 2025 17:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! That moment under the sprinkler stopped me. The casual โoh, hi!โ against the weight of goodbye...itโs dissonant, chilling, and powerful. Strong work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 24th, 2025 17:39
Girlhood
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a desperate ending. Nicely written with high emotional effect
August 24th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a desperate ending. Nicely written with high emotional effect
August 24th, 2025 04:40
Every Wrong Turn
sorenbarrett said:
Here are mixed feeling and feelings disguised. I feel a turmoil in this poem. Well done
August 23rd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Here are mixed feeling and feelings disguised. I feel a turmoil in this poem. Well done
August 23rd, 2025 04:30
Untouchable, Unlovable
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt the pull between desire and inabilityโฆthe kind of tension that doesnโt shout but presses into the chest. Youโve captured that inner bind beautifully. A fave from me, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 21st, 2025 13:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt the pull between desire and inabilityโฆthe kind of tension that doesnโt shout but presses into the chest. Youโve captured that inner bind beautifully. A fave from me, my friend.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 21st, 2025 13:18
Untouchable, Unlovable
sorenbarrett said:
Love is more than just a word although society treats it as such. A lovely poem
August 21st, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Love is more than just a word although society treats it as such. A lovely poem
August 21st, 2025 13:05
Sculpture
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! That line โif fear is the heart of love, you are most terrifyingโ really struck me. Love as awe and tremor...captured perfectly, imho. Strong writing, Hayleigh. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆ๐ฆโโฌ
August 20th, 2025 19:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! That line โif fear is the heart of love, you are most terrifyingโ really struck me. Love as awe and tremor...captured perfectly, imho. Strong writing, Hayleigh. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆ๐ฆโโฌ
August 20th, 2025 19:51
Sculpture
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents uncommon parings in metaphor that require a bit of thought. The serial presentation of sequential metaphors give them more sense and present love in a most uncommon manner. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents uncommon parings in metaphor that require a bit of thought. The serial presentation of sequential metaphors give them more sense and present love in a most uncommon manner. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 03:53
Anthem for the Apocalypse
NafisaSB said:
this is such a serious subject - well defined..
August 20th, 2025 02:39
NafisaSB said:
this is such a serious subject - well defined..
August 20th, 2025 02:39
Blood in the Snow
NafisaSB said:
trying to interpret - and hoping it\'s just for fun indeed...
August 20th, 2025 01:25
NafisaSB said:
trying to interpret - and hoping it\'s just for fun indeed...
August 20th, 2025 01:25
Missing Persons Report
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully crafted, Hayleigh. The stillness is unnervingโฆeach line folding in like a curtain over light. The decay isnโt shouted, it just settles heavy. Powerful piece. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ A fave.
August 19th, 2025 07:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully crafted, Hayleigh. The stillness is unnervingโฆeach line folding in like a curtain over light. The decay isnโt shouted, it just settles heavy. Powerful piece. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ A fave.
August 19th, 2025 07:09
Missing Persons Report
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of darkness and decay mentioned here. Well done
August 18th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of darkness and decay mentioned here. Well done
August 18th, 2025 09:22
Finally Numb
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another raw and unflinching poem, Hayleigh, which you know I loveโฆyouโve poured it all straight onto the page without filter. The scars, the questions, the surrender...it all lands with a stark honesty thatโs hard to ignore. Powerfully expressed, my friend. My type of poetry for sure! And amen to your note, as well. Very heartfelt! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 17th, 2025 07:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another raw and unflinching poem, Hayleigh, which you know I loveโฆyouโve poured it all straight onto the page without filter. The scars, the questions, the surrender...it all lands with a stark honesty thatโs hard to ignore. Powerfully expressed, my friend. My type of poetry for sure! And amen to your note, as well. Very heartfelt! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 17th, 2025 07:20
Bye, Honey!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is a master class Senryu, Hayleigh and I don\'t say that lightly. Haiku-like in structure (5-7-5) and, instead of a nature or seasonal focus (haiku), itโs centered on human behavior/emotion, irony, and wit...the humor of a fridge left open, the accusation, and then the shrugging โitโs only spilt milk.โ Perfection, my dear friend. This is a fave from me just on nailing the senryu alone, let alone its meaning. Powerful stuff! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 17th, 2025 07:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this is a master class Senryu, Hayleigh and I don\'t say that lightly. Haiku-like in structure (5-7-5) and, instead of a nature or seasonal focus (haiku), itโs centered on human behavior/emotion, irony, and wit...the humor of a fridge left open, the accusation, and then the shrugging โitโs only spilt milk.โ Perfection, my dear friend. This is a fave from me just on nailing the senryu alone, let alone its meaning. Powerful stuff! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 17th, 2025 07:14
Finally Numb
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of the pain of feeling unimportant and undervalued and they have just had enough of it , nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 04:47
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write of the pain of feeling unimportant and undervalued and they have just had enough of it , nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 04:47
Finally Numb
sorenbarrett said:
There is such pain in this poem and a feeling of insignificance and unimportance. A heartfelt write
August 17th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is such pain in this poem and a feeling of insignificance and unimportance. A heartfelt write
August 17th, 2025 04:42
Bye, Honey!
Demar Desu said:
Can you explain this one too me, just tryna understand more. Feels like it was written in the moment
August 16th, 2025 20:09
Demar Desu said:
Can you explain this one too me, just tryna understand more. Feels like it was written in the moment
August 16th, 2025 20:09
Expectations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Hayleigh! Boys seem to play \"men\" more oft\' than not. Is anyone, other than themselves, fooled? Not I says...well...I. ๐คช Again, great poem, Hayleigh. A fave! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 15th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Hayleigh! Boys seem to play \"men\" more oft\' than not. Is anyone, other than themselves, fooled? Not I says...well...I. ๐คช Again, great poem, Hayleigh. A fave! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 15th, 2025 10:07
Expectations
sorenbarrett said:
The last line seals it. One that relies on violence is not mature or in this case a man but remains a boy. Boys do not belong in serious relationships. Well written a fave
August 15th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
The last line seals it. One that relies on violence is not mature or in this case a man but remains a boy. Boys do not belong in serious relationships. Well written a fave
August 15th, 2025 05:22
Expectations
Poetic Licence said:
Someone who hasn\'t grown up yet and learned how to treat people properly, nicely expressed write
August 15th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
Someone who hasn\'t grown up yet and learned how to treat people properly, nicely expressed write
August 15th, 2025 05:13
Blood in the Snow
Aradhya said:
what a spectacular piece, absolutely loved this! keep penning
August 14th, 2025 13:15
Aradhya said:
what a spectacular piece, absolutely loved this! keep penning
August 14th, 2025 13:15
Blood in the Snow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu, Hayleigh! I can feel the emotions in this and its brevity only helps them land strong. Open to many different interpretations. Brilliantly penned! ๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 14th, 2025 12:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu, Hayleigh! I can feel the emotions in this and its brevity only helps them land strong. Open to many different interpretations. Brilliantly penned! ๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
August 14th, 2025 12:10
Blood in the Snow
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, leaving us to decide if good or bad, nicely done
August 14th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, leaving us to decide if good or bad, nicely done
August 14th, 2025 08:31
Blood in the Snow
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent senryu that speaks to numerous interpretations. Good or bad the reader chooses
August 14th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent senryu that speaks to numerous interpretations. Good or bad the reader chooses
August 14th, 2025 07:55
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