Comments received on poems by 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
Ghoulfriend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...I’d love to hear how they sound recorded. Do you upload under the name “Hayleigh,” or is there another handle you use on Bandcamp (or elsewhere)? Would really like to check out your music if it’s up anywhere. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I\'m on BandCamp under TragicLife and would love to give you a follow. :)
October 27th, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...I’d love to hear how they sound recorded. Do you upload under the name “Hayleigh,” or is there another handle you use on Bandcamp (or elsewhere)? Would really like to check out your music if it’s up anywhere. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I\'m on BandCamp under TragicLife and would love to give you a follow. :)
October 27th, 2025 09:08
Ghoulfriend
peto said:
Brilliant read
Can almost hear a tune
Dark gothic with a killer title that got me to take a look
Delighted to discover your writing
October 26th, 2025 19:02
peto said:
Brilliant read
Can almost hear a tune
Dark gothic with a killer title that got me to take a look
Delighted to discover your writing
October 26th, 2025 19:02
Ghoulfriend
sorenbarrett said:
A spooky write for Halloween and a bit of a love bite. Well done
October 26th, 2025 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
A spooky write for Halloween and a bit of a love bite. Well done
October 26th, 2025 17:25
Unchanged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to prove you can survive. You give that conflict a heartbeat. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, Hayleigh!
October 21st, 2025 07:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to prove you can survive. You give that conflict a heartbeat. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, Hayleigh!
October 21st, 2025 07:11
Unchanged
sorenbarrett said:
Tones of uncertainty and need for support in this poem give it a reaching out feel. Nicely worded
October 21st, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Tones of uncertainty and need for support in this poem give it a reaching out feel. Nicely worded
October 21st, 2025 04:22
If I were an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective that I enjoyed. I think that being an angel is a matter of perspective. What is an angel to one is a devil to another. The victor imposes their god on the vanquished. Very creative.
October 16th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective that I enjoyed. I think that being an angel is a matter of perspective. What is an angel to one is a devil to another. The victor imposes their god on the vanquished. Very creative.
October 16th, 2025 04:30
Observational Patterns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one breathes with pain and brilliance...a confession, a warning, and a vow all in one. “To love me is philanthropy” hit like gospel. I get it and can totes relate. You make broken sound holy, my friend...and I admire that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 12th, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one breathes with pain and brilliance...a confession, a warning, and a vow all in one. “To love me is philanthropy” hit like gospel. I get it and can totes relate. You make broken sound holy, my friend...and I admire that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 12th, 2025 07:26
Observational Patterns
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts so peacefully with a tranquil color and ends more violently speaking of killing then ends with a pledge to forever be a lovers love. Quite a journey. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts so peacefully with a tranquil color and ends more violently speaking of killing then ends with a pledge to forever be a lovers love. Quite a journey. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:14
Old Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I remember feeling that same strange age inside...like your soul’s seen too much too soon. You wrote it beautifully and bravely. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I remember feeling that same strange age inside...like your soul’s seen too much too soon. You wrote it beautifully and bravely. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2025 08:17
Old Soul
RSM0812 said:
Your teenage age years will guide you for the rest of your life. Your writing is a beautiful outlet. This poem expresses the worry and stresses all teens have growing up in backwards social hive of killer bees. You have to be the queen. The workers will oblige.
October 11th, 2025 06:02
RSM0812 said:
Your teenage age years will guide you for the rest of your life. Your writing is a beautiful outlet. This poem expresses the worry and stresses all teens have growing up in backwards social hive of killer bees. You have to be the queen. The workers will oblige.
October 11th, 2025 06:02
Old Soul
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling with thinking they should behave older than they are, maybe through added responsibility, instead of just being there age. Which in time takes it\'s toll. Well expressed write
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling with thinking they should behave older than they are, maybe through added responsibility, instead of just being there age. Which in time takes it\'s toll. Well expressed write
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Old Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old as you think you are. Nice
October 10th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old as you think you are. Nice
October 10th, 2025 18:22
How Much I Meant
sorenbarrett said:
Girls and boys expectations in relationships are far different as are their thoughts and interests. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Girls and boys expectations in relationships are far different as are their thoughts and interests. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 04:02
Prom Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Prom Night
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
Prom Night
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
Lip Gloss
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
Rotting Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Rotting Alive
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Rotting Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
Untitled #3
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!!
As for your poem, Ii sucks to feel unloved or unable to be loved by another and, when that seeming becomes the regular cycle, it can be off putting in the least...so much so that solitude and isolation and loneliness seem to be the better pain. Powerful write, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!!
As for your poem, Ii sucks to feel unloved or unable to be loved by another and, when that seeming becomes the regular cycle, it can be off putting in the least...so much so that solitude and isolation and loneliness seem to be the better pain. Powerful write, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:27
Untitled #3
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to speak of a disbelief that she can be loved by a man and has accepted solitude. Strong words of conviction here. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to speak of a disbelief that she can be loved by a man and has accepted solitude. Strong words of conviction here. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:09
For Mary Shelley
Fred1794 said:
Beautiful love letter to Mary. She would be proud.
September 17th, 2025 20:51
Fred1794 said:
Beautiful love letter to Mary. She would be proud.
September 17th, 2025 20:51
Black Swan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Remember the film and wow, you do so very well in capturing the mood and feeling of it. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Remember the film and wow, you do so very well in capturing the mood and feeling of it. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:29
Black Swan
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that movie and this poem is a shadow of it portraying the feeling so well. Very nicely done in so few words a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that movie and this poem is a shadow of it portraying the feeling so well. Very nicely done in so few words a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:39
For Mary Shelley
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink, identity, rebellion, and remembrance all tied to Mary. It feels like Wollstonecraft’s spirit carried forward in your words. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Who was that Shelley anywho? 🤣 I love the way irony played out historically! Very poetic that justice is. Go Mary! Again, very well done and, of course, a must fave for me!
September 10th, 2025 13:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink, identity, rebellion, and remembrance all tied to Mary. It feels like Wollstonecraft’s spirit carried forward in your words. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Who was that Shelley anywho? 🤣 I love the way irony played out historically! Very poetic that justice is. Go Mary! Again, very well done and, of course, a must fave for me!
September 10th, 2025 13:57
For Mary Shelley
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and writing. Short but conveys its message
September 9th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and writing. Short but conveys its message
September 9th, 2025 19:34
« Return to the profile of 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
