Comments received on poems by ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ
Fearing God
sorenbarrett said:
This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it felt like it fit today\'s disposable relationship concept. A hard read either way.
November 26th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it felt like it fit today\'s disposable relationship concept. A hard read either way.
November 26th, 2025 04:49
Summer \'67
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and quite brilliant, methinks. Well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 23rd, 2025 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and quite brilliant, methinks. Well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 23rd, 2025 16:01
Summer \'67
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive and sensual poem of love theft and banditry of another\'s heart. Well written in short verse. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive and sensual poem of love theft and banditry of another\'s heart. Well written in short verse. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 14:50
Nervosa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feelingโฆ the slow wearing down youโre naming here. Very well expressed, my friend.. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 21st, 2025 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feelingโฆ the slow wearing down youโre naming here. Very well expressed, my friend.. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 21st, 2025 11:23
Nervosa
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in somewhat cryptic words that leave me wondering and that is good for the mind starts to work again. This has the feel of a rap in its rhyme scheme.
November 21st, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in somewhat cryptic words that leave me wondering and that is good for the mind starts to work again. This has the feel of a rap in its rhyme scheme.
November 21st, 2025 03:38
The Fog and the Fever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleighโฆ the permanent dazeโฆ the dream that feels safer than tryingโฆ the someone who still means something even when love feels lopsided. You weave all of that together so gently that the hurt lands softโฆ but sure. This is tender work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 18th, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleighโฆ the permanent dazeโฆ the dream that feels safer than tryingโฆ the someone who still means something even when love feels lopsided. You weave all of that together so gently that the hurt lands softโฆ but sure. This is tender work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 18th, 2025 20:56
The Fog and the Fever
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to change. Nicely written in poetic verse
November 18th, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to change. Nicely written in poetic verse
November 18th, 2025 03:30
Cute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this reads like a small confessionโฆloneliness softened by love, pain laid down so something new can rise. I hear you on the constant state of exhaustion...that sucks...but yay for the As! Great poem, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this reads like a small confessionโฆloneliness softened by love, pain laid down so something new can rise. I hear you on the constant state of exhaustion...that sucks...but yay for the As! Great poem, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 08:21
Cute
sorenbarrett said:
How different things are when one feels alone. A lovely write
November 12th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
How different things are when one feels alone. A lovely write
November 12th, 2025 20:14
Ghoulfriend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...Iโd love to hear how they sound recorded. Do you upload under the name โHayleigh,โ or is there another handle you use on Bandcamp (or elsewhere)? Would really like to check out your music if itโs up anywhere. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ I\'m on BandCamp under TragicLife and would love to give you a follow. :)
October 27th, 2025 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...Iโd love to hear how they sound recorded. Do you upload under the name โHayleigh,โ or is there another handle you use on Bandcamp (or elsewhere)? Would really like to check out your music if itโs up anywhere. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ I\'m on BandCamp under TragicLife and would love to give you a follow. :)
October 27th, 2025 09:08
Ghoulfriend
peto said:
Brilliant read
Can almost hear a tune
Dark gothic with a killer title that got me to take a look
Delighted to discover your writing
October 26th, 2025 19:02
peto said:
Brilliant read
Can almost hear a tune
Dark gothic with a killer title that got me to take a look
Delighted to discover your writing
October 26th, 2025 19:02
Ghoulfriend
sorenbarrett said:
A spooky write for Halloween and a bit of a love bite. Well done
October 26th, 2025 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
A spooky write for Halloween and a bit of a love bite. Well done
October 26th, 2025 17:25
Unchanged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to prove you can survive. You give that conflict a heartbeat. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Well done, Hayleigh!
October 21st, 2025 07:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to prove you can survive. You give that conflict a heartbeat. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Well done, Hayleigh!
October 21st, 2025 07:11
Unchanged
sorenbarrett said:
Tones of uncertainty and need for support in this poem give it a reaching out feel. Nicely worded
October 21st, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Tones of uncertainty and need for support in this poem give it a reaching out feel. Nicely worded
October 21st, 2025 04:22
If I were an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective that I enjoyed. I think that being an angel is a matter of perspective. What is an angel to one is a devil to another. The victor imposes their god on the vanquished. Very creative.
October 16th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective that I enjoyed. I think that being an angel is a matter of perspective. What is an angel to one is a devil to another. The victor imposes their god on the vanquished. Very creative.
October 16th, 2025 04:30
Observational Patterns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one breathes with pain and brilliance...a confession, a warning, and a vow all in one. โTo love me is philanthropyโ hit like gospel. I get it and can totes relate. You make broken sound holy, my friend...and I admire that! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 12th, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one breathes with pain and brilliance...a confession, a warning, and a vow all in one. โTo love me is philanthropyโ hit like gospel. I get it and can totes relate. You make broken sound holy, my friend...and I admire that! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 12th, 2025 07:26
Observational Patterns
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts so peacefully with a tranquil color and ends more violently speaking of killing then ends with a pledge to forever be a lovers love. Quite a journey. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts so peacefully with a tranquil color and ends more violently speaking of killing then ends with a pledge to forever be a lovers love. Quite a journey. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 20:14
Old Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I remember feeling that same strange age inside...like your soulโs seen too much too soon. You wrote it beautifully and bravely. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 11th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I remember feeling that same strange age inside...like your soulโs seen too much too soon. You wrote it beautifully and bravely. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 11th, 2025 08:17
Old Soul
RSM0812 said:
Your teenage age years will guide you for the rest of your life. Your writing is a beautiful outlet. This poem expresses the worry and stresses all teens have growing up in backwards social hive of killer bees. You have to be the queen. The workers will oblige.
October 11th, 2025 06:02
RSM0812 said:
Your teenage age years will guide you for the rest of your life. Your writing is a beautiful outlet. This poem expresses the worry and stresses all teens have growing up in backwards social hive of killer bees. You have to be the queen. The workers will oblige.
October 11th, 2025 06:02
Old Soul
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling with thinking they should behave older than they are, maybe through added responsibility, instead of just being there age. Which in time takes it\'s toll. Well expressed write
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling with thinking they should behave older than they are, maybe through added responsibility, instead of just being there age. Which in time takes it\'s toll. Well expressed write
October 10th, 2025 20:26
Old Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old as you think you are. Nice
October 10th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old as you think you are. Nice
October 10th, 2025 18:22
How Much I Meant
sorenbarrett said:
Girls and boys expectations in relationships are far different as are their thoughts and interests. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Girls and boys expectations in relationships are far different as are their thoughts and interests. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 04:02
Prom Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Prom Night
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
Prom Night
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
Lip Gloss
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
Rotting Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights offโฆI know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights offโฆI know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Rotting Alive
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Rotting Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
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