Comments received on poems by 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
voluntary null
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is quietly devastating...possibility remains within reach, yet the will to claim any of it has disappeared. The resignation here carries tremendous weight. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is quietly devastating...possibility remains within reach, yet the will to claim any of it has disappeared. The resignation here carries tremendous weight. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:40
voluntary null
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with knowledge or relationships. A person needs to make use of what is available to them. A great metaphor in this poem. Nicely done.
August 20th, 2026 03:21
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with knowledge or relationships. A person needs to make use of what is available to them. A great metaphor in this poem. Nicely done.
August 20th, 2026 03:21
fruit
Paul Bell said:
Something to do with the rib I gave you, putting me on a higher plane.
Not forgetting how I direct you without using a map.
Apart from that, women usually rule cos they know where everything is.
August 1st, 2026 04:36
Paul Bell said:
Something to do with the rib I gave you, putting me on a higher plane.
Not forgetting how I direct you without using a map.
Apart from that, women usually rule cos they know where everything is.
August 1st, 2026 04:36
fruit
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
EXCELLENT... be the change
Question everything
and teach the children
June 28th, 2026 15:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
EXCELLENT... be the change
Question everything
and teach the children
June 28th, 2026 15:34
fruit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, that closing question really landed with me, my friend. 😄 \"You aren\'t your body, why be defined by it then?\" is one of those lines that keeps echoing after the poem ends. Thought-provoking write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, that closing question really landed with me, my friend. 😄 \"You aren\'t your body, why be defined by it then?\" is one of those lines that keeps echoing after the poem ends. Thought-provoking write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:01
kate moss and me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
hayleigh, this hits with brutal honesty. The short, direct lines make everything feel immediate...like thoughts spoken aloud in the middle of exhaustion and self-conflict without any filter between them. That final couplet lands especially hard. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
hayleigh, this hits with brutal honesty. The short, direct lines make everything feel immediate...like thoughts spoken aloud in the middle of exhaustion and self-conflict without any filter between them. That final couplet lands especially hard. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:41
kate moss and me
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem in this poem a fun write. It is the last lines that give it a turn and confused me. Is it jealousy that promotes the hate from those that love you the most? Well done
May 23rd, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem in this poem a fun write. It is the last lines that give it a turn and confused me. Is it jealousy that promotes the hate from those that love you the most? Well done
May 23rd, 2026 08:08
trans allegheny lunatic asylum
NafisaSB said:
a telling remark about what\'s going on...
April 1st, 2026 00:29
NafisaSB said:
a telling remark about what\'s going on...
April 1st, 2026 00:29
trans allegheny lunatic asylum
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, there’s a haunting calm in this that really lingers. The dust, the empty bed, the quiet movement through it all…then that turn into something more than just memory. It feels like presence layered on absence. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, there’s a haunting calm in this that really lingers. The dust, the empty bed, the quiet movement through it all…then that turn into something more than just memory. It feels like presence layered on absence. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:49
trans allegheny lunatic asylum
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what we are made of dust, dry skin cells scattered things change including who we are as we shed all we are made of and the doctors and nurses come and go as does the tobacco all specters left over from our neglect
March 29th, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what we are made of dust, dry skin cells scattered things change including who we are as we shed all we are made of and the doctors and nurses come and go as does the tobacco all specters left over from our neglect
March 29th, 2026 08:38
waiting room of purgatory
2781 said:
The writer still has a conscience-He brought me up also out of an horrible pit,out of the miry clay, and set my feet upon a rock, and established my goings. x
March 29th, 2026 08:37
2781 said:
The writer still has a conscience-He brought me up also out of an horrible pit,out of the miry clay, and set my feet upon a rock, and established my goings. x
March 29th, 2026 08:37
rainbow froyo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “every scar on my body, / a brush stroke on a canvas” is what stays with me…especially alongside Psalm 22’s voice of being reduced, exposed, undone. It turns the body into testimony without trying to redeem it. Just truth. Powerful...your pairing the poem with Scripture deeps what is already a deep poem. Just wow! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “every scar on my body, / a brush stroke on a canvas” is what stays with me…especially alongside Psalm 22’s voice of being reduced, exposed, undone. It turns the body into testimony without trying to redeem it. Just truth. Powerful...your pairing the poem with Scripture deeps what is already a deep poem. Just wow! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:29
rainbow froyo
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of reflections on love and life and the difficulty involved. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of reflections on love and life and the difficulty involved. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 19:42
waiting room of purgatory
NafisaSB said:
self depreciation is truly cancerous - better to nip it in the bud, and face your challenges with the quiet inner strength you will find you had in you...
March 24th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
self depreciation is truly cancerous - better to nip it in the bud, and face your challenges with the quiet inner strength you will find you had in you...
March 24th, 2026 01:06
waiting room of purgatory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I’ve brushed up against that kind of inner noise before…where everything turns inward and starts to collapse on itself. You captured that intensity in a way that feels immediate and real. It’s not easy to put that into words and you did it well, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I’ve brushed up against that kind of inner noise before…where everything turns inward and starts to collapse on itself. You captured that intensity in a way that feels immediate and real. It’s not easy to put that into words and you did it well, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:14
waiting room of purgatory
Demar Desu said:
“I have stopped thinking” I aspire..
March 18th, 2026 21:16
Demar Desu said:
“I have stopped thinking” I aspire..
March 18th, 2026 21:16
waiting room of purgatory
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words of anger lay in this poem giving it power but at the same time so self deprecating.
March 18th, 2026 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words of anger lay in this poem giving it power but at the same time so self deprecating.
March 18th, 2026 20:13
sadist dreamscape
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is dark and unapologetic…it doesn’t flinch. My kind of poetry. There’s a raw hunger running through it that feels intentional and controlled. The tension between dominance and dust lingers heavy. Bold piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is dark and unapologetic…it doesn’t flinch. My kind of poetry. There’s a raw hunger running through it that feels intentional and controlled. The tension between dominance and dust lingers heavy. Bold piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:14
sadist dreamscape
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds very Jewish and somewhat old school. A desire to be passed over and coming to Passover. Well done
February 27th, 2026 20:39
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds very Jewish and somewhat old school. A desire to be passed over and coming to Passover. Well done
February 27th, 2026 20:39
bloody valentine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is dark, visceral, and emotionally charged. Beneath the shock is a yearning to feel significant…to equate suffering with worth. The repetition and escalation build that desperation steadily. It’s not easy to read, and that’s exactly why it resonates so well. Powerful write, here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 15th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is dark, visceral, and emotionally charged. Beneath the shock is a yearning to feel significant…to equate suffering with worth. The repetition and escalation build that desperation steadily. It’s not easy to read, and that’s exactly why it resonates so well. Powerful write, here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 15th, 2026 09:34
« Return to the profile of 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
