Comments received on poems by ⋆♱𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱♱⋆



Texas Queen
Damaso said:

Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.

May 29th, 2025 08:23

Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written

May 23rd, 2025 02:14

Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
sorenbarrett said:

A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written

May 22nd, 2025 18:58

Showgirl
NinjaGirl said:

Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.

May 19th, 2025 12:12

Showgirl
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done

May 19th, 2025 10:23

Mors Vincit Omnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:

🤣 Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!

May 14th, 2025 11:02

Mors Vincit Omnia
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke

May 13th, 2025 17:11

Forks/Spoons/Knives
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I agree with both Soren and Tobani (Poetic License) below. This is a phenomenal write. It is a poem of resilience and proundly important for those who may be going through similar things. A fave for all those reasons. Happy Saturday, dear friend! 🖤🌹👏

May 10th, 2025 15:34

Forks/Spoons/Knives
Poetic Licence said:

The write inducates someone who has found the inner strength to overcome a bad start in life, this write would be encouraging for those who struggle to find that strength, nicely expressed and written

May 10th, 2025 10:45

Forks/Spoons/Knives
sorenbarrett said:

Tough circumstances breeds tough people a very nice write

May 10th, 2025 09:45

Cold Embrace
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of sharing hurt and pain done to each other, nicely expressed and written

May 9th, 2025 02:14

Cold Embrace
Damaso said:

💔

May 8th, 2025 22:58

Cold Embrace
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphoric dark poem of shared damage. Nicely done

May 8th, 2025 17:31

The Lovecats
Poetic Licence said:

I loved this write, wonderfully written and crafted

May 7th, 2025 10:03

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

Raw, sad and difficult to believe. That a person feels unlovable is tragic. Well written.

May 5th, 2025 20:32

Untitled
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful poem. I could feel it. The pain, the hurt, the longing. And, as per your note, I agree. Whether or not there is a worse feeling, that is among the worst. Been there, done that. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏

May 5th, 2025 19:25

Untitled
Muse of Calliope said:

I really felt the anguish in this poem. Disillusionment but still longing to be reunited with something while also being repulsed by it...complicated, torn feelings and also the fear and emotional pain leading to numbness and despondency. Thank you for sharing 🌹

May 5th, 2025 19:10

Stay
Tony36 said:

Blow the trumpets
Bang the gongs
Raise your voice
And party on

May 2nd, 2025 16:07

Stay
sorenbarrett said:

Dark love that calls from the scars of passion. Good write

May 2nd, 2025 15:23

Stay
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hear hear! Me too! TGIF! Greater things are indeed to come! Rock on hanleigh, loved this poem! 🌹👏

May 2nd, 2025 15:03

Blind
Tristan Robert Lange said:

No pressure, my friend. We’ll be here to read when you do post. Life does happen. This poem is wonderful and I really liked the layout. Wonderful job, hanleigh. A fave.

April 30th, 2025 20:15

Blind
sorenbarrett said:

A most creative format to this poem. Nicely done

April 30th, 2025 15:17

Differ
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is a poem about being lost in uncertainty and desperately longing for a way out. This poem really hit home...and you and I share the same taste in music, clearly, at least when it comes to Goth and Goth-adjacent music. Well done, Hanleigh!

April 29th, 2025 19:07

Differ
sorenbarrett said:

I hear not only desperation and need in this poem but a sense of being lost with that sense of panic that one gets when one does not know where they are or the way to go. Well expressed

April 29th, 2025 05:08

Hinton, Pt. II
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I feel the pain, the longing, the grief in this poem. I understand it entirely and the ending really hit (pun intended) hard. Wonderful job, Hanleigh. I really dig your style and your ability to express your emotions visually is...well...brava! Not everyone can do that. You do it effortlessly in everything I\'ve read thus far. You\'ve got much talent, my friend. Glad out paths have crossed as I really relate to your work. Looking forward to more, as always. 🌹👏

April 28th, 2025 14:57

Hinton, Pt. II
sorenbarrett said:

Reminiscing, memories of what was and what wasn\'t wishes and desires framed in hopes not yet realized. A lovely write

April 28th, 2025 05:22

Shades of Cool
Sunshinefalling said:

You painted a vast picture with little words. I could see it.

April 26th, 2025 14:10

Shades of Cool
Tristan Robert Lange said:

And songs are a great way to block writer\'s block. Whatever inspires, however the muse calls, go for it. Loved this and faved it, my friend. And I love the song too. Well done. 🙏🌹👏

April 26th, 2025 12:39

Shades of Cool
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of loss and desire to be with the lost. A lovely and touching poem that is wistful in a way and yet forlorn.

April 26th, 2025 07:31

The Cry
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great song. I actually read the poem to it and could almost imagine you writing this to the song. Love Goth music, by the way...so great song choice! This piece is filled with despair and anger. I could feel every word of this and, sadly, have been there. A most haunting and urgent poem, my friend. You have quite the talent and I hope for you, as it is for me, that such expression is healing. ❤️‍🩹🖤🐦‍⬛🦇👏🌹

April 25th, 2025 08:19

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