Comments received on poems by 🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི
Vienna
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
August 6th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
August 6th, 2025 17:40
Parts of Me
peto said:
I read in your profile you like to be dramatic
It shows on this write
The host is worth much more than she believes
An amazing way with words
Talented
August 5th, 2025 12:56
peto said:
I read in your profile you like to be dramatic
It shows on this write
The host is worth much more than she believes
An amazing way with words
Talented
August 5th, 2025 12:56
Parts of Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 12:39
Untitled #2
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write going alot deeper than first thought, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:29
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write going alot deeper than first thought, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:29
Untitled #2
peto said:
That 1st line
Your writing certainly doesn\'t lack substance
And last verse wow
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 3rd, 2025 10:09
peto said:
That 1st line
Your writing certainly doesn\'t lack substance
And last verse wow
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 3rd, 2025 10:09
Untitled #2
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48
Home No Longer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that centers around inequity and unfairness. Nicely done
August 1st, 2025 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that centers around inequity and unfairness. Nicely done
August 1st, 2025 20:48
Home No Longer
peto said:
\"I\'m only me that\'s not a lot\"
I disagree
You are an artist as this write proves
2nd verse though a bot scary is stunning
Glad to discover your writing
August 1st, 2025 19:34
peto said:
\"I\'m only me that\'s not a lot\"
I disagree
You are an artist as this write proves
2nd verse though a bot scary is stunning
Glad to discover your writing
August 1st, 2025 19:34
Tragic Unveiling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a striking and intense piece, Hayleigh. The imagery bleeds with pain and defiance...raw, rhythmic, and unflinching. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a striking and intense piece, Hayleigh. The imagery bleeds with pain and defiance...raw, rhythmic, and unflinching. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:38
Tragic Unveiling
Damaso said:
Wow, raw and sad. A beautiful facade of lights hides sad silences of darkness. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 13:42
Damaso said:
Wow, raw and sad. A beautiful facade of lights hides sad silences of darkness. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 13:42
Tragic Unveiling
Poetic Licence said:
A sensitive write of how some woman are still treated especially by those who should care for them, only speak when spoken to, a phrase that says it all, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:09
Poetic Licence said:
A sensitive write of how some woman are still treated especially by those who should care for them, only speak when spoken to, a phrase that says it all, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:09
Tragic Unveiling
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphor to me. It has several possibilities one of which is how a woman feels treated by those around her and is touchingly sad and judgemental. Well written
July 24th, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphor to me. It has several possibilities one of which is how a woman feels treated by those around her and is touchingly sad and judgemental. Well written
July 24th, 2025 12:25
Runaway Runaway
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is ferocious in its approach...and that’s exactly why it lands. “When I killed myself I didn’t die” is brutal, haunting and unforgettable. You’ve carved pain cleanly into the page. Much respect, my friend. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is ferocious in its approach...and that’s exactly why it lands. “When I killed myself I didn’t die” is brutal, haunting and unforgettable. You’ve carved pain cleanly into the page. Much respect, my friend. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:00
Runaway Runaway
Poetic Licence said:
I got the feeling of a poisonous relationship that one side gave everything, now they have had enough, Nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 11:58
Poetic Licence said:
I got the feeling of a poisonous relationship that one side gave everything, now they have had enough, Nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 11:58
Runaway Runaway
sorenbarrett said:
Lines that can be taken several ways and well composed
July 23rd, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Lines that can be taken several ways and well composed
July 23rd, 2025 11:35
Memoir of Cynicism
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is tightly wound and brutally honest. Each line delivers like a football in flight…\"snapping...the impaction” is such a final, visceral note. Brilliantly unflinching. And that’s what gives it its power. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 13:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is tightly wound and brutally honest. Each line delivers like a football in flight…\"snapping...the impaction” is such a final, visceral note. Brilliantly unflinching. And that’s what gives it its power. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 13:59
Memoir of Cynicism
sorenbarrett said:
People treated as animals literally or verbally as a metaphor the same. We should not even treat animals that way. A rather haunting and dark write. Loved it.
July 22nd, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
People treated as animals literally or verbally as a metaphor the same. We should not even treat animals that way. A rather haunting and dark write. Loved it.
July 22nd, 2025 08:26
Amanda Taylor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one’s brutal in its restraint. The repetition stabs in and out in like a ritual…“in and out / thirty-one times”…that line chills and haunts perfectly. You didn’t look away, and neither can we. That final line...\"pose for me\" indeed. Wow...just wow! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one’s brutal in its restraint. The repetition stabs in and out in like a ritual…“in and out / thirty-one times”…that line chills and haunts perfectly. You didn’t look away, and neither can we. That final line...\"pose for me\" indeed. Wow...just wow! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:20
Amanda Taylor
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take it is a murder but could be a rape. Sounds to be a stabbing but could be sexual since it is not rated +18 take it to be murder that is always more accepted than sex. Well written
July 21st, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take it is a murder but could be a rape. Sounds to be a stabbing but could be sexual since it is not rated +18 take it to be murder that is always more accepted than sex. Well written
July 21st, 2025 03:40
Hopelessly
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem is haunting and beautifully atmospheric. The evocative imagery and recurring questions create a tender sense of loss and introspection. Subtle spiritual undertones and vivid metaphors make this piece linger in the reader’s mind.
July 19th, 2025 04:38
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem is haunting and beautifully atmospheric. The evocative imagery and recurring questions create a tender sense of loss and introspection. Subtle spiritual undertones and vivid metaphors make this piece linger in the reader’s mind.
July 19th, 2025 04:38
Hopelessly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The grief is palpable, my friend. Beautifully written. This is a very relatable piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The grief is palpable, my friend. Beautifully written. This is a very relatable piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 07:57
Hopelessly
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem speaks to one gone. It is very nicely written and carries with it a memory. Well done
July 17th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem speaks to one gone. It is very nicely written and carries with it a memory. Well done
July 17th, 2025 07:55
Parts of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own haunting, and that final question lands hard. There\'s a stark beauty in how you lay out each moment—intimate, eerie, and real. Powerful work. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own haunting, and that final question lands hard. There\'s a stark beauty in how you lay out each moment—intimate, eerie, and real. Powerful work. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:31
Parts of Love
sorenbarrett said:
This one cleverly pairs the different aspects of love that seem diametrically opposed. Very nice rhyme throughout and a fave
July 10th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This one cleverly pairs the different aspects of love that seem diametrically opposed. Very nice rhyme throughout and a fave
July 10th, 2025 14:32
Parts of Love
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, for some all of what is mentioned, for others none of it, as in all things in life there is good and bad, nicely written
July 10th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, for some all of what is mentioned, for others none of it, as in all things in life there is good and bad, nicely written
July 10th, 2025 12:47
Pink and Grey Hearts
Damaso said:
Wow, dark, sincere, and thoughtful, and he admits his mistakes; he knows he\'s human. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:53
Damaso said:
Wow, dark, sincere, and thoughtful, and he admits his mistakes; he knows he\'s human. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:53
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