Comments received on poems by 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
Prom Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem! I\'m still with the person I went to prom with. It was hers, as she went to a different school, but great memories! I am sure yours will rock too! Carpe diem indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 20:44
Prom Night
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
RSM0812 said:
I never went to my prom but even though im a male i can relate to your vivid emotions and beautiful poem. Nicely penned.
October 6th, 2025 20:19
Prom Night
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A time that only happens once so carpe diem I say. Nicely done
October 6th, 2025 15:02
Lip Gloss
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
September 28th, 2025 03:49
Rotting Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know that gravity, and your words hold it with fierce clarity. You turned private ruin into something brave and visible, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done on this.
September 24th, 2025 07:15
Rotting Alive
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Paul Bell said:
Always find it amazing that one day you wake up great, nothing changes, but the next day it\'s like the world has slapped you down.
I suppose it\'s life, telling you not to take it for granted.
September 24th, 2025 04:37
Rotting Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written very descriptive and quite raw. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:19
Untitled #3
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!!
As for your poem, Ii sucks to feel unloved or unable to be loved by another and, when that seeming becomes the regular cycle, it can be off putting in the least...so much so that solitude and isolation and loneliness seem to be the better pain. Powerful write, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!!
As for your poem, Ii sucks to feel unloved or unable to be loved by another and, when that seeming becomes the regular cycle, it can be off putting in the least...so much so that solitude and isolation and loneliness seem to be the better pain. Powerful write, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:27
Untitled #3
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to speak of a disbelief that she can be loved by a man and has accepted solitude. Strong words of conviction here. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to speak of a disbelief that she can be loved by a man and has accepted solitude. Strong words of conviction here. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:09
For Mary Shelley
Fred1794 said:
Beautiful love letter to Mary. She would be proud.
September 17th, 2025 20:51
Fred1794 said:
Beautiful love letter to Mary. She would be proud.
September 17th, 2025 20:51
Black Swan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Remember the film and wow, you do so very well in capturing the mood and feeling of it. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Remember the film and wow, you do so very well in capturing the mood and feeling of it. Powerful piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:29
Black Swan
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that movie and this poem is a shadow of it portraying the feeling so well. Very nicely done in so few words a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that movie and this poem is a shadow of it portraying the feeling so well. Very nicely done in so few words a fave
September 12th, 2025 04:39
For Mary Shelley
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink, identity, rebellion, and remembrance all tied to Mary. It feels like Wollstonecraft’s spirit carried forward in your words. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Who was that Shelley anywho? 🤣 I love the way irony played out historically! Very poetic that justice is. Go Mary! Again, very well done and, of course, a must fave for me!
September 10th, 2025 13:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink, identity, rebellion, and remembrance all tied to Mary. It feels like Wollstonecraft’s spirit carried forward in your words. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Who was that Shelley anywho? 🤣 I love the way irony played out historically! Very poetic that justice is. Go Mary! Again, very well done and, of course, a must fave for me!
September 10th, 2025 13:57
For Mary Shelley
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and writing. Short but conveys its message
September 9th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and writing. Short but conveys its message
September 9th, 2025 19:34
On Mimes
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely senryu that is far deeper than the surface. A fave
September 8th, 2025 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely senryu that is far deeper than the surface. A fave
September 8th, 2025 19:03
Home No Longer
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow beautifully written, and sad.
September 5th, 2025 09:49
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow beautifully written, and sad.
September 5th, 2025 09:49
My Morning Routine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, wonderful write. The ritual and the mirror build to that line....“a fractured version of the girl who could be”...and it lingers, fragile and raw. Powerful work, my friend…haunting in its honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, wonderful write. The ritual and the mirror build to that line....“a fractured version of the girl who could be”...and it lingers, fragile and raw. Powerful work, my friend…haunting in its honesty. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2025 10:53
My Morning Routine
sorenbarrett said:
The division between real self and perceived self in this poem nicely defined in physical appearance well done
September 2nd, 2025 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
The division between real self and perceived self in this poem nicely defined in physical appearance well done
September 2nd, 2025 19:33
Layla
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So many u forgettable lines in this gem, Hayleigh. That contrast… “you’re made up of ash from a cigarette, / and I of porcelain”…stopped me. Fragility and burn in one breath…that image stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 19:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So many u forgettable lines in this gem, Hayleigh. That contrast… “you’re made up of ash from a cigarette, / and I of porcelain”…stopped me. Fragility and burn in one breath…that image stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 19:19
Layla
sorenbarrett said:
To me the diamonds in the eyes are the stars in the skies this is a view of the universe. A lovely write
August 30th, 2025 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
To me the diamonds in the eyes are the stars in the skies this is a view of the universe. A lovely write
August 30th, 2025 15:28
Men, Money, and Fantasies
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own, we all choose our values and go for what is important to us. A thoughtful write nicely put together
August 30th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
To each their own, we all choose our values and go for what is important to us. A thoughtful write nicely put together
August 30th, 2025 04:23
in my bed, all alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and powerful and, sadly for me, all too relatable. The repetition of in my bed, all alone carries the ache right through, but also the honesty that makes poetry salvation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave. Praying for happiness and an end to your pain, my friend!
August 25th, 2025 07:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and powerful and, sadly for me, all too relatable. The repetition of in my bed, all alone carries the ache right through, but also the honesty that makes poetry salvation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave. Praying for happiness and an end to your pain, my friend!
August 25th, 2025 07:34
in my bed, all alone
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great appealer it is a wonderful healer. Love is not for the fragile nor is poetry a lovely poem
August 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great appealer it is a wonderful healer. Love is not for the fragile nor is poetry a lovely poem
August 25th, 2025 03:58
Girlhood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! That moment under the sprinkler stopped me. The casual “oh, hi!” against the weight of goodbye...it’s dissonant, chilling, and powerful. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 17:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! That moment under the sprinkler stopped me. The casual “oh, hi!” against the weight of goodbye...it’s dissonant, chilling, and powerful. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 17:39
Girlhood
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a desperate ending. Nicely written with high emotional effect
August 24th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a desperate ending. Nicely written with high emotional effect
August 24th, 2025 04:40
Every Wrong Turn
sorenbarrett said:
Here are mixed feeling and feelings disguised. I feel a turmoil in this poem. Well done
August 23rd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Here are mixed feeling and feelings disguised. I feel a turmoil in this poem. Well done
August 23rd, 2025 04:30
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