Comments received on poems by ๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ
Trusted Adult
Poetic Licence said:
A sense they will always be unvalued and particularly by men, nicely written and expressed
July 4th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense they will always be unvalued and particularly by men, nicely written and expressed
July 4th, 2025 05:13
Trusted Adult
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the reader to fill in the gaps between thoughts and form a feeling a greater understanding. It feels dark somehow and filled with trepidation.
July 4th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the reader to fill in the gaps between thoughts and form a feeling a greater understanding. It feels dark somehow and filled with trepidation.
July 4th, 2025 04:20
A Talk with a Cherub
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, evocative, and exactly everything Soren wrote. A must fave for me too. ๐๐น
June 25th, 2025 20:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, evocative, and exactly everything Soren wrote. A must fave for me too. ๐๐น
June 25th, 2025 20:51
A Talk with a Cherub
Poetic Licence said:
This is a write to make you think from floating in the cloud of love to having a dagger stuck in the heart. Very well written taken you from one extreme to the other, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 16:15
Poetic Licence said:
This is a write to make you think from floating in the cloud of love to having a dagger stuck in the heart. Very well written taken you from one extreme to the other, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 16:15
A Talk with a Cherub
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts so bright and full of love descends to the tree of knowledge that casts one out of the garden\'s bliss to a harsh world and pain. Dark is the night. A most thought provoking poem and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts so bright and full of love descends to the tree of knowledge that casts one out of the garden\'s bliss to a harsh world and pain. Dark is the night. A most thought provoking poem and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:54
Yesterday\'s Today
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resignation and recognition. Well written
June 24th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resignation and recognition. Well written
June 24th, 2025 09:07
Let Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thoroughly loved this, hayleigh! Truly beautiful. Well done! ๐น๐
June 23rd, 2025 17:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thoroughly loved this, hayleigh! Truly beautiful. Well done! ๐น๐
June 23rd, 2025 17:17
Let Me
sorenbarrett said:
Here is drama and words of placation as well as a final farewell not just to a person but to self and a way of life. Nicely stated
June 23rd, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Here is drama and words of placation as well as a final farewell not just to a person but to self and a way of life. Nicely stated
June 23rd, 2025 13:14
Hawkmoth
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone feeling happier and safer at night, probably completely wrong, enjoyed the read, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 20:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone feeling happier and safer at night, probably completely wrong, enjoyed the read, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 20:17
Hawkmoth
sorenbarrett said:
Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 10:12
Confusion
Damaso said:
The cruel truth that hides there. Beautiful enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing it! Greetings
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
Damaso said:
The cruel truth that hides there. Beautiful enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing it! Greetings
June 22nd, 2025 09:22
Confusion
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write of fear, the confusion is where wonderful writes like this come from, nicely written
June 21st, 2025 07:29
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write of fear, the confusion is where wonderful writes like this come from, nicely written
June 21st, 2025 07:29
Confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fave hayleigh. My thought s confuse me too. Keep writingโฆand yes, I know you will! Itโs what we do, isnโt it? Excellent poem! ๐น๐
June 21st, 2025 06:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fave hayleigh. My thought s confuse me too. Keep writingโฆand yes, I know you will! Itโs what we do, isnโt it? Excellent poem! ๐น๐
June 21st, 2025 06:07
Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be taken more than one way as can any lie, need or fear. A fave
June 21st, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be taken more than one way as can any lie, need or fear. A fave
June 21st, 2025 04:24
Sincerely, You
Damaso said:
This piece split me like a stake in the middle of the yard. It makes my heart bleed to tears. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:02
Damaso said:
This piece split me like a stake in the middle of the yard. It makes my heart bleed to tears. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:02
Sincerely, You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Haleigh! The things we do to protect ourselves, right? Powerful write!
June 6th, 2025 06:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Haleigh! The things we do to protect ourselves, right? Powerful write!
June 6th, 2025 06:37
Sincerely, You
sorenbarrett said:
Duality or multiplicity that serves as a protection. We all use it to some extent but for some it is a reality. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Duality or multiplicity that serves as a protection. We all use it to some extent but for some it is a reality. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:07
Housewife Blues
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely playing of words making an enjoyable read
June 3rd, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely playing of words making an enjoyable read
June 3rd, 2025 02:27
Housewife Blues
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on cliches and fun read. Loved it even thought it was a bit dark
June 2nd, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on cliches and fun read. Loved it even thought it was a bit dark
June 2nd, 2025 16:30
Texas Queen
Damaso said:
Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.
May 29th, 2025 08:23
Damaso said:
Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.
May 29th, 2025 08:23
Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:14
Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 18:58
Showgirl
NinjaGirl said:
Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.
May 19th, 2025 12:12
NinjaGirl said:
Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.
May 19th, 2025 12:12
Showgirl
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done
May 19th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done
May 19th, 2025 10:23
Mors Vincit Omnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
๐คฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!
May 14th, 2025 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
๐คฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!
May 14th, 2025 11:02
Mors Vincit Omnia
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke
May 13th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke
May 13th, 2025 17:11
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