Comments received on poems by ๐“ฑ๐“ช๐”‚๐“ต๐“ฎ๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“ฑ



Let Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thoroughly loved this, hayleigh! Truly beautiful. Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

June 23rd, 2025 17:17

Let Me
sorenbarrett said:

Here is drama and words of placation as well as a final farewell not just to a person but to self and a way of life. Nicely stated

June 23rd, 2025 13:14

Let Me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

enjoyed the write

June 23rd, 2025 07:47

Hawkmoth
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of someone feeling happier and safer at night, probably completely wrong, enjoyed the read, nicely done

June 22nd, 2025 20:17

Hawkmoth
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 22nd, 2025 12:43

Hawkmoth
sorenbarrett said:

Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely

June 22nd, 2025 10:12

Confusion
Damaso said:

The cruel truth that hides there. Beautiful enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing it! Greetings

June 22nd, 2025 09:22

Confusion
Poetic Licence said:

A clever write of fear, the confusion is where wonderful writes like this come from, nicely written

June 21st, 2025 07:29

Confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A fave hayleigh. My thought s confuse me too. Keep writingโ€ฆand yes, I know you will! Itโ€™s what we do, isnโ€™t it? Excellent poem! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

June 21st, 2025 06:07

Confusion
sorenbarrett said:

I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be taken more than one way as can any lie, need or fear. A fave

June 21st, 2025 04:24

Sincerely, You
Damaso said:

This piece split me like a stake in the middle of the yard. It makes my heart bleed to tears. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

June 17th, 2025 10:02

Sincerely, You
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well done, Haleigh! The things we do to protect ourselves, right? Powerful write!

June 6th, 2025 06:37

Sincerely, You
sorenbarrett said:

Duality or multiplicity that serves as a protection. We all use it to some extent but for some it is a reality. Well done

June 6th, 2025 04:07

Housewife Blues
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely playing of words making an enjoyable read

June 3rd, 2025 02:27

Housewife Blues
Tony36 said:

Love it

June 2nd, 2025 20:07

Housewife Blues
sorenbarrett said:

A great play on cliches and fun read. Loved it even thought it was a bit dark

June 2nd, 2025 16:30

Texas Queen
Damaso said:

Wow, I really identify with the monster. One of my favorites. I hope to read more. Cheers.

May 29th, 2025 08:23

Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of anger at men but maybe life as well, that you cant be seen as you are, nicely expressed and written

May 23rd, 2025 02:14

Barbed Wire Wedding Ring
sorenbarrett said:

A feeling in this poem that we all have time to time. The question could be what is wrong with you that you don\'t see the good in me? Nicely written

May 22nd, 2025 18:58

Showgirl
NinjaGirl said:

Dressed us up like a doll, only to take it all. How much longer until it\'s over? A question wondered but never dared to utter.

May 19th, 2025 12:12

Showgirl
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well done

May 19th, 2025 10:23

Mors Vincit Omnia
Tristan Robert Lange said:

๐Ÿคฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is rather funny how \"uncaring\" people seem to care enough to target us, huh? I get this. Well done. A fave!

May 14th, 2025 11:02

Mors Vincit Omnia
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of not fitting with this person or group. Very nice. Good joke

May 13th, 2025 17:11

Forks/Spoons/Knives
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I agree with both Soren and Tobani (Poetic License) below. This is a phenomenal write. It is a poem of resilience and proundly important for those who may be going through similar things. A fave for all those reasons. Happy Saturday, dear friend! ๐Ÿ–ค๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 10th, 2025 15:34

Forks/Spoons/Knives
Poetic Licence said:

The write inducates someone who has found the inner strength to overcome a bad start in life, this write would be encouraging for those who struggle to find that strength, nicely expressed and written

May 10th, 2025 10:45

Forks/Spoons/Knives
sorenbarrett said:

Tough circumstances breeds tough people a very nice write

May 10th, 2025 09:45

Cold Embrace
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of sharing hurt and pain done to each other, nicely expressed and written

May 9th, 2025 02:14

Cold Embrace
Damaso said:

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May 8th, 2025 22:58

Cold Embrace
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphoric dark poem of shared damage. Nicely done

May 8th, 2025 17:31

The Lovecats
Poetic Licence said:

I loved this write, wonderfully written and crafted

May 7th, 2025 10:03

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