Comments received on poems by 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
Odette\'s Lament
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that space where pain gets misread as play and silence becomes self-protection. The way you frame love as something that both dazzles and destroys feels painfully true. This stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known that space where pain gets misread as play and silence becomes self-protection. The way you frame love as something that both dazzles and destroys feels painfully true. This stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:56
Odette\'s Lament
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of jewels and with them it is a shame that love could not be purchased. Well done
December 27th, 2025 21:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of jewels and with them it is a shame that love could not be purchased. Well done
December 27th, 2025 21:11
Fearing God
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
People want love and don’t even know how to love themselves, their neighbors… I feel like a lot of these guys have entitlement issues. Great poem and way to release frustration
December 25th, 2025 17:57
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
People want love and don’t even know how to love themselves, their neighbors… I feel like a lot of these guys have entitlement issues. Great poem and way to release frustration
December 25th, 2025 17:57
An Evergreen
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Awesome haiku, but sad poem . I myself am not a fan of winter but I am a fan of rest… feels like it
December 16th, 2025 23:35
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Awesome haiku, but sad poem . I myself am not a fan of winter but I am a fan of rest… feels like it
December 16th, 2025 23:35
Sylvia Plath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Donnie Darko is a classic! Love that film! As for being sick...oh no! Sorry to hear that! As for the poem...perfection! Love Sylvia and love this poem...love the ending too...as it can be interpreted in different ways. Very well done and a fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Donnie Darko is a classic! Love that film! As for being sick...oh no! Sorry to hear that! As for the poem...perfection! Love Sylvia and love this poem...love the ending too...as it can be interpreted in different ways. Very well done and a fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:42
Sylvia Plath
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem has a most interesting ending. It may be taken in a dark manner or a most erotic manner. I believe the first is the one intended.
December 10th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem has a most interesting ending. It may be taken in a dark manner or a most erotic manner. I believe the first is the one intended.
December 10th, 2025 03:42
Sylvia Plath
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
What a delicate poem. Your way with words and pacing makes it easy to picture what you\'ve written. A good write.
December 9th, 2025 22:46
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
What a delicate poem. Your way with words and pacing makes it easy to picture what you\'ve written. A good write.
December 9th, 2025 22:46
For Peter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful! Very intimate, haunting. Wonderful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful! Very intimate, haunting. Wonderful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:09
For Peter
sorenbarrett said:
What touched me the most in this poem is the casual and yet knowing acceptance that today is not the day.
\"Someday,\" you tell me.
\"We\'ll both be happy,
but not today.\"
Very nicely done
December 8th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
What touched me the most in this poem is the casual and yet knowing acceptance that today is not the day.
\"Someday,\" you tell me.
\"We\'ll both be happy,
but not today.\"
Very nicely done
December 8th, 2025 03:59
My Shadow Follows You
sorenbarrett said:
All things can and do change good to bad and bad to good nothing is permanent
December 6th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
All things can and do change good to bad and bad to good nothing is permanent
December 6th, 2025 12:31
My Shadow Follows You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oof. I absolutely love this, Hayleigh! Gothic as hell! Totally relate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oof. I absolutely love this, Hayleigh! Gothic as hell! Totally relate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 11:50
Film Critic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really is a great novel..and me too on Monday...of course, no Monday is over and I am dreading Tuesday. There\'s no end! 🤣😭 All that aside, I loved the poem, Hayleigh! Life is here one minute, gone in a flash. Brilliant metaphor! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It really is a great novel..and me too on Monday...of course, no Monday is over and I am dreading Tuesday. There\'s no end! 🤣😭 All that aside, I loved the poem, Hayleigh! Life is here one minute, gone in a flash. Brilliant metaphor! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:38
Film Critic
sorenbarrett said:
How transient is life but a blink. This poem uses great imagery to convey this. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
How transient is life but a blink. This poem uses great imagery to convey this. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:32
Dollette
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Misery is EXCELLENT! Love King! And what a wonderful poem, Hayleigh! Great job!
November 29th, 2025 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Misery is EXCELLENT! Love King! And what a wonderful poem, Hayleigh! Great job!
November 29th, 2025 09:13
Dollette
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting depiction of a doll. Nicely penned
November 29th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting depiction of a doll. Nicely penned
November 29th, 2025 04:09
Florida St.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too and this just brought be back there! Rock on, Hayleigh! ❤️🩹
November 28th, 2025 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too and this just brought be back there! Rock on, Hayleigh! ❤️🩹
November 28th, 2025 10:26
Florida St.
sorenbarrett said:
this poem sets a mood with its setting and I\'ve lived there for years and this gives the feeling
November 27th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
this poem sets a mood with its setting and I\'ve lived there for years and this gives the feeling
November 27th, 2025 14:08
Fearing God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😳 Whoa! Glad you did. There really are psychos out there...and I don\'t use that term lightly! PSA to everyone...Beware such creeps. 🤣 Great poem and wow on the title, too! Great job Hayleigh! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😳 Whoa! Glad you did. There really are psychos out there...and I don\'t use that term lightly! PSA to everyone...Beware such creeps. 🤣 Great poem and wow on the title, too! Great job Hayleigh! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 11:06
Fearing God
Paul Bell said:
Some just don\'t like rejection and instead of learning from it, they belittle every woman they come across.
Immaturity, I think they call it, or just a dipshit.
November 26th, 2025 10:13
Paul Bell said:
Some just don\'t like rejection and instead of learning from it, they belittle every woman they come across.
Immaturity, I think they call it, or just a dipshit.
November 26th, 2025 10:13
Fearing God
sorenbarrett said:
This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it felt like it fit today\'s disposable relationship concept. A hard read either way.
November 26th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it felt like it fit today\'s disposable relationship concept. A hard read either way.
November 26th, 2025 04:49
Summer \'67
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and quite brilliant, methinks. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and quite brilliant, methinks. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:01
Summer \'67
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive and sensual poem of love theft and banditry of another\'s heart. Well written in short verse. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive and sensual poem of love theft and banditry of another\'s heart. Well written in short verse. Lovely
November 22nd, 2025 14:50
Nervosa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feeling… the slow wearing down you’re naming here. Very well expressed, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 21st, 2025 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feeling… the slow wearing down you’re naming here. Very well expressed, my friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 21st, 2025 11:23
Nervosa
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in somewhat cryptic words that leave me wondering and that is good for the mind starts to work again. This has the feel of a rap in its rhyme scheme.
November 21st, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in somewhat cryptic words that leave me wondering and that is good for the mind starts to work again. This has the feel of a rap in its rhyme scheme.
November 21st, 2025 03:38
The Fog and the Fever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh… the permanent daze… the dream that feels safer than trying… the someone who still means something even when love feels lopsided. You weave all of that together so gently that the hurt lands soft… but sure. This is tender work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh… the permanent daze… the dream that feels safer than trying… the someone who still means something even when love feels lopsided. You weave all of that together so gently that the hurt lands soft… but sure. This is tender work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 20:56
The Fog and the Fever
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to change. Nicely written in poetic verse
November 18th, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to change. Nicely written in poetic verse
November 18th, 2025 03:30
Cute
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this reads like a small confession…loneliness softened by love, pain laid down so something new can rise. I hear you on the constant state of exhaustion...that sucks...but yay for the As! Great poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this reads like a small confession…loneliness softened by love, pain laid down so something new can rise. I hear you on the constant state of exhaustion...that sucks...but yay for the As! Great poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 13th, 2025 08:21
Cute
sorenbarrett said:
How different things are when one feels alone. A lovely write
November 12th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
How different things are when one feels alone. A lovely write
November 12th, 2025 20:14
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