Comments received on poems by โโฑ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑโฑโ
The Cry
sorenbarrett said:
Despair fills this piece and cries out for oblivion. A sad piece
April 25th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Despair fills this piece and cries out for oblivion. A sad piece
April 25th, 2025 06:24
Never Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful. I can feel the longing and the pain for a person who was once there for you, but no longer. A sad reality many of us have faced, expressed so well here. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐
April 24th, 2025 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful. I can feel the longing and the pain for a person who was once there for you, but no longer. A sad reality many of us have faced, expressed so well here. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐
April 24th, 2025 09:18
Never Again
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a farewell to a past love and it remains unsure why there is nothing left to love death or emotional deterioration of the relationship. It is this uncertainty that makes it as good as it is.
April 24th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a farewell to a past love and it remains unsure why there is nothing left to love death or emotional deterioration of the relationship. It is this uncertainty that makes it as good as it is.
April 24th, 2025 05:43
Pen and Cob
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Hanleigh. So creative, and I really admire how you\'re experimenting with narrative. I personally enjoy a long poem that tells a storyโand youโve done just that here, with mood and mystery to spare. You\'ve crafted a haunting, elegant piece. Iโm genuinely enjoying your workโฆ and it\'s always good to have company in the dark! We definitely share a Gothic flair. Again, well done, my friend. Looking forward to more. ๐น๐๐ค๐
April 23rd, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Hanleigh. So creative, and I really admire how you\'re experimenting with narrative. I personally enjoy a long poem that tells a storyโand youโve done just that here, with mood and mystery to spare. You\'ve crafted a haunting, elegant piece. Iโm genuinely enjoying your workโฆ and it\'s always good to have company in the dark! We definitely share a Gothic flair. Again, well done, my friend. Looking forward to more. ๐น๐๐ค๐
April 23rd, 2025 07:24
Pen and Cob
sorenbarrett said:
Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a feeling of distance. It is a magnificent story that leaves a haunting feeling in its wake. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a feeling of distance. It is a magnificent story that leaves a haunting feeling in its wake. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:47
Love Story
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Au contraire, mon ami, this is quite powerful! Seriously, sometimes \"rushed\" turns out just fine. Truthfully, the concept of loving from beneath. Profoundly powerful. Thought-provoking. Well done. A fave. ๐น๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Au contraire, mon ami, this is quite powerful! Seriously, sometimes \"rushed\" turns out just fine. Truthfully, the concept of loving from beneath. Profoundly powerful. Thought-provoking. Well done. A fave. ๐น๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:09
Love Story
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that speaks of love in a different form. I thought that it flowed well and had a message.
April 22nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that speaks of love in a different form. I thought that it flowed well and had a message.
April 22nd, 2025 05:42
The Lovecats
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in this poem. I loved it
April 21st, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in this poem. I loved it
April 21st, 2025 15:29
The Lovecats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last stanza is the chef\'s kiss. Wow, powerful expression of uncontrollable rage that, by the end, you control...showing the other person is the subject is the one that is really unhinged. Brilliantly done. A fave from me, my friend! ๐ค๐๐น๐
April 21st, 2025 13:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last stanza is the chef\'s kiss. Wow, powerful expression of uncontrollable rage that, by the end, you control...showing the other person is the subject is the one that is really unhinged. Brilliantly done. A fave from me, my friend! ๐ค๐๐น๐
April 21st, 2025 13:35
Gravel Road
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This reads like a noir thriller unfolding, raw, dark, gritty, real! All of that and how effectively it pulls the reader into the emotions, this gets a major fave from me.! Well done, friend! ๐น๐
April 20th, 2025 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This reads like a noir thriller unfolding, raw, dark, gritty, real! All of that and how effectively it pulls the reader into the emotions, this gets a major fave from me.! Well done, friend! ๐น๐
April 20th, 2025 17:51
Gravel Road
sorenbarrett said:
It is the real life grittiness that gains a fave in this raw poem of life that we all close our eyes to and dream of better things. Very well done
April 20th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
It is the real life grittiness that gains a fave in this raw poem of life that we all close our eyes to and dream of better things. Very well done
April 20th, 2025 09:02
Texas Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful dark poem, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful dark poem, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 09:55
Enigmatic Individual
justyouraveragewriter said:
I love the line writing off into the distance. This is absolutely gorgeous.
April 19th, 2025 09:50
justyouraveragewriter said:
I love the line writing off into the distance. This is absolutely gorgeous.
April 19th, 2025 09:50
Texas Queen
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry is often birthed from pain as much as love, from monsters that trouble us as much as angels. A most interesting write well done
April 19th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry is often birthed from pain as much as love, from monsters that trouble us as much as angels. A most interesting write well done
April 19th, 2025 07:55
Enigmatic Individual
Damaso said:
I can feel the hunger intensely. I hope to read more in the future. Best regards.
April 18th, 2025 14:51
Damaso said:
I can feel the hunger intensely. I hope to read more in the future. Best regards.
April 18th, 2025 14:51
Enigmatic Individual
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know the song but have enjoyed the read, a relatable write to many, nicely written
April 18th, 2025 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know the song but have enjoyed the read, a relatable write to many, nicely written
April 18th, 2025 13:59
Enigmatic Individual
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that provokes thought and with whom many can identify. And indeed time passes. Enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that provokes thought and with whom many can identify. And indeed time passes. Enjoyed the read.
April 18th, 2025 11:41
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