Comments received on poems by 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱
Blood in the Snow
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, leaving us to decide if good or bad, nicely done
August 14th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed this, leaving us to decide if good or bad, nicely done
August 14th, 2025 08:31
Blood in the Snow
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent senryu that speaks to numerous interpretations. Good or bad the reader chooses
August 14th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent senryu that speaks to numerous interpretations. Good or bad the reader chooses
August 14th, 2025 07:55
Glass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one cuts sharp and clean—just like the glass in its title. I can feel your pain. The simplicity in your phrasing makes the hurt hit harder, especially that last couplet…it’s the kind of line that lingers. There’s a fragile beauty here, even in the breaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So very well done! A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one cuts sharp and clean—just like the glass in its title. I can feel your pain. The simplicity in your phrasing makes the hurt hit harder, especially that last couplet…it’s the kind of line that lingers. There’s a fragile beauty here, even in the breaking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ So very well done! A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:02
Glass
sorenbarrett said:
Unappreciated is the word that comes to mind. A most lovely write that carries with it a sense of a love unrequited. Nicely written without malise of anger.
August 12th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Unappreciated is the word that comes to mind. A most lovely write that carries with it a sense of a love unrequited. Nicely written without malise of anger.
August 12th, 2025 07:15
Ode to Your Memory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this carries the weight of love and loss in every stanza. The voice feels spent yet unwavering…moving from longing to resignation with a painful grace. You’ve given the goodbye a haunting beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this carries the weight of love and loss in every stanza. The voice feels spent yet unwavering…moving from longing to resignation with a painful grace. You’ve given the goodbye a haunting beauty, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:50
Ode to Your Memory
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write to all those loved one\'s that can no longer be here in body, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write to all those loved one\'s that can no longer be here in body, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:23
Ode to Your Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A fond farewell to those we wished were still here with us. A lovely write
August 11th, 2025 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
A fond farewell to those we wished were still here with us. A lovely write
August 11th, 2025 07:16
Anthem for the Apocalypse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this has major urgency. You’ve caught both the scale of collapse and the intimate cost…the smoke in the eyes, the soul ready to break away. It’s raw, direct, and it lands hard. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this has major urgency. You’ve caught both the scale of collapse and the intimate cost…the smoke in the eyes, the soul ready to break away. It’s raw, direct, and it lands hard. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 20:15
Anthem for the Apocalypse
Lorenz said:
Interesting topic and good job ! I encourage you to continue !
August 8th, 2025 12:28
Lorenz said:
Interesting topic and good job ! I encourage you to continue !
August 8th, 2025 12:28
Anthem for the Apocalypse
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about doing the right thing. Nicely said
August 8th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about doing the right thing. Nicely said
August 8th, 2025 12:14
Submission
sorenbarrett said:
This one starts in one direction and takes a bend but that is okay by me I like scenic trips. Well done.
August 7th, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one starts in one direction and takes a bend but that is okay by me I like scenic trips. Well done.
August 7th, 2025 13:02
Submission
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
write what you want, not what you think others want
August 7th, 2025 12:46
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
write what you want, not what you think others want
August 7th, 2025 12:46
Vienna
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
August 6th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
August 6th, 2025 17:40
Parts of Me
peto said:
I read in your profile you like to be dramatic
It shows on this write
The host is worth much more than she believes
An amazing way with words
Talented
August 5th, 2025 12:56
peto said:
I read in your profile you like to be dramatic
It shows on this write
The host is worth much more than she believes
An amazing way with words
Talented
August 5th, 2025 12:56
Parts of Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 12:39
Untitled #2
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write going alot deeper than first thought, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:29
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write going alot deeper than first thought, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:29
Untitled #2
peto said:
That 1st line
Your writing certainly doesn\'t lack substance
And last verse wow
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 3rd, 2025 10:09
peto said:
That 1st line
Your writing certainly doesn\'t lack substance
And last verse wow
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 3rd, 2025 10:09
Untitled #2
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48
Home No Longer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that centers around inequity and unfairness. Nicely done
August 1st, 2025 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that centers around inequity and unfairness. Nicely done
August 1st, 2025 20:48
Home No Longer
peto said:
\"I\'m only me that\'s not a lot\"
I disagree
You are an artist as this write proves
2nd verse though a bot scary is stunning
Glad to discover your writing
August 1st, 2025 19:34
peto said:
\"I\'m only me that\'s not a lot\"
I disagree
You are an artist as this write proves
2nd verse though a bot scary is stunning
Glad to discover your writing
August 1st, 2025 19:34
Tragic Unveiling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a striking and intense piece, Hayleigh. The imagery bleeds with pain and defiance...raw, rhythmic, and unflinching. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a striking and intense piece, Hayleigh. The imagery bleeds with pain and defiance...raw, rhythmic, and unflinching. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:38
Tragic Unveiling
Damaso said:
Wow, raw and sad. A beautiful facade of lights hides sad silences of darkness. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 13:42
Damaso said:
Wow, raw and sad. A beautiful facade of lights hides sad silences of darkness. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 13:42
Tragic Unveiling
Poetic Licence said:
A sensitive write of how some woman are still treated especially by those who should care for them, only speak when spoken to, a phrase that says it all, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:09
Poetic Licence said:
A sensitive write of how some woman are still treated especially by those who should care for them, only speak when spoken to, a phrase that says it all, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:09
Tragic Unveiling
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphor to me. It has several possibilities one of which is how a woman feels treated by those around her and is touchingly sad and judgemental. Well written
July 24th, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems metaphor to me. It has several possibilities one of which is how a woman feels treated by those around her and is touchingly sad and judgemental. Well written
July 24th, 2025 12:25
Runaway Runaway
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is ferocious in its approach...and that’s exactly why it lands. “When I killed myself I didn’t die” is brutal, haunting and unforgettable. You’ve carved pain cleanly into the page. Much respect, my friend. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this is ferocious in its approach...and that’s exactly why it lands. “When I killed myself I didn’t die” is brutal, haunting and unforgettable. You’ve carved pain cleanly into the page. Much respect, my friend. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 08:00
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