Comments received on poems by 🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི
Memoir of Cynicism
sorenbarrett said:
People treated as animals literally or verbally as a metaphor the same. We should not even treat animals that way. A rather haunting and dark write. Loved it.
July 22nd, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
People treated as animals literally or verbally as a metaphor the same. We should not even treat animals that way. A rather haunting and dark write. Loved it.
July 22nd, 2025 08:26
Amanda Taylor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one’s brutal in its restraint. The repetition stabs in and out in like a ritual…“in and out / thirty-one times”…that line chills and haunts perfectly. You didn’t look away, and neither can we. That final line...\"pose for me\" indeed. Wow...just wow! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh, this one’s brutal in its restraint. The repetition stabs in and out in like a ritual…“in and out / thirty-one times”…that line chills and haunts perfectly. You didn’t look away, and neither can we. That final line...\"pose for me\" indeed. Wow...just wow! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:20
Amanda Taylor
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take it is a murder but could be a rape. Sounds to be a stabbing but could be sexual since it is not rated +18 take it to be murder that is always more accepted than sex. Well written
July 21st, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take it is a murder but could be a rape. Sounds to be a stabbing but could be sexual since it is not rated +18 take it to be murder that is always more accepted than sex. Well written
July 21st, 2025 03:40
Hopelessly
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem is haunting and beautifully atmospheric. The evocative imagery and recurring questions create a tender sense of loss and introspection. Subtle spiritual undertones and vivid metaphors make this piece linger in the reader’s mind.
July 19th, 2025 04:38
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem is haunting and beautifully atmospheric. The evocative imagery and recurring questions create a tender sense of loss and introspection. Subtle spiritual undertones and vivid metaphors make this piece linger in the reader’s mind.
July 19th, 2025 04:38
Hopelessly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The grief is palpable, my friend. Beautifully written. This is a very relatable piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The grief is palpable, my friend. Beautifully written. This is a very relatable piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 17th, 2025 07:57
Hopelessly
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem speaks to one gone. It is very nicely written and carries with it a memory. Well done
July 17th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting this poem speaks to one gone. It is very nicely written and carries with it a memory. Well done
July 17th, 2025 07:55
Parts of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own haunting, and that final question lands hard. There\'s a stark beauty in how you lay out each moment—intimate, eerie, and real. Powerful work. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own haunting, and that final question lands hard. There\'s a stark beauty in how you lay out each moment—intimate, eerie, and real. Powerful work. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:31
Parts of Love
sorenbarrett said:
This one cleverly pairs the different aspects of love that seem diametrically opposed. Very nice rhyme throughout and a fave
July 10th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This one cleverly pairs the different aspects of love that seem diametrically opposed. Very nice rhyme throughout and a fave
July 10th, 2025 14:32
Parts of Love
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, for some all of what is mentioned, for others none of it, as in all things in life there is good and bad, nicely written
July 10th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, for some all of what is mentioned, for others none of it, as in all things in life there is good and bad, nicely written
July 10th, 2025 12:47
Pink and Grey Hearts
Damaso said:
Wow, dark, sincere, and thoughtful, and he admits his mistakes; he knows he\'s human. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:53
Damaso said:
Wow, dark, sincere, and thoughtful, and he admits his mistakes; he knows he\'s human. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 10:53
Pink and Grey Hearts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh…this one tugs on the heartstrings! The gray within the pink—the numbness inside something once warm—you captured that beautifully and brutally. That line “I was already dead” hits like the cold touch of the dead. Haunting in all the right ways. Fragile, fierce, and so painfully human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 19:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh…this one tugs on the heartstrings! The gray within the pink—the numbness inside something once warm—you captured that beautifully and brutally. That line “I was already dead” hits like the cold touch of the dead. Haunting in all the right ways. Fragile, fierce, and so painfully human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 19:42
Pink and Grey Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A raw recognition of what one is and what others expect. A resignation of acceptance leaving little hope. Dark and haunting it calls out to the reader. Nicely written.
July 9th, 2025 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
A raw recognition of what one is and what others expect. A resignation of acceptance leaving little hope. Dark and haunting it calls out to the reader. Nicely written.
July 9th, 2025 12:46
Vampyre
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Now this one is hot 🔥, seductive 🫦, and bloody 🩸 brilliant (alliterative pun absolutely intended)! This…this right here is exactly what a Vampyre is. It lures you in, then—well—drink up! Great job! 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 10:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Now this one is hot 🔥, seductive 🫦, and bloody 🩸 brilliant (alliterative pun absolutely intended)! This…this right here is exactly what a Vampyre is. It lures you in, then—well—drink up! Great job! 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 10:22
Vampyre
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive poem turned with a twist into a drink. Lovely
July 8th, 2025 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A seductive poem turned with a twist into a drink. Lovely
July 8th, 2025 12:52
Disaster Relief
sorenbarrett said:
Dark it delves into another world that of Thanatos where Charon rows his boat demanding coins to cross the river Styx and Hades sits on his throne. Nicely written.
July 7th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Dark it delves into another world that of Thanatos where Charon rows his boat demanding coins to cross the river Styx and Hades sits on his throne. Nicely written.
July 7th, 2025 09:26
Disaster Relief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh hayleigh…my gothic friend, this one burned. 🔥 The ache, the edge, the confessions laid bare like scars turned scripture—it’s all here. That closing couplet is a gut punch wrapped in poetry. You don’t just write the darkness…you ignite it, and I love that! Gripping work dear poet and friend. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh hayleigh…my gothic friend, this one burned. 🔥 The ache, the edge, the confessions laid bare like scars turned scripture—it’s all here. That closing couplet is a gut punch wrapped in poetry. You don’t just write the darkness…you ignite it, and I love that! Gripping work dear poet and friend. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:24
Lost Cause for Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh…this one drips with that beautiful ache—so raw, so haunted. 😔 That glass coffin image? Pierced right through. And the final plea? Still echoing. You’ve got a voice that feels...and I always love that! A fan for sure. And a fave! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayleigh…this one drips with that beautiful ache—so raw, so haunted. 😔 That glass coffin image? Pierced right through. And the final plea? Still echoing. You’ve got a voice that feels...and I always love that! A fan for sure. And a fave! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:51
Lost Cause for Love
sorenbarrett said:
Chained by love imprisoned in a glass box there is no prince charming to awaken you with a kiss. A dark write. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Chained by love imprisoned in a glass box there is no prince charming to awaken you with a kiss. A dark write. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:36
Trusted Adult
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent lines and right their with you, my friend! And you are more than \"just\" good. You are great! I really enjoy your work! 🌹👏
July 4th, 2025 12:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent lines and right their with you, my friend! And you are more than \"just\" good. You are great! I really enjoy your work! 🌹👏
July 4th, 2025 12:11
Trusted Adult
Poetic Licence said:
A sense they will always be unvalued and particularly by men, nicely written and expressed
July 4th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense they will always be unvalued and particularly by men, nicely written and expressed
July 4th, 2025 05:13
Trusted Adult
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the reader to fill in the gaps between thoughts and form a feeling a greater understanding. It feels dark somehow and filled with trepidation.
July 4th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves the reader to fill in the gaps between thoughts and form a feeling a greater understanding. It feels dark somehow and filled with trepidation.
July 4th, 2025 04:20
A Talk with a Cherub
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, evocative, and exactly everything Soren wrote. A must fave for me too. 👏🌹
June 25th, 2025 20:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, evocative, and exactly everything Soren wrote. A must fave for me too. 👏🌹
June 25th, 2025 20:51
A Talk with a Cherub
Poetic Licence said:
This is a write to make you think from floating in the cloud of love to having a dagger stuck in the heart. Very well written taken you from one extreme to the other, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 16:15
Poetic Licence said:
This is a write to make you think from floating in the cloud of love to having a dagger stuck in the heart. Very well written taken you from one extreme to the other, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 16:15
A Talk with a Cherub
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts so bright and full of love descends to the tree of knowledge that casts one out of the garden\'s bliss to a harsh world and pain. Dark is the night. A most thought provoking poem and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that starts so bright and full of love descends to the tree of knowledge that casts one out of the garden\'s bliss to a harsh world and pain. Dark is the night. A most thought provoking poem and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:54
Yesterday\'s Today
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resignation and recognition. Well written
June 24th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of resignation and recognition. Well written
June 24th, 2025 09:07
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