Comments received on poems by ๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! Me too! TGIF! Greater things are indeed to come! Rock on hanleigh, loved this poem! ๐น๐
May 2nd, 2025 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! Me too! TGIF! Greater things are indeed to come! Rock on hanleigh, loved this poem! ๐น๐
May 2nd, 2025 15:03
Blind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No pressure, my friend. Weโll be here to read when you do post. Life does happen. This poem is wonderful and I really liked the layout. Wonderful job, hanleigh. A fave.
April 30th, 2025 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No pressure, my friend. Weโll be here to read when you do post. Life does happen. This poem is wonderful and I really liked the layout. Wonderful job, hanleigh. A fave.
April 30th, 2025 20:15
Differ
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a poem about being lost in uncertainty and desperately longing for a way out. This poem really hit home...and you and I share the same taste in music, clearly, at least when it comes to Goth and Goth-adjacent music. Well done, Hanleigh!
April 29th, 2025 19:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a poem about being lost in uncertainty and desperately longing for a way out. This poem really hit home...and you and I share the same taste in music, clearly, at least when it comes to Goth and Goth-adjacent music. Well done, Hanleigh!
April 29th, 2025 19:07
Differ
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not only desperation and need in this poem but a sense of being lost with that sense of panic that one gets when one does not know where they are or the way to go. Well expressed
April 29th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
I hear not only desperation and need in this poem but a sense of being lost with that sense of panic that one gets when one does not know where they are or the way to go. Well expressed
April 29th, 2025 05:08
Hinton, Pt. II
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel the pain, the longing, the grief in this poem. I understand it entirely and the ending really hit (pun intended) hard. Wonderful job, Hanleigh. I really dig your style and your ability to express your emotions visually is...well...brava! Not everyone can do that. You do it effortlessly in everything I\'ve read thus far. You\'ve got much talent, my friend. Glad out paths have crossed as I really relate to your work. Looking forward to more, as always. ๐น๐
April 28th, 2025 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel the pain, the longing, the grief in this poem. I understand it entirely and the ending really hit (pun intended) hard. Wonderful job, Hanleigh. I really dig your style and your ability to express your emotions visually is...well...brava! Not everyone can do that. You do it effortlessly in everything I\'ve read thus far. You\'ve got much talent, my friend. Glad out paths have crossed as I really relate to your work. Looking forward to more, as always. ๐น๐
April 28th, 2025 14:57
Hinton, Pt. II
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing, memories of what was and what wasn\'t wishes and desires framed in hopes not yet realized. A lovely write
April 28th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing, memories of what was and what wasn\'t wishes and desires framed in hopes not yet realized. A lovely write
April 28th, 2025 05:22
Shades of Cool
Sunshinefalling said:
You painted a vast picture with little words. I could see it.
April 26th, 2025 14:10
Sunshinefalling said:
You painted a vast picture with little words. I could see it.
April 26th, 2025 14:10
Shades of Cool
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And songs are a great way to block writer\'s block. Whatever inspires, however the muse calls, go for it. Loved this and faved it, my friend. And I love the song too. Well done. ๐๐น๐
April 26th, 2025 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And songs are a great way to block writer\'s block. Whatever inspires, however the muse calls, go for it. Loved this and faved it, my friend. And I love the song too. Well done. ๐๐น๐
April 26th, 2025 12:39
Shades of Cool
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and desire to be with the lost. A lovely and touching poem that is wistful in a way and yet forlorn.
April 26th, 2025 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and desire to be with the lost. A lovely and touching poem that is wistful in a way and yet forlorn.
April 26th, 2025 07:31
The Cry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great song. I actually read the poem to it and could almost imagine you writing this to the song. Love Goth music, by the way...so great song choice! This piece is filled with despair and anger. I could feel every word of this and, sadly, have been there. A most haunting and urgent poem, my friend. You have quite the talent and I hope for you, as it is for me, that such expression is healing. โค๏ธโ๐ฉน๐ค๐ฆโโฌ๐ฆ๐๐น
April 25th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great song. I actually read the poem to it and could almost imagine you writing this to the song. Love Goth music, by the way...so great song choice! This piece is filled with despair and anger. I could feel every word of this and, sadly, have been there. A most haunting and urgent poem, my friend. You have quite the talent and I hope for you, as it is for me, that such expression is healing. โค๏ธโ๐ฉน๐ค๐ฆโโฌ๐ฆ๐๐น
April 25th, 2025 08:19
The Cry
sorenbarrett said:
Despair fills this piece and cries out for oblivion. A sad piece
April 25th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Despair fills this piece and cries out for oblivion. A sad piece
April 25th, 2025 06:24
Never Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful. I can feel the longing and the pain for a person who was once there for you, but no longer. A sad reality many of us have faced, expressed so well here. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐
April 24th, 2025 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful. I can feel the longing and the pain for a person who was once there for you, but no longer. A sad reality many of us have faced, expressed so well here. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐
April 24th, 2025 09:18
Never Again
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a farewell to a past love and it remains unsure why there is nothing left to love death or emotional deterioration of the relationship. It is this uncertainty that makes it as good as it is.
April 24th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a farewell to a past love and it remains unsure why there is nothing left to love death or emotional deterioration of the relationship. It is this uncertainty that makes it as good as it is.
April 24th, 2025 05:43
Pen and Cob
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Hanleigh. So creative, and I really admire how you\'re experimenting with narrative. I personally enjoy a long poem that tells a storyโand youโve done just that here, with mood and mystery to spare. You\'ve crafted a haunting, elegant piece. Iโm genuinely enjoying your workโฆ and it\'s always good to have company in the dark! We definitely share a Gothic flair. Again, well done, my friend. Looking forward to more. ๐น๐๐ค๐
April 23rd, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Hanleigh. So creative, and I really admire how you\'re experimenting with narrative. I personally enjoy a long poem that tells a storyโand youโve done just that here, with mood and mystery to spare. You\'ve crafted a haunting, elegant piece. Iโm genuinely enjoying your workโฆ and it\'s always good to have company in the dark! We definitely share a Gothic flair. Again, well done, my friend. Looking forward to more. ๐น๐๐ค๐
April 23rd, 2025 07:24
Pen and Cob
sorenbarrett said:
Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a feeling of distance. It is a magnificent story that leaves a haunting feeling in its wake. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a feeling of distance. It is a magnificent story that leaves a haunting feeling in its wake. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:47
Love Story
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Au contraire, mon ami, this is quite powerful! Seriously, sometimes \"rushed\" turns out just fine. Truthfully, the concept of loving from beneath. Profoundly powerful. Thought-provoking. Well done. A fave. ๐น๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Au contraire, mon ami, this is quite powerful! Seriously, sometimes \"rushed\" turns out just fine. Truthfully, the concept of loving from beneath. Profoundly powerful. Thought-provoking. Well done. A fave. ๐น๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:09
Love Story
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that speaks of love in a different form. I thought that it flowed well and had a message.
April 22nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that speaks of love in a different form. I thought that it flowed well and had a message.
April 22nd, 2025 05:42
The Lovecats
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in this poem. I loved it
April 21st, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in this poem. I loved it
April 21st, 2025 15:29
The Lovecats
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last stanza is the chef\'s kiss. Wow, powerful expression of uncontrollable rage that, by the end, you control...showing the other person is the subject is the one that is really unhinged. Brilliantly done. A fave from me, my friend! ๐ค๐๐น๐
April 21st, 2025 13:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last stanza is the chef\'s kiss. Wow, powerful expression of uncontrollable rage that, by the end, you control...showing the other person is the subject is the one that is really unhinged. Brilliantly done. A fave from me, my friend! ๐ค๐๐น๐
April 21st, 2025 13:35
Gravel Road
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This reads like a noir thriller unfolding, raw, dark, gritty, real! All of that and how effectively it pulls the reader into the emotions, this gets a major fave from me.! Well done, friend! ๐น๐
April 20th, 2025 17:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This reads like a noir thriller unfolding, raw, dark, gritty, real! All of that and how effectively it pulls the reader into the emotions, this gets a major fave from me.! Well done, friend! ๐น๐
April 20th, 2025 17:51
Gravel Road
sorenbarrett said:
It is the real life grittiness that gains a fave in this raw poem of life that we all close our eyes to and dream of better things. Very well done
April 20th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
It is the real life grittiness that gains a fave in this raw poem of life that we all close our eyes to and dream of better things. Very well done
April 20th, 2025 09:02
Texas Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful dark poem, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A hauntingly beautiful dark poem, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 09:55
Enigmatic Individual
justyouraveragewriter said:
I love the line writing off into the distance. This is absolutely gorgeous.
April 19th, 2025 09:50
justyouraveragewriter said:
I love the line writing off into the distance. This is absolutely gorgeous.
April 19th, 2025 09:50
Texas Queen
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry is often birthed from pain as much as love, from monsters that trouble us as much as angels. A most interesting write well done
April 19th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry is often birthed from pain as much as love, from monsters that trouble us as much as angels. A most interesting write well done
April 19th, 2025 07:55
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