Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes



A Poet Without the Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

No one ever needs to be sorry for being themself. I hear the depression and sadness and regret in this raw poem. Nicely said

July 22nd, 2025 12:13

Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt write asking if the fire that once raged has burnt out, or is there still some embers to reignite the relationship, nicely expressed and written

July 21st, 2025 12:11

Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Lorenz said:

Lie ,lie,lie ...Lalaland in the stars .

July 21st, 2025 12:02

Whispers in the Stars\' dream
sorenbarrett said:

A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to whether it will continue to burn. Is the wood dry or green and will the fire burn or go out? Nicely done

July 21st, 2025 09:09


๐“ฆ๐“ฑ๐“ช๐“ฝ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“๐“ช๐“ฝ๐“พ๐“ป๐“ฎ?
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write the beauty of nature, do we embrace and look after it or do we destroy and ignore it, enjoyed the read

July 18th, 2025 09:01

๐“ฆ๐“ฑ๐“ช๐“ฝ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“๐“ช๐“ฝ๐“พ๐“ป๐“ฎ?
sorenbarrett said:

I love nature and so this was particularly meaningful to me. Do we take notice of it or do we choose to ignore it? A lovely write and a fave

July 18th, 2025 08:20


Clipped Wings
Poetic Licence said:

You can feel the pain and hurt in the write as it continues to hold them down, nicely expressed

July 14th, 2025 22:15

Clipped Wings
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written

July 14th, 2025 14:45

Clipped Wings
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely lyric

July 14th, 2025 13:34

In Love\'s Snare
sorenbarrett said:

Trapped by emotions, by obligations, by hope, by expectations chained to something that one knows is not right. A very interesting and difficult write.

June 18th, 2025 17:32

The Moonโ€™s Soliloquy
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem that has a fanciful feel and wistful touch. Loved it

June 17th, 2025 12:05

The Moonโ€™s Soliloquy
Damaso said:

Oh, how beautiful! I really liked it! Thanks for sharing. Cheers!

June 17th, 2025 11:41

The Moonโ€™s Soliloquy
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely crafted write, I like the idea of the stars masking the moon\'s real feelings, as in life we all were one at some point, lets hope we find that hope, enjoyed the read

June 17th, 2025 10:56

A Waste of Time
RSM0812 said:

This evokes to me the time to move on. Sometimes we get stuck in the heart. It proves the cruelty of love itself. Nice job.

May 27th, 2025 08:58

A Waste of Time
Poetic Licence said:

Very relatable write to many, feeling of loss and why did i bother, nicely expressed and written

May 24th, 2025 02:20

A Waste of Time
sorenbarrett said:

A poem so nicely said in a few words. Speaking of a loss and the consequences.

May 23rd, 2025 14:02

Unlocked
Poetic Licence said:

A honest declaration of love and tale of how the heart was one, but now that can\'t get away, nicely expressed and written

May 22nd, 2025 12:41

Unlocked
sorenbarrett said:

Quite a declaration of the evolution of love and and the heart\'s enslavement. Nicely written

May 22nd, 2025 12:14

The Guardian of Time
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write about something we all feel there is never enough off, if we stepped back and looked, there is more than enough, enjoyed the read, nicely written and expressed

May 20th, 2025 12:23

The Guardian of Time
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poetic write that flows well in rhyme. Nicely done

May 20th, 2025 10:55

Madly in Love
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write of ones total love for the one who is abusing them, nicely expressed

May 20th, 2025 02:11

Madly in Love
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

May 20th, 2025 00:48

Madly in Love
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of love\'s obsession and abuse suffered. Well written

May 19th, 2025 12:38