Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
Fading in the Shadows
Dan Williams said:
How sad. I\'ve been there, too often, yet still here I am. This too will pass.
October 16th, 2025 23:16
Dan Williams said:
How sad. I\'ve been there, too often, yet still here I am. This too will pass.
October 16th, 2025 23:16
Fading in the Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write with quite a dark sense to it of no longer feeling in control, I sincerely hope you have better day\'s
October 16th, 2025 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write with quite a dark sense to it of no longer feeling in control, I sincerely hope you have better day\'s
October 16th, 2025 18:32
The Sun Forgot to Rise Today
sorenbarrett said:
When the sun forgets to raise it is a dark day indeed. There is sadness in this poem that goes with a sense of darkness. Well written
October 16th, 2025 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
When the sun forgets to raise it is a dark day indeed. There is sadness in this poem that goes with a sense of darkness. Well written
October 16th, 2025 09:52
Fading in the Shadows
NinjaGirl said:
Some days it feels like I whither away like cotton candy under warm water...poof, and then I\'m gone... If my world is falling apart, what\'s going to stop me from doing so?
October 15th, 2025 22:58
NinjaGirl said:
Some days it feels like I whither away like cotton candy under warm water...poof, and then I\'m gone... If my world is falling apart, what\'s going to stop me from doing so?
October 15th, 2025 22:58
Fading in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Sad indeed I read self destruction in this poem and that is dark. Well written
October 15th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad indeed I read self destruction in this poem and that is dark. Well written
October 15th, 2025 10:29
Cruel To Her Body
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of self punishment not just physically but emotionally and mentally trying to make oneself something that one is not, something that one thinks would be more acceptable to others. Why please I say one can not buy love. It is given or not and better to be loved for who one is than for something one pretends to be. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of self punishment not just physically but emotionally and mentally trying to make oneself something that one is not, something that one thinks would be more acceptable to others. Why please I say one can not buy love. It is given or not and better to be loved for who one is than for something one pretends to be. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 09:41
Cruel To Her Body
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m her too--ironically I\'ve also been fighting the urge lately. It\'s one of those things...hang in there. I will too. Very touching poem.
October 14th, 2025 09:31
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m her too--ironically I\'ve also been fighting the urge lately. It\'s one of those things...hang in there. I will too. Very touching poem.
October 14th, 2025 09:31
Growing Up Is a Sad Thing
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that focuses on the issue of giving one time to grow up. The balance of not taking too long or growing up to fast is a difficult one.
October 7th, 2025 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that focuses on the issue of giving one time to grow up. The balance of not taking too long or growing up to fast is a difficult one.
October 7th, 2025 09:44
My Overthinking
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a raw write of fear of loosing and betting on the wrong horse. A very nice write
October 3rd, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a raw write of fear of loosing and betting on the wrong horse. A very nice write
October 3rd, 2025 11:35
I Look Over My Body
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of despair and disregard Seeing oneself as valueless. A sad and tragic poem. Well expressed in poetic form
October 2nd, 2025 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of despair and disregard Seeing oneself as valueless. A sad and tragic poem. Well expressed in poetic form
October 2nd, 2025 12:48
Harmony
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing a sister that was close long ago and drifted away. Well written with a sense of nostalgia
September 30th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing a sister that was close long ago and drifted away. Well written with a sense of nostalgia
September 30th, 2025 14:43
Beautifully Ugly
sorenbarrett said:
I should agree that there is beauty in ugliness if one only looks closely. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
I should agree that there is beauty in ugliness if one only looks closely. Very nicely written
September 29th, 2025 17:40
Last Night I Had a Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of opposite expectations and the contrary nature of things. It has a mystical feel to it and one drifts through it like a dream. Very nice
September 29th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of opposite expectations and the contrary nature of things. It has a mystical feel to it and one drifts through it like a dream. Very nice
September 29th, 2025 03:57
\"It\'s not a bad life, just a bad day.”
Natavia Hobert said:
This is deep and it really made me think. It made me think of what you meant by the words you used and how you put them. This is really good, definently my favorite one i\'ve seen on here so far. I hope that you\'re doing okay, even if it is just a bad day.
September 26th, 2025 10:59
Natavia Hobert said:
This is deep and it really made me think. It made me think of what you meant by the words you used and how you put them. This is really good, definently my favorite one i\'ve seen on here so far. I hope that you\'re doing okay, even if it is just a bad day.
September 26th, 2025 10:59
\"It\'s not a bad life, just a bad day.”
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of internal pain that can only be expressed through self destructive acts. Sad in nature it is constrictive and dark. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of internal pain that can only be expressed through self destructive acts. Sad in nature it is constrictive and dark. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 10:41
-Inner Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in a poem. Nicely written in letter form. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in a poem. Nicely written in letter form. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
How do I know I’ve fallen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written with a tenderness that is poetic.
September 22nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written with a tenderness that is poetic.
September 22nd, 2025 04:38
Permanent Pen
Paul Bell said:
The pen or the pencil, that is the question.
Okay, I\'m pen all the way.
September 19th, 2025 11:48
Paul Bell said:
The pen or the pencil, that is the question.
Okay, I\'m pen all the way.
September 19th, 2025 11:48
Permanent Pen
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (I hope I’m a pen that makes mistakes worth reading.) very nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (I hope I’m a pen that makes mistakes worth reading.) very nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 10:49
Who are your monsters? What are their names?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with the fantastic and brings it to the real. We are our own worst monsters. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with the fantastic and brings it to the real. We are our own worst monsters. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2025 14:07
Unread Poetry
arqios said:
A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
September 17th, 2025 17:25
arqios said:
A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
September 17th, 2025 17:25
Unread Poetry
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem powerfully portrays writing as a deeply personal, sometimes painful, yet healing process, a dialogue between the self and one’s inner life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:17
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem powerfully portrays writing as a deeply personal, sometimes painful, yet healing process, a dialogue between the self and one’s inner life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:17
Unread Poetry
2781 said:
You touched ar least part of me.
For who knows the things of a man, save the spirit of man which is in him?
September 17th, 2025 15:43
2781 said:
You touched ar least part of me.
For who knows the things of a man, save the spirit of man which is in him?
September 17th, 2025 15:43
Unread Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
We are often our own harshest critics and are too hard on ourselves. Love must begin with loving ourselves and this poem echoes themes of internal pain and judgement that is so harsh that it bleeds. A deeply emotional write.
September 17th, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
We are often our own harshest critics and are too hard on ourselves. Love must begin with loving ourselves and this poem echoes themes of internal pain and judgement that is so harsh that it bleeds. A deeply emotional write.
September 17th, 2025 09:23
Unread Poetry
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the personal struggle of an individual with their creative process and the intimate relationship they have with their writing. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the desire for perfection in their poetry while acknowledging that their work remains largely unshared and unread by others. The subject matter touches upon themes of isolation, self-expression, and the inherent imperfections of the creative process.
September 17th, 2025 08:29
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the personal struggle of an individual with their creative process and the intimate relationship they have with their writing. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the desire for perfection in their poetry while acknowledging that their work remains largely unshared and unread by others. The subject matter touches upon themes of isolation, self-expression, and the inherent imperfections of the creative process.
September 17th, 2025 08:29
Mirror
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not knowing brings out the best. Atleast that\'s what I believe. Absolutely unfiltered- the authenticity shines through. Curated expressions are my anathema. Wish you write more like this 🙏
September 17th, 2025 02:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not knowing brings out the best. Atleast that\'s what I believe. Absolutely unfiltered- the authenticity shines through. Curated expressions are my anathema. Wish you write more like this 🙏
September 17th, 2025 02:57
Whispers of the Night
Fred1794 said:
Very haunting. A beautiful way of expressing self harm. Look after yourself.
September 16th, 2025 12:02
Fred1794 said:
Very haunting. A beautiful way of expressing self harm. Look after yourself.
September 16th, 2025 12:02
The Sun and Moon Always Forever
sorenbarrett said:
How one thing follows another and before we know it we are caught in an emotional affair. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
How one thing follows another and before we know it we are caught in an emotional affair. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 09:51
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