Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
Unwanted
sorenbarrett said:
This screams with pain and the need to feel it. Yes others do this and it is sad. A dark poem
February 13th, 2026 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
This screams with pain and the need to feel it. Yes others do this and it is sad. A dark poem
February 13th, 2026 14:54
Smile
Paul Bell said:
Okay, your last poem was a bit depressing for a Friday. Saw Smile and thought, I\'ll drink to that.
Hope it\'s a sunny weekend.
February 13th, 2026 13:30
Paul Bell said:
Okay, your last poem was a bit depressing for a Friday. Saw Smile and thought, I\'ll drink to that.
Hope it\'s a sunny weekend.
February 13th, 2026 13:30
Unwanted
Paul Bell said:
No coming back from this, this is like the final epitaph on top of the final epitaph.
People do come through this, but it takes time and a bit of forbearance.
February 13th, 2026 13:26
Paul Bell said:
No coming back from this, this is like the final epitaph on top of the final epitaph.
People do come through this, but it takes time and a bit of forbearance.
February 13th, 2026 13:26
A Winter Storm
Lorenz said:
\'\' I love yous \" ? A kind of multipolar love !
January 26th, 2026 13:46
Lorenz said:
\'\' I love yous \" ? A kind of multipolar love !
January 26th, 2026 13:46
A Winter Storm
sorenbarrett said:
I hear in this poem the song of a defeated warrior of love. Knowing this it becomes a funeral dirge. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
I hear in this poem the song of a defeated warrior of love. Knowing this it becomes a funeral dirge. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 13:43
Little Angle
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and encouraging poem it to me is said to a child and evokes the feeling that children are asked to change their innocence for adulthood a more earthly set of values and become mortal losing their divinity. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and encouraging poem it to me is said to a child and evokes the feeling that children are asked to change their innocence for adulthood a more earthly set of values and become mortal losing their divinity. A lovely write
January 6th, 2026 09:44
Little Angle
Katie B. said:
Moving emotive message. well written. Thanks for sharing.
-katie b., I invite you to check mine out
January 6th, 2026 09:18
Katie B. said:
Moving emotive message. well written. Thanks for sharing.
-katie b., I invite you to check mine out
January 6th, 2026 09:18
The Moon and I
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that reads as a song. I can almost hear it being sung. Very nice
December 26th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that reads as a song. I can almost hear it being sung. Very nice
December 26th, 2025 15:42
People
NinjaGirl said:
I think this is one of the hardest realizations of all--that our biggest holdback is ourselves, that our biggest hater is ourselves. Well expressed!
December 10th, 2025 21:10
NinjaGirl said:
I think this is one of the hardest realizations of all--that our biggest holdback is ourselves, that our biggest hater is ourselves. Well expressed!
December 10th, 2025 21:10
People
sorenbarrett said:
Others and ourself cause damage of equal weight. We often have to sort out who is who to fix the problem
December 10th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
Others and ourself cause damage of equal weight. We often have to sort out who is who to fix the problem
December 10th, 2025 10:55
Tis the Season
Katie B. said:
Beautiful! Enjoyed. Well written. Thanks for sharing!
December 9th, 2025 11:35
Katie B. said:
Beautiful! Enjoyed. Well written. Thanks for sharing!
December 9th, 2025 11:35
Tis the Season
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem that should be the feeling year round. Nicely worded and most poetic.
December 9th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem that should be the feeling year round. Nicely worded and most poetic.
December 9th, 2025 11:28
How?
sorenbarrett said:
An image that works both ways where we treat ourselves based on how others treat us and others treat us as we treat ourselves. A thought provoking poem
December 2nd, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
An image that works both ways where we treat ourselves based on how others treat us and others treat us as we treat ourselves. A thought provoking poem
December 2nd, 2025 12:09
Headache
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of faults and pains suffered. I have to ask myself what does fault have to do with it. Pain is pain and it is expressed well in this write.
November 18th, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of faults and pains suffered. I have to ask myself what does fault have to do with it. Pain is pain and it is expressed well in this write.
November 18th, 2025 19:39
Smile
sorenbarrett said:
Warm this poem shines like the sun\'s rays. It beams as the smile this time in words of poetic value
November 3rd, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Warm this poem shines like the sun\'s rays. It beams as the smile this time in words of poetic value
November 3rd, 2025 09:26
A Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Redefining things that are frightening as something familiar makes them less scarry. A good read
October 27th, 2025 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
Redefining things that are frightening as something familiar makes them less scarry. A good read
October 27th, 2025 17:41
A Sigh and a Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A tragedy written, sad and heart wrenching it bleeds with drama and sad ending. Well done
October 21st, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A tragedy written, sad and heart wrenching it bleeds with drama and sad ending. Well done
October 21st, 2025 14:57
She Stopped Humming After the Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of why and what stopped the humming. I has an air of the mistic. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of why and what stopped the humming. I has an air of the mistic. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 11:42
Fading in the Shadows
Dan Williams said:
How sad. I\'ve been there, too often, yet still here I am. This too will pass.
October 16th, 2025 23:16
Dan Williams said:
How sad. I\'ve been there, too often, yet still here I am. This too will pass.
October 16th, 2025 23:16
Fading in the Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write with quite a dark sense to it of no longer feeling in control, I sincerely hope you have better day\'s
October 16th, 2025 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write with quite a dark sense to it of no longer feeling in control, I sincerely hope you have better day\'s
October 16th, 2025 18:32
The Sun Forgot to Rise Today
sorenbarrett said:
When the sun forgets to raise it is a dark day indeed. There is sadness in this poem that goes with a sense of darkness. Well written
October 16th, 2025 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
When the sun forgets to raise it is a dark day indeed. There is sadness in this poem that goes with a sense of darkness. Well written
October 16th, 2025 09:52
Fading in the Shadows
NinjaGirl said:
Some days it feels like I whither away like cotton candy under warm water...poof, and then I\'m gone... If my world is falling apart, what\'s going to stop me from doing so?
October 15th, 2025 22:58
NinjaGirl said:
Some days it feels like I whither away like cotton candy under warm water...poof, and then I\'m gone... If my world is falling apart, what\'s going to stop me from doing so?
October 15th, 2025 22:58
Fading in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Sad indeed I read self destruction in this poem and that is dark. Well written
October 15th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sad indeed I read self destruction in this poem and that is dark. Well written
October 15th, 2025 10:29
Cruel To Her Body
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of self punishment not just physically but emotionally and mentally trying to make oneself something that one is not, something that one thinks would be more acceptable to others. Why please I say one can not buy love. It is given or not and better to be loved for who one is than for something one pretends to be. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A dark and sad poem of self punishment not just physically but emotionally and mentally trying to make oneself something that one is not, something that one thinks would be more acceptable to others. Why please I say one can not buy love. It is given or not and better to be loved for who one is than for something one pretends to be. Nicely written
October 14th, 2025 09:41
Cruel To Her Body
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m her too--ironically I\'ve also been fighting the urge lately. It\'s one of those things...hang in there. I will too. Very touching poem.
October 14th, 2025 09:31
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m her too--ironically I\'ve also been fighting the urge lately. It\'s one of those things...hang in there. I will too. Very touching poem.
October 14th, 2025 09:31
Growing Up Is a Sad Thing
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that focuses on the issue of giving one time to grow up. The balance of not taking too long or growing up to fast is a difficult one.
October 7th, 2025 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good write that focuses on the issue of giving one time to grow up. The balance of not taking too long or growing up to fast is a difficult one.
October 7th, 2025 09:44
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