Comments received on poems by A.N.
It Never Ends
Fränz Müller said:
Life feels like an endless treadmill sometimes! That’s why we need to cherish those small moments when they pop up in our lives. Excellent poem!
September 14th, 2026 20:55
Fränz Müller said:
Life feels like an endless treadmill sometimes! That’s why we need to cherish those small moments when they pop up in our lives. Excellent poem!
September 14th, 2026 20:55
It Never Ends
sorenbarrett said:
It is always that way the work only changes. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
It is always that way the work only changes. Nicely written
September 14th, 2026 17:10
Expectations
soheil khodaparasti said:
A really relatable take on the exhaustion of expectations.
September 11th, 2026 20:00
soheil khodaparasti said:
A really relatable take on the exhaustion of expectations.
September 11th, 2026 20:00
Expectations
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a poem of expectations but are they from others or self is the question. Nicely written where despair takes hold over time. Well done
September 11th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a poem of expectations but are they from others or self is the question. Nicely written where despair takes hold over time. Well done
September 11th, 2026 10:32
Underway
soheil khodaparasti said:
There is something very honest about how unfiltered this feels. No attempt to make the pain prettier, just thoughts, memories, and questions as they come. The simplicity makes the emotion feel even more real.
September 9th, 2026 12:33
soheil khodaparasti said:
There is something very honest about how unfiltered this feels. No attempt to make the pain prettier, just thoughts, memories, and questions as they come. The simplicity makes the emotion feel even more real.
September 9th, 2026 12:33
Her Name Was Past
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this one very much! Enjoy the \"whole show\" not just the blooper reel ~ LOL Remember what the immortal Robin Williams said:
\"We\'re not laughing at you. We\'re laughing near you!\' Wise man - played Mork. Definitely an alien - too Human to be from this Planet.
September 9th, 2026 10:06
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this one very much! Enjoy the \"whole show\" not just the blooper reel ~ LOL Remember what the immortal Robin Williams said:
\"We\'re not laughing at you. We\'re laughing near you!\' Wise man - played Mork. Definitely an alien - too Human to be from this Planet.
September 9th, 2026 10:06
Call It a Day
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant reflection on how getting ready can slowly become less about self-care and more about trying to feel worthy or pretty.
September 4th, 2026 14:20
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant reflection on how getting ready can slowly become less about self-care and more about trying to feel worthy or pretty.
September 4th, 2026 14:20
Call It a Day
sorenbarrett said:
Well emphasized the older we get the more appearance is important and the more we care about what others think. A sad commentary on society
September 4th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Well emphasized the older we get the more appearance is important and the more we care about what others think. A sad commentary on society
September 4th, 2026 11:39
More Than a Shade
Fränz Müller said:
The vibrant colors of a person in one’s memories can and do fade with the passage of time. Sad but inevitable. Great poem!
September 3rd, 2026 17:10
Fränz Müller said:
The vibrant colors of a person in one’s memories can and do fade with the passage of time. Sad but inevitable. Great poem!
September 3rd, 2026 17:10
More Than a Shade
sorenbarrett said:
So many colors loved and changed in this poem they become a mood and a time period. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many colors loved and changed in this poem they become a mood and a time period. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2026 15:57
More Than a Shade
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about how love and loss can change the meaning of ordinary colors.
September 3rd, 2026 15:50
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about how love and loss can change the meaning of ordinary colors.
September 3rd, 2026 15:50
Her Name Was Past
soheil khodaparasti said:
This is deeply moving. The way you personify the past as someone chasing you makes the struggle with memory feel so real and human. I especially love the message that healing does not always mean forgetting. It can mean turning around, facing what happened, learning from it, and choosing what to carry forward. “Remember the springs, not just the winters” is such a beautiful reminder that even painful seasons can help us appreciate the joy that follows.
September 1st, 2026 23:06
soheil khodaparasti said:
This is deeply moving. The way you personify the past as someone chasing you makes the struggle with memory feel so real and human. I especially love the message that healing does not always mean forgetting. It can mean turning around, facing what happened, learning from it, and choosing what to carry forward. “Remember the springs, not just the winters” is such a beautiful reminder that even painful seasons can help us appreciate the joy that follows.
September 1st, 2026 23:06
Her Name Was Past
peto said:
An epic
The past always catches up
May as well face it
Your writing is constantly improving
Keep it up
Great content
September 1st, 2026 10:17
peto said:
An epic
The past always catches up
May as well face it
Your writing is constantly improving
Keep it up
Great content
September 1st, 2026 10:17
Her Name Was Past
sorenbarrett said:
The message is a wonderful one that I ask myself always, why do people choose to remember the bad when they with no more effort remember the good. Why choose to be unhappy when there is just as much to be happy about. Nicely put in a personified metaphor. Well done
September 1st, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
The message is a wonderful one that I ask myself always, why do people choose to remember the bad when they with no more effort remember the good. Why choose to be unhappy when there is just as much to be happy about. Nicely put in a personified metaphor. Well done
September 1st, 2026 09:04
I\'m Just Living
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes just getting by is all we have to give, and that should be enough. I felt this one in my bones. Excellent.
August 31st, 2026 22:08
Fränz Müller said:
Sometimes just getting by is all we have to give, and that should be enough. I felt this one in my bones. Excellent.
August 31st, 2026 22:08
I\'m Just Living
not_defined said:
Incredibly powerful write, mate. I can resonate with what you wrote dearly. Well done, and thank you for sharing.
August 31st, 2026 18:46
not_defined said:
Incredibly powerful write, mate. I can resonate with what you wrote dearly. Well done, and thank you for sharing.
August 31st, 2026 18:46
I\'m Just Living
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just living is all we can ask for. Things change and there will be better. Hang on
August 31st, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes just living is all we can ask for. Things change and there will be better. Hang on
August 31st, 2026 12:15
I\'m Just Living
peto said:
Great title and so much better than the alternative
\"I didn\'t have a unique feeling \"
Yet this is full of emotion
I for one thoroughly enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
August 31st, 2026 12:13
peto said:
Great title and so much better than the alternative
\"I didn\'t have a unique feeling \"
Yet this is full of emotion
I for one thoroughly enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
August 31st, 2026 12:13
Weird.
soheil khodaparasti said:
Not weird at all, dear poet. Sometimes the shortest words carry the deepest truths.
August 28th, 2026 07:49
soheil khodaparasti said:
Not weird at all, dear poet. Sometimes the shortest words carry the deepest truths.
August 28th, 2026 07:49
Weird.
sorenbarrett said:
Less is more in this poem and in most all others as well. Nicely said A.N.
August 27th, 2026 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
Less is more in this poem and in most all others as well. Nicely said A.N.
August 27th, 2026 14:59
I Whispered to the Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A write of personification where meaning becomes personalized. Nicely done
August 25th, 2026 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
A write of personification where meaning becomes personalized. Nicely done
August 25th, 2026 18:11
Something Strange
Michael A. McGuire said:
Acid Indigestion with some really vivid dreams, sounds like to me ~ LOL Or Anxiety. Multiple meanings here.
August 25th, 2026 08:32
Michael A. McGuire said:
Acid Indigestion with some really vivid dreams, sounds like to me ~ LOL Or Anxiety. Multiple meanings here.
August 25th, 2026 08:32
Unfinished Thoughts
NafisaSB said:
agree with the sentiments expressed by you - well done
August 25th, 2026 00:17
NafisaSB said:
agree with the sentiments expressed by you - well done
August 25th, 2026 00:17
Something Strange
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are difficult to put into words. Nicely written.
August 24th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are difficult to put into words. Nicely written.
August 24th, 2026 13:58
Still Looking
Fränz Müller said:
That window is something to aspire to, perhaps!
August 22nd, 2026 20:08
Fränz Müller said:
That window is something to aspire to, perhaps!
August 22nd, 2026 20:08
Still Looking
sorenbarrett said:
A marvelous approach to what I take as a criticism of those that choose not to see what lies around them. This might be overly religious, the arrogant that walk with their nose in the air or just plain air heads. A wonderful read.
August 22nd, 2026 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A marvelous approach to what I take as a criticism of those that choose not to see what lies around them. This might be overly religious, the arrogant that walk with their nose in the air or just plain air heads. A wonderful read.
August 22nd, 2026 08:10
Life of a Lost Button
Fränz Müller said:
It’s amazing how much we can have in common with inanimate objects sometimes…
August 20th, 2026 14:47
Fränz Müller said:
It’s amazing how much we can have in common with inanimate objects sometimes…
August 20th, 2026 14:47
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