Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
\"It\'s not a bad life, just a bad day.”
Natavia Hobert said:
This is deep and it really made me think. It made me think of what you meant by the words you used and how you put them. This is really good, definently my favorite one i\'ve seen on here so far. I hope that you\'re doing okay, even if it is just a bad day.
September 26th, 2025 10:59
Natavia Hobert said:
This is deep and it really made me think. It made me think of what you meant by the words you used and how you put them. This is really good, definently my favorite one i\'ve seen on here so far. I hope that you\'re doing okay, even if it is just a bad day.
September 26th, 2025 10:59
\"It\'s not a bad life, just a bad day.”
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of internal pain that can only be expressed through self destructive acts. Sad in nature it is constrictive and dark. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of internal pain that can only be expressed through self destructive acts. Sad in nature it is constrictive and dark. Nicely written
September 26th, 2025 10:41
-Inner Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in a poem. Nicely written in letter form. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in a poem. Nicely written in letter form. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
How do I know I’ve fallen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written with a tenderness that is poetic.
September 22nd, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written with a tenderness that is poetic.
September 22nd, 2025 04:38
Permanent Pen
Paul Bell said:
The pen or the pencil, that is the question.
Okay, I\'m pen all the way.
September 19th, 2025 11:48
Paul Bell said:
The pen or the pencil, that is the question.
Okay, I\'m pen all the way.
September 19th, 2025 11:48
Permanent Pen
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (I hope I’m a pen that makes mistakes worth reading.) very nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (I hope I’m a pen that makes mistakes worth reading.) very nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 10:49
Who are your monsters? What are their names?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with the fantastic and brings it to the real. We are our own worst monsters. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that begins with the fantastic and brings it to the real. We are our own worst monsters. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2025 14:07
Unread Poetry
arqios said:
A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
September 17th, 2025 17:25
arqios said:
A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
September 17th, 2025 17:25
Unread Poetry
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem powerfully portrays writing as a deeply personal, sometimes painful, yet healing process, a dialogue between the self and one’s inner life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:17
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem powerfully portrays writing as a deeply personal, sometimes painful, yet healing process, a dialogue between the self and one’s inner life. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:17
Unread Poetry
2781 said:
You touched ar least part of me.
For who knows the things of a man, save the spirit of man which is in him?
September 17th, 2025 15:43
2781 said:
You touched ar least part of me.
For who knows the things of a man, save the spirit of man which is in him?
September 17th, 2025 15:43
Unread Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
We are often our own harshest critics and are too hard on ourselves. Love must begin with loving ourselves and this poem echoes themes of internal pain and judgement that is so harsh that it bleeds. A deeply emotional write.
September 17th, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
We are often our own harshest critics and are too hard on ourselves. Love must begin with loving ourselves and this poem echoes themes of internal pain and judgement that is so harsh that it bleeds. A deeply emotional write.
September 17th, 2025 09:23
Unread Poetry
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the personal struggle of an individual with their creative process and the intimate relationship they have with their writing. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the desire for perfection in their poetry while acknowledging that their work remains largely unshared and unread by others. The subject matter touches upon themes of isolation, self-expression, and the inherent imperfections of the creative process.
September 17th, 2025 08:29
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the personal struggle of an individual with their creative process and the intimate relationship they have with their writing. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the desire for perfection in their poetry while acknowledging that their work remains largely unshared and unread by others. The subject matter touches upon themes of isolation, self-expression, and the inherent imperfections of the creative process.
September 17th, 2025 08:29
Mirror
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not knowing brings out the best. Atleast that\'s what I believe. Absolutely unfiltered- the authenticity shines through. Curated expressions are my anathema. Wish you write more like this 🙏
September 17th, 2025 02:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not knowing brings out the best. Atleast that\'s what I believe. Absolutely unfiltered- the authenticity shines through. Curated expressions are my anathema. Wish you write more like this 🙏
September 17th, 2025 02:57
Whispers of the Night
Fred1794 said:
Very haunting. A beautiful way of expressing self harm. Look after yourself.
September 16th, 2025 12:02
Fred1794 said:
Very haunting. A beautiful way of expressing self harm. Look after yourself.
September 16th, 2025 12:02
The Sun and Moon Always Forever
sorenbarrett said:
How one thing follows another and before we know it we are caught in an emotional affair. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
How one thing follows another and before we know it we are caught in an emotional affair. A lovely write
September 16th, 2025 09:51
What did I do to deserve such caution?
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that has no legitimate answer. A plea that goes unanswered and the implication is that this is different than it has been before but it has always been such. Nicely written
September 14th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that has no legitimate answer. A plea that goes unanswered and the implication is that this is different than it has been before but it has always been such. Nicely written
September 14th, 2025 20:46
One Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Words said that the young believe until they grow old enough to doubt. A lovely thought, we all need to feel valued and loved. It is hard to say for some hard to believe from others. A lovely read
September 12th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Words said that the young believe until they grow old enough to doubt. A lovely thought, we all need to feel valued and loved. It is hard to say for some hard to believe from others. A lovely read
September 12th, 2025 09:35
Why Are You Sorry
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love this piece its touching. 👍🏻nice work
September 10th, 2025 10:02
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love this piece its touching. 👍🏻nice work
September 10th, 2025 10:02
Why Are You Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
Meta in its nature but mico in its examination it speaks of pity that no one envies. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Meta in its nature but mico in its examination it speaks of pity that no one envies. A lovely write
September 10th, 2025 08:22
Why Are You Sorry
2781 said:
It\'s a bit of a mind bender or maybe that\'s just me!
Self examination brought me a big sorry.
September 10th, 2025 08:15
2781 said:
It\'s a bit of a mind bender or maybe that\'s just me!
Self examination brought me a big sorry.
September 10th, 2025 08:15
Take the Good with the Bad
NinjaGirl said:
I really like it! It\'s a great message, and I think it\'s pretty well-written as it is!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
NinjaGirl said:
I really like it! It\'s a great message, and I think it\'s pretty well-written as it is!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
Take the Good with the Bad
2781 said:
The flower may fade, but the vine remains.
September 9th, 2025 08:02
2781 said:
The flower may fade, but the vine remains.
September 9th, 2025 08:02
Take the Good with the Bad
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor it speaks to timeliness and how some things come too late. It adds the issue of people taking and not giving, taking all that is good and leaving what is not usable. A good message and read
September 9th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor it speaks to timeliness and how some things come too late. It adds the issue of people taking and not giving, taking all that is good and leaving what is not usable. A good message and read
September 9th, 2025 07:03
Why Are You Nice
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dives deep into the emotion of pity and feeling bad for someone. It is haunting and a bit dark. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dives deep into the emotion of pity and feeling bad for someone. It is haunting and a bit dark. Nicely written.
September 8th, 2025 09:14
I stand in the ruins of what I once was.
sorenbarrett said:
All that one is torn down and now to rebuild knowing that such an achievement will give a view of one as king of their own castle. Very nicely written
August 29th, 2025 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
All that one is torn down and now to rebuild knowing that such an achievement will give a view of one as king of their own castle. Very nicely written
August 29th, 2025 16:08
Truth Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem that speaks of someone important enough to make changes for. Very nice
August 26th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem that speaks of someone important enough to make changes for. Very nice
August 26th, 2025 12:31
Yellow
Paul Bell said:
It is strange how colour sets the mood.
Monday, black mood.
Wednesday, in the pink.
Friday and Saturday, red alert.
Sunday, blue.
August 18th, 2025 15:31
Paul Bell said:
It is strange how colour sets the mood.
Monday, black mood.
Wednesday, in the pink.
Friday and Saturday, red alert.
Sunday, blue.
August 18th, 2025 15:31
Yellow
sorenbarrett said:
Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:58
Yellow
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a very beautiful write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:08
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a very beautiful write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:08
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