Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
I stand in the ruins of what I once was.
sorenbarrett said:
All that one is torn down and now to rebuild knowing that such an achievement will give a view of one as king of their own castle. Very nicely written
August 29th, 2025 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
All that one is torn down and now to rebuild knowing that such an achievement will give a view of one as king of their own castle. Very nicely written
August 29th, 2025 16:08
Truth Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem that speaks of someone important enough to make changes for. Very nice
August 26th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem that speaks of someone important enough to make changes for. Very nice
August 26th, 2025 12:31
Yellow
Paul Bell said:
It is strange how colour sets the mood.
Monday, black mood.
Wednesday, in the pink.
Friday and Saturday, red alert.
Sunday, blue.
August 18th, 2025 15:31
Paul Bell said:
It is strange how colour sets the mood.
Monday, black mood.
Wednesday, in the pink.
Friday and Saturday, red alert.
Sunday, blue.
August 18th, 2025 15:31
Yellow
sorenbarrett said:
Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:58
Yellow
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a very beautiful write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:08
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a very beautiful write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:08
My Past Love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write possibly not just about the past love maybe it was the first, and clearly still remembered in a very affectionate way, nicely expressed and written
August 14th, 2025 12:41
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write possibly not just about the past love maybe it was the first, and clearly still remembered in a very affectionate way, nicely expressed and written
August 14th, 2025 12:41
My Past Love
sorenbarrett said:
For most of us the more time that passes the better the past becomes. A melancholic write
August 14th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
For most of us the more time that passes the better the past becomes. A melancholic write
August 14th, 2025 10:28
Mirror
Poetic Licence said:
A dark write giving the sense of someone giving up after a difficult life, you can sense the despair of needing and calling out for help, but no one ever came or heard, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 15:48
Poetic Licence said:
A dark write giving the sense of someone giving up after a difficult life, you can sense the despair of needing and calling out for help, but no one ever came or heard, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 15:48
Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is dark and breaths despair. It is a cry for help that went unheard. Very nicely written and imaged it is a fave
August 13th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is dark and breaths despair. It is a cry for help that went unheard. Very nicely written and imaged it is a fave
August 13th, 2025 14:22
\"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯💯 Yup. That\'s 200% true! Well done, my friend! A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯💯 Yup. That\'s 200% true! Well done, my friend! A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:04
\"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.\"
Poetic Licence said:
The tongue is the most potent weapon we possess, it can do good and it can do bad. Words cut through everything straight to the core, the ramifications of nasty words can last forever. Nicely expressed and written and many will relate to this write
August 12th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
The tongue is the most potent weapon we possess, it can do good and it can do bad. Words cut through everything straight to the core, the ramifications of nasty words can last forever. Nicely expressed and written and many will relate to this write
August 12th, 2025 09:32
\"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.\"
sorenbarrett said:
In a world grown so socially distant many do not take the time to learn about others and be sensitive to their needs instead we impose blanket rules about political correctness that is a one size fits all solution. A poignant poem that implies a need for closer and more sensitive relations. Lovely
August 12th, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
In a world grown so socially distant many do not take the time to learn about others and be sensitive to their needs instead we impose blanket rules about political correctness that is a one size fits all solution. A poignant poem that implies a need for closer and more sensitive relations. Lovely
August 12th, 2025 09:31
Raindrops\' Melody
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write creating nice images as you read, I feel has much deeper meaning than appears on first read, nicely expressed and written
August 11th, 2025 15:28
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write creating nice images as you read, I feel has much deeper meaning than appears on first read, nicely expressed and written
August 11th, 2025 15:28
Raindrops\' Melody
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great metaphor and images. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great metaphor and images. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 14:45
Trophy in a Case
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write a life of being controlled, confined and not appriciated or valued as they are. Constantly fighting for some positive recognition from a parent, sad,touching and hits the heart, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 12:19
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write a life of being controlled, confined and not appriciated or valued as they are. Constantly fighting for some positive recognition from a parent, sad,touching and hits the heart, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 12:19
Trophy in a Case
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of confinement and control with a sense of resentment. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of confinement and control with a sense of resentment. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 11:30
Just Enough Time
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of hurt and loneliness at being let down, when love is involved it doesn\'t take long for any of the above to happen, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 23:39
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of hurt and loneliness at being let down, when love is involved it doesn\'t take long for any of the above to happen, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 23:39
Just Enough Time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 20:07
Dew-Tears
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with a beautiful thought, we need to value and respect nature much more than we do, but nature is much more resilient than us and will long out live us, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:35
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with a beautiful thought, we need to value and respect nature much more than we do, but nature is much more resilient than us and will long out live us, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:35
Dew-Tears
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude well deserved and yes I would miss her.
August 4th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude well deserved and yes I would miss her.
August 4th, 2025 08:20
Whispers of the Night
peto said:
Brilliant write on a harrowing subject
\"As night time calls my name\" 8s a great line
And the 2nd verse is stunning
I truly look forward to reading more though I do hope your art stays on paper
Very impressive
July 31st, 2025 19:34
peto said:
Brilliant write on a harrowing subject
\"As night time calls my name\" 8s a great line
And the 2nd verse is stunning
I truly look forward to reading more though I do hope your art stays on paper
Very impressive
July 31st, 2025 19:34
Whispers of the Night
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting write write of pain being released by self harming, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 18:46
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting write write of pain being released by self harming, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 18:46
Whispers of the Night
sorenbarrett said:
Scars tell a story a history a poem of life. Nicely written where emotion is expressed.
July 31st, 2025 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Scars tell a story a history a poem of life. Nicely written where emotion is expressed.
July 31st, 2025 13:10
A Poet Without the Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
A Soldier’s Lament
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
A Soldier’s Lament
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
A Soldier’s Lament
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Whispering Storm
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
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