Comments received on poems by A.N.
Old Keys
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor used to its every extent. Nicely written a wonderful poem
August 11th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor used to its every extent. Nicely written a wonderful poem
August 11th, 2026 09:57
Old Keys
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully captures the pain of trying in vain to hold on to something—or someone—that has already changed.
August 11th, 2026 09:13
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem beautifully captures the pain of trying in vain to hold on to something—or someone—that has already changed.
August 11th, 2026 09:13
The Main Ingredient
NafisaSB said:
You are definitely a winner 🥇 stay blessed
August 11th, 2026 03:49
NafisaSB said:
You are definitely a winner 🥇 stay blessed
August 11th, 2026 03:49
The Pencil Knows
sorenbarrett said:
What an interesting concept indeed the personification (in a sense) of a writing implement. Well done
August 10th, 2026 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
What an interesting concept indeed the personification (in a sense) of a writing implement. Well done
August 10th, 2026 10:35
Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of metaphoric colors paired with time. Well done
August 8th, 2026 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of metaphoric colors paired with time. Well done
August 8th, 2026 20:00
Things That Never Came
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem of fixation on a person even to the point of not letting them go when they are gone. Well done
August 7th, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem of fixation on a person even to the point of not letting them go when they are gone. Well done
August 7th, 2026 10:15
The Moon Knows
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great write that can be taken both literally and metaphorically. Well done
August 6th, 2026 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great write that can be taken both literally and metaphorically. Well done
August 6th, 2026 16:02
The Main Ingredient
Paul Bell said:
How people peceive, and let\'s face it, people are always right.
Yet those same people usually lead empty lives.
August 5th, 2026 14:23
Paul Bell said:
How people peceive, and let\'s face it, people are always right.
Yet those same people usually lead empty lives.
August 5th, 2026 14:23
The Main Ingredient
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that emphasizes the differences of view and how others with different tastes have no right to dictate what one values of holds dear. As long as one is happy no one can criticize. Well written and a most powerful way. A fave and well done
August 5th, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that emphasizes the differences of view and how others with different tastes have no right to dictate what one values of holds dear. As long as one is happy no one can criticize. Well written and a most powerful way. A fave and well done
August 5th, 2026 11:57
The Main Ingredient
peto said:
Love this
Seems like a bit of jealousy at play
So glad to see you didn\'t let it affect you
Superb answer to negativity
August 5th, 2026 11:44
peto said:
Love this
Seems like a bit of jealousy at play
So glad to see you didn\'t let it affect you
Superb answer to negativity
August 5th, 2026 11:44
Would you?
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this one VERY much. So authentic and human...vulnerable. Says, \"This is me...take it or leave it and I don\'t care which.\"
Starts off with harmless preliminary questions to draw you in and get you involved...then...
slowly \"hammers\" home the intended message. Knockout!
August 4th, 2026 10:44
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this one VERY much. So authentic and human...vulnerable. Says, \"This is me...take it or leave it and I don\'t care which.\"
Starts off with harmless preliminary questions to draw you in and get you involved...then...
slowly \"hammers\" home the intended message. Knockout!
August 4th, 2026 10:44
We Should Have Slowed Down
sorenbarrett said:
Time runs fast and before one knows it life is past. We should not have run so fast. Very nicely done the is a sense of rapid pace in this write that fulfills the message.
August 4th, 2026 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Time runs fast and before one knows it life is past. We should not have run so fast. Very nicely done the is a sense of rapid pace in this write that fulfills the message.
August 4th, 2026 09:35
Did I Miss Something?
Paul Bell said:
All of life is a stage.
In saying that, when I asked the court if I could pay my fine in stages, for some reason they said no.
August 4th, 2026 09:20
Paul Bell said:
All of life is a stage.
In saying that, when I asked the court if I could pay my fine in stages, for some reason they said no.
August 4th, 2026 09:20
Did I Miss Something?
sorenbarrett said:
A movie or play a metaphor for life itself and how I wish I had the director power to say cut or action. Oh I guess I do come to think of it but I seldom act on it. A wonderful write that takes life as a film and we all actors on the stage as Shakespeare himself said all the world is a stage. Nicely written.
August 3rd, 2026 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A movie or play a metaphor for life itself and how I wish I had the director power to say cut or action. Oh I guess I do come to think of it but I seldom act on it. A wonderful write that takes life as a film and we all actors on the stage as Shakespeare himself said all the world is a stage. Nicely written.
August 3rd, 2026 10:58
We Both Know
peto said:
I\'m glad you revisited this one
thoroughly enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2026 11:14
peto said:
I\'m glad you revisited this one
thoroughly enjoyed reading
July 31st, 2026 11:14
We Both Know
sorenbarrett said:
This could well apply to several types of relationships. It seems most applicable to marriage where a woman traditionally changes her name and power dynamics are turned on their head. It could well be a work relationship for a friend as well. Nicely done
July 31st, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
This could well apply to several types of relationships. It seems most applicable to marriage where a woman traditionally changes her name and power dynamics are turned on their head. It could well be a work relationship for a friend as well. Nicely done
July 31st, 2026 09:37
Cage of Red
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write my favorite part is the first stanza. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write my favorite part is the first stanza. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 11:36
Seasonal Friend
Paul Bell said:
The perfect friend, maybe old advice came to fruition in the healing process.
July 28th, 2026 11:54
Paul Bell said:
The perfect friend, maybe old advice came to fruition in the healing process.
July 28th, 2026 11:54
Seasonal Friend
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic tribute in this piece. Lovely
July 28th, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great poetic tribute in this piece. Lovely
July 28th, 2026 09:36
What Silence Keeps
sorenbarrett said:
What happened indeed. Well written it poses many questions some without answers. Well done
July 27th, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
What happened indeed. Well written it poses many questions some without answers. Well done
July 27th, 2026 17:54
I Really Did
sorenbarrett said:
Because people change and situations change is no reason for feelings to change of promises to change. Well written
July 25th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
Because people change and situations change is no reason for feelings to change of promises to change. Well written
July 25th, 2026 09:09
I Haven\'t
sorenbarrett said:
A mourning incomplete in this write. Sad it reflects the missing of someone and the having to learn how to live again in their absence. Nicely done.
July 23rd, 2026 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
A mourning incomplete in this write. Sad it reflects the missing of someone and the having to learn how to live again in their absence. Nicely done.
July 23rd, 2026 16:11
Feel Free
sorenbarrett said:
A carefree attitude in this poem butts up against fear of being left out or behind. But then comes the final words that it might not be so bad. A lovely write
July 22nd, 2026 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
A carefree attitude in this poem butts up against fear of being left out or behind. But then comes the final words that it might not be so bad. A lovely write
July 22nd, 2026 12:43
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