Comments received on poems by A.N.



Life of a Lost Button
sorenbarrett said:

Personified and surreal it takes on a life of its own. Nicely written

August 20th, 2026 10:29

Unfinished Thoughts
Demar Desu said:

Masterpiece… the beauty of being a student

August 20th, 2026 10:09

Unfinished Thoughts
soheil khodaparasti said:

Hauntingly beautiful. It captures the fragile moment when the mask finally fades and all that remains is the truth of what we have been carrying.

August 19th, 2026 20:36

Unfinished Thoughts
Fränz Müller said:

I have more masks than Don Post 😁 Well done.

August 19th, 2026 19:36

Unfinished Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of time in a relationship and getting past the time to respond. Well done

August 19th, 2026 17:32

Unfinished Thoughts
not_defined said:

Excellent poem, mate. I really enjoy your writing style

August 19th, 2026 17:16

Before We Understand
antra.coree said:

Beautiful and deep message, loved it

August 19th, 2026 00:39

Before We Understand
Ocean Blue said:

Beautiful written. Selfless, thoughtless, irrational, yet it can never be tainted by evil notions. Love is the purest, unadulterated expression of human existence.

August 18th, 2026 03:53

Before We Understand
Paul Bell said:

Sometimes it takes a lifetime for people to realise the significance of those words.

August 17th, 2026 14:37

Before We Understand
Fränz Müller said:

In my mind’s eye I can still see the last time I hugged my father and told him I loved him before he passed away. We all will have a moment that will be the last time with a loved one, or even for ourselves. Well done.

August 17th, 2026 10:16

Before We Understand
sorenbarrett said:

Love is a complicated thing. A good write with thought behind it. Nicely penned.

August 17th, 2026 10:08

Exhibits
sorenbarrett said:

Each line a reminder and a prompt. Nicely written

August 14th, 2026 13:03

Exhibits
Fränz Müller said:

Beautiful.

August 14th, 2026 12:30

4:00 a.m.
antra.coree said:

Well written!

August 13th, 2026 21:03

4:00 a.m.
sorenbarrett said:

Insomnia a terrible plague. Well written

August 13th, 2026 16:04

4:00 a.m.
Fränz Müller said:

Those 4 am blues can be a real bear. Great write. ☺️

August 13th, 2026 14:27

4:00 a.m.
Allie561 said:

I like this one A.N! I have a poem I’m still finishing that’s about what you hear at 2 AM. Your imagery in this is very good, I can picture an early morning, fantastic job

August 13th, 2026 14:22

When You\'re Older
Fränz Müller said:

Aging gracefully is equal parts art and science. Joy is something we have to give ourselves permission to feel within, not something without that others can hand to us or take away on a whim. Great poem!!

August 12th, 2026 11:59

When You\'re Older
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that seems a song with a chorus and verses. Well written

August 12th, 2026 11:32

When You\'re Older
Allie561 said:

Don’t let other people’s perceptions dim your own A.N, you have something special. I really like that last verse, sometimes we give so much advice even when others don’t need it because we don’t know how to use it for ourselves. Wonderful job!

August 12th, 2026 10:51

Old Keys
boot said:

What made you write this?

August 12th, 2026 00:09

Old Keys
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor used to its every extent. Nicely written a wonderful poem

August 11th, 2026 09:57

Old Keys
soheil khodaparasti said:

This poem beautifully captures the pain of trying in vain to hold on to something—or someone—that has already changed.

August 11th, 2026 09:13

Old Keys
Fränz Müller said:

Excellent work!

August 11th, 2026 09:06

The Main Ingredient
NafisaSB said:

You are definitely a winner 🥇 stay blessed

August 11th, 2026 03:49

The Pencil Knows
sorenbarrett said:

What an interesting concept indeed the personification (in a sense) of a writing implement. Well done

August 10th, 2026 10:35

Tomorrow
soheil khodaparasti said:

A tender and beautifully expressed poem.

August 8th, 2026 23:35

Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:

A great write of metaphoric colors paired with time. Well done

August 8th, 2026 20:00

Things That Never Came
Fränz Müller said:

Great work!

August 7th, 2026 11:48

Things That Never Came
sorenbarrett said:

This is a sad poem of fixation on a person even to the point of not letting them go when they are gone. Well done

August 7th, 2026 10:15

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