Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
A Poet Without the Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
A Soldierโs Lament
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
A Soldierโs Lament
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
A Soldierโs Lament
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Whispering Storm
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
Whispering Storm
Poetic Licence said:
A encouraging and positive message, we all have storms to ride, but don\'t let them overpower you, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 08:32
Poetic Licence said:
A encouraging and positive message, we all have storms to ride, but don\'t let them overpower you, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 08:32
A Poet Without the Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
No one ever needs to be sorry for being themself. I hear the depression and sadness and regret in this raw poem. Nicely said
July 22nd, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
No one ever needs to be sorry for being themself. I hear the depression and sadness and regret in this raw poem. Nicely said
July 22nd, 2025 12:13
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write asking if the fire that once raged has burnt out, or is there still some embers to reignite the relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write asking if the fire that once raged has burnt out, or is there still some embers to reignite the relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:11
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Lorenz said:
Lie ,lie,lie ...Lalaland in the stars .
July 21st, 2025 12:02
Lorenz said:
Lie ,lie,lie ...Lalaland in the stars .
July 21st, 2025 12:02
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to whether it will continue to burn. Is the wood dry or green and will the fire burn or go out? Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to whether it will continue to burn. Is the wood dry or green and will the fire burn or go out? Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:09
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
July 18th, 2025 10:34
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
July 18th, 2025 10:34
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write the beauty of nature, do we embrace and look after it or do we destroy and ignore it, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 09:01
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write the beauty of nature, do we embrace and look after it or do we destroy and ignore it, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 09:01
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and so this was particularly meaningful to me. Do we take notice of it or do we choose to ignore it? A lovely write and a fave
July 18th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and so this was particularly meaningful to me. Do we take notice of it or do we choose to ignore it? A lovely write and a fave
July 18th, 2025 08:20
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Priya Tomar said:
Some interesting metaphors, very well
July 18th, 2025 07:42
Priya Tomar said:
Some interesting metaphors, very well
July 18th, 2025 07:42
Clipped Wings
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the pain and hurt in the write as it continues to hold them down, nicely expressed
July 14th, 2025 22:15
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the pain and hurt in the write as it continues to hold them down, nicely expressed
July 14th, 2025 22:15
Clipped Wings
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:45
In Love\'s Snare
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped by emotions, by obligations, by hope, by expectations chained to something that one knows is not right. A very interesting and difficult write.
June 18th, 2025 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped by emotions, by obligations, by hope, by expectations chained to something that one knows is not right. A very interesting and difficult write.
June 18th, 2025 17:32
The Moonโs Soliloquy
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that has a fanciful feel and wistful touch. Loved it
June 17th, 2025 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that has a fanciful feel and wistful touch. Loved it
June 17th, 2025 12:05
The Moonโs Soliloquy
Damaso said:
Oh, how beautiful! I really liked it! Thanks for sharing. Cheers!
June 17th, 2025 11:41
Damaso said:
Oh, how beautiful! I really liked it! Thanks for sharing. Cheers!
June 17th, 2025 11:41
The Moonโs Soliloquy
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, I like the idea of the stars masking the moon\'s real feelings, as in life we all were one at some point, lets hope we find that hope, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 10:56
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, I like the idea of the stars masking the moon\'s real feelings, as in life we all were one at some point, lets hope we find that hope, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 10:56
A Waste of Time
RSM0812 said:
This evokes to me the time to move on. Sometimes we get stuck in the heart. It proves the cruelty of love itself. Nice job.
May 27th, 2025 08:58
RSM0812 said:
This evokes to me the time to move on. Sometimes we get stuck in the heart. It proves the cruelty of love itself. Nice job.
May 27th, 2025 08:58
A Waste of Time
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, feeling of loss and why did i bother, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:20
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to many, feeling of loss and why did i bother, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:20
A Waste of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so nicely said in a few words. Speaking of a loss and the consequences.
May 23rd, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so nicely said in a few words. Speaking of a loss and the consequences.
May 23rd, 2025 14:02
Unlocked
Poetic Licence said:
A honest declaration of love and tale of how the heart was one, but now that can\'t get away, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 12:41
Poetic Licence said:
A honest declaration of love and tale of how the heart was one, but now that can\'t get away, nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 12:41
Unlocked
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a declaration of the evolution of love and and the heart\'s enslavement. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a declaration of the evolution of love and and the heart\'s enslavement. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 12:14
The Guardian of Time
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about something we all feel there is never enough off, if we stepped back and looked, there is more than enough, enjoyed the read, nicely written and expressed
May 20th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about something we all feel there is never enough off, if we stepped back and looked, there is more than enough, enjoyed the read, nicely written and expressed
May 20th, 2025 12:23
The Guardian of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic write that flows well in rhyme. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic write that flows well in rhyme. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 10:55
Madly in Love
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of ones total love for the one who is abusing them, nicely expressed
May 20th, 2025 02:11
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of ones total love for the one who is abusing them, nicely expressed
May 20th, 2025 02:11
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