Comments received on poems by Violet_Writes
Raindrops\' Melody
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great metaphor and images. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great metaphor and images. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 14:45
Trophy in a Case
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write a life of being controlled, confined and not appriciated or valued as they are. Constantly fighting for some positive recognition from a parent, sad,touching and hits the heart, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 12:19
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write a life of being controlled, confined and not appriciated or valued as they are. Constantly fighting for some positive recognition from a parent, sad,touching and hits the heart, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 12:19
Trophy in a Case
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of confinement and control with a sense of resentment. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of confinement and control with a sense of resentment. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 11:30
Just Enough Time
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of hurt and loneliness at being let down, when love is involved it doesn\'t take long for any of the above to happen, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 23:39
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of hurt and loneliness at being let down, when love is involved it doesn\'t take long for any of the above to happen, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 23:39
Just Enough Time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 20:07
Dew-Tears
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with a beautiful thought, we need to value and respect nature much more than we do, but nature is much more resilient than us and will long out live us, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:35
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with a beautiful thought, we need to value and respect nature much more than we do, but nature is much more resilient than us and will long out live us, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:35
Dew-Tears
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude well deserved and yes I would miss her.
August 4th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude well deserved and yes I would miss her.
August 4th, 2025 08:20
Whispers of the Night
peto said:
Brilliant write on a harrowing subject
\"As night time calls my name\" 8s a great line
And the 2nd verse is stunning
I truly look forward to reading more though I do hope your art stays on paper
Very impressive
July 31st, 2025 19:34
peto said:
Brilliant write on a harrowing subject
\"As night time calls my name\" 8s a great line
And the 2nd verse is stunning
I truly look forward to reading more though I do hope your art stays on paper
Very impressive
July 31st, 2025 19:34
Whispers of the Night
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting write write of pain being released by self harming, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 18:46
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting write write of pain being released by self harming, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 18:46
Whispers of the Night
sorenbarrett said:
Scars tell a story a history a poem of life. Nicely written where emotion is expressed.
July 31st, 2025 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Scars tell a story a history a poem of life. Nicely written where emotion is expressed.
July 31st, 2025 13:10
A Poet Without the Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very powerful, honest and heartfelt write, you can sense pain, sadness and anger over having to continually fight to just be themselves, which no one should have to do, hope it improves or all the better this is in the past, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 12:51
A Soldierโs Lament
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
Poetic Licence said:
When I first read this I thought that of a soldier\'s life and choices they have to make, then I read it again and I thought it was of someone not in the military but a soldier in life, struggling to find their way, interesting and nicely expressed write
July 30th, 2025 10:52
A Soldierโs Lament
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A soldier not an easy role. Kill or be killed. High risk, suffering pain part of the job. A good write
July 30th, 2025 10:39
A Soldierโs Lament
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Lorenz said:
A highly idealized view .Killing or being killed does not require emotions .
July 30th, 2025 09:22
Whispering Storm
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader through the storm. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 16:20
Whispering Storm
Poetic Licence said:
A encouraging and positive message, we all have storms to ride, but don\'t let them overpower you, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 08:32
Poetic Licence said:
A encouraging and positive message, we all have storms to ride, but don\'t let them overpower you, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 08:32
A Poet Without the Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
No one ever needs to be sorry for being themself. I hear the depression and sadness and regret in this raw poem. Nicely said
July 22nd, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
No one ever needs to be sorry for being themself. I hear the depression and sadness and regret in this raw poem. Nicely said
July 22nd, 2025 12:13
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write asking if the fire that once raged has burnt out, or is there still some embers to reignite the relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write asking if the fire that once raged has burnt out, or is there still some embers to reignite the relationship, nicely expressed and written
July 21st, 2025 12:11
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
Lorenz said:
Lie ,lie,lie ...Lalaland in the stars .
July 21st, 2025 12:02
Lorenz said:
Lie ,lie,lie ...Lalaland in the stars .
July 21st, 2025 12:02
Whispers in the Stars\' dream
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to whether it will continue to burn. Is the wood dry or green and will the fire burn or go out? Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to whether it will continue to burn. Is the wood dry or green and will the fire burn or go out? Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 09:09
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
July 18th, 2025 10:34
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
July 18th, 2025 10:34
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write the beauty of nature, do we embrace and look after it or do we destroy and ignore it, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 09:01
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write the beauty of nature, do we embrace and look after it or do we destroy and ignore it, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 09:01
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and so this was particularly meaningful to me. Do we take notice of it or do we choose to ignore it? A lovely write and a fave
July 18th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and so this was particularly meaningful to me. Do we take notice of it or do we choose to ignore it? A lovely write and a fave
July 18th, 2025 08:20
๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฝ ๐ฒ๐ผ ๐๐ช๐ฝ๐พ๐ป๐ฎ?
Priya Tomar said:
Some interesting metaphors, very well
July 18th, 2025 07:42
Priya Tomar said:
Some interesting metaphors, very well
July 18th, 2025 07:42
Clipped Wings
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the pain and hurt in the write as it continues to hold them down, nicely expressed
July 14th, 2025 22:15
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the pain and hurt in the write as it continues to hold them down, nicely expressed
July 14th, 2025 22:15
Clipped Wings
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:45
In Love\'s Snare
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped by emotions, by obligations, by hope, by expectations chained to something that one knows is not right. A very interesting and difficult write.
June 18th, 2025 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped by emotions, by obligations, by hope, by expectations chained to something that one knows is not right. A very interesting and difficult write.
June 18th, 2025 17:32
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