Comments received on poems by wildecho14
Just a ghost
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the feeling of not being noticed or cared, just existing but invisible to others, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 13:44
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of the feeling of not being noticed or cared, just existing but invisible to others, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 13:44
Just a ghost
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to not be noticed or cared about. A poem of being just in the background and insignificant. Well done
August 8th, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
So hard to not be noticed or cared about. A poem of being just in the background and insignificant. Well done
August 8th, 2025 12:11
Growing Up Broke More Than Toys
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that is both sad and positive, that however dark it gets, the light will come on again, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that is both sad and positive, that however dark it gets, the light will come on again, nicely expressed and written
August 8th, 2025 05:25
Growing Up Broke More Than Toys
sorenbarrett said:
A broken toy a disappointment a lost opportunity but another gained. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A broken toy a disappointment a lost opportunity but another gained. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:39
Growing Up Broke More Than Toys
V1RU$ said:
Honestly, this hit hard. Growing up hurts deeply and the concept of losing everything is painful. I love how you constructed the poem and I hope your ok too, ml ^^
August 7th, 2025 23:05
V1RU$ said:
Honestly, this hit hard. Growing up hurts deeply and the concept of losing everything is painful. I love how you constructed the poem and I hope your ok too, ml ^^
August 7th, 2025 23:05
but how could i?
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt poem that in its rawness sends the message that one person can make a difference and that listening to another may be all that it takes to change a life or save it. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt poem that in its rawness sends the message that one person can make a difference and that listening to another may be all that it takes to change a life or save it. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:23
I found it anyway.
Poetic Licence said:
The best feeling in the world, to find what you are looking for, enjoyed the read
July 29th, 2025 09:21
Poetic Licence said:
The best feeling in the world, to find what you are looking for, enjoyed the read
July 29th, 2025 09:21
I found it anyway.
sorenbarrett said:
A heart warming write of a search that found what it was looking for and there is no better feeling than that. Lovely
July 29th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A heart warming write of a search that found what it was looking for and there is no better feeling than that. Lovely
July 29th, 2025 08:22
All’s Well That Ends Well.
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of difficult times endured but they have made it through to the light, nicely expressed and written write
June 19th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of difficult times endured but they have made it through to the light, nicely expressed and written write
June 19th, 2025 06:24
All’s Well That Ends Well.
sorenbarrett said:
A play of Shakespeare a comedy but in this poem not so much. There is a sadness to it. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A play of Shakespeare a comedy but in this poem not so much. There is a sadness to it. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 06:18
all I did was fall.
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write which you fan feel the despair in the words, a feeling that I can relate to,when you just want someone to listen, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 12:09
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write which you fan feel the despair in the words, a feeling that I can relate to,when you just want someone to listen, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 12:09
all I did was fall.
sorenbarrett said:
I heard desperation in this poem of raw emotion. Well written in the throws of despair.
June 12th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
I heard desperation in this poem of raw emotion. Well written in the throws of despair.
June 12th, 2025 10:45
safe like heaven
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem religious belief becomes love. A lovely poem
June 8th, 2025 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem religious belief becomes love. A lovely poem
June 8th, 2025 20:12
carried like playlists
sorenbarrett said:
This poem conveys the feeling of distance in social situations and the chaos of noise that is as unreal as that played over headphones. A general artificial feeling goes with this poem that is well written.
June 5th, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem conveys the feeling of distance in social situations and the chaos of noise that is as unreal as that played over headphones. A general artificial feeling goes with this poem that is well written.
June 5th, 2025 15:45
As the sun rises...
Poetic Licence said:
A touching,sad and very heartfelt write of struggling to cope with inner turmoil, longing for someone to listen and not judge so the process of healing can start, in the hope that one day they can take mask off because they are genuinely alright, nicely expressed and written, take care
June 2nd, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
A touching,sad and very heartfelt write of struggling to cope with inner turmoil, longing for someone to listen and not judge so the process of healing can start, in the hope that one day they can take mask off because they are genuinely alright, nicely expressed and written, take care
June 2nd, 2025 13:19
As the sun rises...
sorenbarrett said:
A deep sharing of the internal self in this poem. Heart felt and loved the periodic internal rhyme. Nicely done
June 2nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A deep sharing of the internal self in this poem. Heart felt and loved the periodic internal rhyme. Nicely done
June 2nd, 2025 11:29
the kind of love.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully written written tender and caring write, you don\'t need to look for real love, if it\'s real it will just happen, lovely read
June 1st, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautifully written written tender and caring write, you don\'t need to look for real love, if it\'s real it will just happen, lovely read
June 1st, 2025 05:43
the kind of love.
sorenbarrett said:
So tender and nicely written it touches the heart and is a fave
June 1st, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
So tender and nicely written it touches the heart and is a fave
June 1st, 2025 04:40
Alone with the Darkness.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of maturing into the world as a strong loving caring person, very nicely nicely expressed and written
May 31st, 2025 10:25
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of maturing into the world as a strong loving caring person, very nicely nicely expressed and written
May 31st, 2025 10:25
Alone with the Darkness.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written and conveys what is commonly called \"growing pains\" and they are painful, indeed. In fact, this middle-aged guy has learned that those growing pains never stop coming, for we are always growing and moving forward, hopefully. A wonderful, and thought provoking-poem. Welcome to MPS, Angelica. 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written and conveys what is commonly called \"growing pains\" and they are painful, indeed. In fact, this middle-aged guy has learned that those growing pains never stop coming, for we are always growing and moving forward, hopefully. A wonderful, and thought provoking-poem. Welcome to MPS, Angelica. 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 09:49
Alone with the Darkness.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of independence and growing up and moving on. It is hard and cold but a stronger person it does mold. Very nice
May 31st, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of independence and growing up and moving on. It is hard and cold but a stronger person it does mold. Very nice
May 31st, 2025 09:26
