Comments received on poems by Pete the poet
There Is No Dream
jarcher54 said:
Damn you Pete! Lovely and painful... like a good poem, and like a gut punch.
December 1st, 2025 23:26
jarcher54 said:
Damn you Pete! Lovely and painful... like a good poem, and like a gut punch.
December 1st, 2025 23:26
There Is No Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of age, being worn out and overly ripe. This poem conveys the feeling well. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of age, being worn out and overly ripe. This poem conveys the feeling well. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 18:41
Afterwards
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives greater meaning the term filthy lucre. A writing of advice and there is nothing more private than a person\'s bank balance, a sex life can be shared but one\'s worth is sacred. Well written
November 26th, 2025 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives greater meaning the term filthy lucre. A writing of advice and there is nothing more private than a person\'s bank balance, a sex life can be shared but one\'s worth is sacred. Well written
November 26th, 2025 17:50
Think In Shapes
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in poetry Euclid would be proud. A most unique poem that combines shapes and as you say thought progression
November 25th, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in poetry Euclid would be proud. A most unique poem that combines shapes and as you say thought progression
November 25th, 2025 17:07
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Self love is what is missing in many not the feeling that we are right or arrogance but self love itself. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
Self love is what is missing in many not the feeling that we are right or arrogance but self love itself. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 17:17
A Word In Your Ear
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways surreal in its wording and nature. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 17:16
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways surreal in its wording and nature. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 17:16
Dawning of the Day
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the nocturnal journey in this poem. A dream of symbols and images. Well written
November 18th, 2025 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the nocturnal journey in this poem. A dream of symbols and images. Well written
November 18th, 2025 16:56
In the Evening Rooms
sorenbarrett said:
Most interestingly written imaged in rooms where silence prevails. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
Most interestingly written imaged in rooms where silence prevails. Nicely done
October 31st, 2025 17:17
Afternoon T-Shirt With Alice (Part 2)
Paul Bell said:
Stoned silly in the House of Lords.
If only that was true, the rabbit said.
Alice laughed, and the \'\'silly\'\' was taken out.
October 29th, 2025 09:07
Paul Bell said:
Stoned silly in the House of Lords.
If only that was true, the rabbit said.
Alice laughed, and the \'\'silly\'\' was taken out.
October 29th, 2025 09:07
Afternoon T-Shirt With Alice (Part 2)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun revised version of the original classic tale told in tecnicolor and Imax it jumps off the page as one goes down the rabbit hole. A fun read
October 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A fun revised version of the original classic tale told in tecnicolor and Imax it jumps off the page as one goes down the rabbit hole. A fun read
October 29th, 2025 04:16
Downstream Upstream
sorenbarrett said:
Common belief is one does not sail upstream without considerable effort or a motor. So let it be sailing down stream as life takes us time does not go backwards but in memories. A lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Common belief is one does not sail upstream without considerable effort or a motor. So let it be sailing down stream as life takes us time does not go backwards but in memories. A lovely write.
September 28th, 2025 11:21
Horizon Edge
sorenbarrett said:
Imagery in this poem leads me to believe that there are mind altering substances involved. A fun read in an out of body experience
September 18th, 2025 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
Imagery in this poem leads me to believe that there are mind altering substances involved. A fun read in an out of body experience
September 18th, 2025 17:02
Lounging for Lizards
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is vivid, chaotic, and very alive it feels like a raw urban snapshot, blending sensory overload with personal reflection. The mix of city noise, cafes, nightlife, and inner musings gives it a kind of stream-of-consciousness realism. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 13:24
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This piece is vivid, chaotic, and very alive it feels like a raw urban snapshot, blending sensory overload with personal reflection. The mix of city noise, cafes, nightlife, and inner musings gives it a kind of stream-of-consciousness realism. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 13:24
Lounging for Lizards
sorenbarrett said:
The thoughts, associations, experiences of a free spirit cast adrift on the sea of humanity where there seems to be a large amount of drifting debris. Well written
September 17th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
The thoughts, associations, experiences of a free spirit cast adrift on the sea of humanity where there seems to be a large amount of drifting debris. Well written
September 17th, 2025 04:24
The Mourning Cottage
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one missed. A lovely write.
September 11th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one missed. A lovely write.
September 11th, 2025 14:24
The Forbidden Fence
sorenbarrett said:
We all have such fences that we can\'t get over and wonder what is on the other side. Sometimes we are able to later see the other side and sometimes not. A very nice write.
September 4th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
We all have such fences that we can\'t get over and wonder what is on the other side. Sometimes we are able to later see the other side and sometimes not. A very nice write.
September 4th, 2025 14:32
What It Is to Be Without
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness pervades this poem along with a strange feeling of identification to greater or lessor degrees. It is a very human write raw in some ways and yet with periodic polish of rhyme. It speaks of a soul reaching out but not able to touch. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of sadness pervades this poem along with a strange feeling of identification to greater or lessor degrees. It is a very human write raw in some ways and yet with periodic polish of rhyme. It speaks of a soul reaching out but not able to touch. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 06:15
SUNSET TO SUNSET
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting through time and space in this poem of loosing relationships over time and that loss seems vaguely sorrowful. A almost ethereal piece
August 30th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of drifting through time and space in this poem of loosing relationships over time and that loss seems vaguely sorrowful. A almost ethereal piece
August 30th, 2025 04:46
Sex Pistols (Filthy Lucre Tour 23 Jan 96)
sorenbarrett said:
Very punk and a time I remember when my boys were of an age to enjoy such things. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
Very punk and a time I remember when my boys were of an age to enjoy such things. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 16:41
The Yin and Yang Show
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this presents the opposites in nature and the how they compliment each other rather than fight. It is in contrast and opposition that harmony is created and that the cycle of life continues. A philosophical write in personification. Lovely
August 25th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this presents the opposites in nature and the how they compliment each other rather than fight. It is in contrast and opposition that harmony is created and that the cycle of life continues. A philosophical write in personification. Lovely
August 25th, 2025 05:50
Right Next To Me
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful is the mind of the poet where there are no constraints by reality or dimensions. A wonderful write and a fave
August 18th, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful is the mind of the poet where there are no constraints by reality or dimensions. A wonderful write and a fave
August 18th, 2025 14:47
Right On Through
Poetic Licence said:
I see the write was written a while ago, which confirms in this write how little over time things have changed, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
I see the write was written a while ago, which confirms in this write how little over time things have changed, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 09:32
Right On Through
sorenbarrett said:
Oh these are troubled times. A poem that makes a statement about how things are. Well done
August 17th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Oh these are troubled times. A poem that makes a statement about how things are. Well done
August 17th, 2025 05:00
Condition Red
Poetic Licence said:
A write of sad but true state of affairs in today\'s world, I like the flow of the write and the slightly cynical tone, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
A write of sad but true state of affairs in today\'s world, I like the flow of the write and the slightly cynical tone, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:26
Condition Red
sorenbarrett said:
There is a cynics words in this poem a lovely write of dismay and disbelief. Sad but true. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
There is a cynics words in this poem a lovely write of dismay and disbelief. Sad but true. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 09:28
Not Guilty
Poetic Licence said:
This is such a sad and heartfelt write of the lifetime of abuse to someone culminating in the worse type of abuse imaginable. The anger is totally justified at these monsters who live amongst us, the author is right there is no excuse or justifications for this type of abuse
August 8th, 2025 21:45
Poetic Licence said:
This is such a sad and heartfelt write of the lifetime of abuse to someone culminating in the worse type of abuse imaginable. The anger is totally justified at these monsters who live amongst us, the author is right there is no excuse or justifications for this type of abuse
August 8th, 2025 21:45
Not Guilty
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of anger comes through in this poem of tragedy and sadness. The poem depicts human monsters that enact their atrocities on others. It leaves a bitter taste. Nicely written to evoke these feelings.
August 8th, 2025 18:43
sorenbarrett said:
A good deal of anger comes through in this poem of tragedy and sadness. The poem depicts human monsters that enact their atrocities on others. It leaves a bitter taste. Nicely written to evoke these feelings.
August 8th, 2025 18:43
America
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the anthem at the end. I have driven those roads and felt those winds and sun. A bit of nostalgia for me on this one.
August 6th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the anthem at the end. I have driven those roads and felt those winds and sun. A bit of nostalgia for me on this one.
August 6th, 2025 05:19
Blue Antelope
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem cast in real setting and with a supernatural type of feel. Well done
August 5th, 2025 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem cast in real setting and with a supernatural type of feel. Well done
August 5th, 2025 17:55
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