Comments received on poems by Lore
The room next door
sorenbarrett said:
Children have different conceptions of loss and time and this poem conveys that. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Children have different conceptions of loss and time and this poem conveys that. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:24
The room next door
Ociel said:
What a good read it was! Felt it! 😭Almost cried.. I\'m sorry! I love how u turned ur emotions into art! Beautiful write indeed.
June 8th, 2026 14:07
Ociel said:
What a good read it was! Felt it! 😭Almost cried.. I\'m sorry! I love how u turned ur emotions into art! Beautiful write indeed.
June 8th, 2026 14:07
That afternoon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. What stays with me is the distinction between remembering and reliving. The poem makes clear that this is not simply a memory being recalled...it is a moment that continues to exist inside the speaker, returning again and again with the same helplessness, fear, and grief. The final lines land with tremendous force because they reveal how some wounds survive long after the event itself has passed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. What stays with me is the distinction between remembering and reliving. The poem makes clear that this is not simply a memory being recalled...it is a moment that continues to exist inside the speaker, returning again and again with the same helplessness, fear, and grief. The final lines land with tremendous force because they reveal how some wounds survive long after the event itself has passed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:49
That afternoon
peto said:
Brought some memories back for me
Some things can never be unseen
Beautifully written
June 7th, 2026 20:45
peto said:
Brought some memories back for me
Some things can never be unseen
Beautifully written
June 7th, 2026 20:45
That afternoon
sorenbarrett said:
Traumatic it is raw and painful to read. It draws the reader on for details that are never given because the outcome is not the point it is the moment all the visceral rush of the minute and what it does to the helpless. Well written
June 7th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
Traumatic it is raw and painful to read. It draws the reader on for details that are never given because the outcome is not the point it is the moment all the visceral rush of the minute and what it does to the helpless. Well written
June 7th, 2026 11:03
The last time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The simplicity of it is what makes it so devastating...there’s no need for grand language when the truth being expressed is already heavy enough. The grief here feels deeply human and painfully familiar. Un poema precioso, amiga mía. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The simplicity of it is what makes it so devastating...there’s no need for grand language when the truth being expressed is already heavy enough. The grief here feels deeply human and painfully familiar. Un poema precioso, amiga mía. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:33
The last time
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and time magnify feelings and now deified they are worshiped. A lovely poem that pulls at the heart
June 6th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and time magnify feelings and now deified they are worshiped. A lovely poem that pulls at the heart
June 6th, 2026 06:08
The pills on the table (Part 2)
NafisaSB said:
a very touching poem - showing raw emotions - the stress , the grief for a person who was cruel and tender by turns..forgive him for his roughness, and try to concentrate on the good days - it will help...
June 2nd, 2026 02:28
NafisaSB said:
a very touching poem - showing raw emotions - the stress , the grief for a person who was cruel and tender by turns..forgive him for his roughness, and try to concentrate on the good days - it will help...
June 2nd, 2026 02:28
Forever fifteen
Fränz Müller said:
This really spoke to me about a friend I lost when we were both young. I miss my friend.
June 1st, 2026 21:35
Fränz Müller said:
This really spoke to me about a friend I lost when we were both young. I miss my friend.
June 1st, 2026 21:35
The sadness without a name
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this broke my heart a little... The way you write her confusion is what got me most. She doesn\'t even know why she\'s hurting, and that somehow makes it hurt more. Having struggled with depression and mental health throughout my life, I can relate to this. There is so much tenderness here and so much compassion for children carrying things they should never have to carry. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this broke my heart a little... The way you write her confusion is what got me most. She doesn\'t even know why she\'s hurting, and that somehow makes it hurt more. Having struggled with depression and mental health throughout my life, I can relate to this. There is so much tenderness here and so much compassion for children carrying things they should never have to carry. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:32
The sadness without a name
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27
Forever fifteen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness at that loss but gain in what was given and an eternal memory of a person so important. Lovely
May 30th, 2026 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness at that loss but gain in what was given and an eternal memory of a person so important. Lovely
May 30th, 2026 11:10
Forever fifteen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this absolutely broke my heart. What moved me most is that this isn\'t simply a poem about loss...it\'s a poem about gratitude, friendship, and the lasting impact one life can have on another. The fact that she entered your life when you were grieving your father makes the entire piece even more powerful. Beautiful work, my friend. Sorry for your loss. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this absolutely broke my heart. What moved me most is that this isn\'t simply a poem about loss...it\'s a poem about gratitude, friendship, and the lasting impact one life can have on another. The fact that she entered your life when you were grieving your father makes the entire piece even more powerful. Beautiful work, my friend. Sorry for your loss. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
Forever fifteen
2781 said:
The righteous perish, and no man lays it to heart: and merciful men are taken away, none considering that the righteous is taken away from the evil to come.
May 30th, 2026 10:06
2781 said:
The righteous perish, and no man lays it to heart: and merciful men are taken away, none considering that the righteous is taken away from the evil to come.
May 30th, 2026 10:06
Forever fifteen
Friendship said:
Beautifully written tribute to your friend. So sorry for your loss.
May 30th, 2026 09:17
Friendship said:
Beautifully written tribute to your friend. So sorry for your loss.
May 30th, 2026 09:17
The pills on the table (Part 2)
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful write, I am sure your father would want you to remember only the good times
May 29th, 2026 03:45
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful write, I am sure your father would want you to remember only the good times
May 29th, 2026 03:45
The pills on the table (Part 2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is heartbreaking because it refuses to simplify grief. The speaker remembers the harm, the fear, the relief, the love…all at the same time. “It hurts to admit / that I miss him” landed especially hard. Beautiful and deeply honest work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is heartbreaking because it refuses to simplify grief. The speaker remembers the harm, the fear, the relief, the love…all at the same time. “It hurts to admit / that I miss him” landed especially hard. Beautiful and deeply honest work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:52
The pills on the table (Part 2)
lunarchloedip said:
as someone also grieving a father, thank you for sharing. very comforting to know there are others too
May 28th, 2026 18:24
lunarchloedip said:
as someone also grieving a father, thank you for sharing. very comforting to know there are others too
May 28th, 2026 18:24
The pills on the table (Part 2)
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very emotional poem of pain and loss and the hurt that accompanies it. Well written
May 28th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very emotional poem of pain and loss and the hurt that accompanies it. Well written
May 28th, 2026 15:57
The pills on the table
Paul Bell said:
I should have started at the beginning.
I take it the drugs took your dad.
Hope life is looking up.
May 28th, 2026 14:29
Paul Bell said:
I should have started at the beginning.
I take it the drugs took your dad.
Hope life is looking up.
May 28th, 2026 14:29
The pills on the table (Part 2)
Paul Bell said:
I think when you\'re the provider there\'s a lot of stress on your shoulders.
Not sure if your dad was a fisherman, which is really hard.
I suppose you must take the good bits out of your fathers life and put the bad bits down to life.
There\'s no great answers in growing up, as every generation will tell you.
Hopefully your life takes you down a different path.
May 28th, 2026 11:48
Paul Bell said:
I think when you\'re the provider there\'s a lot of stress on your shoulders.
Not sure if your dad was a fisherman, which is really hard.
I suppose you must take the good bits out of your fathers life and put the bad bits down to life.
There\'s no great answers in growing up, as every generation will tell you.
Hopefully your life takes you down a different path.
May 28th, 2026 11:48
The pills on the table
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The child’s voice here feels painfully real...quiet, watchful, trying to survive inside a home where love and fear have become tangled together. That final turn is absolutely devastating. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The child’s voice here feels painfully real...quiet, watchful, trying to survive inside a home where love and fear have become tangled together. That final turn is absolutely devastating. Powerful and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:00
The pills on the table
Fränz Müller said:
A powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us!
May 27th, 2026 12:49
Fränz Müller said:
A powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us!
May 27th, 2026 12:49
Invisible Battles 💚
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. The quiet exhaustion and hidden struggle running through this piece feel painfully real. I especially love that the poem honors the effort it takes for some people simply to make it through another day. Gentle, compassionate, and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. The quiet exhaustion and hidden struggle running through this piece feel painfully real. I especially love that the poem honors the effort it takes for some people simply to make it through another day. Gentle, compassionate, and deeply human work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:22
Invisible Battles 💚
Fränz Müller said:
So well said! Thank you for sharing this!
May 26th, 2026 13:50
Fränz Müller said:
So well said! Thank you for sharing this!
May 26th, 2026 13:50
Invisible Battles 💚
sorenbarrett said:
You never know for sure what is in another\'s mind but reaching out may be a start. A nicely written piece about what one can do for others. Well done
May 26th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
You never know for sure what is in another\'s mind but reaching out may be a start. A nicely written piece about what one can do for others. Well done
May 26th, 2026 13:07
Where silence weighs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem captures something many people feel but struggle to say… the quiet weight of absence and how memories linger in ordinary spaces. That echo of a name in empty rooms is especially haunting. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem captures something many people feel but struggle to say… the quiet weight of absence and how memories linger in ordinary spaces. That echo of a name in empty rooms is especially haunting. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:13
Where silence weighs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and sadness that is set in shadows and night. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and sadness that is set in shadows and night. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 16:13
My Own Enemy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a heavy and honest confession…each “I’m sorry” stacking like stones in a wall built against yourself. What really struck me was “Even now, I’m sorry for using you to write this.” That moment cuts deep…because it shows how tangled self-judgment can become. Painful, brave, and very real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a heavy and honest confession…each “I’m sorry” stacking like stones in a wall built against yourself. What really struck me was “Even now, I’m sorry for using you to write this.” That moment cuts deep…because it shows how tangled self-judgment can become. Painful, brave, and very real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 07:43
My Own Enemy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of error and past wrong doing. Well written
March 8th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of error and past wrong doing. Well written
March 8th, 2026 13:34
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