Comments received on poems by lorena1
Where your voice still lives
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and feeling missed. Well done
June 20th, 2026 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and feeling missed. Well done
June 20th, 2026 18:53
Give him back to me
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poem of grief and loss that holds onto the past and its ghosts. Well written
June 18th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poem of grief and loss that holds onto the past and its ghosts. Well written
June 18th, 2026 09:06
The fear of saying goodbye again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma and fear that can not be released. A sad poem.
June 17th, 2026 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma and fear that can not be released. A sad poem.
June 17th, 2026 17:58
Mr. Big Shoes
sorenbarrett said:
This write is particularly touching to me as a parent and grandparent who seldom sees his children or grandchildren but continues to love them. It is a lovely write with tenderness and the feel of unconditional love that all parents should hold for their children despite distance or time. A fave
June 16th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
This write is particularly touching to me as a parent and grandparent who seldom sees his children or grandchildren but continues to love them. It is a lovely write with tenderness and the feel of unconditional love that all parents should hold for their children despite distance or time. A fave
June 16th, 2026 09:57
No one should go through hell twice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me, my friend. The compassion running through these lines is impossible to miss. More than anything, it feels like an attempt to sit beside someone in their pain rather than judge them from a distance. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me, my friend. The compassion running through these lines is impossible to miss. More than anything, it feels like an attempt to sit beside someone in their pain rather than judge them from a distance. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:13
No one should go through hell twice
sorenbarrett said:
Silent suffering endured for eternity brings back thought of Greek Gods Atlas holding the world, Sisyphus eternally rolling a boulder up hill only to have it roll back down, Prometheus eternally punished chained to a rock and having his liver ripped out by an eagle each only to have it grow back for the next. A strong message.
June 15th, 2026 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Silent suffering endured for eternity brings back thought of Greek Gods Atlas holding the world, Sisyphus eternally rolling a boulder up hill only to have it roll back down, Prometheus eternally punished chained to a rock and having his liver ripped out by an eagle each only to have it grow back for the next. A strong message.
June 15th, 2026 09:19
No one should go through hell twice
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deeply felt piece
June 15th, 2026 09:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deeply felt piece
June 15th, 2026 09:05
When summer comes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. So many people carry this struggle quietly, and I love that you meet it with compassion rather than cruelty. The world gives us more than enough reasons to be hard on ourselves. We don\'t need to help it along. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. So many people carry this struggle quietly, and I love that you meet it with compassion rather than cruelty. The world gives us more than enough reasons to be hard on ourselves. We don\'t need to help it along. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:28
When summer comes
Samprikta Paul said:
Oh my God!! I could hug you for such heart-warming and positive writing. I can so relate, and I guess I was just sitting in front of a mirror judging myself so hard until I read this beautiful piece, and now I feel good.
June 12th, 2026 09:20
Samprikta Paul said:
Oh my God!! I could hug you for such heart-warming and positive writing. I can so relate, and I guess I was just sitting in front of a mirror judging myself so hard until I read this beautiful piece, and now I feel good.
June 12th, 2026 09:20
When summer comes
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of body concern. It is raw and self revealing striping away the pretense of hidden form. If a woman\'s body is bait for the sharks I would rather not be noticed and left for those more interested in my personality and mind. Sharks don\'t stay long after a kill.
June 12th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of body concern. It is raw and self revealing striping away the pretense of hidden form. If a woman\'s body is bait for the sharks I would rather not be noticed and left for those more interested in my personality and mind. Sharks don\'t stay long after a kill.
June 12th, 2026 09:04
When summer comes
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of body concern. It is raw and self revealing striping away the pretense of hidden form. If a woman\'s body is bait for the sharks I would rather not be noticed and left for those more interested in my personality and mind. Sharks don\'t stay long after a kill.
June 12th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of body concern. It is raw and self revealing striping away the pretense of hidden form. If a woman\'s body is bait for the sharks I would rather not be noticed and left for those more interested in my personality and mind. Sharks don\'t stay long after a kill.
June 12th, 2026 09:04
The second death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, what struck me most here is the line, \"Death took you once. But time...time is taking you a second time.\" Oof. That landed. Such a simple observation, yet it carries so much weight. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, what struck me most here is the line, \"Death took you once. But time...time is taking you a second time.\" Oof. That landed. Such a simple observation, yet it carries so much weight. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:23
The second death
marissa said:
This was honestly a heartbreaking read,you expressed yourself so vividly,it reminds me of a time i felt this way.I love this,really.
June 10th, 2026 15:05
marissa said:
This was honestly a heartbreaking read,you expressed yourself so vividly,it reminds me of a time i felt this way.I love this,really.
June 10th, 2026 15:05
The second death
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting to any that have lost a father. A poem of missing someone dear. Well done
June 10th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and haunting to any that have lost a father. A poem of missing someone dear. Well done
June 10th, 2026 11:35
The shadow that never left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me most was the reflection on never knowing when something will be the last time. It\'s such a universal truth, yet one we rarely think about until afterward. That realization carries tremendous emotional weight here. Beautifully done, Lore. I am sorry to hear of you losing your dad. Mis oraciones y mi corazón te acompañan, amiga. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me most was the reflection on never knowing when something will be the last time. It\'s such a universal truth, yet one we rarely think about until afterward. That realization carries tremendous emotional weight here. Beautifully done, Lore. I am sorry to hear of you losing your dad. Mis oraciones y mi corazón te acompañan, amiga. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:02
The room next door
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me here is how honestly you capture the perspective of a child. Children don\'t process absence the same way adults do. They wait, they listen, they expect familiar things to return. That truth comes through powerfully. This really hit me hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me here is how honestly you capture the perspective of a child. Children don\'t process absence the same way adults do. They wait, they listen, they expect familiar things to return. That truth comes through powerfully. This really hit me hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 07:58
The shadow that never left
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of ending and loss well written
June 9th, 2026 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of ending and loss well written
June 9th, 2026 16:31
The room next door
sorenbarrett said:
Children have different conceptions of loss and time and this poem conveys that. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Children have different conceptions of loss and time and this poem conveys that. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:24
The room next door
Ociel said:
What a good read it was! Felt it! 😭Almost cried.. I\'m sorry! I love how u turned ur emotions into art! Beautiful write indeed.
June 8th, 2026 14:07
Ociel said:
What a good read it was! Felt it! 😭Almost cried.. I\'m sorry! I love how u turned ur emotions into art! Beautiful write indeed.
June 8th, 2026 14:07
That afternoon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. What stays with me is the distinction between remembering and reliving. The poem makes clear that this is not simply a memory being recalled...it is a moment that continues to exist inside the speaker, returning again and again with the same helplessness, fear, and grief. The final lines land with tremendous force because they reveal how some wounds survive long after the event itself has passed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this really moved me. What stays with me is the distinction between remembering and reliving. The poem makes clear that this is not simply a memory being recalled...it is a moment that continues to exist inside the speaker, returning again and again with the same helplessness, fear, and grief. The final lines land with tremendous force because they reveal how some wounds survive long after the event itself has passed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:49
That afternoon
peto said:
Brought some memories back for me
Some things can never be unseen
Beautifully written
June 7th, 2026 20:45
peto said:
Brought some memories back for me
Some things can never be unseen
Beautifully written
June 7th, 2026 20:45
That afternoon
sorenbarrett said:
Traumatic it is raw and painful to read. It draws the reader on for details that are never given because the outcome is not the point it is the moment all the visceral rush of the minute and what it does to the helpless. Well written
June 7th, 2026 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
Traumatic it is raw and painful to read. It draws the reader on for details that are never given because the outcome is not the point it is the moment all the visceral rush of the minute and what it does to the helpless. Well written
June 7th, 2026 11:03
The last time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The simplicity of it is what makes it so devastating...there’s no need for grand language when the truth being expressed is already heavy enough. The grief here feels deeply human and painfully familiar. Un poema precioso, amiga mía. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this hit me hard. The simplicity of it is what makes it so devastating...there’s no need for grand language when the truth being expressed is already heavy enough. The grief here feels deeply human and painfully familiar. Un poema precioso, amiga mía. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:33
The last time
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and time magnify feelings and now deified they are worshiped. A lovely poem that pulls at the heart
June 6th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and time magnify feelings and now deified they are worshiped. A lovely poem that pulls at the heart
June 6th, 2026 06:08
The pills on the table (Part 2)
NafisaSB said:
a very touching poem - showing raw emotions - the stress , the grief for a person who was cruel and tender by turns..forgive him for his roughness, and try to concentrate on the good days - it will help...
June 2nd, 2026 02:28
NafisaSB said:
a very touching poem - showing raw emotions - the stress , the grief for a person who was cruel and tender by turns..forgive him for his roughness, and try to concentrate on the good days - it will help...
June 2nd, 2026 02:28
Forever fifteen
Fränz Müller said:
This really spoke to me about a friend I lost when we were both young. I miss my friend.
June 1st, 2026 21:35
Fränz Müller said:
This really spoke to me about a friend I lost when we were both young. I miss my friend.
June 1st, 2026 21:35
The sadness without a name
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this broke my heart a little... The way you write her confusion is what got me most. She doesn\'t even know why she\'s hurting, and that somehow makes it hurt more. Having struggled with depression and mental health throughout my life, I can relate to this. There is so much tenderness here and so much compassion for children carrying things they should never have to carry. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this broke my heart a little... The way you write her confusion is what got me most. She doesn\'t even know why she\'s hurting, and that somehow makes it hurt more. Having struggled with depression and mental health throughout my life, I can relate to this. There is so much tenderness here and so much compassion for children carrying things they should never have to carry. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:32
The sadness without a name
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27
Forever fifteen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness at that loss but gain in what was given and an eternal memory of a person so important. Lovely
May 30th, 2026 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and sadness at that loss but gain in what was given and an eternal memory of a person so important. Lovely
May 30th, 2026 11:10
Forever fifteen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this absolutely broke my heart. What moved me most is that this isn\'t simply a poem about loss...it\'s a poem about gratitude, friendship, and the lasting impact one life can have on another. The fact that she entered your life when you were grieving your father makes the entire piece even more powerful. Beautiful work, my friend. Sorry for your loss. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this absolutely broke my heart. What moved me most is that this isn\'t simply a poem about loss...it\'s a poem about gratitude, friendship, and the lasting impact one life can have on another. The fact that she entered your life when you were grieving your father makes the entire piece even more powerful. Beautiful work, my friend. Sorry for your loss. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:29
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