Comments received on poems by Lore
The Room That Doesn’t Forget
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
The Silence Beside Me
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is about death or a breakup, but the concept of someone leaving without a proper goodbye is haunting, and so well-described in this poem. Very well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:47
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is about death or a breakup, but the concept of someone leaving without a proper goodbye is haunting, and so well-described in this poem. Very well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:47
The Silence Beside Me
sorenbarrett said:
Silence leaves a mystery which if never solved leaves the mind to work on eternally to not give up until the mystery is solved. A great write
September 15th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
Silence leaves a mystery which if never solved leaves the mind to work on eternally to not give up until the mystery is solved. A great write
September 15th, 2025 15:37
The Girl of Silences
Priya Tomar said:
A sad poem about innocent fatal child .
Nicely done.
September 14th, 2025 11:36
Priya Tomar said:
A sad poem about innocent fatal child .
Nicely done.
September 14th, 2025 11:36
The Girl of Silences
sorenbarrett said:
The helplessness of a child and their vulnerability makes them a good model for pity and compassion. A nicely written poem of learned helplessness. Well done
September 14th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
The helplessness of a child and their vulnerability makes them a good model for pity and compassion. A nicely written poem of learned helplessness. Well done
September 14th, 2025 10:21
Empty Elevator
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and as you said raw it speak of words not spoken, trips not taken and time that passes. A difficult read that no one wants to see because it speaks of what will be ours one day. Very well done. A fave
September 13th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and as you said raw it speak of words not spoken, trips not taken and time that passes. A difficult read that no one wants to see because it speaks of what will be ours one day. Very well done. A fave
September 13th, 2025 14:14
Empty Elevator
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent poem. Really spoke to me and some recent experiences of my own. Thank you!
September 13th, 2025 13:08
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent poem. Really spoke to me and some recent experiences of my own. Thank you!
September 13th, 2025 13:08
Endless Letter in the Waiting Room
sorenbarrett said:
The process of death. Gone but not forgotten a poem with many good lines. Lovely
September 12th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
The process of death. Gone but not forgotten a poem with many good lines. Lovely
September 12th, 2025 11:15
You’re Still Here
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone needs to hear encouraging words. This poem is inspirational. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone needs to hear encouraging words. This poem is inspirational. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 13:21
The Last Night With You
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is sad and powerful. Lovely work.
September 10th, 2025 16:41
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is sad and powerful. Lovely work.
September 10th, 2025 16:41
The Last Night With You
sorenbarrett said:
Immensely powerful this poem cries out to all that don\'t listen. A tragic write. Well done
September 10th, 2025 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Immensely powerful this poem cries out to all that don\'t listen. A tragic write. Well done
September 10th, 2025 13:29
The Empty Room
Fränz Müller said:
There is something to he said about reading the right poem at the right moment, and this is that. Thank you.
September 9th, 2025 19:34
Fränz Müller said:
There is something to he said about reading the right poem at the right moment, and this is that. Thank you.
September 9th, 2025 19:34
The Empty Room
sorenbarrett said:
Two points of view maybe only one if the other is not watching. A sad and tragic poem about indifference in society and the distance and tragedy that can occur when we choose to ignore others. Well written
September 9th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Two points of view maybe only one if the other is not watching. A sad and tragic poem about indifference in society and the distance and tragedy that can occur when we choose to ignore others. Well written
September 9th, 2025 13:13
What Your Friend Broke
Damaso said:
Wow, tremendous! I got lost in the text, now who can come find me? Thank you so much for sharing it. You\'re very brave. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 09:36
Damaso said:
Wow, tremendous! I got lost in the text, now who can come find me? Thank you so much for sharing it. You\'re very brave. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 09:36
Sometimes…
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write for me, another lovely write of finding a little hope through the clouds, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 09:14
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write for me, another lovely write of finding a little hope through the clouds, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 09:14
Sometimes…
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope over clouds of despair for a brighter day. Most lovely
July 7th, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope over clouds of despair for a brighter day. Most lovely
July 7th, 2025 08:34
What Your Friend Broke
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and touching write at the cost of losing a love because of someone else, beautifully expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 10:40
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and touching write at the cost of losing a love because of someone else, beautifully expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 10:40
What Your Friend Broke
sorenbarrett said:
First this poem is very touching and sadly true for many. A triangle never seems to work in relationships. Somehow I feel that this poem was even more powerful in the original Spanish. The translation for the word sky in Spanish is more closely related to an erotic and and sensual feel as well as other nuances that lose in translation. Very nicely done even in English and a fave
July 6th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
First this poem is very touching and sadly true for many. A triangle never seems to work in relationships. Somehow I feel that this poem was even more powerful in the original Spanish. The translation for the word sky in Spanish is more closely related to an erotic and and sensual feel as well as other nuances that lose in translation. Very nicely done even in English and a fave
July 6th, 2025 07:07
When I Thought I Was Okay
Poetic Licence said:
To heal is not always straight forward and it takes time, there will be set backs along the way enabling you to come out even stronger, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:12
Poetic Licence said:
To heal is not always straight forward and it takes time, there will be set backs along the way enabling you to come out even stronger, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:12
When I Thought I Was Okay
sorenbarrett said:
Even physical health is not always that wat with relapses and infections taking their course. A empathetic write with feeling
July 5th, 2025 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Even physical health is not always that wat with relapses and infections taking their course. A empathetic write with feeling
July 5th, 2025 10:50
The Silence
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of peace and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of peace and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 08:14
The Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of peace, joy, contentment and harmony. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of peace, joy, contentment and harmony. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 07:31
What’s Not Always Seen
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of such an important issue in today\'s world, the hidden crisis that is effecting so many people, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 16:12
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of such an important issue in today\'s world, the hidden crisis that is effecting so many people, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 16:12
What’s Not Always Seen
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful work in translation with continued rhyme. That is not an easy thing to preserve the meaning of the poem and the rhyme I have tried it from Portuguese to English and so I know how hard it is. I think of Alexander Pope and his translation of the Iliad and Odyssey from Greek a master\'s work. Wished I had seen this one in Spanish. Lovely and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful work in translation with continued rhyme. That is not an easy thing to preserve the meaning of the poem and the rhyme I have tried it from Portuguese to English and so I know how hard it is. I think of Alexander Pope and his translation of the Iliad and Odyssey from Greek a master\'s work. Wished I had seen this one in Spanish. Lovely and a fave
June 25th, 2025 14:51
Whispers in the Storm
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write the storms in our life will pass and another day will be born, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:36
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written write the storms in our life will pass and another day will be born, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:36
Whispers in the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that works so well with our tribulations being the storms of life that always pass and new days are born. A fave
June 24th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that works so well with our tribulations being the storms of life that always pass and new days are born. A fave
June 24th, 2025 07:25
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