Comments received on poems by Lore
Where silence weighs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem captures something many people feel but struggle to say… the quiet weight of absence and how memories linger in ordinary spaces. That echo of a name in empty rooms is especially haunting. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem captures something many people feel but struggle to say… the quiet weight of absence and how memories linger in ordinary spaces. That echo of a name in empty rooms is especially haunting. Powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 09:13
Where silence weighs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and sadness that is set in shadows and night. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loneliness and sadness that is set in shadows and night. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 16:13
My Own Enemy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a heavy and honest confession…each “I’m sorry” stacking like stones in a wall built against yourself. What really struck me was “Even now, I’m sorry for using you to write this.” That moment cuts deep…because it shows how tangled self-judgment can become. Painful, brave, and very real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a heavy and honest confession…each “I’m sorry” stacking like stones in a wall built against yourself. What really struck me was “Even now, I’m sorry for using you to write this.” That moment cuts deep…because it shows how tangled self-judgment can become. Painful, brave, and very real. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 07:43
My Own Enemy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of error and past wrong doing. Well written
March 8th, 2026 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of error and past wrong doing. Well written
March 8th, 2026 13:34
My Own Enemy
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem is very powerful of one self. The poem appears to be a personal reflection by an individual grappling with their self-image and the internal conflicts that arise from self-criticism.
March 8th, 2026 08:51
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem is very powerful of one self. The poem appears to be a personal reflection by an individual grappling with their self-image and the internal conflicts that arise from self-criticism.
March 8th, 2026 08:51
Between the Cold and Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A raw write of misery with the hope of reprieve in the future. A sad write but there is hope and medicine may not be the only way. It is the accepted way in our culture but things change and so may you. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
A raw write of misery with the hope of reprieve in the future. A sad write but there is hope and medicine may not be the only way. It is the accepted way in our culture but things change and so may you. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 16:08
Between the Cold and Hope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is deeply honest writing…you can feel the struggle between exhaustion and hope in every section. The way you hold both realities at once feels very human. That quiet wish at the end stays with me…“life will feel a little warmer.” Thank you for sharing something so real, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is deeply honest writing…you can feel the struggle between exhaustion and hope in every section. The way you hold both realities at once feels very human. That quiet wish at the end stays with me…“life will feel a little warmer.” Thank you for sharing something so real, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:34
No One Bleeds for Attention
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem is a refusal in the best sense. You expose how survival is often misread, how pain is minimized, and how staying alive can feel violent rather than hopeful. Naming that truth matters. This piece does important work and I truly applaud it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 18:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem is a refusal in the best sense. You expose how survival is often misread, how pain is minimized, and how staying alive can feel violent rather than hopeful. Naming that truth matters. This piece does important work and I truly applaud it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 18:06
No One Bleeds for Attention
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great discomfort and pain. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great discomfort and pain. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 14:01
Where one learns to endure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a portrait of invisibility rendered with deep compassion. You show that the tragedy isn’t departure, but endurance without witness. The poem doesn’t accuse…it reveals. I understand this truth...deeply, personally. Powerful, humane work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is a portrait of invisibility rendered with deep compassion. You show that the tragedy isn’t departure, but endurance without witness. The poem doesn’t accuse…it reveals. I understand this truth...deeply, personally. Powerful, humane work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:17
Where one learns to endure
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that remain unseen and silent in a busy world this poem seems to speak of that sense of isolation. Well done
January 10th, 2026 15:53
sorenbarrett said:
There are those that remain unseen and silent in a busy world this poem seems to speak of that sense of isolation. Well done
January 10th, 2026 15:53
This Wasn’t the Plan
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s nothing more humbling than the realization that you\'re so much of a failure that you failed at ending it! Ironically, that\'s when I decided that I must be kept here for a reason, and I would choose to find it. This is a very well done poem and I definitely relate
January 9th, 2026 16:40
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s nothing more humbling than the realization that you\'re so much of a failure that you failed at ending it! Ironically, that\'s when I decided that I must be kept here for a reason, and I would choose to find it. This is a very well done poem and I definitely relate
January 9th, 2026 16:40
This Wasn’t the Plan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that state of functioning without being present, where the body keeps time while everything else feels finished. You articulate that limbo with care and clarity. Thank you for trusting the page with it and for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that state of functioning without being present, where the body keeps time while everything else feels finished. You articulate that limbo with care and clarity. Thank you for trusting the page with it and for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:56
What I Don’t Say
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem doesn’t seek relief, and that’s its power. It gives pain a place to exist without explanation or correction, just as you describe. The silence here isn’t emptiness…it’s endurance. This is brave, intimate work. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem doesn’t seek relief, and that’s its power. It gives pain a place to exist without explanation or correction, just as you describe. The silence here isn’t emptiness…it’s endurance. This is brave, intimate work. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:14
Infant and innocent
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem is quiet, precise, and crushing. The repetition of “infant and innocent” becomes a tolling bell, and the ending reminds us that survival doesn’t erase what was learned in fear. This is brave, necessary writing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this poem is quiet, precise, and crushing. The repetition of “infant and innocent” becomes a tolling bell, and the ending reminds us that survival doesn’t erase what was learned in fear. This is brave, necessary writing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 15:56
What I Don’t Say
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of keeping things inside despite the emotion. Nicely written
January 5th, 2026 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of keeping things inside despite the emotion. Nicely written
January 5th, 2026 11:50
Infant and innocent
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma has lasting effects and this poem emphasizes it. Well done
January 4th, 2026 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma has lasting effects and this poem emphasizes it. Well done
January 4th, 2026 16:26
I’m afraid of forgetting him
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting thought in that memories do fade and dim with time. Well written
December 19th, 2025 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting thought in that memories do fade and dim with time. Well written
December 19th, 2025 16:19
The last letter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is heartbreak written with grace. It feels like a whisper into eternity...intimate, aching, and beautifully restrained. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is heartbreak written with grace. It feels like a whisper into eternity...intimate, aching, and beautifully restrained. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 07:59
The last letter
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of melancholy and a wistful wish to return to a brighter time. Such a sense of loss that is soft but painful like an old wound that still reminds one of the pain still present but time has taken the screaming out of. Very nicely written
October 30th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of melancholy and a wistful wish to return to a brighter time. Such a sense of loss that is soft but painful like an old wound that still reminds one of the pain still present but time has taken the screaming out of. Very nicely written
October 30th, 2025 05:58
Five Years Later
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing, sadness, nostalgia, pain and remembering. Nicely written as both a tribute and pride as well as carrying on.
October 27th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing, sadness, nostalgia, pain and remembering. Nicely written as both a tribute and pride as well as carrying on.
October 27th, 2025 16:14
The echo of the void
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, you captured the ache of silence turning heavier than words. It’s painful, but also cathartic…letting it out on the page. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, you captured the ache of silence turning heavier than words. It’s painful, but also cathartic…letting it out on the page. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:27
The echo of the void
sorenbarrett said:
There is something existential about this poem and a perceived journey in search of feeling and meaning. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is something existential about this poem and a perceived journey in search of feeling and meaning. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 04:50
The last thirteen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating and beautifully written. Each reason lands like a quiet blow, and together they form a heartbreaking whole. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating and beautifully written. Each reason lands like a quiet blow, and together they form a heartbreaking whole. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:59
The last thirteen
sorenbarrett said:
So many reasons of why and each with an answer to resolve it that remains unspoken. Implied and not spoken takes a different ear to hear. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
So many reasons of why and each with an answer to resolve it that remains unspoken. Implied and not spoken takes a different ear to hear. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:14
They killed his voice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and gothic, Lore...chains, blades, silence, and a rope bearing hope’s weight. A devastating testament to bullying’s cruelty and the silence it leaves. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I love the gothic edge in your work, I\"m really drawn to it and am glad you are on here sharing your poetry with us!
September 30th, 2025 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and gothic, Lore...chains, blades, silence, and a rope bearing hope’s weight. A devastating testament to bullying’s cruelty and the silence it leaves. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I love the gothic edge in your work, I\"m really drawn to it and am glad you are on here sharing your poetry with us!
September 30th, 2025 18:13
They killed his voice
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem dark and with little hope. Bullying has been around as long as the race and has always taken its toll. Well written this poem speaks to the gloom of the victim.
September 30th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem dark and with little hope. Bullying has been around as long as the race and has always taken its toll. Well written this poem speaks to the gloom of the victim.
September 30th, 2025 14:38
Where my childhood died
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter, the child who no longer exists. It lands heavy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 29th, 2025 15:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter, the child who no longer exists. It lands heavy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 29th, 2025 15:15
Where my childhood died
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic with a wistful feel the poem carries a feel of times past never to return. Lovely
September 29th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic with a wistful feel the poem carries a feel of times past never to return. Lovely
September 29th, 2025 07:29
Through the Darkest Nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map, heartbeat as proof. After every wound, you close with the whisper of survival. It’s unflinching and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map, heartbeat as proof. After every wound, you close with the whisper of survival. It’s unflinching and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:48
« Return to the profile of Lore
