Comments received on poems by Lore
Five Years Later
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing, sadness, nostalgia, pain and remembering. Nicely written as both a tribute and pride as well as carrying on.
October 27th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing, sadness, nostalgia, pain and remembering. Nicely written as both a tribute and pride as well as carrying on.
October 27th, 2025 16:14
The echo of the void
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, you captured the ache of silence turning heavier than words. It’s painful, but also cathartic…letting it out on the page. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, you captured the ache of silence turning heavier than words. It’s painful, but also cathartic…letting it out on the page. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 07:27
The echo of the void
sorenbarrett said:
There is something existential about this poem and a perceived journey in search of feeling and meaning. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is something existential about this poem and a perceived journey in search of feeling and meaning. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2025 04:50
The last thirteen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating and beautifully written. Each reason lands like a quiet blow, and together they form a heartbreaking whole. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating and beautifully written. Each reason lands like a quiet blow, and together they form a heartbreaking whole. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 19:59
The last thirteen
sorenbarrett said:
So many reasons of why and each with an answer to resolve it that remains unspoken. Implied and not spoken takes a different ear to hear. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
So many reasons of why and each with an answer to resolve it that remains unspoken. Implied and not spoken takes a different ear to hear. Nicely done
October 1st, 2025 07:14
They killed his voice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and gothic, Lore...chains, blades, silence, and a rope bearing hope’s weight. A devastating testament to bullying’s cruelty and the silence it leaves. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I love the gothic edge in your work, I\"m really drawn to it and am glad you are on here sharing your poetry with us!
September 30th, 2025 18:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is stark and gothic, Lore...chains, blades, silence, and a rope bearing hope’s weight. A devastating testament to bullying’s cruelty and the silence it leaves. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I love the gothic edge in your work, I\"m really drawn to it and am glad you are on here sharing your poetry with us!
September 30th, 2025 18:13
They killed his voice
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem dark and with little hope. Bullying has been around as long as the race and has always taken its toll. Well written this poem speaks to the gloom of the victim.
September 30th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem dark and with little hope. Bullying has been around as long as the race and has always taken its toll. Well written this poem speaks to the gloom of the victim.
September 30th, 2025 14:38
Where my childhood died
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter, the child who no longer exists. It lands heavy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 29th, 2025 15:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter, the child who no longer exists. It lands heavy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 29th, 2025 15:15
Where my childhood died
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic with a wistful feel the poem carries a feel of times past never to return. Lovely
September 29th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic with a wistful feel the poem carries a feel of times past never to return. Lovely
September 29th, 2025 07:29
Through the Darkest Nights
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map, heartbeat as proof. After every wound, you close with the whisper of survival. It’s unflinching and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map, heartbeat as proof. After every wound, you close with the whisper of survival. It’s unflinching and deeply moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:48
Through the Darkest Nights
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of trouble and strife and despite the odds with strength she keeps going. A lovely write in good rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 28th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
A tale of trouble and strife and despite the odds with strength she keeps going. A lovely write in good rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 28th, 2025 14:32
Eternal Fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and apocalyptic, yet it glows with defiance. The abyss presses close, but the flame refuses to die. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, Lore!
September 27th, 2025 21:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is dark and apocalyptic, yet it glows with defiance. The abyss presses close, but the flame refuses to die. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, Lore!
September 27th, 2025 21:18
Eternal Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and lines. A wonderful poem
September 27th, 2025 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording and lines. A wonderful poem
September 27th, 2025 19:31
Eternal Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Light is equated with the truth or knowledge. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
Light is equated with the truth or knowledge. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 17:49
The Room
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tragic poem and a parent\'s worst nightmare. Well done on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tragic poem and a parent\'s worst nightmare. Well done on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:46
The Room
sorenbarrett said:
The tragedy of the loss of a child is heard in this poem. No parent should outlive their children and there is a sad tone to this poem
September 26th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
The tragedy of the loss of a child is heard in this poem. No parent should outlive their children and there is a sad tone to this poem
September 26th, 2025 12:56
The Toys
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating in its quietness. The toys waiting, the whispered promises, the room still holding laughter…every image makes the absence ache deeper. It feels like standing inside memory itself, fragile and trembling but still alive. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lore, this is devastating in its quietness. The toys waiting, the whispered promises, the room still holding laughter…every image makes the absence ache deeper. It feels like standing inside memory itself, fragile and trembling but still alive. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2025 08:59
The Toys
coracaodacripta said:
Maine by Noah Kahan played as I read this. I doubt there is any coinciding of the lyrics with this piece, but I feel the rhythm of the tune played well with this. That there is more to be discovered than a passing, but a remnant of all the love we have for someone who\'s gone.
September 25th, 2025 19:48
coracaodacripta said:
Maine by Noah Kahan played as I read this. I doubt there is any coinciding of the lyrics with this piece, but I feel the rhythm of the tune played well with this. That there is more to be discovered than a passing, but a remnant of all the love we have for someone who\'s gone.
September 25th, 2025 19:48
The Toys
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tragic a poem that pulls at the heart as all good poems should. Poetry is feeling and this poem hurts. Nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tragic a poem that pulls at the heart as all good poems should. Poetry is feeling and this poem hurts. Nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2025 08:35
I Look for You in My Dreams
Bragee said:
as a father with two young daughters this one really hits home for me and reinforces the importance of fatherhood. I am sorry for your loss.
September 24th, 2025 11:41
Bragee said:
as a father with two young daughters this one really hits home for me and reinforces the importance of fatherhood. I am sorry for your loss.
September 24th, 2025 11:41
I Look for You in My Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss too soon, the lighthouse image that keeps him steady, and that quiet line about no goodbyes. It’s tender, precise, and deeply real. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss too soon, the lighthouse image that keeps him steady, and that quiet line about no goodbyes. It’s tender, precise, and deeply real. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:27
I Look for You in My Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A major loss reflected in this poem leaves a vacum and hole as a remembrance and peace can only be found in dreams. Wistful is the feeling as well as melancholy. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
A major loss reflected in this poem leaves a vacum and hole as a remembrance and peace can only be found in dreams. Wistful is the feeling as well as melancholy. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 06:59
His last recess
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece that emphasizes the potential of bullying and the need for intervention. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece that emphasizes the potential of bullying and the need for intervention. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 18:15
Read me before you forget
lunarchloedip said:
love this, you\'ve been read and will be remembered. thank you for sharing!
September 22nd, 2025 13:55
lunarchloedip said:
love this, you\'ve been read and will be remembered. thank you for sharing!
September 22nd, 2025 13:55
Read me before you forget
Paul Bell said:
We now live in a world where neighbours put up big fences for privacy.
Unfortunately, this now echoes across the country, losing all contact with each other.
September 22nd, 2025 11:40
Paul Bell said:
We now live in a world where neighbours put up big fences for privacy.
Unfortunately, this now echoes across the country, losing all contact with each other.
September 22nd, 2025 11:40
Read me before you forget
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is so common in today\'s society. People pretend to care but it seems no one does. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is so common in today\'s society. People pretend to care but it seems no one does. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 11:23
The Empty Armchair
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 10:13
The Room That Doesn’t Forget
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
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