Comments received on poems by Lore
The Toys
coracaodacripta said:
Maine by Noah Kahan played as I read this. I doubt there is any coinciding of the lyrics with this piece, but I feel the rhythm of the tune played well with this. That there is more to be discovered than a passing, but a remnant of all the love we have for someone who\'s gone.
September 25th, 2025 19:48
coracaodacripta said:
Maine by Noah Kahan played as I read this. I doubt there is any coinciding of the lyrics with this piece, but I feel the rhythm of the tune played well with this. That there is more to be discovered than a passing, but a remnant of all the love we have for someone who\'s gone.
September 25th, 2025 19:48
The Toys
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tragic a poem that pulls at the heart as all good poems should. Poetry is feeling and this poem hurts. Nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tragic a poem that pulls at the heart as all good poems should. Poetry is feeling and this poem hurts. Nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2025 08:35
I Look for You in My Dreams
Bragee said:
as a father with two young daughters this one really hits home for me and reinforces the importance of fatherhood. I am sorry for your loss.
September 24th, 2025 11:41
Bragee said:
as a father with two young daughters this one really hits home for me and reinforces the importance of fatherhood. I am sorry for your loss.
September 24th, 2025 11:41
I Look for You in My Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss too soon, the lighthouse image that keeps him steady, and that quiet line about no goodbyes. It’s tender, precise, and deeply real. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss too soon, the lighthouse image that keeps him steady, and that quiet line about no goodbyes. It’s tender, precise, and deeply real. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2025 07:27
I Look for You in My Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A major loss reflected in this poem leaves a vacum and hole as a remembrance and peace can only be found in dreams. Wistful is the feeling as well as melancholy. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
A major loss reflected in this poem leaves a vacum and hole as a remembrance and peace can only be found in dreams. Wistful is the feeling as well as melancholy. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 06:59
His last recess
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece that emphasizes the potential of bullying and the need for intervention. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A well written piece that emphasizes the potential of bullying and the need for intervention. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 18:15
Read me before you forget
lunarchloedip said:
love this, you\'ve been read and will be remembered. thank you for sharing!
September 22nd, 2025 13:55
lunarchloedip said:
love this, you\'ve been read and will be remembered. thank you for sharing!
September 22nd, 2025 13:55
Read me before you forget
Paul Bell said:
We now live in a world where neighbours put up big fences for privacy.
Unfortunately, this now echoes across the country, losing all contact with each other.
September 22nd, 2025 11:40
Paul Bell said:
We now live in a world where neighbours put up big fences for privacy.
Unfortunately, this now echoes across the country, losing all contact with each other.
September 22nd, 2025 11:40
Read me before you forget
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is so common in today\'s society. People pretend to care but it seems no one does. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is so common in today\'s society. People pretend to care but it seems no one does. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 11:23
The Empty Armchair
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 10:13
The Room That Doesn’t Forget
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, parent, or child this seems a deep loss not to be recovered from
September 16th, 2025 14:53
The Silence Beside Me
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is about death or a breakup, but the concept of someone leaving without a proper goodbye is haunting, and so well-described in this poem. Very well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:47
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is about death or a breakup, but the concept of someone leaving without a proper goodbye is haunting, and so well-described in this poem. Very well done.
September 15th, 2025 21:47
The Silence Beside Me
sorenbarrett said:
Silence leaves a mystery which if never solved leaves the mind to work on eternally to not give up until the mystery is solved. A great write
September 15th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
Silence leaves a mystery which if never solved leaves the mind to work on eternally to not give up until the mystery is solved. A great write
September 15th, 2025 15:37
The Girl of Silences
Priya Tomar said:
A sad poem about innocent fatal child .
Nicely done.
September 14th, 2025 11:36
Priya Tomar said:
A sad poem about innocent fatal child .
Nicely done.
September 14th, 2025 11:36
The Girl of Silences
sorenbarrett said:
The helplessness of a child and their vulnerability makes them a good model for pity and compassion. A nicely written poem of learned helplessness. Well done
September 14th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
The helplessness of a child and their vulnerability makes them a good model for pity and compassion. A nicely written poem of learned helplessness. Well done
September 14th, 2025 10:21
Empty Elevator
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and as you said raw it speak of words not spoken, trips not taken and time that passes. A difficult read that no one wants to see because it speaks of what will be ours one day. Very well done. A fave
September 13th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and as you said raw it speak of words not spoken, trips not taken and time that passes. A difficult read that no one wants to see because it speaks of what will be ours one day. Very well done. A fave
September 13th, 2025 14:14
Empty Elevator
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent poem. Really spoke to me and some recent experiences of my own. Thank you!
September 13th, 2025 13:08
Fränz Müller said:
Excellent poem. Really spoke to me and some recent experiences of my own. Thank you!
September 13th, 2025 13:08
Endless Letter in the Waiting Room
sorenbarrett said:
The process of death. Gone but not forgotten a poem with many good lines. Lovely
September 12th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
The process of death. Gone but not forgotten a poem with many good lines. Lovely
September 12th, 2025 11:15
You’re Still Here
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone needs to hear encouraging words. This poem is inspirational. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone needs to hear encouraging words. This poem is inspirational. Nicely done
September 11th, 2025 13:21
The Last Night With You
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is sad and powerful. Lovely work.
September 10th, 2025 16:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow this is sad and powerful. Lovely work.
September 10th, 2025 16:41
The Last Night With You
sorenbarrett said:
Immensely powerful this poem cries out to all that don\'t listen. A tragic write. Well done
September 10th, 2025 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Immensely powerful this poem cries out to all that don\'t listen. A tragic write. Well done
September 10th, 2025 13:29
The Empty Room
Fränz Müller said:
There is something to he said about reading the right poem at the right moment, and this is that. Thank you.
September 9th, 2025 19:34
Fränz Müller said:
There is something to he said about reading the right poem at the right moment, and this is that. Thank you.
September 9th, 2025 19:34
The Empty Room
sorenbarrett said:
Two points of view maybe only one if the other is not watching. A sad and tragic poem about indifference in society and the distance and tragedy that can occur when we choose to ignore others. Well written
September 9th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Two points of view maybe only one if the other is not watching. A sad and tragic poem about indifference in society and the distance and tragedy that can occur when we choose to ignore others. Well written
September 9th, 2025 13:13
What Your Friend Broke
Damaso said:
Wow, tremendous! I got lost in the text, now who can come find me? Thank you so much for sharing it. You\'re very brave. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 09:36
Damaso said:
Wow, tremendous! I got lost in the text, now who can come find me? Thank you so much for sharing it. You\'re very brave. Cheers.
July 10th, 2025 09:36
Sometimes…
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write for me, another lovely write of finding a little hope through the clouds, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 09:14
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write for me, another lovely write of finding a little hope through the clouds, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 09:14
Sometimes…
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope over clouds of despair for a brighter day. Most lovely
July 7th, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hope over clouds of despair for a brighter day. Most lovely
July 7th, 2025 08:34
What Your Friend Broke
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and touching write at the cost of losing a love because of someone else, beautifully expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 10:40
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and touching write at the cost of losing a love because of someone else, beautifully expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 10:40
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